| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 26 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She moved again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.605 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.038 | | effectiveRatio | 0.038 | |
| 96.02% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 32.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1257 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "pulsed" | | 4 | "rhythmic" | | 5 | "throb" | | 6 | "grave" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "velvet" | | 9 | "resonated" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 132 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1257 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 53.66% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1038 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 1 | | Rory | 20 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Camden | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Miyok | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 2 | | Nyx | 7 | | Fae | 2 | | Seer | 1 | | Shade | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Isolde | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Seer" | | 4 | "Shade" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.537 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 68.03% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a bruise" | | 1 | "looked like it had been born of silence" |
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| 40.89% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.591 | | wordCount | 1257 | | matches | | 0 | "not to cut, but to feel the weight of it" | | 1 | "not merely stones, but anchors for something larger" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 132 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 25.65 | | std | 21.53 | | cv | 0.839 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 95 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 51 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 73 | | 7 | 45 | | 8 | 58 | | 9 | 25 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 44 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 54 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 34 | | 16 | 43 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 28 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 24 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 7 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 10 |
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| 90.14% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "was carried" | | 1 | "being was" | | 2 | "were tied" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "were gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 132 | | ratio | 0.008 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't an absence of sound; it was the absence of time." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1047 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.022922636103151862 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0057306590257879654 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 132 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 132 | | mean | 9.52 | | std | 6.81 | | cv | 0.715 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 12 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 17 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 17 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 3 | | 42 | 18 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 2 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 31.06% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.2727272727272727 | | totalSentences | 132 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 70.51% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boot lifted, hovering over" | | 1 | "It wasn't an absence of" | | 2 | "It didn't come from the" | | 3 | "It was carried on the" | | 4 | "Their eyes, faintly glowing violet," | | 5 | "She had left the delivery" | | 6 | "She wore no shoes." | | 7 | "Her bare feet did not" | | 8 | "Her silver hair, a river" | | 9 | "Her eyes were a pale," | | 10 | "She raised a hand" | | 11 | "She gripped the hilt of" | | 12 | "It felt cold, the moonsilver" | | 13 | "It was a gift from" | | 14 | "They hadn't solidified, just a" | | 15 | "She looked ahead." | | 16 | "She moved again, her body" | | 17 | "Her steps were strange." | | 18 | "She needed to pull the" | | 19 | "It was a weapon of" |
| | ratio | 0.374 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 92 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones loomed ahead," | | 1 | "Rory stepped over the threshold." | | 2 | "Her boot lifted, hovering over" | | 3 | "The silence was the first" | | 4 | "It wasn't an absence of" | | 5 | "The smell was sweet and" | | 6 | "a voice said" | | 7 | "It didn't come from the" | | 8 | "It was carried on the" | | 9 | "Nyx hovered near her shoulder," | | 10 | "The little being was six-foot-two" | | 11 | "Their eyes, faintly glowing violet," | | 12 | "Rory said, though she didn't" | | 13 | "The Heartstone pendant sat cool" | | 14 | "She had left the delivery" | | 15 | "the other voice cut through," | | 16 | "Miyok neare stoned, *impossible.* It" | | 17 | "Isolde stepped forward from the" | | 18 | "She wore no shoes." | | 19 | "Her bare feet did not" |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 99 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 45.45% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boot lifted, hovering over a patch of grass that was the color of bruised plums, and then she fell through the illusion of it, planting her sole into soil t…" | | 1 | "The Heartstone pendant sat cool against her sternum, a deep crimson lump of magic that hummed against her pulse." | | 2 | "Isolde stepped forward from the thicket of wildflowers that bloomed year-round, their petals fracturing under the shadow of their association." | | 3 | "Her eyes were a pale, unnatural lavender, magnified against the deep-set sockets of a face that refused to age." | | 4 | "Rory felt her own heart stutter, a sudden loss of rhythm in the chest that felt like a bruise." | | 5 | "Nyx vanished into the darkness of the crater for a moment, their voice sounding like a drop of water falling in a dry well." |
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| 48.08% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 26 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice cracking" | | 1 | "She moved again, her body turning to walker" | | 2 | "The Fae Seer turned, and her ascent was not a walk, a gliding of motion" | | 3 | "Rory asked, eyes burning" |
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| 80.23% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 20 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "the Shade whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 43 | | tagDensity | 0.465 | | leniency | 0.93 | | rawRatio | 0.15 | | effectiveRatio | 0.14 | |