Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJAPG71RFWD5NDHNZRP8QQ

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Duration:
1m 54s
Cost:
$0.011952
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Seed

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
I yanked the door open before the third knock finished rattling the frame, balance precarious under the weight of two lattes and a crumpled grease-stained box of lemon tart. I’d only undone the top of Eva’s three deadbolts, so the heavy oak door only swung open six inches, enough for me to lean out and snap at her for taking her sweet time texting me the order. The words died in my throat. It wasn’t Eva. Lucien Moreau stood on the threadbare stair landing, his platinum blond hair slicked back as sharp and neat as the charcoal tailored suit that clung to his broad shoulders. The ivory handle of his cane glinted under the flickering fluorescent bulb, and one amber eye, one black, locked onto mine before I could even process he was real. I’d spent four months telling myself I’d never see him again, that the half-demon information broker who’d walked out of my flat at 3am without a text, a call, or a goodbye, was nothing more than a bad mistake I’d drunk too much wine to forget. My keys slipped from my grasp, clattering loud against the linoleum, and Ptolemy, Eva’s chonky tabby, wound around my ankles before hissing so loud his whole body vibrated. He’d always hated strangers, especially supernatural ones that reeked of sulphur and old money, the scent that clung to Lucien like a second skin. The smell of garlic and fenugreek drifted up from the curry shop below, seeping through the cracks in the stairwell wall, and I tightened my grip on the coffee cups until the cardboard cut into my palms. “You’ve got ten seconds to explain why you’re banging on Eva’s door like a bailiff before I slam this in your face and pour both lattes down that expensive suit of yours.” Lucien’s jaw tightened. He tapped the edge of the threshold with his cane, the sharp rap of ivory against wood a familiar sound that brought me straight back to that night in my flat, the sound of him pacing by my window while I pretended to sleep. He knew Eva’s wards, the layers of spellwork she’d nailed into every surface of the flat to keep out anything that meant harm, and he didn’t try to push past the door. “Evan’s in London. He checked into a Premier Inn in Whitechapel last night. He’s asking bar owners and delivery drivers about a girl that matches your description, that moved from Cardiff six months ago.” The lattes sloshed over the rims, scalding hot coffee seeping through the cardboard and burning the crescent shaped scar on my left wrist, the one I’d gotten falling off my bike as a kid. I stumbled back, yanking the door open wider to keep from dropping the whole lot, and Lucien stepped inside before I could stop him, his boots thudding soft against the scuffed floorboards. Ptolemy bolted for the sofa, his tail fluffed up like a bottle brush, and left a trail of knocked over books in his wake, Eva’s research notes and grimoires spilling off their stacks to litter the carpet. I set the coffee and tart down on the wobbly small old dark oak side table by the door, my hands shaking so bad I almost dropped the whole lot. I’d gotten a restraining order against Evan back in Cardiff, I’d thought I’d left him behind when I’d fled to London, picked up a delivery job at the Golden Empress and moved into the flat above Silas’ bar to stay off his radar. “How did you find me?” I wiped the coffee off my wrist with the sleeve of my waterproof delivery jacket, the fabric still crusted with rain from my last run of the shift. “You couldn’t be bothered to send so much as a spam text to let me know you hadn’t dropped off the face of the earth, but you tracked me to a tiny flat above a Brick Lane curry house the second my ex comes sniffing around? That’s some next level coincidence, Luc.” I pulled the silver fleur de lis cufflink I’d found on my bedroom floor the morning after he left out of my jacket pocket, tossed it at his chest. It clinked against his suit jacket, and he caught it one handed, his fingers closing around the metal tight. I’d carried it with me every day for four months, told myself I’d throw it in the Thames the first chance I got, but I’d never managed to make myself do it. I’d thought about him too much, the way he’d laughed at my terrible impression of his Marseille accent, the way he’d stayed up with me when I’d had a nightmare about Evan, the way he’d kissed my forehead before he’d thought I was awake that last night. There were a hundred things I’d never said to him, a hundred things he’d never said back. “I couldn’t contact you. My father’s enemies put a hit out on anyone I was close to, four months back. If I’d so much as sent a message from a burner phone, they would’ve traced it to you. I spent three months bouncing around safe houses in Paris, then Berlin, just to lead them off my trail. I only found out about Evan yesterday, from a contact that works the border control in Dover. I came straight here.” He set his cane against the wall, the blade hidden inside the wooden shaft glinting for half a second when he shifted it, and stepped closer, the scent of his cedar cologne wrapping around me, the same scent I’d smelled on my pillow for weeks after he left. “You think I wanted to leave that night? You think I wanted to walk away from the first person that made me feel like more than just a half-demon fixer, that didn’t want me for my connections or my father’s title? I left to keep you alive. That’s the only reason.” The words hung in the air, thick with all the things we’d never said, all the hurt and the longing and the stupid, stupid attraction that had never gone away, no matter how many times I’d told myself I hated him. I opened my mouth to snap back at him, to tell him he was a liar, that he could’ve found a way to warn me, that he didn’t get to walk back into my life and upend it just because he felt guilty, when the sound of heavy boots thudded up the stairwell cut me off. They weren’t Eva’s scuffed black Doc Martens. These were thick work boots, the kind that left deep scuffs on the linoleum, and they stopped right outside the door. A knock rapped out, three slow, heavy raps, the same knock Evan used to use when he’d been drinking, when he’d come to my flat in Cardiff to scream at me for talking to another man. I froze, my blood turning to ice in my veins, and Lucien stepped in front of me before I could move, his hand wrapping around the handle of his cane, the blade inside sliding free with a soft hiss. The lowest deadbolt on the door rattled, hard, like someone was jamming a lockpick into the mechanism, and the wood groaned under the force.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
79.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1220
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"glinting"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"vibrated"
2"familiar"
3"traced"
4"glinting"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
98.96% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences32
matches
0"felt guilty"
8.93% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences32
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tended to"
1"try to"
2"managed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences36
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen126
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1220
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions26
wordCount961
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.62
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Moreau1
Ptolemy2
Lucien5
Evan3
Cardiff2
London1
Golden1
Empress1
Thames1
Marseille1
Doc1
Martens1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Ptolemy"
3"Lucien"
4"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Golden"
3"Thames"
4"Marseille"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1220
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences36
matches(empty)
86.41% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs11
mean110.91
std50.18
cv0.452
sampleLengths
073
13
2156
369
4113
5176
685
7144
8177
997
10127
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs149
matches
0"was jamming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences36
ratio0
matches(empty)
92.65% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount698
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small old dark oak"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.04154727793696275
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008595988538681949
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences36
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences36
mean33.89
std20.18
cv0.595
sampleLengths
029
138
26
33
429
529
646
728
824
937
1032
113
1244
1332
1434
1534
1632
1737
1830
1943
2033
2152
2229
2319
2432
2547
2617
27126
2851
2941
3056
317
3221
3336
3439
3524
53.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3888888888888889
totalSentences36
uniqueOpeners14
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences32
matches
0"I yanked the door open"
1"I’d only undone the top"
2"It wasn’t Eva."
3"I’d spent four months telling"
4"My keys slipped from my"
5"He’d always hated strangers, especially"
6"He tapped the edge of"
7"He knew Eva’s wards, the"
8"I stumbled back, yanking the"
9"I set the coffee and"
10"I’d gotten a restraining order"
11"I wiped the coffee off"
12"I pulled the silver fleur"
13"It clinked against his suit"
14"I’d carried it with me"
15"I’d thought about him too"
16"He set his cane against"
17"I opened my mouth to"
18"They weren’t Eva’s scuffed black"
19"I froze, my blood turning"
ratio0.625
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount31
totalSentences32
matches
0"I yanked the door open"
1"I’d only undone the top"
2"The words died in my"
3"It wasn’t Eva."
4"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
5"The ivory handle of his"
6"I’d spent four months telling"
7"My keys slipped from my"
8"He’d always hated strangers, especially"
9"The smell of garlic and"
10"Lucien’s jaw tightened."
11"He tapped the edge of"
12"He knew Eva’s wards, the"
13"The lattes sloshed over the"
14"I stumbled back, yanking the"
15"Ptolemy bolted for the sofa,"
16"I set the coffee and"
17"I’d gotten a restraining order"
18"I wiped the coffee off"
19"I pulled the silver fleur"
ratio0.969
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences32
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Lucien Moreau stood on the threadbare stair landing, his platinum blond hair slicked back as sharp and neat as the charcoal tailored suit that clung to his broa…"
1"I’d spent four months telling myself I’d never see him again, that the half-demon information broker who’d walked out of my flat at 3am without a text, a call, …"
2"My keys slipped from my grasp, clattering loud against the linoleum, and Ptolemy, Eva’s chonky tabby, wound around my ankles before hissing so loud his whole bo…"
3"He’d always hated strangers, especially supernatural ones that reeked of sulphur and old money, the scent that clung to Lucien like a second skin."
4"He tapped the edge of the threshold with his cane, the sharp rap of ivory against wood a familiar sound that brought me straight back to that night in my flat, …"
5"I stumbled back, yanking the door open wider to keep from dropping the whole lot, and Lucien stepped inside before I could stop him, his boots thudding soft aga…"
6"The words hung in the air, thick with all the things we’d never said, all the hurt and the longing and the stupid, stupid attraction that had never gone away, n…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.3386%