Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJEZ0WBGCGYVXR8GJA5PNV

Run Details

Duration:
1m 16s
Cost:
$0.000928
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ground shifted from cold dew to something warm and dry beneath their shoes. Aurora felt the crunch of brittle roots beneath her heel. She lifted her chin, watching the Moor path dissolve into a tapestry of silver and moss. Nyx drifted ahead, their silhouette flickering between the trunks of the ancient oaks. Isolde Varga moved without a sound, her silver hair catching the unnatural violet light of the sky. Rory pushed off the bark, lifting her arms to check the pulse in her throat. The air tasted like copper and old rain. She turned back to Nyx, pointing a finger at the center of the clearing. “Do you feel that pressure? My hand.” Rory dug her thumb into the silver chain at her throat. Nyx materialized beside her, solid enough to place a hand on his shoulder. A thin layer of heat slid off Aurora's neck onto their palm. “The circle widens.” Nyx whispered, the sound like wind in hollow bones. They stepped past the first ring of oak trees. The path ahead twisted into a giant, spiraling knot of roots. No birds called. No wind whistled. Silence pressed against their eardrums. Isolde stopped ten feet ahead, her lavender eyes fixed on the knot of roots. “Do not walk forward.” Isolde said. Her voice was soft, yet it cut through the heavy quiet. “The path you seek is not straight, but the shadow shows the way.” Aurora gripped the Fae-Forged Blade tight at her hip. The moonstones in the hilt hummed against her palm. “Sheer guesses.” Aurora replied. Isolde’s gaze shifted to the ground, then snapped back to the sky. “I tell it as I see. I remind you.” Isolde lifted her chin. Her boots lifted off the ground slightly as she walked. They followed the Seer. The shadows beneath their feet lengthened and stretched toward the spiral. Nyx’s footprints appeared, then vanished behind their heels, reclaiming the darker edges of the trees. Aurora felt the Heartstone Pendant heat up. The deep crimson gem glowed against her chest. The warmth spread up her neck. “It’s getting hotter.” Rory muttered, rubbing the fabric of her shirt. Nyx’s form shimmered, becoming translucent, then dense as night. They slid into a narrow crack between two stones. The air inside the space reeked of sulfur. Aurora pressed her hand against the cold stone. Her wrist scar itched as a務 out of shape. “Why does it burn?” Nyx asked. “Because we’re not in the Grove.” Aurora stepped over a root that pulsed with a faint light. Isolde stood motionless near the dark crack. Her expression remained empty of fear or excitement. “Dymas calls from the wrong direction.” Isolde treated her words like secrets in a locked room. Aurora gripped the hilt of the blade. The cold silver felt like ice in her grip. “Can we go back?” Aurora asked. “The Veil is breaking at the Solstice.” Isolde looked at Aurora, quiet eyes unreadable. “The Veil holds only until one breath is taken.” Isolde raised a hand. “It is the season of hunger.” They stepped toward the sulfur crack. The heat rolled off the ground in waves. It stung their skin. Aurora reached for the pendant. The glow surged brighter, like a heartbeat starting to race. Nyx drifted into the sulfur crack. The smell burned on her sofa. “Aurora, look.” Nyx pointed into the darkness. Aurora looked into the sulfur-filled crevice. Glowing veins of light pulsed through the stone. “It’s not a path.” Aurora said. “Is it a room?” Nyx stood straighter. Aurora pulled back the hood of her jacket. Her skin felt pale against the light. “I don’t know.” Rory turned her head. The ground beneath them shuddered. Roots snapped out of the earth, trying to hold them. Aurora side-steps the roots. Her back hit a cold stone wall. “Again.” Isolde lowered her head. “Each breath is a step.” “Every breath is a step.” They repeated. “Keep moving.” Nyx bowed toward the crack. Aurora stepped into the cold crack. Her wrist. The scent of sulfur mixed with roasting meat. The smell filled their mouths. It was rich, thick and familiar. Aurora looked down at the wall. The stone walls were carvings of plates and goblets. The shapes were ancient, carved with symbols of hunger and excess. “Dymas.” Aurora whispered. “Why does this place sound like a kitchen?” “Hel is full of things.” Isolde stepped closer. Her feet made no sound. Aurora gripped the hilt of the blade again. The ice felt real. “Nyx, what are we doing?” Aurora asked. Nyx turned away from the sulfur. Their shadow stretched across the floor. The shadow moved faster than Nyx. We wait for the feast to begin. Aurora felt the sting in her throat. She waited for the silence. Her hydration drained. “Isolde,” Rory said. “Look at the wall.” Isolde pointed to the symbols. The symbols showed a blade, a bowl, and a plaque. “Why don’t you feel home here?” Nyx asked. I feel the fear. Aurora did not answer. She felt the vibration through her feet. The vibration travelled up her leg. “Leave it.” Rory said. “Go deeper.” Isolde said. “Not alone.” Aurora said. They moved past the root trap. The air smelled like burnt sugar. Aurora held the pendant. The heat spread out from the chest. She could not stop the movement of her hand. “Isolde, I need to think.” Aurora looked back at the wall. Aurora stopped. She pushed against the wall. The stone was cold. The stone was warm. Nyx moved to the other side of the root. Their silhouette blurred against the ground. “Move.” Rory ordered. Nyx stepped toward the sulfur again. The smell burned on the tongue. Aurora took the blade. Her thumb tightened around the hilt. “Move forward.” Rory said. Nyx shifted their shoulder. A flier moved. Aurora moved to the next step. The floor was uneven. The stone felt smooth. “Keep.” Isosle said. “Move.” Aurora said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags32
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.865
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.93% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount987
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"tapestry"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count2
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"race"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"tapestry"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"warmth"
4"shimmered"
5"pulsed"
6"unreadable"
7"race"
8"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences127
matches
0"felt the sting"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords987
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions74
wordCount832
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity3.49
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Moor1
Varga1
Nyx17
Aurora29
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Isolde13
Seer1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Rory8
persons
0"Varga"
1"Nyx"
2"Aurora"
3"Isolde"
4"Pendant"
5"Rory"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like copper and old rain"
1"felt like ice in her grip"
2"smelled like burnt sugar"
98.68% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.013
wordCount987
matches
0"not straight, but the shadow shows the way"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences132
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs69
mean14.3
std10.05
cv0.703
sampleLengths
070
137
218
325
412
531
614
730
818
94
1012
1123
1230
1321
1411
1526
1617
176
1817
1915
2016
2116
2213
237
2419
2518
2615
2712
287
2914
306
317
3215
337
3415
3511
3610
377
387
398
4019
4126
4211
4313
4412
457
4618
477
4815
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount835
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.019161676646706587
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0011976047904191617
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean7.48
std3.48
cv0.465
sampleLengths
014
110
216
313
417
515
68
714
818
913
1012
1112
129
1311
143
153
165
1714
186
1911
2013
219
229
234
2412
2513
2610
274
2811
2915
307
318
326
3311
349
359
368
378
389
396
4017
417
428
4316
447
459
466
477
487
4913
43.94% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.25757575757575757
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners34
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences108
matches
0"She lifted her chin, watching"
1"She turned back to Nyx,"
2"They stepped past the first"
3"Her voice was soft, yet"
4"Her boots lifted off the"
5"They followed the Seer."
6"They slid into a narrow"
7"Her wrist scar itched as"
8"Her expression remained empty of"
9"They stepped toward the sulfur"
10"It stung their skin."
11"Her skin felt pale against"
12"Her back hit a cold"
13"It was rich, thick and"
14"Her feet made no sound."
15"Their shadow stretched across the"
16"We wait for the feast"
17"She waited for the silence."
18"Her hydration drained."
19"I feel the fear."
ratio0.241
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount104
totalSentences108
matches
0"The ground shifted from cold"
1"Aurora felt the crunch of"
2"She lifted her chin, watching"
3"Nyx drifted ahead, their silhouette"
4"Isolde Varga moved without a"
5"Rory pushed off the bark,"
6"The air tasted like copper"
7"She turned back to Nyx,"
8"Rory dug her thumb into"
9"Nyx materialized beside her, solid"
10"A thin layer of heat"
11"Nyx whispered, the sound like"
12"They stepped past the first"
13"The path ahead twisted into"
14"Isolde stopped ten feet ahead,"
15"Her voice was soft, yet"
16"Aurora gripped the Fae-Forged Blade"
17"The moonstones in the hilt"
18"Isolde’s gaze shifted to the"
19"Isolde lifted her chin"
ratio0.963
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences108
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags32
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
18.42% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags19
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"They repeated (repeat)"
3"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
4"Rory ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.514
leniency1
rawRatio0.263
effectiveRatio0.263
78.3418%