Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK8GWQZWPF34X648QTVH7V

Run Details

Duration:
32.6s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pressed her palm against the rough bark of an ancient oak, the Heartstone pendant thrumming against her skin. A faint warmth spread from the gem, pulsing like a second heartbeat. She inhaled, the air thick with sweet perfume and the tang of fermented fruit. Nyx drifted forward, the shadow of his form thickening then thinning as if breathing. His violet eyes scanned the horizon, catching the amber glow that bathed the land in perpetual twilight. Isolde stepped beside them, her silver hair falling like moonlight over her shoulders. She left no imprint on the loamy ground, her presence a quiet ripple in the scent of blooming wildflowers. A low hum rose from the distance, a chorus of clinking glass and laughter that seemed to rise from the earth itself. Aurora’s eyes narrowed, the scar on her wrist catching a glint of light. “Listen,” she whispered, the words hanging in the cool shade of the grove. Nyx’s form flickered, tendrils of shadow reaching toward the sound before retracting. “It feeds,” he murmured, voice a whisper on the wind. Isolde smiled, a ripple of amusement crossing her pale lavender eyes. “The table is set,” she said, though her lips barely moved. Aurora stepped forward, the grass beneath her boots soft and springy. The scent grew richer, notes of honeyed figs and spiced wine weaving through the air. She paused at the edge of a clearing where the trees gave way to rows of vines heavy with grapes the size of fists, each cluster glowing with an inner ruby light. Nyx slipped ahead, his shadow stretching across the loam, pooling around the base of a vine. He touched a tendril, and the fruit shivered, releasing a burst of fragrance that made Aurora’s stomach tighten. “Taste,” Nyx urged, his tone a soft hiss. Isolde lifted a hand, her fingers hovering over a grape. She drew back, a thoughtful crease forming between her brows. “Sweetness masks hunger,” she said, her voice a riddle that curled like smoke. Aurora plucked a fruit, the skin cool under her thumb. She bit, the flesh bursting with nectar that sang of sunlit hills and forgotten feasts. Warmth flooded her chest, spreading to her fingertips, and for a moment the world narrowed to the taste alone. A sudden clatter echoed from beyond the orchard, metal on stone, the rhythm of hurried feet. Nyx’s silhouette sharpened, his edges hardening into a more solid shape. He turned, violet eyes narrowing toward a distant archway draped in ivy. “Guards?” Isolde asked, her tone light but edged with curiosity. The archway loomed, tall and twisted, its stones carved with grotesque faces mouths open in silent screams. Vines snaked across the surface, blossoms bursting in shades of gold and crimson. Beyond the arch, a sprawling expanse unfolded: orchards of trees bearing fruit that glowed like lanterns, fields of grain that swayed without wind, and a river that flowed liquid amber, its surface rippling with reflections of feasting tables laden with roasted meats, steaming bowls, and platters of pastries that seemed to shift shape as they watched. Aurora’s breath caught. The Heartstone pendant flared, its crimson light beating in time with her pulse. She felt the weight of the veil thinning, a shimmer like heat haze hovering over the river’s edge. Nyx drifted closer to the water, his form becoming semi‑solid, fingertips skimming the surface. The liquid swallowed his touch, sending out concentric rings that glowed faintly violet before fading. “It drinks,” he said, voice barely audible over the distant merriment. Isolde stepped onto the riverbank, her bare feet leaving no mark. She lifted her face to the sky, eyes closed, listening to a melody that was not quite music but the sigh of satisfied souls. “Abundance breeds forgetting,” she said, her words sliding like silk over stone. Aurora moved forward, her boots sinking slightly into the soft loam at the river’s edge. She peered into the water, seeing not her own reflection but a parade of faces—some familiar, some unknown—each wearing expressions of bliss, eyes half‑closed, lips curled in silent delight. The river seemed to swallow their sighs, turning them into steam that rose and vanished into the amber sky. A sudden roar rose from the feast beyond, a guttural sound that made the ground tremble. Nyx’s shadow tensed, his form rippling like dark silk caught in a wind he could not see. “They feast,” he muttered, “but hunger lingers.” Isolde turned, her silver hair catching the light as she glanced at Aurora. “The blade sings when the false feast calls,” she said, fingertips brushing the hilt of the Fae‑forged dagger she had given Aurora earlier. The moonsilver weapon lay sheathed at Aurora’s side, its cold surface humming faintly against her thigh. Aurora drew the blade, feeling its edge bite into the air with a quiet intensity. The dagger’s leaf‑shaped blade caught the amber light, throwing tiny shards of luminescence onto the grass. She lifted it, feeling the weight of its purpose settle in her palm. “Show us the truth,” she said, voice steady. The blade vibrated, a soft tone resonating from its core. A thin line of silver light shot from the tip, slicing through the air and striking the river’s surface. The water split, revealing beneath it a cavern of stone walls lined with shelves holding jars of strange powders, vials of glowing liquid, and stacks of ancient tomes bound in leather that pulsed faintly. Nyx flowed forward, his shadow spreading across the opening like a living cloak. He peered inside, his violet eyes reflecting the gleam of countless artifacts. “Secrets,” he breathed, “and appetite.” Isolde stepped into the revealed space, her passage disturbing no dust, her presence a quiet disturbance in the stale air. She traced a finger over a jar, the contents swirling with a light that seemed to pulse in rhythm with her heartbeat. “Knowledge is the first course,” she said, her tone a mixture of warning and invitation. Aurora slipped past her, entering the cool interior of the cavern. The air smelled of iron and old parchment, a stark contrast to the sugary perfume outside. Shelves rose like cliffs, each laden with objects that defied naming—crystals that sang when touched, metals that shifted shape under a gaze, and scrolls whose writing changed when not observed. She paused before a pedestal that held a single object: a small, ornate box of ebony inlaid with silver filigree. The Heartstone pendant flared against her chest, its warmth spreading outward as if recognizing a kindred resonance. Nyx materialized beside her, his form solid enough to cast a faint shadow on the stone floor. He inclined his head, the motion sending a ripple of darkness across the box’s surface. “Open it,” he urged, voice a low whisper that seemed to echo from the walls themselves. Isolde hovered at the entrance, her silver hair catching the faint glow from the box’s seams. She smiled, a fleeting expression that held both mischief and solemnity. “Every gift bears a price,” she said, her words sliding like a secret through the stone. Aurora’s fingers hovered over the lid, feeling the faint tremor of power thrumming through the metal. She inhaled, the scent of damp earth and distant fire filling her lungs. With a decisive motion, she lifted the lid. Inside lay a shard of crystal, clear as ice, yet inside it swirled a miniature storm—lightning crackling, snowflakes spinning, all contained within a perfect sphere. The crystal pulsed, casting prismatic light that danced across the walls, turning the cavern into a kaleidoscope of color and shadow. Nyx reached out, his shadowy hand hovering above the crystal. The storm within reacted, a bolt of lightning leaping toward his fingertips before dissipating into harmless sparkles. “Power,” he murmured, “wild and untamed.” Isolde stepped closer, her gaze fixed on the tempest trapped within. She raised a hand, not to touch, but to feel the energy radiating outward. “Control is a dance,” she said, “and the music never stops.” Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant beat in sync with the crystal’s rhythm, a steady thrum that seemed to align her own pulse with the heartbeat of the place. She looked beyond the cavern’s mouth, back toward the endless feast where laughter clinked like glass and the scent of spiced meat curled on the wind. The world stretched before her—an alien tapestry of excess and mystery, of wonder that tingled with danger, of beauty that whispered of hidden costs. She stood at the threshold, blade in hand, pendant warm against her skin, the storm‑filled crystal cradled in her palm, and inhaled deeply, ready to step forward into the unknown.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"warmth"
count3
1
word"scanned"
count1
2
word"glint"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"stomach"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"loomed"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count3
9
word"weight"
count2
10
word"silk"
count2
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"intensity"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count2
15
word"traced"
count1
16
word"stark"
count1
17
word"resonance"
count1
18
word"echo"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"crystal"
count5
21
word"perfect"
count1
22
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
23
word"dance"
count1
24
word"tapestry"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"scanned"
2"glint"
3"flickered"
4"whisper"
5"stomach"
6"echoed"
7"loomed"
8"pulse"
9"weight"
10"silk"
11"familiar"
12"intensity"
13"vibrated"
14"pulsed"
15"traced"
16"stark"
17"resonance"
18"echo"
19"fleeting"
20"crystal"
21"perfect"
22"kaleidoscope"
23"dance"
24"tapestry"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
47.62% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen56
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1435
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1373
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity1.02
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Heartstone4
Nyx10
Isolde9
Aurora14
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Aurora"
places(empty)
globalScore0.99
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"as if breathing"
1"laughter that seemed to rise from the earth itself"
2"pastries that seemed to shift shape as they watched"
3"not quite music but the sigh of satisfied souls"
4"light that seemed to pulse in rhythm with her heartbeat"
5"as if recognizing a kindred resonance"
6"whisper that seemed to echo from the walls themselves"
7"thrum that seemed to align her own pulse with the heartbeat of the place"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.091
wordCount1435
matches
0"not quite music but the sigh of satisfied souls"
1"not her own reflection but a parade of faces"
2"not to touch, but to feel the energy radiating outward"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.89
std18.17
cv0.57
sampleLengths
045
131
232
335
413
522
622
758
834
98
1033
1144
1239
1310
1486
1534
1629
1711
1835
1912
2063
2133
227
2352
2444
258
2663
2725
285
2942
3015
3157
3237
3332
3416
3527
3616
3737
3846
3927
406
4125
4211
4354
4454
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs243
matches(empty)
15.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences90
ratio0.044
matches
0"She peered into the water, seeing not her own reflection but a parade of faces—some familiar, some unknown—each wearing expressions of bliss, eyes half‑closed, lips curled in silent delight."
1"Shelves rose like cliffs, each laden with objects that defied naming—crystals that sang when touched, metals that shifted shape under a gaze, and scrolls whose writing changed when not observed."
2"Inside lay a shard of crystal, clear as ice, yet inside it swirled a miniature storm—lightning crackling, snowflakes spinning, all contained within a perfect sphere."
3"The world stretched before her—an alien tapestry of excess and mystery, of wonder that tingled with danger, of beauty that whispered of hidden costs."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1378
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.015965166908563134
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.0050798258345428155
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean15.94
std7.29
cv0.457
sampleLengths
019
112
214
314
417
513
619
722
813
913
1012
1110
1211
1311
1411
1515
1632
1716
1818
198
2010
2110
2213
2310
2415
2519
2616
2711
2812
2910
3017
3113
3256
333
3413
3518
3614
3715
3811
3911
4024
4112
4215
4329
4419
4516
4617
477
4813
4923
50.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.3111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences86
matches
0"She inhaled, the air thick"
1"His violet eyes scanned the"
2"She left no imprint on"
3"she whispered, the words hanging"
4"he murmured, voice a whisper"
5"she said, though her lips"
6"She paused at the edge"
7"He touched a tendril, and"
8"She drew back, a thoughtful"
9"she said, her voice a"
10"She bit, the flesh bursting"
11"He turned, violet eyes narrowing"
12"She felt the weight of"
13"he said, voice barely audible"
14"She lifted her face to"
15"she said, her words sliding"
16"She peered into the water,"
17"she said, fingertips brushing the"
18"She lifted it, feeling the"
19"she said, voice steady"
ratio0.372
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences86
matches
0"Aurora pressed her palm against"
1"A faint warmth spread from"
2"She inhaled, the air thick"
3"Nyx drifted forward, the shadow"
4"His violet eyes scanned the"
5"Isolde stepped beside them, her"
6"She left no imprint on"
7"A low hum rose from"
8"Aurora’s eyes narrowed, the scar"
9"she whispered, the words hanging"
10"Nyx’s form flickered, tendrils of"
11"he murmured, voice a whisper"
12"Isolde smiled, a ripple of"
13"she said, though her lips"
14"Aurora stepped forward, the grass"
15"The scent grew richer, notes"
16"She paused at the edge"
17"Nyx slipped ahead, his shadow"
18"He touched a tendril, and"
19"Nyx urged, his tone a"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
ratio0
42.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Nyx drifted forward, the shadow of his form thickening then thinning as if breathing."
1"His violet eyes scanned the horizon, catching the amber glow that bathed the land in perpetual twilight."
2"Beyond the arch, a sprawling expanse unfolded: orchards of trees bearing fruit that glowed like lanterns, fields of grain that swayed without wind, and a river …"
3"The liquid swallowed his touch, sending out concentric rings that glowed faintly violet before fading."
4"She lifted her face to the sky, eyes closed, listening to a melody that was not quite music but the sigh of satisfied souls."
5"Shelves rose like cliffs, each laden with objects that defied naming—crystals that sang when touched, metals that shifted shape under a gaze, and scrolls whose …"
6"The Heartstone pendant flared against her chest, its warmth spreading outward as if recognizing a kindred resonance."
7"The crystal pulsed, casting prismatic light that danced across the walls, turning the cavern into a kaleidoscope of color and shadow."
8"Aurora felt the Heartstone pendant beat in sync with the crystal’s rhythm, a steady thrum that seemed to align her own pulse with the heartbeat of the place."
9"The world stretched before her—an alien tapestry of excess and mystery, of wonder that tingled with danger, of beauty that whispered of hidden costs."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount8
matches
0"she whispered, the words hanging in the cool shade of the grove"
1"Nyx urged, his tone a soft hiss"
2"she said, her voice a riddle that curled like smoke"
3"he said, voice barely audible over the distant merriment"
4"she said, her words sliding like silk over stone"
5"she said, voice steady"
6"she said, her tone a mixture of warning and invitation"
7"she said, her words sliding like a secret through the stone"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"Nyx urged (urge)"
3"he muttered (mutter)"
4"he breathed (breathe)"
5"he urged (urge)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences17
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.412
effectiveRatio0.412
63.5837%