Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJ3PF4E3A1M3HVPRRM3ZV5

Run Details

Duration:
2m 33s
Cost:
$0.013051
Provider:
Seed

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
It’s nine p.m. on a rain-slicked Tuesday in Soho. The Raven’s Nest’s green neon sign bleeds into the puddles on Frith Street, turning the asphalt the color of bruised limes. Inside, heat from the space heater tangles with the smell of stale peanuts and applewood smoke, only three patrons hunched over booths in the back, their voices low enough to merge with the Billie Holiday track crackling from the speaker above the bar. Silas Blackwood wiped a ring of condensation off the mahogany bar, his left leg shifting to take his weight, the old knee injury throbbing like it always did when the rain set in. His auburn hair, streaked through with silver like someone had dusted ash over flame, brushed the collar of his flannel, and his neatly trimmed beard hid the tight set of his jaw as he reached for a bottle of bourbon to restock the well. The brass bell strung above the front door jingled, and cold rain wind curled in around the woman who stepped over the threshold, shaking water off a frayed wool coat that looked older than the bar’s oldest regular. He set the bourbon down hard enough to slosh a drop over the rim. His silver signet ring, worn on his right hand as it always was, caught the dim string light strung above the liquor shelf as he leaned forward, squinting through the gloom. The woman pushed wire-rimmed glasses up her nose, and a thin, pale scar sliced across her right eyebrow, the same scar he’d stitched up himself in a Berlin safe house in 2001, after a knife fight with a Czech arms dealer. Her hair, once bleach-blonde and cut into a sharp bob that never fell out of place mid-chase, was salt-and-pepper, chin-length, straying in thin wisps around her face. She carried a canvas tote slung over one shoulder, patched with a tabby cat stitched in neon orange, and her hands, when she wiped more rain off her cheeks, were twisted at the knuckles with arthritis. Elara Voss. His partner for ten years, the only person he’d ever trusted to watch his back on a job. They hadn’t spoken in nineteen years, not since the Prague op that ended his career, left him with a permanent limp and a grudge that had settled in his bones as heavy as the knee pain. She crossed the room, boots scuffing the worn pine floorboards, and stopped on the other side of the bar. Her gaze flicked over the walls, lined with frayed field maps and black-and-white photographs that covered every inch of the Nest’s drywall, and landed on him again. Si. I thought that limp was a myth you made up to get out of carrying surveillance gear up five flights of stairs. He laughed, the sound rough, unused after years of only sharing that specific joke with no one but himself. He grabbed two clean rocks glasses from the shelf under the bar, and a bottle of the single malt he only broke out for people who deserved it. Elara. The hell are you doing in London? I thought you moved to New Zealand to raise sheep and ignore every MI6 pension memo that landed in your inbox. She snorted, slipping off her coat to reveal a faded university sweatshirt, the logo of the University of Otago blotted at the hem. That part was true. I came to scatter Mike’s ashes. He always wanted to see London. Never got the chance before the cancer took him. I saw a TikTok of this place last week. The name. I had to stop in. Couldn’t believe it was actually you running a bar. He poured two fingers of whiskey into each glass, slid one across the bar to her. Her fingers wrapped around the glass, and he saw the same chipped red nail polish she used to wear in the field, only now the color was faded, chipped from gardening instead of prying open lockboxes. The regulars in the back filtered out one by one, pulling their coats tight against the rain, until the only sounds in the bar were the rain lashing the windows and Holiday’s voice winding down. Silas nodded toward the back of the bar, toward the wall of bookshelves that hid the Nest’s secret room, and Elara followed him, his limp catching on the edge of a rug as he went. He pulled the copy of *The Spy Who Came in from the Cold* that served as the lever, and the bookshelf swung open, revealing a small room with a wooden table and two chairs, the walls lined with case files he’d never managed to leave behind. They sat, and Elara’s gaze landed on the map of Prague taped to the wall inside the room, the same one they’d marked up together in 2004, the red X they’d drawn over the safe house still bright after all these years. The air thickened, the unspoken thing that had sat between them for almost two decades taking up more space than the two of them in the small room. I always wondered if you’d blame me for what happened. Elara’s thumb rubbed the rim of her glass. I knew you would. You were always the type to hold a grudge longer than you held a good hand of poker. You bailed. Silas leaned forward, the signet ring digging into his palm as he clenched his hand around his glass. You pulled the car out before I could grab the asset. You left me there to get hit by that IED. I lost use of my leg, almost lost my life, and you never even called to explain. I thought you cared more about the mission than you cared about me. Elara’s throat worked, and she looked away, out the small crack in the bookshelf at the bar’s empty main room. MI6 ordered me to pull out. They had a mole in the Prague cell. The IED wasn’t meant to take out the asset. It was meant to take you. They found out you’d been asking questions about the secretary’s ties to the same arms dealer we were chasing. They were going to kill your sister, Lila. If I didn’t pull you out that night, they’d have kidnapped her from her Cardiff home and dumped her body in the Severn. I couldn’t tell you. The safe house was bugged. If you’d known, you’d have gone back in. You’d have gotten both of you killed. I couldn’t let that happen. Silas went still. The memory of his sister showing up at his hospital room a week after the op, her hands shaking as she told him someone had left a dead cat on her porch, flooded back. He’d thought it was a threat from the arms dealer. He’d never connected it to MI6. He’d spent nineteen years angry at Elara, angry that she’d abandoned him, and she’d saved his life. Saved his sister’s life. I couldn’t call you after. Elara’s voice cracked, and she wiped a tear off her cheek with the back of her hand, her arthritic fingers fumbling a little. I was told if I ever reached out to you, if I ever told anyone what really happened in Prague, they’d revoke my pension. They’d track me down. I was too scared. Too proud. I watched you open this bar from afar. Saw you build a life. I was glad you got out. MI6 would have eaten you alive if you’d stayed. The front door of the bar jingled again, and Silas heard the familiar thud of Aurora’s boots on the floor, the soft huff she let out when she shook rain off her Golden Empress delivery hoodie. She’d finished her last run an hour prior, stopped to grab a coffee on the walk back, and now she crossed to the fridge, her straight shoulder-length black hair falling in her face as she bent to grab a lager. The small crescent scar on her left wrist peeked out from the cuff of her hoodie as she twisted the cap off, and she called over her shoulder to the back room, the sound carrying clear. You guys want another round before I head up? I can restock the bar fridge on my way. Silas yelled back that they were fine, and she waved, heading up the stairs to her flat above the bar, the thud of her steps fading until it was just the two of them again. That kid, the girl who’d run to London from an abusive ex, the quick-witted, sharp-tongued delivery driver he’d taken under his wing, was part of the life he’d built. The life he’d thought was a consolation prize for the career he’d lost, the life Elara had given him by making the call no one else would. I’m sorry. The words came out rough, nineteen years of regret wrapped up in two small syllables. I should have trusted you. I should have known you’d never leave me behind on purpose. Elara smiled, lifting her glass to clink it against his. Water under the bridge, Si. We both got out. That’s more than most of our old team can say. They sat there for another two hours, drinking the last of the single malt, trading stories of the lives they’d built apart, the years that had stretched between the last time they’d sat in a safe house together and this one. Elara talked about her grandkids, the sheep that kept escaping their pasture, the small cottage she’d bought on a cliff overlooking the Pacific. Silas talked about Rory, the regulars who came in every week, the way the city’s noise had stopped feeling like a threat and started feeling like a blanket. The rain stopped, the first pale pink light of dawn peeked over the London skyline, and for the first time since the Prague op, the knot of anger in Silas’ chest unspooled, leaving only the quiet relief of an old mistake fixed, an old regret finally laid to rest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
97.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1676
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"really"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Elara"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
82.10% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1676
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"gloom"
2"eyebrow"
3"flicked"
4"unspoken"
5"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences99
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords8
totalWords1676
ratio0.005
matches
0"The Spy Who Came in from the Cold"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1656
uniqueNames34
maxNameDensity0.66
worstName"Elara"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"You"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Soho1
Raven1
Nest3
Frith1
Street1
Billie1
Holiday2
Blackwood1
Berlin1
Czech1
Voss1
Prague5
London4
New1
Zealand1
University1
Otago1
Mike1
TikTok1
Elara11
Spy1
Came1
Lila1
Cardiff1
Severn1
Silas7
Aurora1
Golden1
Empress1
Si2
Pacific1
Rory1
You6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Billie"
3"Holiday"
4"Blackwood"
5"Otago"
6"Mike"
7"Elara"
8"Came"
9"Lila"
10"Silas"
11"Aurora"
12"Rory"
13"You"
places
0"Soho"
1"Frith"
2"Street"
3"Berlin"
4"Prague"
5"London"
6"New"
7"Zealand"
8"Cardiff"
9"Severn"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.597
wordCount1676
matches
0"no one but"
99.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"thought that limp"
1"let that happen"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs21
mean79.81
std49.1
cv0.615
sampleLengths
0188
1149
256
346
423
547
629
773
8168
970
1040
1171
12128
1374
1490
15112
1618
1791
1833
1929
20141
87.54% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences99
matches
0"was, caught"
1"were twisted"
2"was meant"
3"was bugged"
4"was told"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs272
matches
0"were chasing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences99
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1668
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.02697841726618705
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.00539568345323741
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean16.93
std13.14
cv0.776
sampleLengths
03
16
221
343
433
544
638
714
831
941
1027
1136
122
1318
1436
1519
1627
171
1822
1919
2028
211
227
2321
2423
254
266
276
289
299
302
315
329
3316
3436
3535
3635
3746
3842
3928
4010
418
424
4318
442
4518
4611
4710
4817
4913
41.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.24242424242424243
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners24
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences92
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences92
matches
0"It’s nine p.m."
1"His auburn hair, streaked through"
2"He set the bourbon down"
3"His silver signet ring, worn"
4"Her hair, once bleach-blonde and"
5"She carried a canvas tote"
6"His partner for ten years,"
7"They hadn’t spoken in nineteen"
8"She crossed the room, boots"
9"Her gaze flicked over the"
10"I thought that limp was"
11"He laughed, the sound rough,"
12"He grabbed two clean rocks"
13"I thought you moved to"
14"She snorted, slipping off her"
15"I came to scatter Mike’s"
16"He always wanted to see"
17"I saw a TikTok of"
18"I had to stop in."
19"He poured two fingers of"
ratio0.565
3.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount84
totalSentences92
matches
0"It’s nine p.m."
1"The Raven’s Nest’s green neon"
2"Silas Blackwood wiped a ring"
3"His auburn hair, streaked through"
4"The brass bell strung above"
5"He set the bourbon down"
6"His silver signet ring, worn"
7"The woman pushed wire-rimmed glasses"
8"Her hair, once bleach-blonde and"
9"She carried a canvas tote"
10"His partner for ten years,"
11"They hadn’t spoken in nineteen"
12"She crossed the room, boots"
13"Her gaze flicked over the"
14"I thought that limp was"
15"He laughed, the sound rough,"
16"He grabbed two clean rocks"
17"The hell are you doing"
18"I thought you moved to"
19"She snorted, slipping off her"
ratio0.913
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"If I didn’t pull you"
1"If you’d known, you’d have"
ratio0.022
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The brass bell strung above the front door jingled, and cold rain wind curled in around the woman who stepped over the threshold, shaking water off a frayed woo…"
1"They hadn’t spoken in nineteen years, not since the Prague op that ended his career, left him with a permanent limp and a grudge that had settled in his bones a…"
2"I thought you moved to New Zealand to raise sheep and ignore every MI6 pension memo that landed in your inbox."
3"The regulars in the back filtered out one by one, pulling their coats tight against the rain, until the only sounds in the bar were the rain lashing the windows…"
4"He pulled the copy of *The Spy Who Came in from the Cold* that served as the lever, and the bookshelf swung open, revealing a small room with a wooden table and…"
5"The air thickened, the unspoken thing that had sat between them for almost two decades taking up more space than the two of them in the small room."
6"The memory of his sister showing up at his hospital room a week after the op, her hands shaking as she told him someone had left a dead cat on her porch, floode…"
7"Silas yelled back that they were fine, and she waved, heading up the stairs to her flat above the bar, the thud of her steps fading until it was just the two of…"
8"That kid, the girl who’d run to London from an abusive ex, the quick-witted, sharp-tongued delivery driver he’d taken under his wing, was part of the life he’d …"
9"They sat there for another two hours, drinking the last of the single malt, trading stories of the lives they’d built apart, the years that had stretched betwee…"
10"Elara talked about her grandkids, the sheep that kept escaping their pasture, the small cottage she’d bought on a cliff overlooking the Pacific."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.0461%