Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK7YAZ5HPSMD9890HB9DP1

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Duration:
1m 9s
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$0.001040
Provider:
Together

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System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pulled the silver chain over her chest. The pendant rested beneath her shirt, heavy with its own warmth. A low hum vibrated against her skin whenever she breathed. The air around them tasted like ozone and crushed mint. She stood on the edge of the clearing, her knuckles white against the cold stone beneath her boots. Nyx floated just above the moss, their form shifting between shadow and solidity. The silence stretched between them, thick with the weight of unseen magic. Isolde stepped forward. The ground under her feet remained fresh. We are too deep in the grove, Rory. Aurora looked up. Isolde's lavender eyes caught the dim light filtering through the canopy above. The trees here spiraled in impossible geometries, their bark smooth like polished glass. How far is this from the stone circle? Isolde lifted a hand. A flock of silver-winged moths darted from the shadows. It does not matter where we stand. Only what we find. The wind rippled through the hair on Aurora's arms. It carried a scent of something sweet, like old sugar, mixed with the stench of decay. Nyx leaned closer to Auroras ear. They are not alone in the dark. Aurora felt the hair stand up on her neck. The pendant beneath her shirt pulsed sharply against her ribs. A warning. Do you hear that? Isolde paused mid-step. No footprints scraped across the grass nearby. It is the Veil breathing. It thins here. Aurora reached out, her hand trembling as she touched the nearest tree. The smooth surface felt like living skin under her fingertips. The cold seeped into her palm. Can we go back? We can, but the portal will not open again until we cross the threshold. Isolde's tone was flat. She did not raise her voice. The magic in the air forced her to keep it that way. Nyx's eyes glowed faint violet in the gloom. I saw figures on the horizon. What figures? Ghosts. Or food. It is a matter of perspective in Dymas. I know nothing of Dymas. Then learn quickly. The gluttony there eats memories. Aurora gripped the Fae-Forged Blade in her belt. The iron was cold. It hummed with a rhythm that matched the pendant. She knew this weapon belonged to the Fae Courts. You are not going there alone. The group moved deeper. The path twisted into a series of stairways that defied gravity. We have to walk. Aurora stepped onto the first stair. The wood groaned as she put weight on it. The surface shifted color under her feet, turning from green to brown to grey. The stair was a door. Another one. She placed her hand on the edge. It felt like cold metal. Isolde walked ahead, her pace impossible to match. Watch the shadow walkers. They came from the light. Nyx vanished into the canopy. Only their voice remained, sounding like wind through dry leaves. Left it behind. It follows the tear. Aurora saw Nyx drift into a patch of darkness moving past the railing. She waved a hand through the air and felt a draft sweep against her palm. We need to find the path through. There is no path. Only a destination. Isolde stopped before a wall made of woven light. It shimmered like oil on water. How do I get through? Step through the shadow. The wall rippled, forming an archway. The shadow on the wall moved like water. Aurora looked at the exit point. It opens for the right amount of time. Nyx stepped out from the wall's edge. The shadow receded, leaving a ghostly imprint on the light. Wait. Aurora felt the air change again. The moths stopped. They hovered in mid-air, transforming into slow-moving figures. They are made of ash. They dissolve when I breathe. Aurora inhaled deeply. The ash burned at her throat, turning to smoke. The air is too thick here. It resonates with the magic of the grove. Nyx moved towards the wall. Cooler air followed their form. You are cold. Nyx did not speak. The skin of their body rippled. Their heart was no longer in their ribcage. It was a void in the dark. We are in the Veil. We know that. Then know this. The Veil breaks soon. Winter Solstice will change everything. Aurora stepped through the light. She crossed the threshold with her boots. The other side was a space of white stone. A wall of rock. The white stone did not bow down. It is impossible to climb. Aurora knelt to the ground. The shell of rock was outside this vision. Why is that needed? The grove is the anchor. Without this, the stone walls will fall. Isolde knelt. The feet of the Fae did not touch the ground. The wall is the seal. It keeps the hellbound inside. Aurora stood up. Her heart hammered in her chest. She could feel the stone walls trembling. We do not understand what is holding them back. The shadow of Nyx lifted off the ground. They hovered. The hellbound do not want out. They are the food for Dymas. Isolde looked up. Her silver hair flowed in the wind, though there was no wind here. Then we must open the gates. Aurora touched the wall. The stone cracked. Listen to the cracking. It is the sound of the earth. Nyx pointed up. A figure rose from the cracks. It is a memory. The thing on the ground floated. It was a man, holding a bowl. He was made of smoke. He is eating. Nyx nodded. He is hungry. The smoke man looked like he was trapped in the stone. The man was not a man. The smoke man dug at the stone. He had no hands but he had claws. He cut the stone. The sound of the claws singing. Aurora clenched her fists. The pendant beneath her shirt pulsed with red light. It was a beacon. He is trying to taste the earth. Isolde stood still. Her eyes were closed. The taste of the earth is bitter. Aurora looked at the wall. It is not a wall. It is a stomach. The stone walls were not solid. The stomach ate. The smoke man's grip on the stone tightened. It will swallow us if we stay. Isolde stepped back. Her hair moved like water. Go now. The wall opened. The light was cold. Aurora stepped forward. What is this place? It is the sky turned inside out. Aurora saw the sky. It was not blue. It was a pattern of veins. The veins pulse. It is alive. Aurora's breath caught. Her eyes stung from the light. Nyx flew closer. The sky does not belong to us. Isolde looked at the veins. The sky belongs to the Hel. It is a portal. Aurora grabbed the pendant. It burned against her hand. The corridor leads to the portal. The smoke man lunged. He had claws. Aurora threw the blade. The blade felt heavier than iron. It cut through the mist. Smoke rose from the ground. The flash of light blinded them. The mist breathed. The land gave way. The ground shifted. The sky turned back.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"quickly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"warmth"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"pulsed"
count2
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"shimmered"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"beacon"
count1
9
word"stomach"
count2
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"vibrated"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"pulsed"
5"gloom"
6"shimmered"
7"could feel"
8"beacon"
9"stomach"
10"pulse"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"heart pounded in chest"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
highlights
0"heart hammered in her chest"
1"clenched her fists"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences199
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"know"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences199
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen18
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1193
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions62
wordCount1193
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.84
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Rory1
Aurora22
Auroras1
Veil3
Dymas3
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
Courts1
Nyx12
Solstice1
Hel1
Isolde12
persons
0"Rory"
1"Aurora"
2"Blade"
3"Nyx"
4"Solstice"
5"Isolde"
places
0"Auroras"
1"Dymas"
2"Hel"
globalScore0.578
windowScore0.5
72.68% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"tasted like ozone and crushed mint"
1"felt like living skin under her fingert"
2"looked like he was trapped in the stone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.838
wordCount1193
matches
0"no hands but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences199
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs128
mean9.32
std7.56
cv0.811
sampleLengths
057
125
210
38
428
58
613
711
825
96
107
1121
124
1310
148
1528
164
1714
1822
198
206
212
2211
235
248
2530
266
2715
284
2929
305
312
3212
338
344
355
3615
377
3828
397
407
4115
425
434
4414
456
468
4717
481
496
99.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences199
matches
0"are made"
1"was made"
2"was trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs232
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1198
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.020868113522537562
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005843071786310518
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences199
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences199
mean5.99
std2.99
cv0.498
sampleLengths
08
111
210
310
418
513
612
73
87
98
103
1112
1213
138
144
159
167
174
189
1916
206
217
229
2310
242
254
263
277
285
293
3012
3110
326
334
3414
354
366
3712
388
396
402
411
422
438
445
453
465
478
484
499
37.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats25
diversityRatio0.18090452261306533
totalSentences199
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences189
matches
0"Only what we find."
1"Then learn quickly."
2"Only their voice remained, sounding"
3"Only a destination."
4"Then know this."
5"Then we must open the"
ratio0.032
82.43% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences189
matches
0"She stood on the edge"
1"We are too deep in"
2"It does not matter where"
3"It carried a scent of"
4"They are not alone in"
5"It is the Veil breathing."
6"It thins here."
7"We can, but the portal"
8"She did not raise her"
9"I saw figures on the"
10"It is a matter of"
11"I know nothing of Dymas."
12"It hummed with a rhythm"
13"She knew this weapon belonged"
14"You are not going there"
15"We have to walk."
16"She placed her hand on"
17"It felt like cold metal."
18"They came from the light."
19"It follows the tear."
ratio0.344
12.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount169
totalSentences189
matches
0"Aurora pulled the silver chain"
1"The pendant rested beneath her"
2"A low hum vibrated against"
3"The air around them tasted"
4"She stood on the edge"
5"Nyx floated just above the"
6"The silence stretched between them,"
7"Isolde stepped forward."
8"The ground under her feet"
9"We are too deep in"
10"Aurora looked up."
11"Isolde's lavender eyes caught the"
12"The trees here spiraled in"
13"Isolde lifted a hand."
14"A flock of silver-winged moths"
15"It does not matter where"
16"The wind rippled through the"
17"It carried a scent of"
18"Nyx leaned closer to Auroras"
19"They are not alone in"
ratio0.894
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.1681%