| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1150 | | totalAiIsms | 26 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "echo" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "flicker" | | 9 | "resonance" | | 10 | "throb" | | 11 | "reminder" | | 12 | "dance" | | 13 | "weight" | | 14 | "silk" | | 15 | "loomed" | | 16 | "familiar" | | 17 | "testament" | | 18 | "resolve" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | matches | | |
| 42.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 71 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "try to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 33 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1141 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 19 | | wordCount | 1137 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.88 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Fae | 2 | | Grove | 2 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Aurora | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Fae" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.75% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed woven from twilight and mist" | | 1 | "as if studying her" | | 2 | "as if trying to match the rhythm of the unseen dance" | | 3 | "seemed distant as if separated by a thin veil" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 4.382 | | wordCount | 1141 | | matches | | 0 | "not with fear, but with a sharp, alert awareness" | | 1 | "not to block the sound but to feel its vibration" | | 2 | "not toward her, but around her, circling the clearing in a slow, deliberate orbi" | | 3 | "not enough to see her breath, but enough to make the skin on her arms tighten" | | 4 | "not with violence, but with a quiet acknowledgment" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 25.24% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 67.12 | | std | 16 | | cv | 0.238 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 105 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 66 | | 5 | 87 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 86 | | 8 | 71 | | 9 | 68 | | 10 | 69 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 63 | | 15 | 68 | | 16 | 69 |
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| 90.44% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 71 | | matches | | 0 | "been sliced" | | 1 | "been was" | | 2 | "been seen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 181 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 71 | | ratio | 0.127 | | matches | | 0 | "A crack split the stillness—a sound like a twig snapping far beyond the standing stones." | | 1 | "Aurora halted, heart hammering against her ribs—not with fear, but with a sharp, alert awareness that something had shifted." | | 2 | "From the corner of her eye, a flicker darted between the trees—a shape too quick to be a moth, too solid to be a trick of moonlight." | | 3 | "Shadows pooled there, deeper than night should allow, coalescing into a form that hovered just above the ground—tall, slender, with limbs that seemed woven from twilight and mist." | | 4 | "A faint sigh escaped the shape, a sound like wind through dry leaves, and then it began to move—not toward her, but around her, circling the clearing in a slow, deliberate orbit." | | 5 | "For a heartbeat, the grove fell into absolute quiet—no chant, no rustle, no pulse from the pendant." | | 6 | "The usual sounds of London—traffic, murmurs, the occasional siren—were absent." | | 7 | "The grove did not try to stop her; it merely watched, its presence a quiet pressure at the edge of her perception." | | 8 | "The world beyond shifted instantly—noise rushed in, the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in a wind that had been absent moments before." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1146 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "lay cool against her" | | 1 | "watched pressed against her" |
| | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.027923211169284468 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004363001745200698 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 71 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 71 | | mean | 16.07 | | std | 6.74 | | cv | 0.419 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 16 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 6 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 19 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 29 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 17 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 9 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 23 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 4 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 8 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 32 | | 41 | 20 | | 42 | 19 | | 43 | 21 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 41.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2112676056338028 | | totalSentences | 71 | | uniqueOpeners | 15 | |
| 95.24% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, with a sound like" | | 1 | "Instead, a faint hum lingered," |
| | ratio | 0.029 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come here because" | | 1 | "She paused at the centre" | | 2 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 3 | "She whispered to herself, The" | | 4 | "She inhaled, filling her lungs" | | 5 | "She stepped forward, the moss" | | 6 | "She snapped her gaze toward" | | 7 | "She pressed her back against" | | 8 | "It rose and fell like" | | 9 | "She closed her eyes, focusing" | | 10 | "She did not run." | | 11 | "She stood, breath shallow, eyes" | | 12 | "She lifted her chin, refusing" | | 13 | "She stepped away from the" | | 14 | "She took a moment to" | | 15 | "She turned toward the path" | | 16 | "She reached the stones and" | | 17 | "She looked back one last" | | 18 | "She walked on, the pendant" | | 19 | "She could not shake the" |
| | ratio | 0.286 | |
| 17.14% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora stepped through the ancient" | | 1 | "The silver chain of the" | | 2 | "She had come here because" | | 3 | "The night air smelled of" | | 4 | "The clearing lay bathed in" | | 5 | "She paused at the centre" | | 6 | "The blossoms glowed with an" | | 7 | "Aurora lifted her hand, feeling" | | 8 | "It pulsed once, twice, then" | | 9 | "A low hum rose from" | | 10 | "She whispered to herself, The" | | 11 | "The grove held its breath." | | 12 | "A crack split the stillness—a" | | 13 | "Aurora turned her head, eyes" | | 14 | "She inhaled, filling her lungs" | | 15 | "She stepped forward, the moss" | | 16 | "Each footfall seemed to echo" | | 17 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, casting" | | 18 | "Aurora halted, heart hammering against" | | 19 | "She snapped her gaze toward" |
| | ratio | 0.886 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 25.97% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 55 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her skin, its deep crimson stone throbbing with a faint warmth that matched the beat of her pulse." | | 1 | "The clearing lay bathed in moonlight that seemed too bright, too sharp, as if the light itself had been sliced from another world." | | 2 | "Yet the sensation of being watched pressed against her skin, a prickle that started at the nape of her neck and spread down her shoulders." | | 3 | "The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a crimson halo that flickered against the trunks of the ancient oaks." | | 4 | "Shadows pooled there, deeper than night should allow, coalescing into a form that hovered just above the ground—tall, slender, with limbs that seemed woven from…" | | 5 | "The pendant’s glow pulsed stronger with each orbit, as if trying to match the rhythm of the unseen dance." | | 6 | "Then, with a sound like silk tearing, the shape dissolved into a shower of tiny luminous motes that drifted upward, disappearing into the canopy above." | | 7 | "The night beyond the grove seemed distant, as if separated by a thin veil." | | 8 | "The world beyond shifted instantly—noise rushed in, the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in a wind that had been absent moments before." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |