Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJCAG3D8FG4Z6GK3X78C5Z

Run Details

Duration:
1m 8s
Cost:
$0.000773
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Moonlight barely pierced the canopy of The Fae Grove, a pocket of earth that breathed another world. Aurora stepped onto the soft moss, the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant cool against her skin, the gemstone dimming as if unsure of the darkness. The ancient oak standing stones loomed behind her, their bark etched with patterns older than any map she had ever traced. Wildflowers glowed faintly, petals turning a shade of violet that seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat. She had come here on a dare from Eva, a promise to retrieve a key left by a vanished courier. The key was supposed to unlock a door in the back of Silas' bar, a door that led to a place no one remembered. Aurora knew the risk, but curiosity had driven her through the narrow lane behind the restaurant, past the rusted gate, into the grove where time folded like a page. The air smelled of damp earth and something sweeter, like crushed berries left too long to rot. A low hum vibrated through the ground, a sound that seemed to rise from the stones themselves. Aurora stopped, eyes narrowing, the bright blue of them reflecting the faint glow of the pendant. She lifted a hand, feeling the scar on her left wrist throb faintly, a reminder of the childhood accident that had left a crescent mark. The scar tingled, as if warning her. A rustle brushed the edge of her vision. She turned, but the trees behind her stood still, their branches swaying in a rhythm that did not match the wind she could not feel. Something shifted just beyond the circle of stones, a shape that bent and unbent without moving. She swallowed, feeling the coolness of the night settle into her bones. She raised the pendant, feeling the faint warmth travel up the silver chain. The gemstone glowed, a soft crimson pulse that matched the rhythm of the hum. The warmth grew, spreading through her fingers, then up her arm, then into her chest. It was a sensation that made her breath hitch, not from fear but from a strange, undeniable recognition. A whisper slipped through the grove, not from any mouth she could see. It was a word that seemed to be spoken in a language she understood without hearing it. The sound brushed her ear like a moth's wing. Aurora's foot lifted, stepping back, but the ground felt solid, unyielding. She raised a hand, palm open, as if to halt the unseen force. The voice returned, clearer now, a soft syllable that resonated with the stone. She turned toward it, eyes scanning the darkness. The words formed a question that seemed to come from the grove itself. "What do you seek?" The phrase hung in the night air, low and resonant, echoing off the standing stones. Aurora felt a chill crawl up her spine, but she answered, her voice steady. "Answers." The pendant pulsed stronger, the crimson light flaring for a heartbeat before settling. The hum intensified, now accompanied by a faint tapping, like a distant footstep on stone. Aurora's breath caught, her lungs filling with the scent of wildflowers that seemed to bloom in reverse, petals unfolding and closing in sync with the humming. She stepped forward, each footfall silent on the moss, yet the ground seemed to sigh beneath her. Shadows lengthened and recoiled as if they possessed will, retreating from the light of the pendant only to gather again around the base of the stones. The air grew thick, heavy with an unseen presence that pressed against her thoughts. A figure emerged from the darkness, not quite human, not quite elemental. Its form was indistinct, edges blurred by the night, yet its outline was unmistakably human. It held no weapon, only its hands clasped together, palms facing upward. Its eyes reflected the same bright blue as Aurora's, but deeper, older. The figure raised a hand, and the words floated from it without sound, then gathered into spoken syllables. "The key is not a thing," the figure seemed to say, though its mouth moved without a sound. Aurora felt the words settle inside her mind, a concept rather than a spoken phrase. She answered without moving her lips, a thought that became sound in the grove. "Who holds it?" The figure's head tilted, a fraction of a second, as if measuring her response. The wildflowers swayed in a rhythm that matched the tapping of the stones. The hum shifted pitch, rising like a warning note. The pendant flickered, its glow dimming then brightening in sync with each pulse. She felt the scar on her wrist throb again, a sharp sting that coincided with the hum's crescendo. The scar seemed to pulse outward, a faint line of light tracing the crescent. The figure's hand moved again, this time tracing an invisible line across the air, and the glyphs on the standing stones flared with a faint luminescence. "You shape it," the figure's presence whispered, though no mouth moved. Aurora's mind raced, the quick thinking that had defined her life surfacing in the sudden pressure. She thought of the key, of the promise to bring it back, of the night she had fled the city with nothing but a bag of clothes and a heart still bruised by betrayal. She answered, voice low, each word deliberate. "I shape it." The figure's form seemed to dissolve into the night, leaving only the faint outline of oak leaves rustling in a wind that did not exist. The grove's time behaved differently now; an hour felt like minutes, yet the night stretched, unspooling like a thread. Aurora's pulse quickened, but her mind remained cool, cataloguing every detail as if she were mapping an unknown terrain. She took a step back, eyes scanning the perimeter. The stones stood silent, their patterns unaltered, but the air around them seemed to bend, as if the space itself resisted intrusion. A sound emerged, not from any source she could locate, a soft, rhythmic thudding that resonated in her chest, matching the beat of her own heart. The tapping grew louder, more insistent, as if something were drumming on something unseen. Aurora's mind flashed to the moment she had left the abusive ex, the echo of his footsteps in the hallway of her old apartment. Now those echoes seemed to reverberate through the grove, the wrongness building, layer by layer. She raised the pendant again, the crimson glow pulsing in time with the drumming. She felt a sudden urge to speak, to break the silence with something concrete, to anchor the chaos. She whispered, voice barely more than a breath. "Who else is here?" The words hung in the night, hanging heavier than the weight of the stones. No answer came, but the grove answered in its own way. The wildflowers around her seemed to open wider, their petals stretching toward the moon, revealing tiny silver veins that glowed faintly. The hum softened, then paused, as if waiting for her next move. Aurora felt a presence beside her, though she could not see it. A sensation of being watched, of being measured. She turned, eyes scanning the darkness, and felt a cold finger brush the back of her neck. The touch was gentle, almost comforting, but it sent a shiver through her spine. She inhaled sharply, filling her lungs with the scent of earth and wildflowers, and whispered again. "What do you want?" Silence answered, but the hum returned, now layered with a low, resonant tone that seemed to emanate from the very stones. The scar on her wrist flared, a bright line of light that traced the crescent shape, casting a faint glow onto the mossy ground. The pendant's glow intensified, casting a crimson halo around her silhouette. The grove seemed to close in, the trees leaning closer, their branches forming arches that framed her. The ancient oak stones stood as silent witnesses, their patterns now illuminated by the pendant's glow, forming a maze of light and shadow. Aurora's mind raced, her intelligence cutting through the fog of fear, seeking a pattern, a clue. She remembered the secret rumor about the Heartstone Pendant, that it was given to her by an unknown benefactor, that it pulsed when near a Hel portal. She realized now that the grove could be a Hel portal, a threshold between worlds. The thought sparked a cold fire in her chest, an insight that cut through the dread. She stepped forward, feeling the moss yield beneath her boots, the ground sighing with each step. She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone syncing with the humming, their frequencies aligning. She felt the presence beside her shift, a subtle movement that promised something unseen. The grove whispered, a chorus of unseen voices, each tone different, each adding to the tapestry of the night. Aurora listened, her bright blue eyes reflecting the flickering light of the pendant, her heart beating in time with the stones, the flowers, the humming, the tapping. She knew that the mystery was far from solved, that the night held more questions than answers, and that the wrongness was only beginning to unfurl. The pendant's glow steadied, the humming softened to a low throbbing, and the scar's light faded, leaving the night once more cloaked in shadows. Aurora stood in the centre of the grove, the moonlight now a silver thread weaving through the leaves, her breath forming small clouds that hung in the cold air. The wrongness lingered, a promise that something else waited beyond the edge of sight.
created_at"2026-03-11T23:05:46.257Z" 3/11/2026, 11:05:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.375
leniency0.75
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.74% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1597
totalAiIsms44
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"traced"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count6
4
word"vibrated"
count1
5
word"throb"
count2
6
word"reminder"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"whisper"
count1
9
word"resonated"
count2
10
word"scanning"
count3
11
word"echoing"
count1
12
word"chill"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"footfall"
count1
15
word"flickered"
count1
16
word"tracing"
count2
17
word"raced"
count2
18
word"quickened"
count1
19
word"rhythmic"
count1
20
word"echo"
count1
21
word"footsteps"
count1
22
word"echoes"
count1
23
word"silence"
count2
24
word"weight"
count1
25
word"measured"
count1
26
word"comforting"
count1
27
word"could feel"
count1
28
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"etched"
2"traced"
3"pulse"
4"vibrated"
5"throb"
6"reminder"
7"warmth"
8"whisper"
9"resonated"
10"scanning"
11"echoing"
12"chill"
13"pulsed"
14"footfall"
15"flickered"
16"tracing"
17"raced"
18"quickened"
19"rhythmic"
20"echo"
21"footsteps"
22"echoes"
23"silence"
24"weight"
25"measured"
26"comforting"
27"could feel"
28"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"sent a shiver through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"felt a chill"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount14
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1597
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1557
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Fae1
Grove1
Heartstone3
Pendant2
Eva1
Aurora15
Hel2
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Eva"
3"Aurora"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
2"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences94
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"violet that seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat"
1"sound that seemed to rise from the stones themselves"
2"as if warning her"
3"word that seemed to be spoken in a language she understood without hearing it"
4"question that seemed to come from the grove itself"
5"wildflowers that seemed to bloom in reverse, petals unfolding and closing in sync with the humming"
6"not quite human, not quite elemental"
7"not quite elemental"
8"as if measuring her response"
9"felt like minutes, yet the night stretc"
10"as if waiting for her next move"
11"tone that seemed to emanate from the very stones"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.626
wordCount1597
matches
0"not from fear but from a strange, undeniable recognition"
99.33% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"knew that the solved, that the"
97.16% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs33
mean48.39
std23.72
cv0.49
sampleLengths
082
173
282
361
460
563
634
733
81
954
1057
1169
1247
133
1449
1558
1661
177
183
1963
2057
2153
2240
234
2458
2567
264
2756
2856
2958
3045
3172
3267
97.80% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences94
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was given"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs266
matches
0"were mapping"
1"were drumming"
2"was only beginning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences99
ratio0.01
matches
0"The grove's time behaved differently now; an hour felt like minutes, yet the night stretched, unspooling like a thread."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount127
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.023622047244094488
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.015748031496062992
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
97.29% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean16.13
std6.34
cv0.393
sampleLengths
017
126
221
318
420
524
629
717
817
916
1025
117
128
1325
1416
1512
1613
1714
1815
1918
2013
2117
229
2311
2413
2513
268
2713
2819
2914
301
3113
3215
3326
3417
3526
3614
3712
3815
3912
4012
4118
4218
4315
4414
453
4614
4713
489
4913
30.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.18181818181818182
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners18
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences94
matches
0"She had come here on"
1"She lifted a hand, feeling"
2"She turned, but the trees"
3"She swallowed, feeling the coolness"
4"She raised the pendant, feeling"
5"It was a sensation that"
6"It was a word that"
7"She raised a hand, palm"
8"She turned toward it, eyes"
9"She stepped forward, each footfall"
10"Its form was indistinct, edges"
11"It held no weapon, only"
12"Its eyes reflected the same"
13"She answered without moving her"
14"She felt the scar on"
15"She thought of the key,"
16"She answered, voice low, each"
17"She took a step back,"
18"She raised the pendant again,"
19"She felt a sudden urge"
ratio0.309
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount92
totalSentences94
matches
0"Moonlight barely pierced the canopy"
1"Aurora stepped onto the soft"
2"The ancient oak standing stones"
3"Wildflowers glowed faintly, petals turning"
4"She had come here on"
5"The key was supposed to"
6"Aurora knew the risk, but"
7"The air smelled of damp"
8"A low hum vibrated through"
9"Aurora stopped, eyes narrowing, the"
10"She lifted a hand, feeling"
11"The scar tingled, as if"
12"A rustle brushed the edge"
13"She turned, but the trees"
14"Something shifted just beyond the"
15"She swallowed, feeling the coolness"
16"She raised the pendant, feeling"
17"The gemstone glowed, a soft"
18"The warmth grew, spreading through"
19"It was a sensation that"
ratio0.979
53.19% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"Now those echoes seemed to"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences81
technicalSentenceCount22
matches
0"Moonlight barely pierced the canopy of The Fae Grove, a pocket of earth that breathed another world."
1"Aurora stepped onto the soft moss, the silver chain of her Heartstone Pendant cool against her skin, the gemstone dimming as if unsure of the darkness."
2"Wildflowers glowed faintly, petals turning a shade of violet that seemed to pulse in time with her heartbeat."
3"She lifted a hand, feeling the scar on her left wrist throb faintly, a reminder of the childhood accident that had left a crescent mark."
4"It was a sensation that made her breath hitch, not from fear but from a strange, undeniable recognition."
5"Aurora's breath caught, her lungs filling with the scent of wildflowers that seemed to bloom in reverse, petals unfolding and closing in sync with the humming."
6"Shadows lengthened and recoiled as if they possessed will, retreating from the light of the pendant only to gather again around the base of the stones."
7"She answered without moving her lips, a thought that became sound in the grove."
8"The pendant flickered, its glow dimming then brightening in sync with each pulse."
9"She felt the scar on her wrist throb again, a sharp sting that coincided with the hum's crescendo."
10"Aurora's mind raced, the quick thinking that had defined her life surfacing in the sudden pressure."
11"Aurora's pulse quickened, but her mind remained cool, cataloguing every detail as if she were mapping an unknown terrain."
12"A sound emerged, not from any source she could locate, a soft, rhythmic thudding that resonated in her chest, matching the beat of her own heart."
13"The tapping grew louder, more insistent, as if something were drumming on something unseen."
14"The wildflowers around her seemed to open wider, their petals stretching toward the moon, revealing tiny silver veins that glowed faintly."
15"The scar on her wrist flared, a bright line of light that traced the crescent shape, casting a faint glow onto the mossy ground."
16"The grove seemed to close in, the trees leaning closer, their branches forming arches that framed her."
17"Aurora's mind raced, her intelligence cutting through the fog of fear, seeking a pattern, a clue."
18"She could feel the pulse of the Heartstone syncing with the humming, their frequencies aligning."
19"She felt the presence beside her shift, a subtle movement that promised something unseen."
20"Aurora listened, her bright blue eyes reflecting the flickering light of the pendant, her heart beating in time with the stones, the flowers, the humming, the t…"
21"Aurora stood in the centre of the grove, the moonlight now a silver thread weaving through the leaves, her breath forming small clouds that hung in the cold air…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"the figure seemed, though its mouth moved without a sound"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"the figure seemed (seem)"
1"the figure's presence whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences8
tagDensity0.25
leniency0.5
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.5
68.8637%