Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFK8P3DPBR4WSGT3SNQ07NB

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Duration:
47.4s
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$0.000000
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Nvidia

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rain had softened to a mist that clung to the brick facades of Brick Lane, turning the street into a glossy ribbon of reflected lanterns. Above the curry house, the flat smelled of cumin and old paper, a thin veil of incense drifting from a stick balanced on a windowsill. Stacks of leather‑bound tomes teetered beside mugs half‑filled with cold tea, and a tabby cat—Ptolemy—lounged on a radiator, his tail twitching at every passing footfall. Aurora stood at the sink, rinsing a chipped plate, when the knock came. Not the cautious rap of a delivery boy, but three firm taps that echoed against the warped wood. She wiped her hands on a dish towel, the motion pulling the crescent scar on her left wrist into view, and moved toward the door. The brass knob turned under her palm, and the door swung inward. Lucien filled the doorway, his presence a sudden shift in the cramped space. The ivory handle of his cane caught the low light, a thin blade glinting just beneath the polished surface. His tailored charcoal suit hung sharp on his frame, the lapels crisp despite the damp that clung to his shoulders. One eye—amber, warm like honey—met hers; the other, black as a void, seemed to swallow the light around it. “Rory,” he said, voice low, the timbre carrying a hint of something older than his years. “May I come in?” She stepped back, the motion pulling the door wider, and gestured toward the narrow hallway. “You know you don’t need to ask.” He entered, closing the door softly behind him. The latch clicked, a sound that seemed to seal the street outside from the chaos within. He leaned his cane against the wall, the blade hidden but present, and turned his full attention to her. “The last time we saw each other… you left without a word,” Lucien began, his amber eye flickering with something that could have been regret or restraint. “I heard you’d taken a shift at the Golden Empress, that you were sleeping above Silas’ bar. I thought perhaps you needed space.” Aurora’s arms crossed over her chest, the fabric of her thin sweater pulling tight across her shoulders. “Space was a luxury I couldn’t afford then. You were… involved in things I couldn’t understand. I needed to figure out who I was without the weight of your world pressing on me.” He nodded, a slow movement that made the platinum strands of his hair catch the light. “I respect that. I also know that the decisions I made were not mine alone. My father’s blood calls, and I have tried to silence it. When I heard you were back in London, I thought… perhaps you might want to know I’m still here.” A faint smile tugged at the corner of her mouth, fleeting and bitter. “You always were good at showing up when it suited you.” He stepped closer, the distance between them shrinking to a breath’s width. “I never left because I stopped caring. I left because I feared what I might become if I stayed too close. The demon in me… it hungers for control, for dominance. I feared dragging you into that hunger.” Her eyes flicked to the scar on her wrist, the tiny crescent catching the light from the sconce. “And yet you left a blade in your cane. A reminder that danger follows you wherever you go.” Lucien’s hand lifted, not to touch her, but to gesture toward the cane. “This blade is for protection, not for threat. I carry it because there are things in this city that do not ask permission before they strike. I would never use it against you.” She let out a breath she hadn’t realized she’d been holding, the sound soft against the quiet of the flat. “I’ve missed the way you listen. The way you seem to hear the spaces between my words.” He tilted his head, the black eye reflecting the dim lamp like a polished stone. “I have missed your laughter, the way it brightens the room even when the rain beats against the windows. I have missed the sight of you bent over a manuscript, your brow furrowed in concentration.” Aurora moved to the small table cluttered with scrolls, picking up a vellum sheet covered in intricate sigils. She traced a finger over a looping symbol, the ink slightly raised from the page. “I’ve been researching the sigils of Avaros. Trying to find a way to bind the… the part of you that isn’t human.” Lucien’s gaze lingered on her hand, the intensity of his stare making the air feel thicker. “You would do that for me?” She looked up, her bright blue eyes meeting his heterochromatic pair. “I would. Because despite everything, I still see the man beneath the myth. I see the person who once shared a pot of tea with me on a rainy afternoon, who told me stories of Marseille while the world outside fell asleep.” He stepped forward until his boots were inches from hers, the scent of sandalwood and something faintly sulfurous mingling with the aroma of simmering curry from the floor below. “I never stopped wanting to be that man for you.” The words hung between them, fragile as the steam rising from the teapot on the stove. Aurora’s hand, still resting on the vellum, lifted slightly, brushing the edge of his cuff. The fabric was smooth, the tailoring precise, a silent testament to the care he took in his appearance. Lucien’s hand hovered near hers, not quite touching, as if testing the temperature of the space between them. “If I stay… if I let you in, I cannot promise that the darkness will never surface. I can only promise that I will fight it with every ounce of will I possess.” She swallowed, the motion making the scar on her wrist flex faintly. “And I cannot promise that I will never fear what you might become. But I can promise that I will stand beside you, not behind you, and that I will try to understand rather than judge.” A soft chuckle escaped him, low and genuine, the sound resonating in the cramped room. “Then perhaps we have a chance to rewrite the ending we thought was set.” Aurora’s lips curved, a genuine smile this time, breaking through the layers of hurt and caution that had built over months. She reached out, her fingers finding his forearm, the muscle tense beneath the wool of his suit. The contact was brief, electric, a spark that seemed to ignite the forgotten warmth between them. Lucien leaned in, his forehead resting lightly against hers, the amber eye closed, the black eye open and watching. The rain outside tapped a steady rhythm against the windowpane, a percussion that matched the quickening of their breaths. “Stay,” she whispered, the word barely more than a breath against his skin. He nodded, the movement sending a faint ripple through his platinum hair. “I will.” The flat remained still, the books and scrolls bearing witness to a reunion forged in uncertainty, the cat Ptolemy stretching lazily on the radiator, oblivious to the storm that had just found a calm harbor.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.136
leniency0.273
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
79.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"lazily"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
2"lightly"
3"lazily"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.77% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1208
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"footfall"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"fleeting"
count1
6
word"flicked"
count1
7
word"reminder"
count1
8
word"furrowed"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"intensity"
count1
12
word"simmering"
count1
13
word"testament"
count1
14
word"electric"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"footfall"
1"echoed"
2"glinting"
3"weight"
4"silence"
5"fleeting"
6"flicked"
7"reminder"
8"furrowed"
9"intricate"
10"traced"
11"intensity"
12"simmering"
13"testament"
14"electric"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences44
matches(empty)
12.99% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences44
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1204
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount761
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy2
Aurora5
Lucien6
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences44
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"sound that seemed to seal the street outside from the chaos within"
1"as if testing the temperature of the space between them"
2"not quite touching, as if testing the temperature of the space between them"
3"spark that seemed to ignite the forgotten warmth between them"
33.89% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.661
wordCount1204
matches
0"Not the cautious rap of a delivery boy, but three firm taps"
1"not to touch her, but to gesture toward the cane"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
65.28% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean43
std16.27
cv0.378
sampleLengths
076
168
271
320
422
543
650
750
861
924
1050
1136
1246
1337
1450
1555
1622
1753
1839
1949
2051
2148
2229
2354
2438
2513
2614
2735
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
52.15% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences63
ratio0.032
matches
0"Stacks of leather‑bound tomes teetered beside mugs half‑filled with cold tea, and a tabby cat—Ptolemy—lounged on a radiator, his tail twitching at every passing footfall."
1"One eye—amber, warm like honey—met hers; the other, black as a void, seemed to swallow the light around it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount765
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02091503267973856
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.01045751633986928
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean19.11
std8.92
cv0.467
sampleLengths
026
125
225
313
418
525
612
713
819
920
1019
1116
124
1315
147
158
1616
1719
1827
1923
2017
2133
2216
2345
2413
2511
2612
2738
2818
2918
3013
3133
3220
3317
3415
3535
3618
3715
3822
3916
406
4111
4242
4329
4410
4516
4615
4718
4818
4933
58.20% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats0
diversityRatio0.3492063492063492
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners22
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
56.36% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences44
matches
0"She wiped her hands on"
1"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
2"he said, voice low, the"
3"She stepped back, the motion"
4"He entered, closing the door"
5"He leaned his cane against"
6"He nodded, a slow movement"
7"He stepped closer, the distance"
8"Her eyes flicked to the"
9"She let out a breath"
10"He tilted his head, the"
11"She traced a finger over"
12"She looked up, her bright"
13"He stepped forward until his"
14"She swallowed, the motion making"
15"She reached out, her fingers"
16"she whispered, the word barely"
17"He nodded, the movement sending"
ratio0.409
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount41
totalSentences44
matches
0"The rain had softened to"
1"Stacks of leather‑bound tomes teetered"
2"Aurora stood at the sink,"
3"She wiped her hands on"
4"The brass knob turned under"
5"Lucien filled the doorway, his"
6"The ivory handle of his"
7"His tailored charcoal suit hung"
8"he said, voice low, the"
9"She stepped back, the motion"
10"He entered, closing the door"
11"The latch clicked, a sound"
12"He leaned his cane against"
13"Lucien began, his amber eye"
14"Aurora’s arms crossed over her"
15"He nodded, a slow movement"
16"A faint smile tugged at"
17"He stepped closer, the distance"
18"Her eyes flicked to the"
19"Lucien’s hand lifted, not to"
ratio0.932
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
ratio0
17.86% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Not the cautious rap of a delivery boy, but three firm taps that echoed against the warped wood."
1"His tailored charcoal suit hung sharp on his frame, the lapels crisp despite the damp that clung to his shoulders."
2"He nodded, a slow movement that made the platinum strands of his hair catch the light."
3"Lucien’s hand hovered near hers, not quite touching, as if testing the temperature of the space between them."
4"The contact was brief, electric, a spark that seemed to ignite the forgotten warmth between them."
5"The rain outside tapped a steady rhythm against the windowpane, a percussion that matched the quickening of their breaths."
6"The flat remained still, the books and scrolls bearing witness to a reunion forged in uncertainty, the cat Ptolemy stretching lazily on the radiator, oblivious …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, the word barely more than a breath against his skin"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.091
66.9936%