| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.136 | | leniency | 0.273 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 79.30% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "lightly" | | 3 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.77% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1208 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "footfall" | | 1 | "echoed" | | 2 | "glinting" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "fleeting" | | 6 | "flicked" | | 7 | "reminder" | | 8 | "furrowed" | | 9 | "intricate" | | 10 | "traced" | | 11 | "intensity" | | 12 | "simmering" | | 13 | "testament" | | 14 | "electric" | | 15 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "let out a breath" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 12.99% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 44 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 63 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 45 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1204 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 8 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 761 | | uniqueNames | 5 | | maxNameDensity | 0.79 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 2 | | Aurora | 5 | | Lucien | 6 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 44 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "sound that seemed to seal the street outside from the chaos within" | | 1 | "as if testing the temperature of the space between them" | | 2 | "not quite touching, as if testing the temperature of the space between them" | | 3 | "spark that seemed to ignite the forgotten warmth between them" |
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| 33.89% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 1.661 | | wordCount | 1204 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the cautious rap of a delivery boy, but three firm taps" | | 1 | "not to touch her, but to gesture toward the cane" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 63 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 65.28% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 28 | | mean | 43 | | std | 16.27 | | cv | 0.378 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 76 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 71 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 50 | | 8 | 61 | | 9 | 24 | | 10 | 50 | | 11 | 36 | | 12 | 46 | | 13 | 37 | | 14 | 50 | | 15 | 55 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 48 | | 22 | 29 | | 23 | 54 | | 24 | 38 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 14 | | 27 | 35 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 117 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 52.15% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 63 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "Stacks of leather‑bound tomes teetered beside mugs half‑filled with cold tea, and a tabby cat—Ptolemy—lounged on a radiator, his tail twitching at every passing footfall." | | 1 | "One eye—amber, warm like honey—met hers; the other, black as a void, seemed to swallow the light around it." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 765 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 16 | | adverbRatio | 0.02091503267973856 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01045751633986928 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 63 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 63 | | mean | 19.11 | | std | 8.92 | | cv | 0.467 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 26 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 13 | | 4 | 18 | | 5 | 25 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 20 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 4 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 16 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 23 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 45 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 11 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 38 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 33 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 17 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 18 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 22 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 42 | | 43 | 29 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 33 |
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| 58.20% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.3492063492063492 | | totalSentences | 63 | | uniqueOpeners | 22 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 56.36% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit hung" | | 2 | "he said, voice low, the" | | 3 | "She stepped back, the motion" | | 4 | "He entered, closing the door" | | 5 | "He leaned his cane against" | | 6 | "He nodded, a slow movement" | | 7 | "He stepped closer, the distance" | | 8 | "Her eyes flicked to the" | | 9 | "She let out a breath" | | 10 | "He tilted his head, the" | | 11 | "She traced a finger over" | | 12 | "She looked up, her bright" | | 13 | "He stepped forward until his" | | 14 | "She swallowed, the motion making" | | 15 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 16 | "she whispered, the word barely" | | 17 | "He nodded, the movement sending" |
| | ratio | 0.409 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | | 0 | "The rain had softened to" | | 1 | "Stacks of leather‑bound tomes teetered" | | 2 | "Aurora stood at the sink," | | 3 | "She wiped her hands on" | | 4 | "The brass knob turned under" | | 5 | "Lucien filled the doorway, his" | | 6 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 7 | "His tailored charcoal suit hung" | | 8 | "he said, voice low, the" | | 9 | "She stepped back, the motion" | | 10 | "He entered, closing the door" | | 11 | "The latch clicked, a sound" | | 12 | "He leaned his cane against" | | 13 | "Lucien began, his amber eye" | | 14 | "Aurora’s arms crossed over her" | | 15 | "He nodded, a slow movement" | | 16 | "A faint smile tugged at" | | 17 | "He stepped closer, the distance" | | 18 | "Her eyes flicked to the" | | 19 | "Lucien’s hand lifted, not to" |
| | ratio | 0.932 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 44 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 17.86% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 40 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Not the cautious rap of a delivery boy, but three firm taps that echoed against the warped wood." | | 1 | "His tailored charcoal suit hung sharp on his frame, the lapels crisp despite the damp that clung to his shoulders." | | 2 | "He nodded, a slow movement that made the platinum strands of his hair catch the light." | | 3 | "Lucien’s hand hovered near hers, not quite touching, as if testing the temperature of the space between them." | | 4 | "The contact was brief, electric, a spark that seemed to ignite the forgotten warmth between them." | | 5 | "The rain outside tapped a steady rhythm against the windowpane, a percussion that matched the quickening of their breaths." | | 6 | "The flat remained still, the books and scrolls bearing witness to a reunion forged in uncertainty, the cat Ptolemy stretching lazily on the radiator, oblivious …" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, the word barely more than a breath against his skin" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.091 | | leniency | 0.182 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.091 | |