| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 17 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.531 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 67.08% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "barely above a whisper" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "warmly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "lightly" | | 4 | "gently" | | 5 | "barely above a whisper" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 13.58% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1215 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "scanning" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "tension" | | 5 | "measured" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "tracing" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "repository" | | 11 | "etched" | | 12 | "comfortable" | | 13 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 42 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1209 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.51% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 901 | | uniqueNames | 6 | | maxNameDensity | 1.11 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Aurora | 6 | | Silas | 10 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Silas" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.945 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 57.41% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "as if trying to map the changes onto the face he remembered" | | 1 | "felt like distant waves" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.481 | | wordCount | 1209 | | matches | | 0 | "not as a burden but as a sediment, layers of experience hardening into something" | | 1 | "not just as a place but as a repository of lives, each patron a story etched into th" | | 2 | "Not to have all the answers, but to keep asking the questions" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 78.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 31 | | mean | 39 | | std | 16.56 | | cv | 0.425 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 66 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 39 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 46 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 31 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 24 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 29 | | 16 | 12 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 30 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 49 | | 23 | 64 | | 24 | 23 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 27 | | 30 | 74 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 150 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 75 | | ratio | 0.067 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, at twenty‑five, her black hair fell straight to her shoulders, a small crescent scar catching the light on her left wrist, and her eyes—once bright with naïve certainty—held a wary steadiness." | | 1 | "Silas nodded, his gaze drifting to the old maps pinned to the wall—charts of coastlines, battle lines, forgotten routes." | | 2 | "The bar’s low murmur continued—glasses clinking, a laugh erupting from a corner, the soft hiss of the espresso machine in the back." | | 3 | "Silas leaned back, his gaze drifting to the photographs on the wall—black‑and‑white snapshots of faces long gone, of streets that had changed beyond recognition." | | 4 | "Aurora looked around the bar, noticing details she had missed before—the way the neon sign threw a green glow onto the mahogany, the faint scent of tobacco lingering in the air, the soft murmur of conversations that felt like distant waves." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 418 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 7 | | adverbRatio | 0.01674641148325359 | | lyAdverbCount | 0 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 75 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 75 | | mean | 16.12 | | std | 7.87 | | cv | 0.488 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 24 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 13 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 5 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 11 | | 25 | 24 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 11 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 8 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 7 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 22 | | 38 | 26 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 14 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 58.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.37333333333333335 | | totalSentences | 75 | | uniqueOpeners | 28 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 9.47% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused just inside, letting" | | 1 | "He was polishing a glass," | | 2 | "She pushed off the doorframe" | | 3 | "he said, the name slipping" | | 4 | "He set the glass down," | | 5 | "She slid onto the stool" | | 6 | "she replied, her voice steady," | | 7 | "He let out a short" | | 8 | "He gestured to the row" | | 9 | "she said, her fingers brushing" | | 10 | "She watched as he poured" | | 11 | "She lifted it, the weight" | | 12 | "She took a sip, the" | | 13 | "She set the glass down," | | 14 | "he replied, his voice dropping" | | 15 | "She stared into her drink," | | 16 | "She paused, choosing each word" | | 17 | "She finally spoke, her voice" | | 18 | "she continued, her fingers tracing" | | 19 | "He leaned forward slightly, the" |
| | ratio | 0.526 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 54 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora shoved the heavy oak" | | 1 | "The smell of old wood" | | 2 | "She paused just inside, letting" | | 3 | "Silas stood behind the bar," | | 4 | "A slight limp caught his" | | 5 | "He was polishing a glass," | | 6 | "The last time she had" | | 7 | "She pushed off the doorframe" | | 8 | "Silas looked up, his gaze" | | 9 | "A flicker of surprise crossed" | | 10 | "he said, the name slipping" | | 11 | "He set the glass down," | | 12 | "She slid onto the stool" | | 13 | "she replied, her voice steady," | | 14 | "He let out a short" | | 15 | "He gestured to the row" | | 16 | "she said, her fingers brushing" | | 17 | "She watched as he poured" | | 18 | "Silas pushed one toward her." | | 19 | "She lifted it, the weight" |
| | ratio | 0.947 | |
| 87.72% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 57 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, at twenty‑five, her black" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 58.82% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 34 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Silas stood behind the bar, his auburn hair threaded with silver, his hazel eyes scanning the room with the practiced detachment of a man who had spent years re…" | | 1 | "He reached out, his hand hovering just above the bar before resting lightly on her forearm." | | 2 | "Silas leaned back, his gaze drifting to the photographs on the wall—black‑and‑white snapshots of faces long gone, of streets that had changed beyond recognition…" | | 3 | "Aurora looked around the bar, noticing details she had missed before—the way the neon sign threw a green glow onto the mahogany, the faint scent of tobacco ling…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 17 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, her fingers brushing the cool wood of the bar" | | 1 | "She set, the liquid sloshing slightly" | | 2 | "he replied, his voice dropping to a near whisper" | | 3 | "she continued, her fingers tracing the rim of her glass" | | 4 | "She glanced, the pale line catching the light" | | 5 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 87.50% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she continued (continue)" | | 1 | "he murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 32 | | tagDensity | 0.313 | | leniency | 0.625 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.125 | |