Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFKA5VR1G7Z8AB0EM6J2P1J

Run Details

Duration:
21.3s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock came at eleven-seventeen, a precise and insolent sound that cut through the low murmur of the curry house below and the frantic scratching of Eva’s pen. Rory Carter froze, her own pen hovering over a page of tort law notes, the words blurring into meaningless shapes. It wasn’t Eva’s knock—a hurried, distracted patter. It was measured, authoritative, the kind of knock that didn’t ask for entry so much as assume it would be granted. Her heart gave a dull, heavy thud against her ribs. She knew that knock. A slow breath in. A slower one out. She set the pen down with a click, the sound unnaturally loud in the small, book-choked living room. Ptolemy, tabby fur bristling, leapt from his perch on a stack of journals regarding Bronze Age Celtic ritual and hid behind a tower of anthropology texts. Rory pushed herself up from the floor cushion, the worn denim of her delivery jacket pulling across her shoulders. She’d been meaning to change out of it, but the London night had a damp chill that seeped into the flat’s ancient bones, and the jacket was a heavy, comforting weight. She padded to the door, her bare feet silent on the cluttered floor. Three deadbolts. Eva took security seriously, especially since Rory had come to live here. Rory’s hand hovered over the first cold metal bar. *Don’t answer it. Send him away. It’s been six months.* But her fingers worked the locks anyway—*click, thunk, click*—the sounds echoing like a countdown. She pulled the door open not on the landing she expected, but on him. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow doorway, a figure of sharp contrasts against the dingy fluorescent light of the stairwell. The scent of him reached her first: cool night air, expensive wool, and a faint, clean trace of something like ozone. He wore a charcoal suit that probably cost more than her monthly rent, the fabric sharp at the shoulders, the lines impeccable. In his right hand, the ivory handle of his cane gleamed, its presence a polite fiction. She knew what it concealed. He looked exactly as she remembered, and nothing at all the same. The platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place. But his eyes—that impossible heterochromatic stare, one amber, one black—held a weariness that hadn’t been there before, a fine web of shadows at the corners. His gaze swept over her, quick and thorough, from the disarray of her black hair to the faded logo on her jacket, and it made her skin prizzle with a familiar, unwanted heat. “Rory,” he said. The French accent was always there, a low, textured thing that turned her name into something else, something intimate and foreign. “May I come in?” It wasn’t really a question. It never had been with him. She stepped back, the gesture more instinct than courtesy, and he swept into the room. The space contracted around him. He was tall—five-eleven to her five-six—but it was his presence, not his height, that seemed to press against the walls, the piles of books, the hanging scrolls. He navigated the obstacle course of Eva’s academic life with the unconscious grace of someone used to more opulent, less chaotic spaces. He stopped in the center of the room, near the low coffee table stacked with maps and translation sheets. His gaze didn’t linger on the mess; it found her again. Ptolemy, emboldened or perhaps curious, slunk out from behind his hiding place and wound himself once around Lucien’s ankles, tail held high. A slight, almost imperceptible softening touched Lucien’s expression. He bent, not fully, and stroked the cat’s head with two fingers. “Ptolemy,” he acknowledged. The cat purred, a loud rumble in the tense silence. Traitor. Rory folded her arms, the movement pulling her jacket taut. “It’s late.” “Is it?” He straightened, his attention back on her, fully on her. The air between them seemed to vibrate. “I apologize. My sense of time has been… disordered.” There it was. The opening gambit. The reason, or the excuse, for his vanishing. For the months of radio silence after that night at Silas’s bar, when words had been said—or not said—over the rim of a whiskey glass, and he’d left her standing on the pavement, the city lights swimming, her heart a confused, aching knot. “What do you want, Lucien?” she asked, her voice level. She was proud of that levelness. It was a shield she’d spent years learning to wield, first with her barrister father, then with Evan, and now, with him. He moved then, a step closer, the scent of him intensifying. He didn’t reach for her. He never reached first. That was part of his damn power. “I came to warn you.” A cold finger traced her spine. She kept her face neutral. “About?” “About the questions being asked. In certain circles.” His amber eye seemed to glow in the flat’s weak light. “Your name has come up. In connection with certain… artifacts your friend has been researching. And, by extension, with me.” Rory’s stomach dropped. She thought of the frantic emails from Eva in the last week, the new wards she’d muttered about placing on the door, the sudden increase in locked books. “Eva’s research is academic.” “Academic research into the Malphas Codex is never just academic.” He said the name with a faint, dismissive curl of his lip. “You know this. You’ve been helping her. You know the kind of attention it attracts.” He was right. She did know. The world he inhabited, the one he’d reluctantly, then intimately, pulled her into, was one of shifting allegiances and ancient, hungry things. She’d learned the hard way that knowledge was a currency, and some debts were collected in blood. “How did you find out?” she asked, sidestepping the larger, more terrifying question of what she was going to do about it. A ghost of a smile touched his lips. “I am a fixer, Rory. Information is my trade. And some old debts… are paid in kind.” He didn’t elaborate. He never did. The web of favors and threats that was his life was a labyrinth she could only ever see the edges of. Silence stretched, thick and heavy. The only sounds were the distant bass thrum from the curry house and Ptolemy’s continued purring. Rory’s mind raced, calculating, planning, the way her father had taught her. *Identify the threat. Assess the source. Formulate a response.* But under the cool, strategic layer, something else churned. Hurt. A deep, stupid, embarrassing hurt that she’d thought she’d excised. He had disappeared. Not with a fight, or a goodbye, or even a decent excuse. He’d just… stopped being there. After a night where the air had been thick with unspoken things, where she’d seen a flicker of something raw and real behind his polished façade, and she’d dared to think— “Why warn me?” she said, the words sharper than she intended. “You could have sent a note. A bloody text message.” He took another step. He was close enough now that she could see the faint scar above his left eyebrow, a silver line she’d never been allowed to ask about. “A text would not convey the urgency. And it would not allow me to see…” His gaze dropped to her mouth for a fraction of a second before returning to her eyes. “…how you are.” The air crackled. It was always like this. The push and pull. The conversation that was never just about the words. He saw her too clearly, read her too well, and it terrified her. “I’m fine,” she clipped out. “I’m working. I’m safe.” “Safe is a relative term in this city.” His voice was a low hum. “Especially for those who walk between worlds. You, more than most.” She bristled. “Don’t you dare paint me as some fragile thing you need to rescue, Lucien. I survived Evan. I built a life here. I don’t need your—” “Protection?” he finished softly, and the word hung in the air, laced with a hundred meanings. “I do not offer protection, Rory. I offer information. A warning. What you do with it…” He shrugged, a fluid, elegant motion that expressed everything and nothing. “That is your choice. As it always has been.” He turned to leave. The movement was so decisive, so final, that it triggered a panic in her chest, wild and bright. *Let him go,* said the cool, smart part of her brain. *Let him walk away. It’s easier.* But her feet moved. “Wait.” He paused, his back to her, one hand on the doorframe. He didn’t turn around. The words were stuck somewhere between her throat and her teeth. She forced them out, rough and ungraceful. “Why did you really come? Tonight. Here.” A long, taut moment passed. Then, slowly, he turned his head, just enough that she could see his profile, the sharp line of his jaw, the heterochromatic eyes watching her from the corner of his vision. “Because,” he said, his voice barely above a whisper, and the French accent was thicker now, a sign of something unguarded, “it has been six months. And I have been… unquiet. Seeing your face seemed preferable to the alternative of imagining it in danger.” The honesty of it was a physical blow. It stripped away all the layers of strategy and warning, leaving only the raw, terrifying truth. He had missed her. In whatever broken, complicated way a half-demon fixer could miss a human woman who delivered noodles for a living and read law textbooks on the floor. Rory’s breath hitched. The hurt was still there, a sharp stone in her gut, but now it was joined by something else, something warm and dangerous that unfurled in her chest. She looked at him, really looked. The impeccable suit was a mask. The weary shadows under his eyes were real. The way his fingers tightened slightly on the doorframe spoke of tension, of a will held barely in check. She could close the door. Lock it. Go back to her notes and pretend he’d never been here. She could let the stone of hurt be the only thing she felt. Or she could step into the storm he represented. Again. She uncrossed her arms. The movement felt monumental. “The kettle’s just boiled,” she said, her voice quiet but steady in the small room. “And I have questions. A lot of them.” The faintest flicker of something—surprise? relief?—passed through his eyes. He pushed off from the doorframe and took a step back into the room, into the circle of weak lamplight, into her space. “Good,” Lucien Moreau said, and for the first time that night, a real smile touched his lips, small and dangerous and devastatingly familiar. “I was hoping you would.”
created_at"2026-03-11T23:22:04.547Z" 3/11/2026, 11:22:04 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he finished softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.457
leniency0.914
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.057
77.90% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count3
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"barely above a whisper"
count1
5
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"reluctantly"
2"softly"
3"slowly"
4"barely above a whisper"
5"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.70% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1810
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"measured"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"comforting"
count1
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"silence"
count3
9
word"sense of"
count1
10
word"traced"
count1
11
word"stomach"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"calculating"
count1
14
word"churned"
count1
15
word"unspoken"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count2
17
word"eyebrow"
count1
18
word"whisper"
count1
19
word"tension"
count1
highlights
0"measured"
1"chill"
2"comforting"
3"weight"
4"echoing"
5"familiar"
6"navigated"
7"chaotic"
8"silence"
9"sense of"
10"traced"
11"stomach"
12"raced"
13"calculating"
14"churned"
15"unspoken"
16"flicker"
17"eyebrow"
18"whisper"
19"tension"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences139
matches
0"was proud"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences139
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences157
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords31
totalWords1802
ratio0.017
matches
0"Don’t answer it. Send him away. It’s been six months."
1"click, thunk, click"
2"Identify the threat. Assess the source. Formulate a response."
3"Let him go,"
4"Let him walk away. It’s easier."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1535
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
Carter1
Bronze1
Age1
Celtic1
London1
Rory8
Moreau2
French2
Lucien4
Silas1
Evan1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Silas"
6"Evan"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"something like ozone"
1"height, that seemed to press against the walls, the piles of books, the hanging scrolls"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.555
wordCount1802
matches
0"not on the landing she expected, but on him"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences157
matches
0"knew that knock"
1"hurt that she’d"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean39.17
std23.25
cv0.594
sampleLengths
076
114
2102
346
428
583
683
728
880
972
1014
1112
1228
1357
1438
1532
1612
1739
1835
1937
2045
2122
2252
2342
2471
2521
2665
2734
289
2925
3028
3152
3239
335
3415
3525
3636
3744
3854
3970
4031
4110
428
4323
4432
4528
90.12% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences139
matches
0"was slicked"
1"been said"
2"were collected"
3"been allowed"
4"were stuck"
5"was joined"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs233
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences157
ratio0.057
matches
0"It wasn’t Eva’s knock—a hurried, distracted patter."
1"But her fingers worked the locks anyway—*click, thunk, click*—the sounds echoing like a countdown."
2"But his eyes—that impossible heterochromatic stare, one amber, one black—held a weariness that hadn’t been there before, a fine web of shadows at the corners."
3"He was tall—five-eleven to her five-six—but it was his presence, not his height, that seemed to press against the walls, the piles of books, the hanging scrolls."
4"His gaze didn’t linger on the mess; it found her again."
5"For the months of radio silence after that night at Silas’s bar, when words had been said—or not said—over the rim of a whiskey glass, and he’d left her standing on the pavement, the city lights swimming, her heart a confused, aching knot."
6"After a night where the air had been thick with unspoken things, where she’d seen a flicker of something raw and real behind his polished façade, and she’d dared to think—"
7"The faintest flicker of something—surprise?"
8"relief?—passed through his eyes."
93.95% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1548
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, book-choked living"
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.040051679586563305
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.014857881136950904
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences157
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences157
mean11.48
std9.06
cv0.789
sampleLengths
028
120
27
321
410
54
64
74
818
926
1019
1131
1213
132
1412
159
163
173
184
1914
2014
2119
2221
2322
2416
255
2612
2713
2825
2933
303
3121
324
335
346
3515
365
3727
3822
3919
4011
4122
428
4312
443
4510
461
4710
482
4912
43.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats18
diversityRatio0.33121019108280253
totalSentences157
uniqueOpeners52
25.84% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"Then, slowly, he turned his"
ratio0.008
27.75% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences129
matches
0"It wasn’t Eva’s knock—a hurried,"
1"It was measured, authoritative, the"
2"Her heart gave a dull,"
3"She knew that knock."
4"She set the pen down"
5"She’d been meaning to change"
6"She padded to the door,"
7"It’s been six months.*"
8"She pulled the door open"
9"He wore a charcoal suit"
10"She knew what it concealed."
11"He looked exactly as she"
12"His gaze swept over her,"
13"It wasn’t really a question."
14"It never had been with"
15"She stepped back, the gesture"
16"He was tall—five—eleven to her"
17"He navigated the obstacle course"
18"He stopped in the center"
19"His gaze didn’t linger on"
ratio0.481
45.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences129
matches
0"The knock came at eleven-seventeen,"
1"Rory Carter froze, her own"
2"It wasn’t Eva’s knock—a hurried,"
3"It was measured, authoritative, the"
4"Her heart gave a dull,"
5"She knew that knock."
6"A slow breath in."
7"A slower one out."
8"She set the pen down"
9"Ptolemy, tabby fur bristling, leapt"
10"Rory pushed herself up from"
11"She’d been meaning to change"
12"She padded to the door,"
13"Eva took security seriously, especially"
14"Rory’s hand hovered over the"
15"It’s been six months.*"
16"She pulled the door open"
17"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
18"The scent of him reached"
19"He wore a charcoal suit"
ratio0.829
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She’d been meaning to change out of it, but the London night had a damp chill that seeped into the flat’s ancient bones, and the jacket was a heavy, comforting …"
1"But his eyes—that impossible heterochromatic stare, one amber, one black—held a weariness that hadn’t been there before, a fine web of shadows at the corners."
2"The French accent was always there, a low, textured thing that turned her name into something else, something intimate and foreign."
3"He was tall—five-eleven to her five-six—but it was his presence, not his height, that seemed to press against the walls, the piles of books, the hanging scrolls…"
4"In whatever broken, complicated way a half-demon fixer could miss a human woman who delivered noodles for a living and read law textbooks on the floor."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he finished softly, and the word hung in the air, laced with a hundred meanings"
1"she said, her voice quiet but steady in the small room"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.257
leniency0.514
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.057
77.9461%