Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK2FKWSY2SG0Y3N93JTNP2

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28.9s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Mystery genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The copper hit me first. Sweet and thick, it clung to the damp air in the abandoned Camden Tube station tunnel. Then the smell of wet rot and ancient dust. My torch beam cut through the gloom, sweeping over discarded syringes, mummified pigeon corpses, and a chalk outline that looked freshly scrawled on the grimy platform floor. Except it wasn’t chalk. “Definitely not standard Met procedure, is it, guv?” DS Davies crouched by the body, his face grim in the blue-white light of his own torch. He’d been first on scene, called in by an anonymous tip to a number that didn’t trace back. I knelt, my knees protesting against the cold concrete. The victim was male, early thirties, dressed in a rather stylish navy wool coat. No obvious wounds. His skin had a waxy, pallid sheen, and his eyes were wide open, fixed on the arched, soot-stained ceiling. The cause of death wasn’t immediately apparent. What was apparent was the symbol carved into the floorboards around his head. It was a complex, spiraling pattern that seemed to writhe in the torchlight, the grooves filled not with chalk but with something dark and granular. “What’ve we got?” My voice came out flat, betraying none of the unease prickling my spine. “John Doe. No wallet, no phone. Forensics are en route, but they’re still tied up at the Brick Lane arson. Could be twenty minutes.” Davies gestured with a gloved hand. “Coroner’s初步 guess is heart failure. No struggle. Scene’s… tidy.” Tidy wasn’t the word I’d use. It was wrong. The body lay perfectly straight, arms at his sides, as if placed with care. The symbol was precise. Too precise for a street-corner altercation. And the location. A disused, sealed section of the old Tube station. The entrance was a rusted maintenance grate in the floor of a nearby lock-up, hidden behind a tower of mouldering newspapers. How did our John Doe get here? How did the anonymous tipster? “The symbol,” I said, leaning closer. The granular material in the grooves wasn’t blood. It was black, almost crystalline, and it seemed to absorb the light. “Seen anything like it before?” Davies shook his head. “Internet says it’s a mishmash. Part Celtic, part nonsense. Probably gang-related, some new crew trying to look spooky.” He tapped his pen against his notebook. “Anonymous tip. Sealed location. Unmarked grave, basically. Fits a gang hit or a ritual killing. We’ll canvass local pubs for missing low-lifes.” I ignored his theory for a moment. My fingers hovered over the edge of the symbol, not touching. A cold draft, utterly separate from the tunnel’s inherent chill, whispered across the back of my neck. It carried a scent—not of rot, but of ozone and something faintly metallic. A scent I’d smelled before, three years ago, in a different tunnel, when we’d pulled Morris out. He’d been alive, but his eyes had held the same fixed, unseeing quality as our John Doe’s. “Davies. The grate.” I nodded toward the rusted entrance they’d prised open. “The lock wasn’t forced?” “No. It was oiled. Recently.” He frowned. “And look at his shoes.” I followed his gaze. Expensive Italian leather brogues, polished to a mirror shine. Not a speck of dust or grime on them, despite the filthy environment. As if he’d been levitated into place. “Fascinating, isn’t it?” A new voice echoed from the tunnel mouth. We turned. A woman stood there, framed by the crumbling archway. She was young, mid-twenties, with a cloud of curly red hair barely contained by a knitted beanie. Round glasses perched on her freckled nose, and a worn leather satchel overflowing with papers and books hung from her shoulder. She took a step forward, her boots crunching on debris. “DS Davies, Metropolitan Police.” Davies stood, positioning himself slightly in front of me, his posture stiff. “This is a secured crime scene. How did you get past the cordon?” The woman offered a small, nervous smile, tucking a strand of hair behind her left ear. “Oh, the officer out front? He was very kind. I told him I was with the university, researching forgotten infrastructure. My name is Eva Kowalski. I’m a research assistant at the British Museum, in the restricted archives.” “I don’t care if you’re with the bloody Royal Family. You can’t be here.” Davies reached for his radio. “Wait.” I held up a hand. My gaze hadn’t left Eva. There was an intensity in her green eyes, a focused curiosity that wasn’t morbid. It was academic. “Why are you here, Ms Kowalski? Specifically here.” She looked from Davies to me, her freckled face serious. “Because of this.” She carefully unslung her satchel, pulled out a folded sheet of printed paper, and held it out. It was a photocopy of a medieval manuscript page, covered in spidery Latin and a diagram of a spiraling symbol. My stomach tightened. It was identical to the one carved around our John Doe. “Where did you get this?” I took the paper, the photocopy cool against my fingertips. “It’s from a fragmentary grimoire in our collection. The ‘Liber Tenebris.’ It hasn’t been catalogued or digitised. I’m one of three people with access.” She pointed a finger at the floor. “That symbol is a ward. Specifically, a containment ward. According to the text, it’s meant to… hold something in. Or to mark a place where something *has* been held.” Davies scoffed. “A witch’s spell. Right. And I suppose our victim was a wizard?” Eva’s cheeks flushed. “I’m not suggesting anything supernatural. I’m suggesting that whoever did this was referencing very specific, very obscure source material. And I got an anonymous email this morning, with a photo of this location and that symbol, asking me to verify it against historical records. The sender’s address was gibberish, routed through about forty servers.” I looked back at the body, at the perfect, unblemished shoes, at the granular black substance. “The tip to us was anonymous too.” “What are you implying, guv?” Davies asked, his tone skeptical. “That our killer is some history nerd who kills people with boring symbols?” “I’m implying,” Eva said, her voice gaining a quiet conviction, “that this isn’t a random gang hit. This is deliberate. Symbolic. The location, the presentation, the… the *absence* of normal forensic evidence.” She gestured around. “It’s a statement. Or a ritual.” My torch beam dropped back to the victim’s face. Those open, staring eyes. Not vacant. They were focused on something far beyond the tunnel ceiling. A cold, dawning dread, familiar and terrible, began to seep into my bones. It was the same feeling from the Morris case. The feeling of a rulebook being set on fire. I shifted, my knee pressing into something hard and uneven beneath the grime of the platform. I brushed away dust. A small, metallic object lay half-buried there, just inside the spiral of the symbol, near the victim’s left hand. I pulled on a fresh glove and carefully extracted it. It was a compass. Old brass, the casing darkened with a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with delicate, unfamiliar sigils instead of numbers. And the needle, rather than pointing north, spun in a lazy, agitated circle before settling, pointing directly at the carved symbol on the floor. “What is that?” Davies leaned in. I turned the compass over in my palm. It was cold, much colder than the surrounding air. No maker’s mark. Just a faint, almost invisible inscription on the back: *Veil-borne*. Eva’s breath hitched. She took a half-step closer, her eyes wide behind her glasses. “Oh my god.” “You know what this is?” I asked, my voice low. She swallowed, her gaze fixed on the compass. “Not… not exactly. But I’ve read descriptions. In the marginalia of certain texts. It’s a theoretical tool. A focusing device for… locating anomalous energy sources. Rifts. Tears in the fabric.” She gestured vaguely. “Between places.” “Between places,” Davies repeated, incredulous. “Like between here and Narnia?” “It’s called a Veil Compass,” Eva whispered, as if speaking the name might summon something. “And if it’s here, at a scene like this… it means the person who left it believed they were marking a point of… instability.” My thumb rubbed over the verdigris on the compass casing. The cold seemed to seep into my bones. Morris had been clutching something when they found him, something they never let me see, something they said was just a piece of debris. A piece of debris that left him a ghost in his own skin for weeks afterwards. A deep, resonant *thrum* echoed through the tunnel, seeming to come from the very walls. It vibrated through the soles of my boots. The needle on the Veil Compass jerked, swinging wildly before locking onto a point deep in the darkness of the tunnel, past the archway where Eva had entered. Davies pulled his torch. “What the bloody hell was that?” Eva’s face had drained of all colour. “That sound. In the text, it’s described as… the groan of a stressed boundary.” The thrum came again, louder this time, accompanied by a faint, sickening-sweet smell, like flowers decaying in stagnant water. Our John Doe’s fixed stare no longer seemed vacant. It seemed… expectant. I closed my fingers around the cold brass compass, its frantic needle pressing insistently against my palm, pointing into the dark. “Davies,” I said, my voice cutting through the sudden, heavy silence that followed the sound. “Get forensics here. Now. And tell them to bring the heavy-duty lighting array.” I didn’t take my eyes off the tunnel mouth. “And someone find out everything you can on a company, a group, anything called ‘The Clique’.” Eva nodded, her hand flying to her satchel as if reaching for a weapon made of paper and ink. “I might be able to help with that,” she said, her whisper barely audible. “I think I know why I was really contacted.” Before either of us could ask, the torches flickered. In the stuttering darkness, for just an instant, the black granular lines of the symbol on the floor seemed to glow with a deep, bruised purple light. Then the torches steadied. The glow was gone. But the smell of decay was stronger now. And the silence in the tunnel felt waiting.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.522
leniency1
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.042
70.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count4
4
adverb"carefully"
count2
5
adverb"really"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"utterly"
2"slightly"
3"very"
4"carefully"
5"really"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
44.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1713
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"standard"
count1
2
word"complex"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"grave"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"fascinating"
count1
7
word"echoed"
count2
8
word"intensity"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"etched"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"silence"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"standard"
2"complex"
3"crystalline"
4"grave"
5"chill"
6"fascinating"
7"echoed"
8"intensity"
9"stomach"
10"perfect"
11"familiar"
12"etched"
13"vibrated"
14"silence"
15"whisper"
16"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
70.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences119
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
98.56% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0.007
matches
0"“Coroner’s初步 guess is heart failure. No struggle. Scene’s… tidy.”"
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1712
ratio0.002
matches
0"has"
1"absence"
2"Veil-borne"
3"thrum"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1196
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Davies"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Davies"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Tube2
Davies11
Tidy1
John4
Doe4
Morris3
Italian1
Eva8
Latin1
Veil2
Compass1
persons
0"Davies"
1"John"
2"Doe"
3"Morris"
4"Eva"
5"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
30.95% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"pattern that seemed to writhe in the torchlight, the grooves filled not with chalk but with something dark and granular"
1"as if speaking the name might summon something"
2"seemed vacant"
3"as if reaching for a weapon made of paper and ink"
83.18% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.168
wordCount1712
matches
0"not with chalk but with something dark"
1"not of rot, but of ozone"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean36.43
std21.91
cv0.601
sampleLengths
057
14
243
390
416
539
678
731
851
982
1016
1112
1233
1311
1459
1529
1653
1719
1836
1964
2015
2160
2214
2357
2423
2523
2641
2756
2849
2949
306
3130
3217
3310
3443
3510
3639
3758
3851
3910
4021
4131
4274
4342
4436
458
4616
93.47% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"been levitated"
1"were focused"
2"was etched"
3"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs198
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences141
ratio0.007
matches
0"It carried a scent—not of rot, but of ozone and something faintly metallic."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1205
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"lay half-buried there,"
1"deep, bruised purple light."
adverbCount35
adverbRatio0.029045643153526972
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.013278008298755186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean12.14
std8.52
cv0.701
sampleLengths
05
116
29
327
44
525
618
79
814
93
1019
117
1213
1325
1416
1530
169
176
183
1914
204
216
223
239
2421
257
265
276
288
2912
305
314
3225
3322
347
3511
3617
3713
3817
3917
4012
414
427
435
444
459
4613
477
4811
492
58.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners54
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences113
matches
0"Then the smell of wet"
1"Too precise for a street-corner"
2"Just a faint, almost invisible"
3"Then the torches steadied."
ratio0.035
46.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences113
matches
0"My torch beam cut through"
1"He’d been first on scene,"
2"I knelt, my knees protesting"
3"His skin had a waxy,"
4"It was a complex, spiraling"
5"My voice came out flat,"
6"It was wrong."
7"I said, leaning closer"
8"It was black, almost crystalline,"
9"He tapped his pen against"
10"I ignored his theory for"
11"My fingers hovered over the"
12"It carried a scent—not of"
13"He’d been alive, but his"
14"I nodded toward the rusted"
15"I followed his gaze."
16"She was young, mid-twenties, with"
17"She took a step forward,"
18"I held up a hand"
19"My gaze hadn’t left Eva."
ratio0.434
66.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences113
matches
0"The copper hit me first."
1"My torch beam cut through"
2"DS Davies crouched by the"
3"He’d been first on scene,"
4"I knelt, my knees protesting"
5"The victim was male, early"
6"His skin had a waxy,"
7"The cause of death wasn’t"
8"It was a complex, spiraling"
9"My voice came out flat,"
10"Davies gestured with a gloved"
11"It was wrong."
12"The body lay perfectly straight,"
13"The symbol was precise."
14"A disused, sealed section of"
15"The entrance was a rusted"
16"I said, leaning closer"
17"The granular material in the"
18"It was black, almost crystalline,"
19"Davies shook his head."
ratio0.788
88.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences113
matches
0"As if he’d been levitated"
1"Before either of us could"
ratio0.018
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"My torch beam cut through the gloom, sweeping over discarded syringes, mummified pigeon corpses, and a chalk outline that looked freshly scrawled on the grimy p…"
1"It was a complex, spiraling pattern that seemed to writhe in the torchlight, the grooves filled not with chalk but with something dark and granular."
2"There was an intensity in her green eyes, a focused curiosity that wasn’t morbid."
3"I closed my fingers around the cold brass compass, its frantic needle pressing insistently against my palm, pointing into the dark."
4"Eva nodded, her hand flying to her satchel as if reaching for a weapon made of paper and ink."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Davies asked, his tone skeptical"
1"Eva said, her voice gaining a quiet conviction,"
2"I asked, my voice low"
3"Davies repeated, incredulous"
4"Eva whispered, as if speaking the name might summon something"
5"she said, her whisper barely audible"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Davies repeated (repeat)"
1"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences46
tagDensity0.174
leniency0.348
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.087
82.8251%