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Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJFJ5PME80YPCM12P1W37N
Run Details
Model:
Nemotron 3 Nano
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
2m 31s
Cost:
$0.003470
Provider:
DeepInfra
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
95.82%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
65.64%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
39.71%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
80.27%
Sentence length variance
(details)
47.29%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
46.95%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
65.64%
Technical jargon density
(details)
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
73.0433%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Lucien stepped through the doorway, the ivory cane thudding on the worn wooden floor.
A narrow sliver of streetlight
cut through the
gloom
and landed on a tangle of paper, ink‑stained vellum and a crumpled map of London's hidden waterways.
Aurora's fingers tightened around the
edge of a battered mahogany desk, the crescent scar on her left wrist catching the
flicker
of a lone filament. \"Rory,\" \"You have no invitation,\" \"Debt ended the night you left,\" \"A favour,\" \"Your flat smells of ozone and desperation,\" \"What do you want, Lucien?\" \"Shadows follow me wherever I tread,\" \"You still cling to promises made in youth,\" \"I kept that promise until the world burned,\" \"You think I still chase shadows?\" \"Hope is a fragile thing,\" \"Survival is the only thing I trust,\"
He lifted the cane, the
ornate silver tip flashing, the concealed blade humming like a
restrained
insect.
The blade sliced the stagnant
air, leaving a faint scent of ozone that lingered on his cheek.
The amber eye caught the
reflected light, burning brighter than the black
half that seemed to devour shadows
. \"You recall the night, don't you?\"
Aurora pressed, voice trembling with
an unsteady edge. \"She had offered a pact, binding blood to bone,\" Lucien said. \"She whispered in a language older than the Thames,\"
she replied, eyes narrowing at
the memory. \"Your blood sang louder than any prayer,\"
he murmured, fingers tracing the
scar's edge. \"The sigil we forged together still spreads its ink across the city's veins,\" Aurora answered. \"Every sigil bears a price,\"
Lucien warned, the blade humming
louder. \"And I am ready to pay it,\"
Aurora snapped, clutching the silver
bottle tighter.
The liquid hissed as it
touched an ancient rune
etched
deep into the floorboards, flaring in a wash of pale blue. \"The floor is a map of forgotten sins,\"
Lucien observed, stepping over the
creving silver line. \"The map points to a place where the walls breathe,\"
she answered, eyes flickering to
the cat now perched on a dusty shelf. \"Ptolemy eyes the cosmos,\"
he noted, voice edged with
a cold humour. \"The cat watches because she knows the truth,\"
Aurora replied, eyes never leaving
the demon's face. \"We both know the truth,\"
Lucien said, voice dropping to
a hoarse
whisper
, \"but the truth terrifies us both.\" \"You think you can control it,\"
she challenged, raising the bottle
higher. \"Control is an illusion,\"
he replied, voice low as
a bell tolling at midnight. \"Control is a weapon,\"
Aurora declared, the violet glow
spreading across the floor like a tide. \"The walls shake under the
weight
of our history,\"
Lucien growled, his cane striking the floor in a measured rhythm
. \"The
silence
between us pulses like a drum,\"
she whispered, hand gripping the
scar tighter. \"The scar aches when I touch it,\"
he murmured, the cane's blade
humming in sympathy. \"The ache is a
reminder
,\"
she answered, jaw clenched
, \"that I am still alive.\" \"Alive,\ yet bounded,\"
he said, eyes narrowing to
a sliver of amber. \"Bound by blood,\" she corrected, \"bound by choice.\" Lucien's smile was razor thin, a grim curve that barely hid the steel beneath. \"Choice is an
echo
,\"
he replied, voice echoing like
distant thunder. \"Echoes
echo
in empty corridors,\" Aurora responded, the cat now moving like a
sentinel
. \"Empty corridors
echo
with ghosts,\" Lucien answered, his tone laced with iron. The floor
trembled
as a hidden panel beneath the desk shivered, seams cracking with an unseen pressure. A deep, resonant rumble rose from the fissure, the sound reverberating through the cramped space. The crack widened, a black fissure gnawing at the edges of the plaster, threatening to swallow the whole room. The silver liquid surged forward, spilling a luminous trail that coiled around the base of the bookshelf. Each glyph glowed brighter, forming a
pattern that seemed to pulse with a rhythm older than the streets outside
. \"You think you can bind it?\" Lucien asked, voice a low growl. \"I can contain it,\"
Aurora shouted, the words cutting through the thickening gloom
. \"Contain or contain?\"
he demanded, blade now gleaming
brighter than ever. \"Contain,\"
she answered, voice vibrating with
resolve
. The cane's blade clanged against the cracked parquet, sending a spray of splinters into the air. One splinter struck the lamp, shattering the glass and sending fireflies of light scattering in all directions. The flames exhaled a violet hue, bathing the room in an ethereal
light that seemed to pulse with living magic
. The air grew thick with the metallic tang of blood, the scent of iron assaulting nostrils. A cold breath brushed Aurora's neck, the feeling of unseen fingers wrapping around her spine. Lucien's hand tightened around the cane, fingers white with the strain of power. \"The void opens,\"
he whispered, voice barely audible
above the creak of shifting timber. \"It seeks to devour,\"
she replied, voice hoarse
, "but it cannot swallow the
resolve
that burns within me." The crack widened further, dark void swallowing the edges of the wall like a thirsty mouth. The cat's fur stood on end, hissing louder, a sound that
reverberated
like a warning bell. Silver threads erupted from the liquid, coiling around Lucien's arms like serpents of light. \"You cannot break what you have made,\"
she declared, voice sharp as
a blade. \"Break?\" Lucien laughed, a sound that cracked like thin ice on a winter pond. \"It is time,\" came a voice from the darkness beyond the fissure, a guttural
echo
that rattled the
very
foundations. \"It is time,\" Lucien repeated, his own voice merging with the
echo
, "for the final act." The void devoured the first beam of light, swallowing the candle whole, leaving only the faint glow of silver threads. The void's
maw
widened, swallowing the edge of the floorboards, exposing endless darkness beyond. Gravity faltered, the air humming with the promise of an abyss that threatened to swallow the world. \"It is time,\"
the echo boomed again, a chorus of unseen voices drumming in unison
. Lucien's blade snapped, the hidden steel scattering into fragments that fell like ash across the floor. The fragments settled, each one a tiny star of forbidden power burning against the blackness.
She felt the weight of
his hand on her wrist, the scar pulsing in sync with the void's hunger. The cat yowled, a sound that
reverberated
through the walls, startling both combatants. The floor gave way at the point of impact, a gaping chasm opening beneath their feet. Time
seemed to
freeze as they stared down into the abyss, the unknown beckoning like an uncharted horizon. The candle sputtered out, plunging the room into absolute darkness.
Only the faint glow of
the silver liquid illuminated their faces, casting long shadows that danced on the walls.
She steadied her breath, heart
hammering against ribs as the world held its breath. Lucien's gaze locked onto hers, amber flash burning brighter against the black void. \"It is time,\" the lingering phrase
echoed
once more, reverberating through the empty space. The void
trembled
, a
pulse
of darkness edging ever closer to consume all. The scene froze on the edge of an abyss,
anticipation
crackling like static in a storm-laden night. It is time.
created_at
"2026-03-11T23:07:32.435Z"
3/11/2026, 11:07:32 PM
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
35
adverbTagCount
2
adverbTags
0
"the echo boomed again [again]"
1
"the lingering phrase echoed once [once]"
dialogueSentences
48
tagDensity
0.729
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.057
effectiveRatio
0.057
95.82%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1196
totalAiIsmAdverbs
1
found
0
adverb
"very"
count
1
highlights
0
"very"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1196
totalAiIsms
35
found
0
word
"gloom"
count
2
1
word
"flicker"
count
1
2
word
"restrained"
count
1
3
word
"tracing"
count
1
4
word
"etched"
count
1
5
word
"whisper"
count
1
6
word
"weight"
count
2
7
word
"measured"
count
1
8
word
"silence"
count
1
9
word
"reminder"
count
1
10
word
"jaw clenched"
count
1
11
word
"echo"
count
6
12
word
"echoing"
count
1
13
word
"echoes"
count
1
14
word
"sentinel"
count
1
15
word
"trembled"
count
2
16
word
"pulse"
count
3
17
word
"gleaming"
count
1
18
word
"resolve"
count
2
19
word
"reverberated"
count
2
20
word
"maw"
count
1
21
word
"echoed"
count
1
22
word
"anticipation"
count
1
highlights
0
"gloom"
1
"flicker"
2
"restrained"
3
"tracing"
4
"etched"
5
"whisper"
6
"weight"
7
"measured"
8
"silence"
9
"reminder"
10
"jaw clenched"
11
"echo"
12
"echoing"
13
"echoes"
14
"sentinel"
15
"trembled"
16
"pulse"
17
"gleaming"
18
"resolve"
19
"reverberated"
20
"maw"
21
"echoed"
22
"anticipation"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
1
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"jaw/fists clenched"
count
1
highlights
0
"jaw clenched"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
2
narrationSentences
74
matches
0
"g in sympathy"
1
"g with resolve"
65.64%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
74
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
86
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
26
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
0
markdownWords
0
totalWords
1196
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
27
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
50.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
25
wordCount
908
uniqueNames
3
maxNameDensity
1.65
worstName
"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity
3.5
worstWindowName
"Lucien"
discoveredNames
London
1
Lucien
15
Aurora
9
persons
0
"Lucien"
1
"Aurora"
places
0
"London"
globalScore
0.674
windowScore
0.5
39.71%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
68
glossingSentenceCount
3
matches
0
"half that seemed to devour shadows"
1
"pattern that seemed to pulse with a rhythm older than the streets outside"
2
"light that seemed to pulse with living magic"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
0
per1kWords
0
wordCount
1196
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
86
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
1
mean
0
std
0
cv
0
sampleLengths
0
1196
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
74
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
0
totalVerbs
174
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
86
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
909
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
24
adverbRatio
0.026402640264026403
lyAdverbCount
4
lyAdverbRatio
0.0044004400440044
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
86
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
80.27%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
86
mean
13.91
std
4.88
cv
0.351
sampleLengths
0
14
1
26
2
25
3
1
4
4
5
6
6
2
7
7
8
5
9
6
10
8
11
8
12
6
13
5
14
7
15
17
16
17
17
18
18
14
19
11
20
16
21
14
22
15
23
11
24
14
25
21
26
16
27
23
28
12
29
16
30
19
31
12
32
14
33
16
34
20
35
15
36
15
37
14
38
12
39
8
40
14
41
11
42
14
43
12
44
17
45
15
46
19
47
17
48
19
49
12
47.29%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
16
diversityRatio
0.3953488372093023
totalSentences
86
uniqueOpeners
34
46.95%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
1
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"Only the faint glow of"
ratio
0.014
100.00%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
20
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"He lifted the cane, the"
1
"she replied, eyes narrowing at"
2
"he murmured, fingers tracing the"
3
"she answered, eyes flickering to"
4
"he noted, voice edged with"
5
"she challenged, raising the bottle"
6
"he replied, voice low as"
7
"she whispered, hand gripping the"
8
"he murmured, the cane's blade"
9
"she answered, jaw clenched"
10
"he said, eyes narrowing to"
11
"he replied, voice echoing like"
12
"he demanded, blade now gleaming"
13
"she answered, voice vibrating with"
14
"he whispered, voice barely audible"
15
"she replied, voice hoarse"
16
"she declared, voice sharp as"
17
"She felt the weight of"
18
"She steadied her breath, heart"
19
"It is time."
ratio
0.282
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
67
totalSentences
71
matches
0
"Lucien stepped through the doorway,"
1
"A narrow sliver of streetlight"
2
"Aurora's fingers tightened around the"
3
"He lifted the cane, the"
4
"The blade sliced the stagnant"
5
"The amber eye caught the"
6
"Aurora pressed, voice trembling with"
7
"she replied, eyes narrowing at"
8
"he murmured, fingers tracing the"
9
"Lucien warned, the blade humming"
10
"Aurora snapped, clutching the silver"
11
"The liquid hissed as it"
12
"Lucien observed, stepping over the"
13
"she answered, eyes flickering to"
14
"he noted, voice edged with"
15
"Aurora replied, eyes never leaving"
16
"Lucien said, voice dropping to"
17
"she challenged, raising the bottle"
18
"he replied, voice low as"
19
"Aurora declared, the violet glow"
ratio
0.944
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
71
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
65.64%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
37
technicalSentenceCount
4
matches
0
"The amber eye caught the reflected light, burning brighter than the black half that seemed to devour shadows."
1
"The silver liquid surged forward, spilling a luminous trail that coiled around the base of the bookshelf."
2
"The cat yowled, a sound that reverberated through the walls, startling both combatants."
3
"Only the faint glow of the silver liquid illuminated their faces, casting long shadows that danced on the walls."
0.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
35
uselessAdditionCount
20
matches
0
"Aurora pressed, voice trembling with an unsteady edge"
1
"she replied, eyes narrowing at the memory"
2
"he murmured, fingers tracing the scar's edge"
3
"Lucien warned, the blade humming louder"
4
"he noted, voice edged with a cold humour"
5
"Aurora replied, eyes never leaving the demon's face"
6
"Lucien said, voice dropping to a hoarse whisper, \\"
7
"he replied, voice low as a bell tolling at midnight"
8
"Aurora declared, the violet glow spreading across the floor like a tide"
9
"Lucien growled, his cane striking the floor in a measured rhythm"
10
"he murmured, the cane's blade humming in sympathy"
11
"she answered, jaw clenched, \\"
12
"he said, eyes narrowing to a sliver of amber"
13
"he replied, voice echoing like distant thunder"
14
"Aurora shouted, the words cutting through the thickening gloom"
15
"she answered, voice vibrating with resolve"
16
"he whispered, voice barely audible above the creak of shifting timber"
17
"she declared, voice sharp as a blade"
18
"Lucien repeated, his own voice merging with the echo,"
19
"the echo boomed again, a chorus of unseen voices drumming in unison"
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
33
fancyCount
19
fancyTags
0
"Aurora pressed (press)"
1
"he murmured (murmur)"
2
"Lucien warned (warn)"
3
"Aurora snapped (snap)"
4
"Lucien observed (observe)"
5
"he noted (note)"
6
"she challenged (challenge)"
7
"Aurora declared (declare)"
8
"Lucien growled (growl)"
9
"she whispered (whisper)"
10
"he murmured (murmur)"
11
"she corrected (correct)"
12
"Aurora responded (respond)"
13
"Aurora shouted (shout)"
14
"he demanded (demand)"
15
"he whispered (whisper)"
16
"she declared (declare)"
17
"Lucien laughed (laugh)"
18
"Lucien repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences
48
tagDensity
0.688
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.576
effectiveRatio
0.576
73.0433%