Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJ0FTBJ5479VNBKQNHHPX4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 21s
Cost:
$0.000868
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thick, smelling of ozone and damp parchment. Aurora stepped across the threshold, her boot landing on heath soil that hummed underfoot. The light here bent around her eyes. Veins of amber ran through the silhouette of the trees. She touched her left wrist. The skin scraped against the silver chain of the Heartstone. Nyx did not blink. Their face remained a mask of shadows, but the violet light in their eyes flared against the gloom. "This place," Nyx whispered. The voice resonated like dry leaves grinding against stone. "It isn't real," Aurora replied. She looked down. The ground beneath her feet remained perfectly undisturbed where she stood, despite her weight. Isolde moved close and left no footprints in the moss. The creature that lived between the realms stood still as the void. "Your walk is the proof," Isolde said. The Half-Fae's silver hair caught a sliver of luminescence. She shifted her stance, the moonsilver dagger in her hand reflecting the distorted twilight. Aurora gripped the hilt of her blade. The metal remained ice-cold. "It hurts if we stay too long," Aurora said. The blade hummed. A vibration traveled up her forearm. Aurora's breath hitched. She pulled the pendant over her chest. The crimson gemstone fused to her skin pulsed in time with her heartbeat. The warmth spread across her ribs and settled deep in her bones. Nyx shifted shape. They stretched, a ripple of living darkness that swallowed the stems of a forgotten fern. "The hour grows," Nyx said. The temperature dropped ten degrees in a second. Frost crystallized on Nyx's knuckles. "I need to move," Aurora said. Her hands tightened around the handle of the blade. She felt the pressure building in her chest. "You cannot leave until the threshold speaks," Isolde said. She pointed her dagger at the wall of stone. It shimmered. "It is the Gluttony realm down here," Nyx noted. The shadow stretched. "Or the Veil." Aurora scanned the horizon. Vines moved without wind. The skywarped above the trees like heat waves on asphalt. "The Veil," Aurora said. She took another step. Her heel struck a surface that felt like polished bone. The Heartstone glowed brighter against her breastbone. Aurora stumbled. She caught herself with the blade, the tip sinking into the bone floor without a sound. "Look," Isolde said. Isolde stepped back. She raised her arm and bared her palm. Light poured from the Fae blade and wove threads of violet into the air. "See the patterns?" Nyx stepped into the shadows of the rock wall. Their form solidified into a shape that might have been a mirror. "I see the cracks," Nyx said. "They are bleeding." Aurora stepped toward a fissure. The stone here shimmered with a heat she could not touch. It smelled like roasted meat mixed with ozone. "The scent," Aurora said. She leaned closer to the fissure. Heat rolled off it like a furnace. "It feeds," Aurora said. She pulled back. Her hand trembled. The scar on her left wrist itched. She inspected it. The crescent mark glowed faintly. "Stop," Isolde said. She placed her hand over the blade's hilt. "Your hand burns." Aurora withdrew hers. The blade cooled instantly before her touch. "Your skin," Isolde said. "Is Hel-bound now." Isolde stepped closer. Her lavender eyes widened. "She lies," Aurora said. The Fae did not blink. She stood her ground. The blade stayed cold. "She knows more than she lets on," Aurora added. Isolde tilted her head. "Her silence tells the truth," Isolde replied. Nyx shifted their weight. The ground beneath them cracked. A spike of rock jutted upward. Nyx stepped over it. "We keep moving," Nyx said. Aurora scanned the fissure again. It looked deeper now. "Go down," Aurora said. Isolde looked at the wall. It shimmered violently. "I cannot see what is there," Isolde said. Her voice threaded into Aurora, causing the hair on her arms to stand up. "Then we walk together," Aurora said. She moved forward. The stone floor folded beneath her sole like wet paper. Nyx followed. They expanded their shadow to cover the path ahead. The darkness swallowed the edges of the forest. Aurora reached for the pendant. The warmth faded. The gem turned to stone. She realized the light was fading. The amber sky turned a burnt gray. "Light," Nyx said. They pointed at the higher branches. The leaves did not rustle. They remained exactly as they were hours ago. "The time stops here," Aurora said. Her hand moved to her throat. Her pulse slowed. She breathed in. She heard the space behind her scrubbed clean. "Open the door," Isolde said. Isolde pointed at the ground again. A crack widened into a tunnel. "Move," Aurora said. She stepped down. The temperature dropped again. The air smelled cold now. Nyx waited at the top. They stood against gravity, their feet pressing into the void. "Wait," Nyx said. They dropped. The darkness enclosed them. Aurora looked back. She saw the shadow retreat. They left nothing visible behind their form. "It is not a portal," Isolde said. She stepped forward. Her foot did not touch the ground. "The path is the end," Isolde said. Aurora gripped the blade again. It remained cold. She pulled herself deeper. Her fingers found cold rock on the wall. She pushed forward. They descended through the Veil. The light dulled into a naked hum. She reached the bottom. "Isolde," Nyx said. The shadow compressed. "Aurora," Isolde said. The Fae stepped into the light. She did not switch her light. "Move forward," Aurora said. She stepped off the ledge. Her boot landed on stone. "Nyx," Aurora said. Nyx stepped into the light. They looked at the fissure. The tunnel stretched into an unknown depth. "We go in," Aurora said. "Aurora," Isolde said. She looked up. The sky above them shrank into a single white point. "I see nothing more," Isolde said. Aurora stepped closer to the wall. She touched the stone with the back of her hand. It felt like snow. "It is the Veil," Nyx said. They stepped back. Their shadow extended to the ceiling. "Go," Nyx said. Aurora turned. She walked forward. The tunnel opened into a cavern. She saw the walls lined with bones. "Stop," Aurora said. She stopped. She turned back to the others. "Look." Nyx froze. The bones did not move. Aurora picked up a piece of bone. It pulsed beneath her fingers. "We are not the only ones," Aurora said. She threw the bone. It shattered. "Back," Isolde said. Isolde ran back. She did not walk. She vanished. "Go," Nyx said. Nyx stepped forward. The light grew brighter. Aurora turned. She looked at the fissure. She stepped up. She climbed. The light blinded her. She fell back. The air cooled. "It is not the Way," Aurora said. Nyx stood still. They did not move. The light died. "Light," Nyx said. Aurora looked at the cracks in her hand. "I keep moving," Aurora said. The silence filled the space. Nyx stepped away. They turned. "Go," Nyx said. "They do not go," Aurora said. She looked at Isolde. The Fae stood still. "She goes," Aurora said. Isolde stepped back. "Go," Aurora said. She kicked her boot against the stone. The stone shivered. Nyx closed their eyes. "Look," Aurora said. She stood. The blade stayed cold. Aurora turned. "Move," Aurora said. She turned. "The way opens," Aurora said. "Move," Nyx said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags53
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.898
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
95.95% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1234
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"resonated"
count1
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count2
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count3
7
word"scanned"
count2
8
word"trembled"
count1
9
word"silence"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"resonated"
2"weight"
3"pulsed"
4"warmth"
5"crystallized"
6"shimmered"
7"scanned"
8"trembled"
9"silence"
10"pulse"
11"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences221
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences221
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences227
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1234
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions50
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions103
wordCount1067
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity4.03
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity7.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone2
Half-Fae1
Nyx28
Isolde23
Fae5
Aurora43
Veil1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Half-Fae"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Fae"
5"Aurora"
places
0"Veil"
globalScore0
windowScore0
76.47% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like polished bone"
1"smelled like roasted meat mixed with ozone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1234
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences227
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs139
mean8.88
std6.81
cv0.767
sampleLengths
041
115
222
34
49
55
639
77
823
911
109
119
1235
1318
145
1513
166
1717
189
1911
2015
2118
228
2310
247
2518
263
2725
283
2921
309
3124
324
3313
344
356
3615
373
388
393
4010
417
427
434
4413
459
464
477
4819
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences221
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs248
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences227
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1069
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.0205799812909261
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004677268475210477
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences227
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences227
mean5.44
std3
cv0.551
sampleLengths
010
114
27
310
45
510
64
718
84
99
105
113
1214
1310
1412
157
169
1714
187
194
209
213
226
233
247
2513
2612
273
2815
295
308
315
326
339
348
359
369
372
389
393
403
414
424
4310
444
454
4610
477
482
4916
43.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats14
diversityRatio0.13656387665198239
totalSentences227
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
44.84% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount67
totalSentences153
matches
0"She touched her left wrist."
1"Their face remained a mask"
2"She looked down."
3"She shifted her stance, the"
4"She pulled the pendant over"
5"They stretched, a ripple of"
6"Her hands tightened around the"
7"She felt the pressure building"
8"She pointed her dagger at"
9"She took another step."
10"Her heel struck a surface"
11"She caught herself with the"
12"She raised her arm and"
13"Their form solidified into a"
14"It smelled like roasted meat"
15"She leaned closer to the"
16"She pulled back."
17"Her hand trembled."
18"She inspected it."
19"She placed her hand over"
ratio0.438
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount153
totalSentences153
matches
0"The air grew thick, smelling"
1"Aurora stepped across the threshold,"
2"The light here bent around"
3"Veins of amber ran through"
4"She touched her left wrist."
5"The skin scraped against the"
6"Nyx did not blink."
7"Their face remained a mask"
8"The voice resonated like dry"
9"She looked down."
10"The ground beneath her feet"
11"Isolde moved close and left"
12"The creature that lived between"
13"The Half-Fae's silver hair caught"
14"She shifted her stance, the"
15"Aurora gripped the hilt of"
16"The metal remained ice-cold."
17"The blade hummed."
18"A vibration traveled up her"
19"Aurora's breath hitched."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences153
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences24
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Aurora stepped across the threshold, her boot landing on heath soil that hummed underfoot."
1"They stretched, a ripple of living darkness that swallowed the stems of a forgotten fern."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags53
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags53
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx noted (note)"
2"Aurora added (add)"
dialogueSentences59
tagDensity0.898
leniency1
rawRatio0.057
effectiveRatio0.057
78.9145%