| 42.11% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 3 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "their eyes glowed faintly [faintly]" | | 1 | "Or she corrected internally [internally]" | | 2 | "she said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.594 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.158 | | effectiveRatio | 0.158 | |
| 92.37% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 42.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1310 | | totalAiIsms | 15 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "whisper" | | 6 | "imposing" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "shimmered" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "crystal" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 122 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1306 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1036 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.83 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 19 | | Nyx | 9 | | Tessa | 1 | | Oxford | 1 | | Parkway | 1 | | London | 2 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Fae | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Winter | 1 | | Isolde | 11 | | Seer | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | Veil | 3 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hades | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Tessa" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Oxford" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Winter" | | 4 | "Golden" |
| | globalScore | 0.583 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a flame pressed against her c" |
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| 46.86% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.531 | | wordCount | 1306 | | matches | | 0 | "Not a tremor, but a shift in perspective" | | 1 | "not as a weapon, but as a statement" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 122 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 34 | | mean | 38.41 | | std | 22.04 | | cv | 0.574 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 83 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 65 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 90 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 55 | | 9 | 66 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 73 | | 12 | 19 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 69 | | 15 | 39 | | 16 | 51 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 52 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 19 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 55 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 52 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 42 | | 31 | 48 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 4 |
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| 95.69% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | | 0 | "was wrapped" | | 1 | "was supposed" | | 2 | "were carved" | | 3 | "was supposed" | | 4 | "was supposed" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't just pulsing" | | 1 | "was thinning" |
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| 49.18% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 122 | | ratio | 0.033 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory—Aurora, in her head—nodded." | | 1 | "The voice wasn't theirs alone; a wind carried it, skirted the edges of her skin, sounding like dry leaves skying downward." | | 2 | "This place—the Grove—was supposed to be a place of rest, a place to hide from the houses, but it was a place where secrets were carved into the stone and the Veil learned to swallow." | | 3 | "It wasn't just pulsing now; it pushed." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1043 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.028763183125599234 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00862895493767977 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 122 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 122 | | mean | 10.7 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.636 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 22 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 11 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 28 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 2 | | 27 | 9 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 14 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 12 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 21 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 43.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.22131147540983606 | | totalSentences | 122 | | uniqueOpeners | 27 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 79.34% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn’t sound exactly, but" | | 1 | "She stepped onto the moss" | | 2 | "They glided a step ahead," | | 3 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 4 | "She glanced at her phone," | | 5 | "She walked without touching the" | | 6 | "She looked at the seer's" | | 7 | "They grew from the stone," | | 8 | "She kept her hand hovering" | | 9 | "It pulsed, in sync with" | | 10 | "Her voice was soft, a" | | 11 | "She found herself gripping the" | | 12 | "She pulled it from the" | | 13 | "She turned slightly, her silhouette" | | 14 | "She remembered her own scars," | | 15 | "She raised her left arm." | | 16 | "She shook it out." | | 17 | "It was moon ended." | | 18 | "She kept the blade pointed" | | 19 | "It was warm." |
| | ratio | 0.352 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 85 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones hummed against" | | 1 | "It wasn’t sound exactly, but" | | 2 | "She stepped onto the moss" | | 3 | "The air smelled of ozone" | | 4 | "They glided a step ahead," | | 5 | "Rory—Aurora, in her head—nodded." | | 6 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 7 | "The oak standing stones rusted" | | 8 | "Time felt wrong here, dragged" | | 9 | "She glanced at her phone," | | 10 | "The screen was dark, and" | | 11 | "The voice wasn't theirs alone;" | | 12 | "Isolde stood at the far" | | 13 | "She walked without touching the" | | 14 | "Isolde, no, Tessa from the" | | 15 | "She looked at the seer's" | | 16 | "The silence between them stretched." | | 17 | "Aurora hadn't realized until now" | | 18 | "The world was static here," | | 19 | "They grew from the stone," |
| | ratio | 0.934 | |
| 54.95% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Or, she corrected, internally, a" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 59.80% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 43 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The voice wasn't theirs alone; a wind carried it, skirted the edges of her skin, sounding like dry leaves skying downward." | | 1 | "They grew from the stone, fat and bulbous things that bloomed with colors she knew by memory of paints: purple, violet, a black that swallowed light." | | 2 | "The hilt was cold where her palm was wrapped, a bone-chill that went past scales in the Winter and stayed frozen." | | 3 | "The wildflowers opened their petals, revealing a pollen that glittered like ground glass, chiming as it scattered." | | 4 | "She turned slightly, her silhouette dipping and resisting the weight of gravity." |
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| 72.37% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "their eyes glowed faintly, a star trapped in the dark" | | 1 | "Aurora said, her voice sounding louder than her lungs allowed" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 17 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Or she corrected internally (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.118 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |