Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK2EGQQQGG1XFV6KH0R7DA

Run Details

Duration:
1m 25s
Cost:
$0.001132
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The key metched the lock with a sharp click. Aurora froze. She listened to the silence before opening the front door. A lock snapped into place behind her. She slipped inside. The hallway smelled of old paper and dust. Books covered every surface. Scrolls lay on the desk. Papers trapped fingers in the stacks. Aurora scanned the room. The door was the right one. She надеялась nobody else came in. She checked the latch. She threw the bolt. A figure stood in the doorway. The cane splintered the wood floor. Ivory handle glinted in the hall light. Lucien stepped into the shadow. Platinum hair stuck to skin. Amber and black eyes fixed on her skin. He wore a charcoal suit. Black shirts tied tight at the collar. The cane nowhere near right hand. It hung against the fabric. "You're not supposed to be here." Lucien didn't blink. He waited for dust to fall from the desk. "I have work." Lucien stepped forward. He did not make room. He blocked the door. The room shrunk around him. Aurora backed away. Her heart beat against ribs. The scar prickled on the left wrist. A crescent mark from a childhood accident. "I paid you to stay safe." "I am safe now." "You're not." Lucien moved the cane. The tip pointed toward the rug. He tapped the ground. "The apartment upstairs. They're looking for you." "They sent a letter to the wrong address." "Then the rent goes unpaid." Lucien backed away. He turned the bookshelf. Books rattled against floorboards. He walked to the desk. He picked up a phone. He held the receiver high. Aurora saw the black screen. He did not reach for a line. He held the phone loosely in his hand. "Give it to me." "I gave you the money." "Did you." Lucien dragged one finger across the screen. He set the phone on the desk. The receiver stayed still. He pointed at the wall. "You need an alibi." "I have a job." "I didn't say I'd find the job." Lucien stopped. He leaned his cane against the wall. The ivory touched the plaster. He looked at the scar on her wrist. He saw the crescent cut. He remembered the burn he healed on the skin when she came home. He saw the blood on the floor. He didn't speak. He didn't move. "You said you didn't want this life." "I said you were right." "So you stayed." Lucien stepped back. He let his hair move. It fell over his shoulder. "I stayed." Ptolemy called from the bed. A tabby miaowed. The cat jumped on the couch. It clawed the fabric. The rug moved. The floorboards groaned. Aurora ignored the noise. She watched Lucien's breathing. "Why do you look at me?" Lucien looked. His black eyes narrowed. "You're in trouble." "I'm running." "I can fix the problem." "We don't fix that problem." Lucien dropped the cane. It hit the rug. The wood hit. He stood two feet away. He did not move his hands. He held them at his stomach. He did not reach. Aurora watched the muscles tense. He was a demon and a human. "If you refuse the extraction." "We covered this." Lucien stepped across the line. He pushed the chair. The leg pivoted. He didn't care. "I know you're not running." "I am." "You're standing still." Aurora stepped aside. She avoided the chair. She walked to the balcony. She looked through the window. The rain looked heavy outside. She moved closer to the glass. The wind broke her. The glass felt cold. "I'm telling Eva." Lucien held out a hand. He did not wave. He held the palm flat. She did not touch the surface. Her fingers hovered. She held the breath pinned in the chest. She did not look away. "I did not want to see the scar red." Lucien looked at the hand. He saw the crescent cut. He pulled the hand forward. He touched the skin. He did not apologize. He let the fingers touch. He did not care about the blood. "It hurts." "I know." Lucien stepped back. "I don't stop." Aurora pressed her back against the balcony railing. She did not move. She felt the wind. She did not answer. "If you go with me." Aurora looked at him. She did not blink. She saw the heterochromic eyes. Black and Amber. She saw the teeth. She saw the scar. "Go." Lucien turned. He took the cane. He set it in the doorframe. He did not leave a mark. He looked back at her one last time. "The rain stops." "Then I stay." He smiled. The smile did not break his face. It changed his eyes. He turned away. He walked out. He did not close the door. He left it open. The air moved. The books crinkled. The cat scratched the plush. Aurora turned. The wind blew. She did not close the door. She stepped inside. She looked down. She looked at the scarf. She picked it up. She did not put it back. The light flickered. The bookshelf swayed. The phone rang. It stopped. The silence grew.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences37
tagDensity0.027
leniency0.054
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount855
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
70.76% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount855
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"silence"
count2
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"stomach"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"scanned"
2"stomach"
3"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences146
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences182
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen13
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords855
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount701
uniqueNames3
maxNameDensity2.28
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Lucien16
Amber2
Aurora10
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Amber"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.359
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences41
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount855
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences182
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean15
std17.33
cv1.156
sampleLengths
097
141
26
312
43
539
66
74
823
98
105
1146
124
135
142
1527
164
177
1853
197
205
213
2215
2332
246
259
262
275
285
2944
305
313
3220
332
343
3528
368
373
3836
399
4035
412
422
436
4420
455
4624
471
4826
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences146
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs150
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences182
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount701
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount11
adverbRatio0.015691868758915834
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0014265335235378032
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences182
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
94.65% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences182
mean4.7
std1.82
cv0.387
sampleLengths
09
12
210
37
43
58
64
75
86
94
106
116
124
134
146
156
167
175
185
198
205
217
226
235
246
253
269
273
283
295
304
315
323
335
347
357
366
374
386
396
404
417
428
435
443
454
464
475
485
495
25.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats48
diversityRatio0.15384615384615385
totalSentences182
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount78
totalSentences139
matches
0"She listened to the silence"
1"She slipped inside."
2"She надеялась nobody else came"
3"She checked the latch."
4"She threw the bolt."
5"He wore a charcoal suit."
6"It hung against the fabric."
7"He waited for dust to"
8"He did not make room."
9"He blocked the door."
10"Her heart beat against ribs."
11"He tapped the ground."
12"He turned the bookshelf."
13"He walked to the desk."
14"He picked up a phone."
15"He held the receiver high."
16"He did not reach for"
17"He held the phone loosely"
18"He set the phone on"
19"He pointed at the wall."
ratio0.561
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount137
totalSentences139
matches
0"The key metched the lock"
1"She listened to the silence"
2"A lock snapped into place"
3"She slipped inside."
4"The hallway smelled of old"
5"Books covered every surface."
6"Scrolls lay on the desk."
7"Papers trapped fingers in the"
8"Aurora scanned the room."
9"The door was the right"
10"She надеялась nobody else came"
11"She checked the latch."
12"She threw the bolt."
13"A figure stood in the"
14"The cane splintered the wood"
15"Ivory handle glinted in the"
16"Lucien stepped into the shadow."
17"Platinum hair stuck to skin."
18"Amber and black eyes fixed"
19"He wore a charcoal suit."
ratio0.986
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences139
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences2
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.5964%