Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFHYQ87X0QKBM0KMYWT86E0

Run Details

Duration:
49.3s
Cost:
$0.000743
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the standing stones. The gray granite had weathered into soft edges by wind and moss, yet the ground beneath her feet remained hard and dry. Wildflowers burst in color around the perimeter, even though London shadows held tight overhead. The crimson heat from the pendant warmed her chest. She kept it against her collarbone. A thin silver chain hugged her throat. A wind hummed through the trees, low and constant. The Grove had no sun. The sky above the canopy stayed a bruised purple, thick with clouds that did not move. She walked deeper. The grass pressed back against her boots. No crunch of dry leaves. Only the soft, Wrong snap of twigs breaking. She stopped. Heartbeat thudding in her ears. The wildflowers to her left bowed inward. Not blown by wind. They curled. She raised her hand. The pendant glowed with a faint inner warmth, a faint inner light. The heat pulsed against her palm. Aurora scanned the perimeter. The Grove lived in a pocket between worlds. She knew the rules. She feared them. She spoke to the trees. Who is there? The voice felt flat. A yawning emptiness inside her throat. No echo. A voice answered from the darkness to her right. It sounded like dry leaves shuffling. Like bones breaking. Show yourself. The air pressure dropped. Her ears popped. Then came the breath. Cold and smelling of wet earth. He stood at the tree line. A shape carved from the shadows itself. Stillness followed the form. Nothing human about the shoulder blades. Something chipped. Aurora kept her hand on the pendant. The artifact hummed against her skin. It pulsed faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal. This place. This was the source. He moved forward. His feet did not touch the grass. Don't come closer. The figure stopped. The silhouette stretched unnaturally long, limbs extending like broken branches. The rhythmic breathing slow. Deep in the chest. I do not come. Then the whisper came. Silent vibration against her jaw. You brought the fire. Aurora's mouth opened. The words locked there. A scar on her left wrist prickled. She had the same mark on her hand. A crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident. She traced it without looking. You brought the pendulum. She stepped back. The grime scratched her boots. Let me pass. The silence thickened. A heavy weight until it pressed down on her shoulders. No one passes. The roots of the old oak nearest her shifted. A sound like sand sliding over stone. Aurora watched the soil rise around the base of the tree. It formed a rough circle around her boots. She knew the lore. Eva told her about the Fae rules. Time bent wrong. An hour inside could be days outside. She waited. The pendant warmed. Will you kill me? Aurora did not answer. She checked the line of the woods. No fire. No birds. No life. Just the moan of wood bending. The figure twisted. The shadow detached itself from the trunk. Sliding onto the earth, black and oiled. Hands reached out. Five pointed fingers. Nails like obsidian. He forgot to blink sometimes. Wait here. I am not waiting. Her voice emerged as a harsh bark. The corners of her mouth tightened. The scowl settled hard on her face. I leave the moment. The shadow raised a hand. A tendril of shadow extended from the fingers. It drifted toward the pendant. Aurora's hand tightened on the chain. The metal cut into her palm. She bit the inside of her cheek until taste of blood filled her mouth. She breathed shallow. She held the pendant tight. Do you know who I am? The shadow did not answer. The eyes stayed hidden beneath the hood of darkness. Aurora looked down at the feet. Then the torso. The chest cavity was empty. Darkness leaked from the gaps. She felt the cold seep through her jeans. Did you send the ring? The wind stopped. The mushroom breath sighed deep. The shadows deepened into the night. The figure shifted. A sound of wet fabric tore. Something shifted in the dark. I did not send. Aurora held her breath. The pendant burned hotter. The metal chain snapped tight against her throat. Then the light from the pendant dimmed. The glow faded. The crimson surface grew dull. He smiled. No teeth. Just a wide flat line of black. I see you now. Aurora stared forward. Her eyes stayed locked. Name. The figure leaned very close. The heat came from behind her. Not the air. The figure itself. A chill rolled down her spine. Gravity threw the ground aside. What name do you have? Aurora did not answer. Her fingers dug into the dirt. Her nails broke. Small bits of soil and starlight on her face. The figure reached. The fingers grabbed her air from her mouth. Will you speak? She said nothing. The silence was heavy. The fear stayed in place. The decision stayed in her throat. The shadow moved its hand to the pendant. Do you wish to bargain? She thought of the restaurant. The delivery truck. The flat above the bar. For how long can you bargain? The fingers tightened around the pendant. The chain bit deep into her neck. She did not yell. She did not scream. The shadow held the pendant. The heartstone dimmed further. The crimson deep. Aurora watched the hand. She watched the distance between boots and the blackened form. The grip did not loosen. She looked at the ground. The roots were coming closer. Then she looked up. The figure lowered the hand. I will keep it. Aurora took the step back. Her boots slipped on the soft earth. You will not. The figure stepped. The shadow lunged. Aurora held her ground. She did not move. The fingers extended. Not for the chain. For the skin. She held the pendant tight. Aurora stared it down.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
94.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount986
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"whisper"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulsed"
2"scanned"
3"echo"
4"rhythmic"
5"whisper"
6"traced"
7"silence"
8"weight"
9"chill"
10"down her spine"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences190
matches
0"y with warmth"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences190
filterMatches
0"know"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences190
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen22
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords986
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Only the soft, Wrong snap of twigs breaking."
73.94% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions24
wordCount986
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.52
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Grove2
Wrong1
Hel1
Fae1
Aurora15
You3
persons
0"Grove"
1"Fae"
2"Aurora"
3"You"
places
0"London"
1"Hel"
globalScore0.739
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like dry leaves shuffling"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount986
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs84
mean11.74
std10.58
cv0.901
sampleLengths
064
19
244
37
413
522
619
75
83
912
1018
112
127
1310
1425
1529
1610
173
1821
194
209
214
2234
234
248
253
2613
273
2835
2921
305
314
3223
3326
345
352
364
3720
384
3918
4026
418
426
4314
4427
455
4614
4714
484
4916
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences190
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs188
matches
0"were coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences190
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount987
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.02330293819655522
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.00303951367781155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences190
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences190
mean5.19
std2.67
cv0.514
sampleLengths
06
122
214
39
46
57
69
75
816
93
107
115
128
132
145
157
164
172
184
1912
206
214
228
234
243
255
263
274
286
292
309
316
323
332
344
353
364
376
386
397
404
416
422
437
446
4510
462
474
483
497
33.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.24736842105263157
totalSentences190
uniqueOpeners47
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences176
matches
0"Only the soft, Wrong snap"
1"Then came the breath."
2"Then the whisper came."
3"Just the moan of wood"
4"Then the torso."
5"Then the light from the"
6"Just a wide flat line"
7"Then she looked up."
ratio0.045
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences176
matches
0"She kept it against her"
1"She walked deeper."
2"She raised her hand."
3"She knew the rules."
4"She feared them."
5"She spoke to the trees."
6"It sounded like dry leaves"
7"Her ears popped."
8"He stood at the tree"
9"It pulsed faintly with warmth"
10"He moved forward."
11"His feet did not touch"
12"I do not come."
13"You brought the fire."
14"She had the same mark"
15"She traced it without looking."
16"You brought the pendulum."
17"She stepped back."
18"It formed a rough circle"
19"She knew the lore."
ratio0.261
53.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount143
totalSentences176
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the standing"
1"The gray granite had weathered"
2"Wildflowers burst in color around"
3"The crimson heat from the"
4"She kept it against her"
5"A thin silver chain hugged"
6"A wind hummed through the"
7"The Grove had no sun."
8"The sky above the canopy"
9"She walked deeper."
10"The grass pressed back against"
11"Heartbeat thudding in her ears."
12"The wildflowers to her left"
13"She raised her hand."
14"The pendant glowed with a"
15"The heat pulsed against her"
16"Aurora scanned the perimeter."
17"The Grove lived in a"
18"She knew the rules."
19"She feared them."
ratio0.813
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences176
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences10
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"The sky above the canopy stayed a bruised purple, thick with clouds that did not move."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.5402%