| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "she said quietly [quietly]" | | 1 | "he said again [again]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 92 | | tagDensity | 0.261 | | leniency | 0.522 | | rawRatio | 0.083 | | effectiveRatio | 0.043 | |
| 97.81% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2285 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 64.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2285 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "practiced ease" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "practiced ease" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "eyebrow" | | 8 | "clenching" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "unsettled" | | 12 | "footsteps" | | 13 | "measured" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 4 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "stomach dropped/sank" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 2 |
| | 2 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "stomach dropped" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" | | 2 | "clenched her fists" | | 3 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | matches | | 0 | "was nervous" | | 1 | "was nervous" |
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| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 237 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 41 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 7 | | totalWords | 2304 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | 0 | "Please don't run from this one too." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 32 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1660 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 2 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Lucien | 10 | | Eva | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | London | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Ptolemy" | | 2 | "Lucien" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2304 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 237 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 125 | | mean | 18.43 | | std | 17.92 | | cv | 0.972 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 7 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 4 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 6 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 56 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 26 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 71 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 9 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 69 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 37 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 18 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 52 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 30 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 53 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 29 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 1 | | 49 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 294 | | matches | | 0 | "were opening" | | 1 | "was flickering" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 18 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 17 | | totalSentences | 237 | | ratio | 0.072 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles and let out a low, warbling yowl — that particular sound he reserved for strangers, for intruders, for anything that threatened the narrow circumference of his domain." | | 1 | "The cane caught the overhead light — pale ivory, carved at the handle into something that looked almost organic, the curves too deliberate to be decorative." | | 2 | "His gaze swept the flat — the stack of journals on the kitchen counter, the half-empty mug of tea going cold beside the sink, the mess of papers pinned to every available surface near Eva's desk." | | 3 | "The flat was small enough that the distance between them was nothing — two feet, maybe three." | | 4 | "The crescent scar on her left wrist peeked out from beneath her sleeve — thin, white, a relic of a childhood she'd mostly put behind her." | | 5 | "The movement was casual, almost lazy, but she caught the way his fingers tightened on the edge — white-knuckled, brief, then released." | | 6 | "His heterochromatic eyes held something she couldn't name — not pity, nothing so simple." | | 7 | "The flat hummed around them — the fridge, the pipes, the muffled bass from the restaurant below." | | 8 | "He stopped close enough that she could see the faint scar bisecting his left eyebrow — she'd never asked about that one, never asked about any of them." | | 9 | "He put the kitchen island between them — a sensible barrier, a practical one." | | 10 | "For a moment her pulse spiked — she'd seen him draw weapons from that pocket before, or at least things that functioned like weapons." | | 11 | "Outside, someone laughed — sharp, bright, the sound of a night just beginning." | | 12 | "Evan had never made her feel like this — uncertain, unmoored, seen." | | 13 | "His hand rested on the knob — one of the three deadbolts she'd thrown, the middle one, the one that never caught properly in summer." | | 14 | "\"Of course,\" he said again, and this time the almost-smile surfaced — barely a curve at the corner of his mouth, there and gone before it fully formed." | | 15 | "And on the back, in a script she recognized — the same careful, deliberate strokes he used for everything, even a phone number — she found what he'd promised." | | 16 | "He blinked his amber eyes — one of them, the left, a shade close enough to Lucien's that it made something clench in her chest." |
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| 89.18% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1648 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "same careful, deliberate strokes" |
| | adverbCount | 75 | | adverbRatio | 0.04550970873786408 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006674757281553398 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 237 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 237 | | mean | 9.72 | | std | 8.52 | | cv | 0.876 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 9 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 7 | | 3 | 37 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 7 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 24 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 34 | | 14 | 6 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 2 | | 17 | 1 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 26 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 3 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 36 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 3 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 6 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 21 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 4 | | 46 | 26 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 2 |
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| 41.49% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 25 | | diversityRatio | 0.31223628691983124 | | totalSentences | 237 | | uniqueOpeners | 74 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere in the building, a" | | 1 | "Instead he produced a folded" | | 2 | "Then at him." | | 3 | "Then at the paper again." | | 4 | "Possibly the most honest thing" | | 5 | "Then he descended the stairs," | | 6 | "Then she walked to the" | | 7 | "Already almost gone." |
| | ratio | 0.058 | |
| 50.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 58 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "She pulled the door open" | | 1 | "He smelled of cigarette smoke" | | 2 | "She didn't move." | | 3 | "She knew what hid beneath" | | 4 | "She'd seen the blade once." | | 5 | "She stepped aside." | | 6 | "He crossed the threshold with" | | 7 | "His gaze swept the flat" | | 8 | "He set his cane against" | | 9 | "He turned to face her" | | 10 | "She couldn't tell with him." | | 11 | "She caught herself touching it" | | 12 | "He almost smiled" | | 13 | "She'd boiled it twenty minutes" | | 14 | "He leaned back against the" | | 15 | "He was nervous." | | 16 | "She unclenched her jaw." | | 17 | "He pushed off the counter" | | 18 | "His heterochromatic eyes held something" | | 19 | "She held his gaze." |
| | ratio | 0.423 | |
| 47.59% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt was always" | | 1 | "Rory put her shoulder into" | | 2 | "She pulled the door open" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 4 | "Both fixed on her." | | 5 | "He smelled of cigarette smoke" | | 6 | "That hadn't changed." | | 7 | "She didn't move." | | 8 | "Lucien shifted his weight." | | 9 | "The cane caught the overhead" | | 10 | "She knew what hid beneath" | | 11 | "She'd seen the blade once." | | 12 | "She stepped aside." | | 13 | "He crossed the threshold with" | | 14 | "His gaze swept the flat" | | 15 | "He set his cane against" | | 16 | "He turned to face her" | | 17 | "The flat was small enough" | | 18 | "She couldn't tell with him." | | 19 | "Rory folded her arms." |
| | ratio | 0.825 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 137 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 49.18% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory put her shoulder into it, felt the familiar grind of old metal against old metal, and the lock surrendered with a groan that echoed up the stairwell." | | 1 | "Behind her, Ptolemy wound between her ankles and let out a low, warbling yowl — that particular sound he reserved for strangers, for intruders, for anything tha…" | | 2 | "The cane caught the overhead light — pale ivory, carved at the handle into something that looked almost organic, the curves too deliberate to be decorative." | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau, who'd negotiated contracts with things that wore human faces but didn't breathe air, was nervous standing in her kitchen." | | 4 | "Ptolemy jumped onto the nearest stack of books and began grooming his tail with performative indifference, as though the two humans in the kitchen had nothing t…" | | 5 | "The man who unsettled her had heterochromatic eyes and a cane that hid a blade and walked into rooms like he owned every last inch of them." | | 6 | "He turned it once in his fingers, the gesture automatic, a fidget that betrayed the calm he projected." | | 7 | "The stairwell light was flickering again, casting uneven shadows across his face, making the amber eye burn and the black eye look deeper, like a well with no b…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 22 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 92 | | tagDensity | 0.239 | | leniency | 0.478 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |