Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHYNPAPAR64EMYED58N6WK

Run Details

Duration:
1m 35s
Cost:
$0.000885
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The door opened a sliver before the deadbolt clicked home. Light spilled across the threshold. Rory stood frozen in the gap between the hallway and the room. Her breath caught in her throat. She held the frame with both hands, exposing the smooth circle of her left wrist. Lucien stepped inside. The air shifted as he crossed the threshold. He smelled like expensive soap and ozone. He wore the charcoal suit that fit him like a second skin. The ivory handle of the cane caught the light from the hallway bulb above the door. Doors don't stay open like this by chance. You knew I'd come. Rory crossed the room. She walked on tiptoes near the stack of scrolls. The desk cluttered her space with notes. She set the frame back into the wall. What did she expect? I need the papers. I need the spellwork on the file. The desk chair spun. Rory sat down. Her black hair fell across her shoulders. She looked tired. Her eyes flashed with blue sparks. She watched him wipe the cane against the floor. You broke the rules three months ago. The package I gave you. It never came. I got it. I lost it. It doesn't matter. It matters. It matters because I can find you a new one, Rory. If you help me. She stopped spinning the pen in her palm. Her knuckles whitened. She looked at the books lining the top shelf. Scrolls stacked on top of other scrolls. You're never going to find a new one. The recipe. It's gone with me. It doesn't have to be yours. There are others. You have the connection. I just need the access. Rory stood up. She walked past him. He didn't block the way. He didn't touch the door. Don't touch the door. That's all you want. A way in. A way out. I want the leverage, Carter. You don't want the leverage. You want the girl. The room grew quieter. Dust motes floated in the shafts of light above the floorboards. The only noise was the hum of the fridge in the kitchen. I didn't stay for the leverage. I stayed for the debt. You ran. You left me holding the ends of the rope. I ran because it was safer. You know I hate it when you lie. I wasn't lying. I was protecting myself. Was I not right to leave the past? To close the deal and walk away? You walked away. I bled in the rain. Someone used my name. I almost died in Cardiff. Rory reached for the door handle again. She stopped her hand on the metal. Her breath stopped in her chest. She turned away from the knob. The scar on her left wrist tightened as the memory of old cuts flared. That wasn't me. You made that. You said that you wouldn't come back for me. I said that I'd forget you. You didn't forget. I saw you. I saw you standing in the bar. I saw you watching me leave the shop. I was being followed. You knew. I didn't let you be followed. I was busy. Busy is overrated. Why hide it? Silence filled the room. Rory stepped forward. She reached out a hand. She didn't hold him close. She just let her fingers trail across his charcoal sleeve. Lucien is half-demon. He says he's human. He doesn't have to be. He never does. I said I was busy because I was going. You get that. Then you got me. You dragged me back into this hell. Rory handed him a small paper. It was the back of an envelope. A letter from the old days. A promise. Take the paper. This ends tonight. You can't end something I made. You made a situation in Cardiff. You left a man to choke on smoke. You wanted to clear your debt. You wanted to move. She folded the paper. She put it in his pocket. She didn't move close enough to bridge the gap. She stood back on the balcony of the room. This isn't about the debt anymore. It's about us. Rory turned away from him. She moved toward the bed. Her left wrist trembled. She laid the paper on the nightstand. She didn't look back at his face. Her head hung low. She didn't cry. Her voice stayed low, but steady. We were in this once. In Paris. You knew I wanted to stay in London. You stayed too. You told me to take the job. You told me to be safe. I let you go. I told you to be safe. I didn't tell you to be alone. Then you came back. You wanted me to get the papers. I came back because I needed the papers. Because... I needed you. That's it. You need me. I need the leverage. And the woman. Rory lifted her head. Her eyes locked with his. She didn't blink. Her blue irises swallowed the amber and black. She stepped closer. She moved her cane out of the way. Give me your kerchief. Lucien reached for his pocket. He pulled out a handkerchief. He handed it to her. I don't want that. Rory took it. She didn't wipe her face. She just held the cloth. Give me the paper. We can leave. Lucien shivered. He looked down at the floor. The cane clicked. I have one return ticket. You have to come with me. I can't. Tell me why Y-Fei trust you. Because of the job. He saved me. He paid. I owe him. I told him you're mine now. It's a metaphor. I meant a position. Rory stepped toward the window. She looked out over the street. The lights flickered. The curry place. They're closing. Rory didn't look back. The door slammed shut hard. I knew it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
84.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsms3
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"trembled"
count1
2
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"trembled"
2"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences186
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences186
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences186
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen16
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords974
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions50
wordCount974
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.87
worstName"You"
maxWindowNameDensity5.5
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Rory13
Carter1
Cardiff2
Paris1
London1
Lucien4
You28
persons
0"Rory"
1"Carter"
2"Lucien"
3"You"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Paris"
2"London"
globalScore0.063
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences72
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like expensive soap and ozone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount974
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences186
matches
0"said that you"
1"said that I'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean14.98
std10.31
cv0.688
sampleLengths
048
146
212
328
44
511
632
715
89
917
1027
1114
1218
1317
1414
155
169
1727
1822
196
208
217
2215
2317
2440
256
269
276
2827
299
306
3127
3215
3312
3411
3521
366
376
3824
3928
409
4121
4220
4335
4413
4511
4612
475
487
4931
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences186
matches
0"being followed"
1"is overrated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs225
matches
0"wasn't lying"
1"was protecting"
2"was going"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences186
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount975
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.018461538461538463
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0010256410256410256
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences186
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences186
mean5.24
std2.56
cv0.489
sampleLengths
010
15
212
36
415
53
68
77
812
916
108
114
124
139
147
158
164
174
187
194
203
217
223
236
249
257
265
273
283
293
303
312
3211
334
348
353
369
377
388
392
404
416
423
434
445
453
464
475
485
494
27.96% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats41
diversityRatio0.1881720430107527
totalSentences186
uniqueOpeners35
38.31% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences174
matches
0"Then you got me."
1"Then you came back."
ratio0.011
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount117
totalSentences174
matches
0"Her breath caught in her"
1"She held the frame with"
2"He smelled like expensive soap"
3"He wore the charcoal suit"
4"You knew I'd come."
5"She walked on tiptoes near"
6"She set the frame back"
7"I need the papers."
8"I need the spellwork on"
9"Her black hair fell across"
10"She looked tired."
11"Her eyes flashed with blue"
12"She watched him wipe the"
13"You broke the rules three"
14"It never came."
15"I got it."
16"I lost it."
17"It doesn't matter."
18"It matters because I can"
19"She stopped spinning the pen"
ratio0.672
5.98% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount158
totalSentences174
matches
0"The door opened a sliver"
1"Light spilled across the threshold."
2"Rory stood frozen in the"
3"Her breath caught in her"
4"She held the frame with"
5"Lucien stepped inside."
6"The air shifted as he"
7"He smelled like expensive soap"
8"He wore the charcoal suit"
9"The ivory handle of the"
10"Doors don't stay open like"
11"You knew I'd come."
12"Rory crossed the room."
13"She walked on tiptoes near"
14"The desk cluttered her space"
15"She set the frame back"
16"I need the papers."
17"I need the spellwork on"
18"The desk chair spun."
19"Rory sat down."
ratio0.908
86.21% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences174
matches
0"If you help me."
1"To close the deal and"
2"Because of the job."
ratio0.017
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7685%