Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJ84M0V1W4T2FX74P92RQ5

Run Details

Duration:
1m 5s
Cost:
$0.000952
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The smell hit Harlow Quinn first. Rotting coal and ozone. Cold exhaust from the station line beneath Camden mixed with unwashed bodies. She stepped over a puddle that shimmered violet. Her boot made no sound on the damp grating. She tightened the strap of her leather watch as the rain continued to seep through the cracks in the ceiling. The station felt wrong. It was recently condemned by local council reports. Quinn reached the corner near the rusted turnstiles. Bodies lay twisted in a cluster. Blood spatter looked dry. Miller leaned against the ticket booth, a当你 had a cigarette stuck in his mouth. "What is that?" Miller asked, pointing at the stain. "Blood type AB negative." Quinn knelt. The watch on her left wrist caught the dim light. "It matches the victim." Miller exhaled smoke. Quinn ignored the response. She touched the fabric of the jacket draped over the corpse. The weave felt translucent. Not cotton, not wool. Fibre spun from shadow itself. "Where did you pull the gun from?" Miller asked. Quinn stood. She wiped a smudge of darkness from her glove onto the wall. The mark remained. "The weapon is gone." She looked at the door leading out. "And the blood. You know this." Miller pushed from the wall. "The victim's blood was already there. Found before we called evidence team." Quinn's brow furrowed. "The floor is dry. The body is three hours old." "The body is new." Miller twisted the cigarette end. "Stop staring at me. See the notes on the floor." Quinn moved. She traced the patterns etched into the concrete. Symbols glowed faint green. "Runes," Miller said. "Alchemical." "Impossible." Quinn turned. Her jawline set. "Human ink." Miller laughed, a short sound. "Human ink burns feet." Quinn walked to the edge of the crowd. The bodies formed a circle. The centre held a single object. It looked like brass. "The Compass." She picked it up. Cold metal in her palm. "Give it back." Miller stepped forward. "It is evidence." "It isn't pointing anywhere." Quinn held the device over the ground. The needle spun slower, then stopped. It lay perpendicular to the floor. Veins of light ran through the grooves. Miller reached out and touched the casing. His hand jerked back. "Don't touch it." Quinn pulled the clipboard. "It hums." Miller rubbed his thumb. Skin blistered. "I saw this in the archives. Old rule." "Old rules died with Morris." Quinn flipped the page. The paper stained black where the heat touched it. "You think he died in a street fight." Miller crossed his arms. "You're looking in the wrong place again. His partner. You saw the files." Quinn nodded. "Yes." "He slipped." Miller shook his head. "Bad fall." "The knife held the same heat as the Compass." Quinn pointed at the blade. Miller sighed. "The body in that circle. How many weeks are they sitting?" "Three weeks." Quinn looked at the clock on her wall. Time blurred. "They move every moon." Miller ran a hand through his hair. "They move. The market moves." Quinn looked back at the bodies. The faces stared, eyes open. Not natural decay. Stasis. "This isn't a murder." Quinn dropped to her knees again. She grabbed a glove. It felt heavy. "This is a harvest." Miller frowned. "Harvest?" Quinn ignored him. She opened the satchel on her shoulder. Inside lay the Veil Compass. She crossed her fingers. "Where does it lead?" Miller asked. "It points to the source." Quinn held the needle over the station floor. "It points to the Veil Market." Miller laughed. "You know the market? No one knows the market." Quinn turned the needle. It spun faster. "The compass was made by artisans from the Veil. They craft for the market." Miller looked down at his boots. Mud stuck in the tread. "We need to call support." "Support won't help." Quinn stood. "They move locations every full moon. We are here now." Quinn's eyes narrowed. She looked at the wall behind them. Shadow textures peeled away from the plaster. "Miller." Quinn pointed at the corner. Miller followed her gaze. "What do you see?" "Nothing." Miller stepped toward her. "Just a wall." "Look closer." Quinn leaned her hip against the railing. "See the sigils." Miller squinted. Green lines appeared. "Runes." "Protection markings." Quinn stepped closer. "They keep the door sealed." "The market door is open." Miller stepped back. "You think you raided the place? This is a drop. A crime. If we raid, we lose the connection." Quinn looked at the compass. "The needle is wrong." "It points south." Miller read the dial. "It points to the nearest supernatural rift." Quinn grabbed the brass device. "The market is at that pole." Miller pulled a bag from the contents of the booth. "You are over your head, Harlow. You need a warrant." "Someone will watch us." She pinned the compass to her coat. "Someone who takes the wrong turn." Miller closed the bag. He clipped the pin. He wiped his hands on his trousers. "You want to go to the market. Alone." "No." Quinn raised the weapon. "I call it. We go deeper." Miller stepped out of the light. The shadows stretched. "The same thing happened to Morris." Quinn tightened her grip on the satchel strap. "I know." "It didn't stop." Miller turned away. "I'm calling the commander." Quinn stepped between him and the door. "Don't stop." Miller hesitated. He looked at the dead bodies. The unnatural smell grew stronger. "I said, I 'm going." "We go together." Quinn pushed the door. The hinge groaned, loud and sick. They stepped into the tunnel. The air shifted. The "market" felt close. Miller glanced back. His face pale. "You sure?" "I saw the market. It is here." Quinn pointed to the darkness ahead. "We go now." Miller checked his watch. "Why do you think this?" "Morris." Quinn spoke low, as if the dark prison would hear. "We need to check the files." Miller stopped walking. "Stacks of files. The library is shaking." "Then we go." Quinn turned the corner. "The market is waiting." Miller remained standing. He looked at the compass in Quinn's hand. The needle throbbed. "It is not for us." "It is for protection." Quinn watched the floor. "If we go into it, it keeps the path clear." Miller swallowed. "You think the edge can help?" Quinn drew a breath. The air felt thick. Like wool soaked in poison. "I know it can." Miller coughed. He spat on the floor. The fluid evaporated before it hit the ground. Smoke rose where he stood. Quinn walked on. She tightened her hair. The copper curls against the wind. Miller followed. The sound of his boots faded. "We stay on the edge." Miller called back. "We cross." Quinn stepped over a puddle. The liquid flowed backwards. "I know Morris." Miller stopped. "I won't have a second body." "Then you trust me." Quinn faced the tunnel. Miller hesitated. He pulled his gun from the holster. The metal glimmered. "I don't trust what this place does." "Trust the Compass." Quinn held the brass device. The needle spun wildly. "It tracks the source." Miller looked at the compass. The green veins pulsed. "It is warning you." Quinn nodded. The needle pointed straight into the wall. Miller opened his mouth to speak. The voice stayed inside. They stood apart from the opening. The light from the tunnel ahead flickered. Like a dying star. Quinn stepped forward. Her face pale. "The market." Miller shook his head. He looked at his hands. They shook. "Why stop here?" "Because we want to know." Quinn whispered. "The bodies." Miller stepped forward. His boots clicked against the metal. "We go back." "No." Quinn turned. "We watch." Miller reached for the satchel. It was empty. "We are out." Quinn held the compass against her palm. "The needle leads." Miller grabbed her shoulder. He pulled. The skin burned. "Let go." Quinn shoved him back. "The circle protects." Miller fell. He looked up at the tunnel. The light dimmed. "What is happening?" Quinn watched the shadows shift. The walls bled. "They were waiting." Miller shook his head. The smoke from his mouth curled around his face. "I want to leave." "Then leave." Quinn closed the satchel. "I am done waiting." Miller stood. He turned away from the tunnel. His coat hung loose. Quinn stepped closer. The compass needle steadied. She looked at the floor. "The market moves." Quinn pointed. "We have five minutes." Miller turned back. "Then we go." "Wait." Quinn pointed at the body. "The victim isn't dead." Miller blinked. "What?" "He wakes." Quinn raised the gun. The barrel shimmered. "We will live to fight another day." Miller laughed. "Another day? We die in this place." "Then we don't." Quinn stepped closer to the body. "It waits." Miller opened his mouth. "You are wrong." Quinn raised the gun. The light reflected on the barrel. "It waits for anything." Quinn stepped over the threshold. "Even us." Miller dropped his gun. He turned his back on the tunnel. The doors slammed shut. Quinn stood alone in the dark. The needle pointed at the ceiling. She looked at her watch. "We need the satchel." She moved quickly. Her feet silent on the grating. The rain outside stopped. The world held its breath. Quinn reached the satchel. She opened the flap. Inside lay the files. The pierce. She took the compass. The needle spun like a top. She looked at the hole. The darkness waited for her. She held the edge. The blood soaked her gloves. She stepped inside. She looked up. She turned to see what lay ahead. The door closed behind her.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags49
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Miller stepped back [back]"
1"Miller turned away [away]"
dialogueSentences127
tagDensity0.386
leniency0.772
rawRatio0.041
effectiveRatio0.031
96.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1604
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1604
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"shimmered"
count2
1
word"furrowed"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"shimmered"
1"furrowed"
2"traced"
3"etched"
4"throbbed"
5"pulsed"
6"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences224
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences301
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen20
ratio0.003
matches
0"Miller leaned against the ticket booth, a当你 had a cigarette stuck in his mouth."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1604
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions119
wordCount1052
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity5.51
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity8.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn58
Camden1
Miller53
Cold2
Skin1
Time1
Veil1
Compass1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Miller"
4"Skin"
5"Time"
places
0"Compass"
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences65
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1604
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences301
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs123
mean13.04
std6.78
cv0.52
sampleLengths
059
112
218
314
49
516
67
728
89
917
1017
1117
1213
1319
1414
154
168
179
1823
1911
209
2130
2211
237
2416
2526
2617
273
288
2914
3013
3116
3212
3315
3421
353
3619
376
3819
3911
4021
4116
4215
4317
446
458
468
4712
486
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences224
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs235
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences301
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1052
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.017110266159695818
lyAdverbCount3
lyAdverbRatio0.0028517110266159697
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences301
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences301
mean5.33
std2.92
cv0.548
sampleLengths
06
14
212
38
49
520
64
78
88
96
104
1114
129
136
1410
157
164
1711
184
194
205
219
222
2312
243
2511
266
275
2812
293
3010
319
3210
332
348
354
363
371
383
393
402
415
424
438
445
456
464
476
485
496
44.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.21262458471760798
totalSentences301
uniqueOpeners64
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences191
matches
0"She stepped over a puddle"
1"Her boot made no sound"
2"She tightened the strap of"
3"It was recently condemned by"
4"She touched the fabric of"
5"She wiped a smudge of"
6"She looked at the door"
7"She traced the patterns etched"
8"Her jawline set."
9"It looked like brass."
10"She picked it up"
11"It lay perpendicular to the"
12"His hand jerked back."
13"She grabbed a glove."
14"It felt heavy."
15"She opened the satchel on"
16"She crossed her fingers."
17"It spun faster."
18"She looked at the wall"
19"She pinned the compass to"
ratio0.257
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount181
totalSentences191
matches
0"The smell hit Harlow Quinn"
1"She stepped over a puddle"
2"Her boot made no sound"
3"She tightened the strap of"
4"The station felt wrong."
5"It was recently condemned by"
6"Quinn reached the corner near"
7"Bodies lay twisted in a"
8"Blood spatter looked dry."
9"Miller leaned against the ticket"
10"Miller asked, pointing at the"
11"The watch on her left"
12"Miller exhaled smoke"
13"Quinn ignored the response."
14"She touched the fabric of"
15"The weave felt translucent."
16"Fibre spun from shadow itself."
17"She wiped a smudge of"
18"The mark remained."
19"She looked at the door"
ratio0.948
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences191
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences7
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags49
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Quinn spoke, as if the dark prison would hear"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Quinn spoke (speak)"
1"Quinn whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences127
tagDensity0.047
leniency0.094
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.031
83.8877%