| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 3.94% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1041 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "flicker" | | 1 | "traced" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "scanning" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "gleaming" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "shattered" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "echoed" | | 12 | "glint" | | 13 | "whisper" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "unwavering" | | 16 | "racing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 58 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1040 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 55.76% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 955 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.88 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Soho | 1 | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 18 | | Tomás | 1 | | Herrera | 6 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Tomás" | | 3 | "Herrera" | | 4 | "Saint" | | 5 | "Christopher" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.558 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "thrum that seemed to pulse from the walls themselves" | | 1 | "warmth that seemed to emanate from within" | | 2 | "as if chanting" | | 3 | "words that seemed to echo from somewhere else, a language that made the hair on Quinn’s arms stand up" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1040 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 40 | | mean | 26 | | std | 24.32 | | cv | 0.935 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 64 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 76 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 25 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 7 | | 14 | 3 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 67 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 28 | | 26 | 15 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 22 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 85 |
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| 99.21% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 176 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.015 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect gasped, eyes wide, revealing a flash of something unnatural—a slit pupil that glowed amber in the dim light." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 956 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 11 | | adverbRatio | 0.011506276150627616 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0010460251046025104 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 15.52 | | std | 7.01 | | cv | 0.452 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 15 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 11 | | 5 | 20 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 14 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 23 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 28 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 16 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 24 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 21 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 15 |
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| 47.76% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.31343283582089554 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 21 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 13 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She followed, hand resting on" | | 1 | "She pushed the door inward," | | 2 | "She kept her hand near" | | 3 | "She kept her voice low." | | 4 | "He smiled, revealing a hint" | | 5 | "He gestured to a stall" | | 6 | "Her expression remained fixed on" | | 7 | "He produced a small cloth," | | 8 | "She could retreat, call for" | | 9 | "She inhaled, the cold air" | | 10 | "His voice low." | | 11 | "She slammed into the suspect," | | 12 | "His tone firm." |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 11.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn moved forward," | | 1 | "The worn leather watch on" | | 2 | "Quinn’s eyes narrowed, the sharp" | | 3 | "The suspect glanced back once," | | 4 | "She followed, hand resting on" | | 5 | "The alley walls closed in," | | 6 | "Quinn pressed her ear to" | | 7 | "She pushed the door inward," | | 8 | "The air grew colder, each" | | 9 | "The stairs ended in a" | | 10 | "Lanterns hung from iron hooks," | | 11 | "A low hum filled the" | | 12 | "Quinn moved through the market," | | 13 | "She kept her hand near" | | 14 | "A figure in a hooded" | | 15 | "Quinn knelt, fingers closing around" | | 16 | "A voice called from the" | | 17 | "The Saint Christopher medallion rested" | | 18 | "A thin scar traced his" | | 19 | "Quinn’s grip tightened on her" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 42.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "The suspect glanced back once, eyes wide, then vanished into a narrow alley that smelled of damp brick and rust." | | 1 | "A low hum filled the space, a mixture of distant traffic and something else, a thrum that seemed to pulse from the walls themselves." | | 2 | "Quinn exploded forward, boots splashing in a shallow puddle that had collected near the altar." | | 3 | "The suspect gasped, eyes wide, revealing a flash of something unnatural—a slit pupil that glowed amber in the dim light." | | 4 | "The suspect snarled, a sound that was half human, half something else, and twisted free, scrambling toward the exit." | | 5 | "Quinn released her grip, allowing the suspect to slip past her, but she kept her eyes locked on the fleeing figure, noting the direction they took." | | 6 | "Quinn stood breathing ragged, her watch ticking unwavering, her mind racing through the possibilities." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.1 | | leniency | 0.2 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |