Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJBTABHF8YMDNSM9PQJ416

Run Details

Model:
Stealth: Healer Alpha
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Fantasy: entering an ancient ruin
Duration:
14.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Evaluation summary

Score Evaluator
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100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags (details)
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency (details)
100.00% AI-ism character names (details)
100.00% AI-ism location names (details)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency (details)
100.00% Cliché density (details)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell) (details)
70.52% Filter word density (details)
100.00% Gibberish response detection (details)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse (details)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) (details)
66.67% Name drop frequency (details)
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing (details)
17.68% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse (details)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) (details)
88.30% Paragraph length variance (details)
100.00% Passive voice overuse (details)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse (details)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse (details)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload) (details)
100.00% Repeated phrase echo (details)
100.00% Sentence length variance (details)
49.26% Sentence opener variety (details)
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts (details)
68.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts (details)
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts (details)
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts (details)
71.43% Technical jargon density (details)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions (details)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) (details)
70.3070% Overall

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air tasted of ozone and damp stone as Rory pushed through the last of the ancient oaks. One moment, the grey November light of Richmond Park filtered through skeletal branches; the next, she stepped into a wash of impossible color. A soft, perpetual twilight bathed the clearing. Wildflowers—scarlet poppies, cerulean bellflowers, golds that seemed to hum—carpeted the ground in riotous patches. They grew right up to the bases of standing stones, weathered megaliths arranged in a wide circle. Moss, thick as velvet, covered their northern faces, etched with spirals and patterns that seemed to shift when not looked at directly. The air was still, holding a warmth that belied the season, and carried a scent of honey, crushed herbs, and wet earth. Isolde waited for them in the center, her silver hair a beacon in the dim light. She stood perfectly still, her pale lavender eyes tracking Rory’s entrance, then Nyx’s. “Welcome to the fold,” Isolde said, her voice a melodic rustle. Rory scanned the perimeter. The oaks they’d walked through now formed an unbroken wall, their bark appearing darker, almost black. She turned back. Behind her, where she’d entered, there was no opening. Just more mossy, patterned stone. A low hum vibrated through the soles of her boots. Nyx materialized beside her, their form a coherent shape of deeper shadow against the twilight. “The boundary holds,” Nyx whispered, their voice a cool draft on Rory’s neck. “The air is… thick. Layered.” They extended a shadowy hand, fingers brushing the surface of the nearest standing stone. The moss there seemed to recoil, a tiny, visible shiver. Rory stepped forward, the soft earth giving slightly underfoot. She reached out, her fingers hovering over the same stone. It radiated a subtle warmth, not from the sun, but from within. The carved spirals seemed to pulse with a slow, rhythmic light, like sleeping veins. “The stones sing,” Isolde stated, tilting her head. Her feet, clad in simple leather slippers, left no impression in the soft earth. “But you must be quiet to hear them.” Rory held her breath. Beneath the hum of her own blood, she caught it—a deep, resonant chord, felt more in the chest than heard with the ears. It was a sound of immense age, of patience. She exhaled, the breath misting, though the air was warm. “The flowers don’t wilt,” she observed, crouching. She plucked a single, blood-red poppy. Its petals were cool, velvety, and perfect. Not a drop of moisture on it. “They’ve been here for how long?” “An hour. A century. It depends on the light the Grove wishes to show,” Isolde replied, walking in a slow circle around the stones. Her movement was fluid, unhurried. “Time pools and eddies here. What you feel as an hour may be a single sigh outside, or a long night.” Nyx drifted deeper into the grove, toward a part where the wildflowers thinned and a shallow, crystal-clear stream murmured over smooth, multi-colored stones. They knelt, their shadowy form not reflected in the water’s surface. “This water… it doesn’t feel cold. Or warm. It just feels… present.” Rory joined them, the poppy still in her hand. She knelt, dipping her fingertips into the stream. Nyx was right. It was neither cool nor warm. It simply was, a sensation that bypassed her nerves entirely and registered directly in her mind. She watched her own fingers through the water, distorted but vivid. No reflection of Nyx. No reflection of the amber sky above, only the strange, eternal flowers. She traced a spiral carved into a rock at the stream’s edge. As her nail followed the groove, the stone under her hand pulsed with a soft, greenish light that traveled up her arm in a faint tracery before fading. A shiver, not of cold, ran down her spine. This place was wondrous, but it was not alive by any rule she understood. It was *aware*. Every step, every touch, felt like a note added to a symphony that had been playing since before the world remembered its own name. “It’s beautiful,” she said, and her voice sounded too loud, too crude. “And dangerous,” Nyx added, still watching the unreflecting water. “The beauty is a lure. The peace is a snare. The Fae deal in symmetries. A gift given, a price expected. Even this sight is a kind of currency.” Isolde had stopped at the northernmost stone, the largest of them all. She placed a palm flat against its surface. “What price do you fear, Shadow?” “The loss of a moment. A year. A self.” Nyx stood, their form coalescing tighter, a sign of unease. “You are half of their blood, Isolde. You move through their laws as a native. For us…” They gestured to Rory, then to themself. “We are tourists. And tourists often overpay.” Rory looked from Nyx to Isolde. The seer’s expression was unreadable, her eyes holding the twilight. “The law here is resonance,” Isolde said, taking her hand from the stone. The green light in the carvings beneath her palm continued to glow for a moment after. “You are only given what you can bear to carry. Your own nature filters the offering.” She looked directly at Rory. “You carry iron in your blood, Carter. A barrister’s daughter. A preference for the tangible. The Grove will speak to that.” As if on cue, Rory felt a faint, rhythmic warmth against her collarbone. She pressed her hand to her chest, feeling the hard shape of the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. It was pulsing, a slow, steady thump like a second heart. She’d almost forgotten it was there. Here, in this place, its presence was magnified, a tether to something else. Something not of this grove. She met Isolde’s gaze again. “It’s reacting.” “The stone is of a different court,” Isolde nodded, a slight, cryptic smile touching her lips. “Even here, its voice is heard. A discordant note in the song. Interesting.” Nyx stepped closer to Rory, their shadowy form dimming the vibrant colors around them. “A Hel-thing, in a Fae grove. An invitation, or a provocation?” Rory couldn’t tell. The warmth of the pendant was a comfort and a warning. She looked around at the silent stones, the impossibly perfect flowers, the stream that held no reflections. The wonder was a weight. The beauty was a question she had no answer for. They had entered, and the Grove had accepted them, but she sensed they were now part of its equation, variables it was slowly, patiently calculating. The unease settled in her gut, right alongside the awe.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She looked directly [directly]"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.077
86.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1100
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count4
3
word"beacon"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"vibrated"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count2
9
word"crystal"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"symphony"
count1
14
word"unreadable"
count1
15
word"resonance"
count1
16
word"tangible"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
18
word"variables"
count1
19
word"calculating"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"etched"
2"warmth"
3"beacon"
4"scanned"
5"vibrated"
6"pulse"
7"rhythmic"
8"perfect"
9"crystal"
10"traced"
11"pulsed"
12"down her spine"
13"symphony"
14"unreadable"
15"resonance"
16"tangible"
17"weight"
18"variables"
19"calculating"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
70.52% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1097
ratio0.001
matches
0"aware"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount870
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory13
November1
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx10
Isolde9
Heartstone1
Grove1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nyx"
2"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.753
windowScore0.667
32.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"golds that seemed to hum—carpeted the ground in riotous patches"
1"patterns that seemed to shift when not looked at directly"
2"felt like a note added to a symphony th"
17.68% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.823
wordCount1097
matches
0"not from the sun, but from within"
1"neither cool nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
88.30% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean42.19
std19.37
cv0.459
sampleLengths
041
182
229
348
425
542
645
730
846
933
1050
1146
1269
1340
1450
1512
1638
1726
1850
1916
2071
2166
227
2329
2425
2581
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was magnified"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs140
matches
0"was still, holding"
1"was pulsing"
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences90
ratio0.033
matches
0"One moment, the grey November light of Richmond Park filtered through skeletal branches; the next, she stepped into a wash of impossible color."
1"Wildflowers—scarlet poppies, cerulean bellflowers, golds that seemed to hum—carpeted the ground in riotous patches."
2"Beneath the hum of her own blood, she caught it—a deep, resonant chord, felt more in the chest than heard with the ears."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"single, blood-red poppy."
1"shallow, crystal-clear stream"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.03542857142857143
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012571428571428572
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean12.19
std6.36
cv0.522
sampleLengths
018
123
27
314
417
522
622
716
813
911
104
1116
123
139
145
1510
1615
1713
1819
1910
209
2110
2212
2314
248
2514
268
274
2823
299
3010
317
326
337
347
356
3624
375
3821
3923
4011
4112
429
438
443
456
4616
4711
484
4912
49.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35555555555555557
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners32
42.19% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Just more mossy, patterned stone."
ratio0.013
68.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences79
matches
0"They grew right up to"
1"She stood perfectly still, her"
2"She turned back."
3"They extended a shadowy hand,"
4"She reached out, her fingers"
5"It radiated a subtle warmth,"
6"Her feet, clad in simple"
7"It was a sound of"
8"She exhaled, the breath misting,"
9"she observed, crouching"
10"She plucked a single, blood-red"
11"Its petals were cool, velvety,"
12"Her movement was fluid, unhurried."
13"They knelt, their shadowy form"
14"She knelt, dipping her fingertips"
15"It was neither cool nor"
16"It simply was, a sensation"
17"She watched her own fingers"
18"She traced a spiral carved"
19"It was *aware*."
ratio0.38
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The air tasted of ozone"
1"A soft, perpetual twilight bathed"
2"Wildflowers—scarlet poppies, cerulean bellflowers, golds"
3"They grew right up to"
4"Moss, thick as velvet, covered"
5"The air was still, holding"
6"Isolde waited for them in"
7"She stood perfectly still, her"
8"Isolde said, her voice a"
9"Rory scanned the perimeter."
10"The oaks they’d walked through"
11"She turned back."
12"A low hum vibrated through"
13"Nyx materialized beside her, their"
14"Nyx whispered, their voice a"
15"They extended a shadowy hand,"
16"The moss there seemed to"
17"Rory stepped forward, the soft"
18"She reached out, her fingers"
19"It radiated a subtle warmth,"
ratio0.886
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"As if on cue, Rory"
ratio0.013
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Wildflowers—scarlet poppies, cerulean bellflowers, golds that seemed to hum—carpeted the ground in riotous patches."
1"As her nail followed the groove, the stone under her hand pulsed with a soft, greenish light that traveled up her arm in a faint tracery before fading."
2"As if on cue, Rory felt a faint, rhythmic warmth against her collarbone."
3"She looked around at the silent stones, the impossibly perfect flowers, the stream that held no reflections."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, her voice a melodic rustle"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice a cool draft on Rory’s neck"
2"They extended, fingers brushing the surface of the nearest standing stone"
3"Nyx stood, their form coalescing tighter, a sign of unease"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde stated (state)"
2"she observed (observe)"
3"Nyx added (add)"
dialogueSentences24
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.333
70.3070%