Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHT06NDKY75TARRS3YS6YY

Run Details

Duration:
1m 17s
Cost:
$0.000833
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones. Night sank around her shoulders like wet wool. The moonlight did not fall, it pooled. Silver spread across the grass in thick stains. She knew the coordinates by heart. Her phone map showed nothing but grey static. She checked the phone screen briefly. Black glass reflected her bright blue irises back. They looked wide. She pocketed the device. The air tasted like copper and old rain. The Heartstone Pendant dangled against her collarbone. The stone hummed against her pale skin. Deep crimson light pulsed in rhythm with her breathing. She pressed her thumb to the silver chain. It grew hot. Aurora pulled her shirt collar tight. She walked deeper into the clearing. The ground beneath her boots felt spongy. Moss grew in shapes that resembled faces. Some looked she had worn when she was six. Others looked like the liar who ran from her house. She closed her eyes to steady her nerves. The heat from the stone made her ears ring. A sound cut the silence like a knife through paper. It came from inside the undergrowth. Rough hands clawed at the dirt near her left knee. Aurora lifted her foot. The claw scraped against her boot leather. She did not turn around. She looked straight ahead. Her boots squeaked on the packed earth. She stepped forward. The claws receded into the darkness. The wildflowers stood rigid. They did not sway in the wind. Petals opened and closed on her reflection when she stopped. Aurora narrowed her eyes. The petals slammed shut. Silence returned, heavy and absolute. She could not find the rhythm of her own heartbeat. The pendant burned with a low vibration. It vibrated harder every step she took away from the path. She stopped. Her breath caught in her throat. The stone grew colder against her neck. Did she enter wrong? She spoke aloud. The shadow remained silent. I didn’t come here to play games, the voice said. Aurora’s shoulders trembled. She swallowed the lump of fear she felt. She stepped behind a gnarled root structure. The wood jumped and creaked. Cracks expanded across the log like a distorted map. She held the back of her neck with one hand. The wind died out suddenly. Nothing moved. Not a blade of grass. Not a single bird. Not the air itself. She reached for her phone. The screen stayed black. She dialed Yu-Fei Cheung’s number. Nothing but a dial tone. She lowered the device. The pendant pulsed. Heat spread across her arms. Something shifted in the tall grass. Shadows detached from the treeline. They did not fade when she blinked. Rays of unnatural light pushed them forward. Aurora backed up into the roots. Her back hit wood. She gripped the pendant with white knuckles. The stone felt heavy like iron. She spoke again. It should not hurt me here. The air temperature dropped ten degrees. Her lungs felt tight. The leaves on the surrounding trees curled inward. They touched her face without a sound. Aurora wiped her cheek. Skin marks appeared where the leaf pressed. Red welts formed in seconds. She did not swat them away. They would be gone by morning. They said. She would not tell them where she is. The voice did not touch her skin this time. The voice sat behind her left ear. It feels like your phone is dies, she thought. It was not on to check. The pendant burned against her neck skin. Aurora gripped the stone until her knuckles turned white. She forced herself to think of the flat. Above Silas’ bar. The smell of frying oil. The hum of the fridge. Those things did not smell like this. The ground shook. Not the ground under her feet. The stones nearest to her. They vibrated with a dull thud. Aurora looked down. The standing stones wavered like old film. Her reflection moved slightly behind her. She looked at the image. The eyes of the reflection held no light. She stepped back quickly. Her breath fogged in the cold air. The pivot stone turned on its axis. It did not touch the grass. It defied gravity. Go home, the voice said softly. She tightened her grip on the metal chain. She did not move. The light from the stone grew brighter. Red veins mapped her throat. Pain spiked behind her eyes. She bit her lip until it tasted salt. No, she told the voice. She held her ground. The stones began to sway. The grass flattened completely. Nothing grew there anymore. Aurora turned her head. The gate remained shut. I am the only thing, she said. The gate rattled open on its own hinges. Wind blew through. It smelled like the outside world. Her breath hitched. She stepped toward the grass. One boot touched the threshold. The ground felt solid. Wait, are you alone? She stood there. She looked back at the stone circle. She spoke again. Yes, she told the voice. No one else is here. The voice replied. The stone glowed brighter. The pendant grew too hot to touch. She ripped it off. The metal chain dug into her palm. She held it in her hand. The light did not stop. The stones swayed violently aside. The night air rushed in. She inhaled deeply. Cold air hit her chest. The voice paused. The wind carried whispers. They spoke names. Names of friends she had not thought about in years. Aurora stepped out of the circle. She pushed her boots hard onto the path. She walked until the stone felt heavy. She looked at the stones. They remained motionless. The pendant fell to the ground. It did not stop ringing. Aurora kicked it aside. It did not move. She turned back to the gate. The glow grew brighter from the other side. She paused. The stone lay red. It did not show any cracks. It did not have any dirt on it. She picked it up. It did not feel heavy. She placed it inside her pocket. She walked toward the trees. Aurora moved through the bushes. She felt the roots beneath her feet. She looked down. The roots moved to meet her. She stopped. Her heart beat faster. She looked at the stone. It glowed warm. She put her hand on her chest. She looked up into the trees. The leaves rustled. She waited. Nothing came. She stepped out. The wind picked up. She let the cold air hit her face. She did not stop. She kept walking. The grass grew back instantly. She looked at the spot. The grass was still there. She walked forward. The stone did not follow her. She walked until the sun rose. She did not feel the ground. The stone burned on her hip. She held it there. Her hand felt numb. She walked out. She did not see the gate shut. She did not see the light fade. She did not see the shadows. She walked on. The stones faded. She stepped into the light. She held the stone. The stone did not pulse. She looked at her hand. The skin felt cold. The temperature matched the air. She walked on. She did not stop. She walked until she hit the path. She walked until she saw the bar. She did not see the bar. The lights were blue. She walked forward. The lights stayed blue. She walked on. She did not stop. The stone grew hot. It grew too hot. She did not feel it. She walked past the bar. The lights flickered. She walked faster. Her boots slapped the pavement. She felt the cold wind hit. She did not stop. She walked into the dark. The light burned. She stopped walking. She stood in the dark. She looked down at her hand. The stone burned. She pulled the stone out. It burned her hand.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
80.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"softly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
58.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1313
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"vibrated"
count2
3
word"trembled"
count1
4
word"structure"
count1
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"silence"
2"vibrated"
3"trembled"
4"structure"
5"wavered"
6"pulse"
7"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences243
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences243
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen11
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1313
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions3
matches
0"No, she told the voice."
1"I am the only thing, she said."
2"Yes, she told the voice."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions17
wordCount1311
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Aurora13
persons
0"Pendant"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore1
79.91% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences107
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and old rain"
1"looked like the liar who ran from her hou"
2"smelled like the outside world"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1313
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs10
mean131.3
std127.21
cv0.969
sampleLengths
074
1112
246
388
4103
557
679
7135
8114
9505
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences243
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs271
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences243
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount600
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount12
adverbRatio0.02
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033333333333333335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences243
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
83.92% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences243
mean5.4
std1.94
cv0.36
sampleLengths
08
18
27
38
46
58
66
78
83
94
108
117
127
139
148
153
166
176
187
197
209
2110
228
239
2410
256
2610
274
287
295
304
317
323
336
344
357
3610
374
384
395
4010
417
4211
432
446
457
464
473
484
4910
31.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats46
diversityRatio0.16049382716049382
totalSentences243
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
ratio0
15.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount120
totalSentences235
matches
0"She knew the coordinates by"
1"Her phone map showed nothing"
2"She checked the phone screen"
3"They looked wide."
4"She pocketed the device."
5"She pressed her thumb to"
6"It grew hot."
7"She walked deeper into the"
8"She closed her eyes to"
9"It came from inside the"
10"She did not turn around."
11"She looked straight ahead."
12"Her boots squeaked on the"
13"She stepped forward."
14"They did not sway in"
15"She could not find the"
16"It vibrated harder every step"
17"Her breath caught in her"
18"She spoke aloud."
19"I didn’t come here to"
ratio0.511
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount217
totalSentences235
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the ancient"
1"Night sank around her shoulders"
2"The moonlight did not fall,"
3"She knew the coordinates by"
4"Her phone map showed nothing"
5"She checked the phone screen"
6"They looked wide."
7"She pocketed the device."
8"The air tasted like copper"
9"The Heartstone Pendant dangled against"
10"The stone hummed against her"
11"She pressed her thumb to"
12"It grew hot."
13"Aurora pulled her shirt collar"
14"She walked deeper into the"
15"The ground beneath her boots"
16"Moss grew in shapes that"
17"Some looked she had worn"
18"Others looked like the liar"
19"She closed her eyes to"
ratio0.923
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences235
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences9
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
78.3239%