Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJ2EGRJPF0XPQH2N784C51

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Duration:
29.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora stepped through the ancient oak standing stones that marked the edge of the Fae Grove. The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her skin, its deep crimson stone throbbing with a faint warmth that matched the beat of her pulse. She had come here because the pendant had begun to pulse stronger each evening, a silent summons she could not ignore. The night air smelled of damp earth and distant rain, though no clouds hung above Richmond Park. The clearing lay bathed in moonlight that seemed too bright, too sharp, as if the light itself had been sliced from another world. She paused at the centre of the grove where wildflowers opened their petals despite the hour. The blossoms glowed with an inner light, casting soft shadows that crawled across the moss like living ink. Aurora lifted her hand, feeling the pendant’s heat against her palm. It pulsed once, twice, then steadied. A low hum rose from the ground, a vibration she felt more in her bones than in her ears. She whispered to herself, “What do you want?” The words hung, absorbed by the strange silence that followed. No crickets chirped, no wind rustled the leaves. The grove held its breath. A crack split the stillness—a sound like a twig snapping far beyond the standing stones. Aurora turned her head, eyes scanning the perimeter. Nothing moved. Yet the sensation of being watched pressed against her skin, a prickle that started at the nape of her neck and spread down her shoulders. She inhaled, filling her lungs with the cool night, and forced her shoulders to relax. She stepped forward, the moss giving way under her boots with a soft sigh. Each footfall seemed to echo louder than it should, as if the grove amplified her presence. The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a crimson halo that flickered against the trunks of the ancient oaks. Aurora halted, heart hammering against her ribs—not with fear, but with a sharp, alert awareness that something had shifted. From the corner of her eye, a flicker darted between the trees—a shape too quick to be a moth, too solid to be a trick of moonlight. She snapped her gaze toward it, but the space where it had been was empty, save for the swaying of a fern that had not moved a moment before. She pressed her back against the rough bark of the nearest oak, feeling the grooves of the wood under her fingertips. The bark was warm, as if the tree itself breathed. A low chant drifted on the air, indistinct, layered with voices that spoke in a tongue she could not name. It rose and fell like tide, each syllable brushing the edge of comprehension before slipping away. Aurora pressed her palms to her ears, not to block the sound but to feel its vibration. The chant seemed to come from everywhere and nowhere, a resonance that made the air thick. She closed her eyes, focusing on the pendant’s pulse. The stone beat in time with the chant, each throb a reminder that she was not imagined. When she opened her eyes, the grove had changed. The wildflowers now faced inward, their petals turned toward a point just beyond the standing stones where the moonlight pooled like liquid silver. Shadows pooled there, deeper than night should allow, coalescing into a form that hovered just above the ground—tall, slender, with limbs that seemed woven from twilight and mist. Aurora did not scream. She did not run. She stood, breath shallow, eyes locked on the apparition. The figure’s head tilted, as if studying her. No features were discernible, only a suggestion of a face where darkness gathered thicker. A faint sigh escaped the shape, a sound like wind through dry leaves, and then it began to move—not toward her, but around her, circling the clearing in a slow, deliberate orbit. Each pass of the figure sent a ripple through the moss, causing the wildflowers to dim and flare in sequence. The pendant’s glow pulsed stronger with each orbit, as if trying to match the rhythm of the unseen dance. Aurora felt the temperature drop, not enough to see her breath, but enough to make the skin on her arms tighten. She lifted her chin, refusing to show weakness. A sudden crack split the air again, louder this time, like a branch breaking under weight. The figure halted, its form flickering as if caught between states. For a heartbeat, the grove fell into absolute quiet—no chant, no rustle, no pulse from the pendant. Then, with a sound like silk tearing, the shape dissolved into a shower of tiny luminous motes that drifted upward, disappearing into the canopy above. The chant resumed, softer now, as if the grove exhaled. Aurora lowered her hands, feeling the pendant’s warmth fade to a steady glow. She stepped away from the oak, her boots sinking slightly into the damp moss. The wildflowers swayed gently, their lights returning to a steady rhythm. The standing stones loomed silent, their ancient faces unchanged. She took a moment to listen. The night beyond the grove seemed distant, as if separated by a thin veil. The usual sounds of London—traffic, murmurs, the occasional siren—were absent. Instead, a faint hum lingered, the echo of the chant, vibrating through the soles of her feet. Aurora tucked the pendant beneath her shirt, feeling its weight against her sternum. She turned toward the path that led back to the standing stones, each step deliberate. The grove did not try to stop her; it merely watched, its presence a quiet pressure at the edge of her perception. She reached the stones and paused, hand resting on the cool surface of the nearest oak. The moonlight caught the silver of her pendant, sending a thin line of crimson across the bark. She looked back one last time. The clearing lay empty, the wildflowers swaying in a breeze she could not feel, the air still humming with the remnants of the chant. Aurora drew a deep breath, filled her lungs with the night’s strange scent, and stepped through the stones, leaving the Fae Grove behind her. The world beyond shifted instantly—noise rushed in, the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in a wind that had been absent moments before. She walked on, the pendant warm against her chest, her mind already parsing the oddness she had just left. The path home stretched ahead, empty and familiar, yet the memory of the grove clung to her like a second skin. She could not shake the feeling that something had marked her, not with violence, but with a quiet acknowledgment that she had been seen. The night pressed close, but she moved forward, each step a testament to the resolve that had brought her here in the first place.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1150
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1150
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"warmth"
count2
1
word"pulse"
count4
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"footfall"
count1
6
word"echo"
count2
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"flicker"
count1
9
word"resonance"
count1
10
word"throb"
count1
11
word"reminder"
count1
12
word"dance"
count1
13
word"weight"
count2
14
word"silk"
count1
15
word"loomed"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"testament"
count1
18
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"pulsed"
3"silence"
4"scanning"
5"footfall"
6"echo"
7"flickered"
8"flicker"
9"resonance"
10"throb"
11"reminder"
12"dance"
13"weight"
14"silk"
15"loomed"
16"familiar"
17"testament"
18"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences71
matches
0"t with fear"
42.25% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences71
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences71
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1141
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions19
wordCount1137
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.88
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae2
Grove2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Aurora10
persons
0"Grove"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.75% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences67
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed woven from twilight and mist"
1"as if studying her"
2"as if trying to match the rhythm of the unseen dance"
3"seemed distant as if separated by a thin veil"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords4.382
wordCount1141
matches
0"not with fear, but with a sharp, alert awareness"
1"not to block the sound but to feel its vibration"
2"not toward her, but around her, circling the clearing in a slow, deliberate orbi"
3"not enough to see her breath, but enough to make the skin on her arms tighten"
4"not with violence, but with a quiet acknowledgment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
25.24% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean67.12
std16
cv0.238
sampleLengths
0105
170
231
365
466
587
669
786
871
968
1069
1157
1247
1350
1463
1568
1669
90.44% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences71
matches
0"been sliced"
1"been was"
2"been seen"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs181
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences71
ratio0.127
matches
0"A crack split the stillness—a sound like a twig snapping far beyond the standing stones."
1"Aurora halted, heart hammering against her ribs—not with fear, but with a sharp, alert awareness that something had shifted."
2"From the corner of her eye, a flicker darted between the trees—a shape too quick to be a moth, too solid to be a trick of moonlight."
3"Shadows pooled there, deeper than night should allow, coalescing into a form that hovered just above the ground—tall, slender, with limbs that seemed woven from twilight and mist."
4"A faint sigh escaped the shape, a sound like wind through dry leaves, and then it began to move—not toward her, but around her, circling the clearing in a slow, deliberate orbit."
5"For a heartbeat, the grove fell into absolute quiet—no chant, no rustle, no pulse from the pendant."
6"The usual sounds of London—traffic, murmurs, the occasional siren—were absent."
7"The grove did not try to stop her; it merely watched, its presence a quiet pressure at the edge of her perception."
8"The world beyond shifted instantly—noise rushed in, the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in a wind that had been absent moments before."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1146
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay cool against her"
1"watched pressed against her"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.027923211169284468
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.004363001745200698
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences71
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences71
mean16.07
std6.74
cv0.419
sampleLengths
016
128
221
317
423
516
618
711
86
919
1018
118
125
1315
148
152
1625
1715
1814
1916
2017
2119
2227
2329
2421
2510
2620
2716
2817
2916
309
3117
329
3323
3428
354
364
379
388
3914
4032
4120
4219
4321
448
4516
4611
4717
4825
4910
41.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2112676056338028
totalSentences71
uniqueOpeners15
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Then, with a sound like"
1"Instead, a faint hum lingered,"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences70
matches
0"She had come here because"
1"She paused at the centre"
2"It pulsed once, twice, then"
3"She whispered to herself, The"
4"She inhaled, filling her lungs"
5"She stepped forward, the moss"
6"She snapped her gaze toward"
7"She pressed her back against"
8"It rose and fell like"
9"She closed her eyes, focusing"
10"She did not run."
11"She stood, breath shallow, eyes"
12"She lifted her chin, refusing"
13"She stepped away from the"
14"She took a moment to"
15"She turned toward the path"
16"She reached the stones and"
17"She looked back one last"
18"She walked on, the pendant"
19"She could not shake the"
ratio0.286
17.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences70
matches
0"Aurora stepped through the ancient"
1"The silver chain of the"
2"She had come here because"
3"The night air smelled of"
4"The clearing lay bathed in"
5"She paused at the centre"
6"The blossoms glowed with an"
7"Aurora lifted her hand, feeling"
8"It pulsed once, twice, then"
9"A low hum rose from"
10"She whispered to herself, The"
11"The grove held its breath."
12"A crack split the stillness—a"
13"Aurora turned her head, eyes"
14"She inhaled, filling her lungs"
15"She stepped forward, the moss"
16"Each footfall seemed to echo"
17"The pendant’s glow intensified, casting"
18"Aurora halted, heart hammering against"
19"She snapped her gaze toward"
ratio0.886
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
25.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant lay cool against her skin, its deep crimson stone throbbing with a faint warmth that matched the beat of her pulse."
1"The clearing lay bathed in moonlight that seemed too bright, too sharp, as if the light itself had been sliced from another world."
2"Yet the sensation of being watched pressed against her skin, a prickle that started at the nape of her neck and spread down her shoulders."
3"The pendant’s glow intensified, casting a crimson halo that flickered against the trunks of the ancient oaks."
4"Shadows pooled there, deeper than night should allow, coalescing into a form that hovered just above the ground—tall, slender, with limbs that seemed woven from…"
5"The pendant’s glow pulsed stronger with each orbit, as if trying to match the rhythm of the unseen dance."
6"Then, with a sound like silk tearing, the shape dissolved into a shower of tiny luminous motes that drifted upward, disappearing into the canopy above."
7"The night beyond the grove seemed distant, as if separated by a thin veil."
8"The world beyond shifted instantly—noise rushed in, the distant hum of traffic, the rustle of leaves in a wind that had been absent moments before."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
67.2627%