Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJ0HKM0W8HN39ME9F4G9VE

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air in the abandoned Camden Tube station was cold and thick with the ghosts of damp plaster and iron. Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under the fluttering blue tape, her leather boots making no sound on the grimy platform tiles. The beam of her torch cut a steady path through the gloom. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. 03:17. The call had come an hour ago. DS Martin Reed met her at the base of the stairs, his youthful face looking older in the harsh light of the portable lamps. “Scene’s secure, guv. Forensics en route. Uniforms are holding the perimeter at street level.” Harlow didn’t look at him. Her eyes swept the space. It wasn’t a typical station. No ticket machines, no maps. The walls were bare concrete, the tracks long since removed. Makeshift stalls, collapsed and shattered, littered the platform. Broken crates spilled glittering shards and dark, fibrous stains. The Veil Market, according to the initial report. She’d heard whispers of it in the low-level crime briefings—a ghost in the system, a black market that never stayed in one place. Now, finally, it had left something tangible behind. She approached the body. A male, mid-thirties, lying face-up near the shattered remains of what looked like a potion seller’s stall. He wore a long, worn coat. His face was frozen in a mask of surprise, mouth slightly open, eyes wide and staring at the vaulted ceiling. “Cause?” Harlow asked, her voice flat. “Single stab wound, left subclavian,” Reed said, pointing to a dark stain on the man’s coat. “Deep. Fatal. M.E. will confirm, but it looks straightforward. Likely a deal gone bad. This place reeks of illicit trade.” Harlow crouched, her knee protesting the cold floor. She didn’t touch the body. Her gaze traced the line of the wound, then moved. “Ligature marks,” she said, her finger hovering over the man’s left wrist, just above the sleeve. Faint, parallel abrasions encircled the skin. Reed peered over her shoulder. “Struggled with his attacker. Makes sense.” “Makes sense,” Harlow repeated, her tone neutral. She shifted her weight, her torch beam sliding across the floor. It caught on something half-buried in dust and shattered glass. A small, intricate brass disc, tarnished with verdigris. She pulled on a nitrile glove and carefully lifted it. The face was etched with fine, swirling symbols she didn’t recognize. A compass. But the needle, instead of pointing north, was quivering violently, aiming at a spot on the empty platform about ten feet away, where the shadows pooled thickly between two rotting support pillars. “What’s that?” Reed asked, leaning in. “Found it near the victim’s right hand,” she said, her own right hand coming to rest near her hip, a habit from years of carrying a sidearm she wasn’t wearing tonight. She turned the compass over. No manufacturer’s mark. Just the strange etching and that frantic, directional needle. “Doesn’t belong here.” “Probably his. A trinket bought at one of these stalls.” Harlow stood, her sharp jaw tightening. She walked to where the needle pointed. The air felt different here. Colder, not just from the tunnel’s chill, but a dead, stagnant cold that seemed to seep into her bones. She scanned the floor. No blood. No footprints. Just the same layer of grime that covered everything else. But the needle in her hand didn’t waver. It pointed directly at the empty space. She looked back at the body. The position was wrong. If the struggle had happened here, by the compass’s point of interest, why was the body ten feet away, near the stall? The wound was clean, in the front. Defensive wounds on the wrists. But the blood spatter on the floor behind the man was minimal, almost nonexistent. It pooled beneath him, soaking into his coat. He’d bled out here. He hadn’t run, or been dragged. “Time of death?” she asked. “Preliminary puts it between midnight and two a.m.,” Reed supplied. “Based on skin temp, rigor.” Harlow’s gaze swept the station again. The collapsed stalls, the overturned boxes, the general detritus of a market that had fled in a hurry. The crime scene tape at the stairs. The uniforms on the street above, keeping civilians away from a derelict Tube station at three in the morning. “Who found the body?” “A pair of urban explorers. Said they come here sometimes. Found him like this an hour ago. Didn’t touch anything. They were pretty shaken up. Said this place is usually… busy, on certain nights. Full moon nights.” Harlow looked up at the cracked ceiling. No moonlight reached down here. She walked a slow circuit around the body, her boots crunching on unseen debris. Near the victim’s left hand, lying palm-down, was another small object. Not a weapon. A bone token, carved with a simple circle. An entry fee, she surmised. Reed was talking into his radio, coordinating with the station house. “...single male, Caucasian, appears to be a merchant or trader here. Scene suggests a dispute over goods or payment. We’ll canvass known associates of these markets once forensics is done.” Harlow stopped her pacing. She held up the brass compass, the needle still pointing steadfastly at that empty patch of platform. “The victim arrived via the proper channel,” she said, holding up the bone token in her other gloved hand. “Paid his entry. He was here, at this stall, dealing.” She gestured to the shattered remnants. “Something spooked the market. Everyone left in a hurry. Our victim didn’t make it out. Not because he was stabbed here in the main flow of traffic, but…” She walked back to that cold spot, the compass now almost vibrating in her grip. She pointed at the floor. “The struggle, the initial confrontation, started here. By whatever this compass is pointing at.” Reed frowned. “Guv, there’s nothing there. And the body’s over there.” “The body is over there because he was moved. Or because he staggered back to his stall after being wounded,” Harlow said, her eyes fixed on the empty space. “But look at the blood. It’s a contained pool. If he’d walked ten feet while bleeding from a severed artery, we’d have a trail. We don’t.” She turned to look at Reed, her brown eyes catching the lamplight. “He was stabbed here, by this… nothing. Then he either crawled or was dragged back to his stall to die. The blood evidence supports that. The wound, the defensive marks, they happened in this cold spot.” “Stabbed by nothing?” Reed’s tone was patient, the kind used for a partner who’d been on the job too long. “Harlow, it was a mugging. The killer took what he wanted and fled. The body was left here because the killer panicked and ran with the market. The token suggests the victim wasn’t supposed to be here, or was an easy target. It’s simple.” Harlow didn’t respond immediately. She crouched again, this time near the cold spot, her torch illuminating the filthy floor. No fibers, no trace evidence. Just dust. But the air was wrong. Three years ago, in a rain-soaked alley off Brick Lane, DS Morris had used similar words. *It’s simple, Quinn. Just another slag.* Then the alley light had flickered, and the shadows had moved, and Morris was gone. The official report said he’d slipped, hit his head, fell into the canal. No witnesses. No sense. She stood up, her back straight. She held the Veil Compass out toward Reed. The needle pointed past him, into the darkness of the tunnel beyond the platform’s edge. “This isn’t evidence of a simple mugging,” she said, her voice quiet but carrying the weight of eighteen years of seeing things that didn’t fit, of filing reports that felt like lies. “This is evidence of a hole. In the order of things. The victim wasn’t here for coins or trinkets. He was here for this.” She pointed the compass at the empty space. “And whatever was here… it didn’t want to be found. It defended itself. The knife wasn’t the weapon. It was a symptom.” She handed the compass to a forensics tech who had just arrived. “Log this. As primary. And get the temperature reading for this exact spot. Every five minutes.” She turned back to the body, the victim of a crime scene that told two different stories. One for Martin Reed, for the paperwork, for the station house. And one for her, one that pointed into the cold dark at the heart of the platform, where the compass needle dug in and trembled, as if trying to point toward something that had already vanished, leaving only a dead man and a chill that wouldn’t leave her bones.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
93.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.38% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1450
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"shattered"
count4
2
word"tangible"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"intricate"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"etching"
count1
8
word"chill"
count2
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"shattered"
2"tangible"
3"traced"
4"weight"
5"intricate"
6"etched"
7"etching"
8"chill"
9"scanned"
10"flickered"
11"trembled"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences121
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1449
ratio0.004
matches
0"It’s simple, Quinn. Just another slag."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"An entry fee, she surmised."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1024
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.07
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Reed"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube2
Harlow11
Quinn2
Martin2
Reed11
Veil2
Market1
Faint1
Brick1
Lane1
Morris2
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Martin"
3"Reed"
4"Market"
5"Morris"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.963
windowScore0.833
41.30% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like a potion seller’s stall"
1"felt like lies"
2"as if trying to point toward something that had already vanished, leaving only a dead man and a chill that wouldn’t leave her bones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.69
wordCount1449
matches
0"not just from the tunnel’s chill, but a dead, stagnant cold"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences121
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs31
mean46.74
std29.04
cv0.621
sampleLengths
070
138
286
347
46
536
645
711
891
96
1051
1110
1270
1376
145
1515
1650
174
1837
1953
2041
2150
2268
2311
24103
2564
2685
2729
2886
2928
3077
91.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"was frozen"
1"was etched"
2"been dragged"
3"was gone"
76.54% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was quivering"
1"wasn’t wearing"
2"was talking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences121
ratio0.008
matches
0"She’d heard whispers of it in the low-level crime briefings—a ghost in the system, a black market that never stayed in one place."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1031
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03297769156159069
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008729388942774006
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences121
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences121
mean11.98
std9.85
cv0.823
sampleLengths
020
120
212
310
41
57
624
714
85
95
105
115
1210
138
149
158
1623
178
184
1917
206
2120
226
2316
2420
258
265
2710
2816
296
305
316
327
3311
3410
358
3610
3711
382
3932
406
4131
425
433
449
453
4610
476
487
495
60.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences95
matches
0"Just the strange etching and"
1"Just the same layer of"
2"Just another slag.* Then the"
ratio0.032
64.21% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences95
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"Her eyes swept the space."
2"It wasn’t a typical station."
3"She’d heard whispers of it"
4"She approached the body."
5"He wore a long, worn"
6"His face was frozen in"
7"She didn’t touch the body."
8"Her gaze traced the line"
9"she said, her finger hovering"
10"She shifted her weight, her"
11"It caught on something half-buried"
12"She pulled on a nitrile"
13"she said, her own right"
14"She turned the compass over."
15"She walked to where the"
16"She scanned the floor."
17"It pointed directly at the"
18"She looked back at the"
19"It pooled beneath him, soaking"
ratio0.389
81.05% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences95
matches
0"The air in the abandoned"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn ducked under"
2"The beam of her torch"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"The call had come an"
5"DS Martin Reed met her"
6"Harlow didn’t look at him."
7"Her eyes swept the space."
8"It wasn’t a typical station."
9"The walls were bare concrete,"
10"The Veil Market, according to"
11"She’d heard whispers of it"
12"She approached the body."
13"A male, mid-thirties, lying face-up"
14"He wore a long, worn"
15"His face was frozen in"
16"Harlow asked, her voice flat"
17"Reed said, pointing to a"
18"Harlow crouched, her knee protesting"
19"She didn’t touch the body."
ratio0.758
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences95
matches
0"Now, finally, it had left"
1"If the struggle had happened"
ratio0.021
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The collapsed stalls, the overturned boxes, the general detritus of a market that had fled in a hurry."
1"Reed was talking into his radio, coordinating with the station house."
2"And one for her, one that pointed into the cold dark at the heart of the platform, where the compass needle dug in and trembled, as if trying to point toward so…"
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow asked, her voice flat"
1"Harlow repeated, her tone neutral"
2"She turned, her brown eyes catching the lamplight"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.065
87.9218%