Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFJG07DHBJH2QA3CFB8FAYT

Run Details

Duration:
28.1s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brass number on the door was slightly crooked. Aurora saw it the moment she climbed the final, narrow stair, her delivery bag heavy on her shoulder. 3B. Eva’s flat. She’d memorized the number years ago, but now it felt like a foreign symbol. She took a breath, the scent of roasting spices and damp brick from the curry house below thick in her nostrils, and knocked. The sound was a dull thud against the thick wood, muffled by the three deadbolts she knew were thrown. She waited. The sounds of Brick Lane—a distant siren, a burst of laughter from the pub across the street—seeped in. She shifted her weight, the bag strap digging into her shoulder. Maybe Eva wasn’t home. Maybe she’d gotten the shift wrong. Relief, sharp and unwelcome, pricked at her. Then, from within, the click of a lock turning. The door didn’t swing open immediately. There was a pause, the scrape of a second deadbolt, then a third. When the door finally opened, it was only a few inches. A slice of warm, lamplit air cut through the hallway’s chill, carrying the smell of old paper and Earl Grey tea. Aurora’s prepared words, the casual apology for the unannounced visit, evaporated. It wasn’t Eva. Lucien Moreau filled the gap in the doorway. He wore a charcoal suit that didn’t belong in a cramped flat on Brick Lane. The fabric was too fine, the cut too sharp. A single silver stud glinted in his left earlobe. His platinum blond hair was slicked back from his face, revealing the stark contrast of his eyes—one a warm, molten amber, the other a void of pure black. He held the ivory handle of his cane in one hand, his posture relaxed, as if he were waiting for a train and not standing in the doorway of their friend’s home. “Rory.” He said her name not as a question, but as a statement of fact. His accent was a soft, continental thing, always at odds with the sharp intelligence in his gaze. “Eva isn’t here.” She blinked. “I know. I was supposed to… bring her dinner.” She gestured stupidly with the brown paper bag. “She called in an order to the Empress.” Lucien’s eyes dropped to the bag, then traveled back up to her face, a slow, deliberate journey that made the back of her neck heat. “Ah. The dutiful friend.” A ghost of a smile touched his lips, but it didn’t reach his mismatched eyes. “She’s gone to the British Library. Some obscure scroll on demonology footnotes. She left me to mind the place. And the cat.” As if summoned, a large tabby cat wound itself around Lucien’s ankles, purring like a small engine. “Ptolemy.” Rory’s voice was tighter than she wanted. She took an involuntary step back, the worn carpet rough under her trainers. “Right. Well. Can you just…?” “Take it?” Lucien completed the offer, but he didn’t move. The doorway remained a narrow passage he monopolized. “You could come in. Save yourself another trip tomorrow.” The offer hung in the air between them, weighted with things she hadn’t allowed herself to think about since the night he’d found her, shaken and bruised outside a nightclub, and simply… disappeared, leaving only a cryptic note on her windowsill. *They know where you are. Move. Now.* He’d arranged the flat above Silas’s bar, no questions asked, then vanished back into the London haze of his own world. A world of tailored suits and concealed blades and deals made in shadows. “I’m working,” she said, the lie flimsy even to her own ears. Her shift had ended an hour ago. “Your shift ended at eight.” He knew her schedule. Of course he did. Lucien Moreau collected information the way other men collected watches. He stepped aside, the movement fluid, and swept his hand in an invitation. The scent of his cologne—something clean and expensive, like bergamot and cold stone—curled around her. “One cup of tea. I will even procure a biscuit. Ptolemy is deeply concerned you are leaving so soon.” The cat did look up at her, its amber eyes wide and plaintive. A weakness. He knew her weaknesses. Aurora exhaled through her nose, feeling the fight go out of her. She stepped past him, the brush of his suit jacket against her arm sending an electric jolt up her spine. She kept her eyes forward, into the chaotic sanctuary of Eva’s flat. Every surface was a testament to a brilliant, scattered mind: books heaped on the sofa, scrolls spilling from a wicker basket, a laptop open on the floor amidst a sea of sticky notes. A half-empty mug of tea sat on a stack of journals on the coffee table. His. She set the delivery bag on the small kitchen counter, a space barely large enough for a kettle and a cutting board. “She won’t be back late?” “She might.” Lucien moved to the kettle, filling it with a practiced ease that suggested he’d done this often. “Her research consumes her. Much like your deliveries consume you.” He flicked the switch. The kettle began its low, building hum. Rory turned, leaning her hip against the counter. She folded her arms. A defensive posture. She knew it, but couldn’t stop it. “What are you doing here, Lucien?” He turned, leaning back against the opposite counter, the height matching hers. The distance between them was maybe four feet, but it felt charged, full of static. He tilted his head. “Eva asked me to water the plants. Feed the cat. A simple domestic task.” “And you just happened to be available?” “I am always available for Eva.” The words were smooth, but his eyes held hers, and in their depths she saw the other reason. The one that involved demons and dangers and a half-breed fixer who moved through worlds she was only beginning to understand. He’d saved her. He’d also never explained why. The kettle clicked off. The silence that rushed in was deafening, broken only by Ptolemy’s purring and the muffled bass from the street. “Tea?” he asked, his voice softer now, almost gentle. It was a dangerous sound. “No. Thank you.” He nodded, as if he’d expected it. He moved to the cupboard, retrieved a mug for himself, and spooned in sugar. She watched the play of muscles beneath the fine fabric of his jacket as he moved. He had a way of occupying a space that made it seem both larger and smaller, all at once. His presence filled the cluttered room. “You have a new scar,” he said, not looking at her as he poured the water. The steam curled around his sharp features. Her hand flew to her left wrist, where her sleeve had ridden up. She tugged it down. “It’s nothing.” “It’s a crescent. On the ulnar side.” He turned, the mug in his hand, and his gaze pinned her. “A fall?” “A door.” The word was clipped. The door to Evan’s flat. The door she’d slammed her wrist against trying to get away. She’d never told him about Evan. He’d seen the aftermath, not the cause. He didn’t know. That was the point. Lucien took a slow sip of his tea, his heterochromatic eyes never leaving her face. She could feel him reading her, calculating the truth behind her lie. It was unnerving. It always had been. “Eva worries about you,” he said, breaking the tension with a mundane observation. “I’m fine.” “Your flat is secure. The locks are good.” He was talking about Silas’s building. He’d arranged it. “But you work late. You walk home alone through streets that are not always… welcoming.” “I can take care of myself.” The automatic defense sounded petulant in the cozy, book-filled space. A silence fell. He walked to the small sofa, nudging a pile of research aside with his knee, and sat. The posture was still perfect, but the action was oddly human. He gestured to the worn armchair opposite. “Sit, then. Since you are not working. Tell me you are fine.” She didn’t move. The offer was a trap. To sit would be to stay. To engage. “I should go.” “You are always running, Rory.” The words were quiet, but they landed with the force of a physical blow. He set his mug down on a coaster shaped like a dragon. “From Cardiff. From your studies. From him.” Her breath hitched. *From him.* He didn’t say the name, but it echoed in the space between them. How did he know? He must have found out. Of course he had. He found out everything. “You don’t know anything about that,” she whispered, the fight gone, replaced by a cold, brittle fear. “I know you arrived in London with two suitcases and a fear of sleeping in a room with a locked door.” He leaned forward, elbows on his knees. The cane rested against the side of the sofa. “I know you flinch when a man raises his voice. I know you think you are safer being invisible, delivering noodles in a plastic bag. But you are not invisible. Not to me.” The admission hung in the air, raw and terrifying. She looked away, at the spine of a book on mythology, the letters blurring. Her eyes burned. She would not cry. She never cried. “Why are you here?” she asked again, her voice ragged. He sighed, a sound of genuine weariness. He ran a hand over his slicked-back hair, the gesture loosening a few strands that fell across his forehead. It made him look younger. More vulnerable. “Because Eva is my friend. And you are… important to her. And I made a promise.” “A promise to her?” “A promise to myself.” He stood, the movement decisive. He walked toward her, stopping an arm’s length away. She could smell the bergamot and stone again, stronger now. He looked down at her, his expression unreadable, the amber eye warm and probing, the black one cool and inscrutable. “To not look away. Even when it is easier.” Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic bird trapped in a cage of bone. She wanted to step back, to put the counter between them again, but her feet were rooted to the spot. His gaze dropped to her mouth, then flickered back to her eyes. The attraction was a current, old and familiar, a dangerous undertow that had always pulled her toward him. It was the same pull that had made her trust him in the first place, that first night in the rain. “What does that mean?” she breathed. “It means,” he said, his voice dropping to that low, dangerous register, “that you do not have to be fine in front of me.” The statement dismantled her. All the carefully constructed walls, the brisk efficiency, the cool-headed persona she wore like armor—it all cracked. A fissure, thin as a hairline fracture, spread from her chest outward. She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw not just the fixer, the half-demon, the information broker, but the man who had noticed the scar she tried to hide, who remembered the details of her fear, who stood in a cramped, messy flat and offered her a single moment of truce. She didn’t know what to say. The words were stuck, tangled with old hurt and new, terrifying hope. Ptolemy chose that moment to rub forcefully against her legs, purring so loudly it vibrated through her soles. The intrusion was so perfectly absurd it broke the spell. A small, startled sound escaped her. It was almost a laugh. She looked down at the cat, then back up at Lucien. A flicker of something—surprise? amusement?—crossed his face, softening the hard lines around his mouth. “He likes you,” Lucien said. “He is an excellent judge of character.” Rory finally moved. She bent down, scratching the tabby behind the ears. “He just wants food.” “Perhaps.” Lucien’s gaze was on her, warm and steady. “But I find his judgment is usually sound.” She stood, the cat’s fur soft under her fingers. The space between them was smaller now. The air felt thick, humming with unspoken things—the past, the present, the terrifying, undefined future. She didn’t pull away. She didn’t run. The kettle, already cool, hummed again, a false start. Outside, a bus rumbled down Brick Lane, its brakes hissing. Inside, the only sounds were the purr of the cat and the silent, roaring question that passed between them, waiting for an answer neither of them was ready to give.
created_at"2026-03-11T23:07:46.809Z" 3/11/2026, 11:07:46 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured stupidly [stupidly]"
1"she asked again [again]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.451
leniency0.902
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.078
90.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2100
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"really"
3"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.33% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2100
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"electric"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"sanctuary"
count1
6
word"testament"
count1
7
word"amidst"
count1
8
word"practiced ease"
count1
9
word"flicked"
count1
10
word"charged"
count1
11
word"depths"
count1
12
word"silence"
count2
13
word"aftermath"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"calculating"
count1
16
word"tension"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"unreadable"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count1
22
word"constructed"
count1
23
word"vibrated"
count1
24
word"flicker"
count1
25
word"unspoken"
count1
26
word"roaring"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"chill"
2"stark"
3"electric"
4"chaotic"
5"sanctuary"
6"testament"
7"amidst"
8"practiced ease"
9"flicked"
10"charged"
11"depths"
12"silence"
13"aftermath"
14"could feel"
15"calculating"
16"tension"
17"perfect"
18"echoed"
19"unreadable"
20"flickered"
21"familiar"
22"constructed"
23"vibrated"
24"flicker"
25"unspoken"
26"roaring"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences168
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences168
filterMatches
0"know"
1"look"
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences193
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords9
totalWords2092
ratio0.004
matches
0"They know where you are. Move. Now."
1"From him."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1730
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.58
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Brick3
Lane3
Eva4
Earl1
Grey1
Moreau2
Lucien10
Silas2
London1
Ptolemy2
Evan2
Rory3
Aurora3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Earl"
2"Grey"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
6"Ptolemy"
7"Evan"
8"Rory"
9"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences116
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a foreign symbol"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords0.956
wordCount2092
matches
0"not as a question, but as a statement of fact"
1"not just the fixer, the half-demon, the information broker, but the man who had noticed the scar she tried to hide, who reme"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences193
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean34.87
std24.8
cv0.711
sampleLengths
086
148
29
351
411
53
6101
735
827
966
1017
1126
1227
1382
1419
1570
1619
1793
1827
1940
2028
2145
227
2353
2423
259
268
2762
2823
2919
3021
3142
3234
3313
342
3532
3616
3750
3819
3938
4035
4117
4270
4333
4410
4549
464
4757
4886
496
94.82% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences168
matches
0"were thrown"
1"was slicked"
2"was clipped"
3"were rooted"
4"were stuck"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs290
matches
0"were waiting"
1"was only beginning"
2"was deafening"
3"was talking"
39.23% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences193
ratio0.036
matches
0"The sounds of Brick Lane—a distant siren, a burst of laughter from the pub across the street—seeped in."
1"His platinum blond hair was slicked back from his face, revealing the stark contrast of his eyes—one a warm, molten amber, the other a void of pure black."
2"The scent of his cologne—something clean and expensive, like bergamot and cold stone—curled around her."
3"All the carefully constructed walls, the brisk efficiency, the cool-headed persona she wore like armor—it all cracked."
4"A flicker of something—surprise?"
5"amusement?—crossed his face, softening the hard lines around his mouth."
6"The air felt thick, humming with unspoken things—the past, the present, the terrifying, undefined future."
91.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1744
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"cozy, book-filled space."
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.04243119266055046
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.010321100917431193
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences193
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences193
mean10.84
std7.68
cv0.709
sampleLengths
09
118
21
32
414
523
619
72
818
911
104
116
127
139
146
1513
1611
1721
1811
193
208
2115
229
239
2428
2532
2615
2717
283
292
3017
318
3225
3319
3422
3517
368
3713
385
3910
408
419
4232
439
445
451
4622
4713
4812
497
39.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.25906735751295334
totalSentences193
uniqueOpeners50
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences157
matches
0"Maybe Eva wasn’t home."
1"Maybe she’d gotten the shift"
2"Then, from within, the click"
3"Of course he did."
4"Of course he had."
ratio0.032
13.63% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount81
totalSentences157
matches
0"She’d memorized the number years"
1"She took a breath, the"
2"She shifted her weight, the"
3"It wasn’t Eva."
4"He wore a charcoal suit"
5"His platinum blond hair was"
6"He held the ivory handle"
7"He said her name not"
8"His accent was a soft,"
9"She gestured stupidly with the"
10"She took an involuntary step"
11"*They know where you are."
12"she said, the lie flimsy"
13"Her shift had ended an"
14"He knew her schedule"
15"He stepped aside, the movement"
16"He knew her weaknesses."
17"She stepped past him, the"
18"She kept her eyes forward,"
19"She set the delivery bag"
ratio0.516
14.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount140
totalSentences157
matches
0"The brass number on the"
1"Aurora saw it the moment"
2"She’d memorized the number years"
3"She took a breath, the"
4"The sound was a dull"
5"The sounds of Brick Lane—a"
6"She shifted her weight, the"
7"Relief, sharp and unwelcome, pricked"
8"The door didn’t swing open"
9"A slice of warm, lamplit"
10"Aurora’s prepared words, the casual"
11"It wasn’t Eva."
12"Lucien Moreau filled the gap"
13"He wore a charcoal suit"
14"The fabric was too fine,"
15"A single silver stud glinted"
16"His platinum blond hair was"
17"He held the ivory handle"
18"He said her name not"
19"His accent was a soft,"
ratio0.892
95.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences157
matches
0"As if summoned, a large"
1"Now.* He’d arranged the flat"
2"To sit would be to"
ratio0.019
43.96% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"He held the ivory handle of his cane in one hand, his posture relaxed, as if he were waiting for a train and not standing in the doorway of their friend’s home."
1"As if summoned, a large tabby cat wound itself around Lucien’s ankles, purring like a small engine."
2"The one that involved demons and dangers and a half-breed fixer who moved through worlds she was only beginning to understand."
3"The silence that rushed in was deafening, broken only by Ptolemy’s purring and the muffled bass from the street."
4"He had a way of occupying a space that made it seem both larger and smaller, all at once."
5"He ran a hand over his slicked-back hair, the gesture loosening a few strands that fell across his forehead."
6"The attraction was a current, old and familiar, a dangerous undertow that had always pulled her toward him."
7"She looked at him, really looked at him, and saw not just the fixer, the half-demon, the information broker, but the man who had noticed the scar she tried to h…"
8"Inside, the only sounds were the purr of the cat and the silent, roaring question that passed between them, waiting for an answer neither of them was ready to g…"
16.30% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he asked, his voice softer now, almost gentle"
1"he said, not looking at her as he poured the water"
2"she whispered, the fight gone, replaced by a cold, brittle fear"
3"she asked again, her voice ragged"
4"he said, his voice dropping to that low, dangerous register,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.196
leniency0.392
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.078
82.4141%