| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 87.99% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "slightly" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "lazily" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 43.96% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1249 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "gloom" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "shattered" | | 5 | "charged" | | 6 | "electric" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "dancing" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "reminder" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 68.97% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 116 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "managed to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "happened to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 116 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1242 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 35 | | wordCount | 1242 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.64 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Thorne" | | discoveredNames | | Romilly | 1 | | Street | 2 | | Quinn | 8 | | Old | 1 | | Compton | 1 | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Elias | 1 | | Thorne | 8 | | Leicester | 1 | | Square | 1 | | Covent | 1 | | Garden | 1 | | Morris | 3 | | Veil | 1 | | Market | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Quinn" | | 1 | "Elias" | | 2 | "Thorne" | | 3 | "Morris" |
| | places | | 0 | "Romilly" | | 1 | "Street" | | 2 | "Old" | | 3 | "Compton" | | 4 | "Raven" | | 5 | "Leicester" | | 6 | "Covent" | | 7 | "Garden" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 88.27% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "blades that seemed to drink the light; scrolls that unrolled themselves, displaying moving, miniature scenes" | | 1 | "looked like human hair" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.805 | | wordCount | 1242 | | matches | | 0 | "not the sound of a single conversation but of dozens" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.50% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 23 | | mean | 54 | | std | 26.53 | | cv | 0.491 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 80 | | 1 | 119 | | 2 | 53 | | 3 | 64 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 77 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 53 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 47 | | 10 | 60 | | 11 | 11 | | 12 | 5 | | 13 | 74 | | 14 | 94 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 56 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 44 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 81 |
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| 96.19% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "was littered" | | 1 | "were tiled" | | 2 | "were covered" | | 3 | "was absorbed" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "was funneling" | | 1 | "was heading" | | 2 | "wasn’t hiding" | | 3 | "wasn’t running" | | 4 | "was leading" | | 5 | "was cloying" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 116 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "Fifty yards ahead, the silhouette of her quarry—a wiry figure in a dark hoodie—darted around the corner toward Old Compton Street." | | 1 | "This suspect, Elias Thorne, had slipped out the back alley, but not before Quinn, stationed in a rented flat across the way, saw the telltale handoff—a small, flat package passed from Thorne’s hand to another man’s." | | 2 | "She caught glimpses of him—scrambling up a rusted maintenance ladder set into the wall." | | 3 | "The air felt different here—thinner, charged with something almost electric." | | 4 | "She could hear voices inside—a low, overlapping murmur, not the sound of a single conversation but of dozens." | | 5 | "The source of the amber glow wasn’t electric light but a series of floating lanterns, each containing a flame that burned a different color—gold, violet, green." | | 6 | "Figures in cloaks and hooded robes haggled over stalls laden with objects that defied description: jars of luminous, floating moss; blades that seemed to drink the light; scrolls that unrolled themselves, displaying moving, miniature scenes." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1252 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 20 | | adverbRatio | 0.01597444089456869 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006389776357827476 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 116 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 116 | | mean | 10.71 | | std | 7.16 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 21 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 21 | | 12 | 36 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 9 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 13 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 13 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 14 | | 36 | 8 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 12 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 38.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.29310344827586204 | | totalSentences | 116 | | uniqueOpeners | 34 | |
| 61.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Too close for him to" | | 1 | "Just the drip of water" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 95.23% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "She didn’t shout." | | 1 | "Her left hand brushed the" | | 2 | "She’d cut across alleys, using" | | 3 | "He veered left, not right" | | 4 | "He was funneling himself into" | | 5 | "Her legs burned, a familiar" | | 6 | "She kept her breathing even," | | 7 | "He was heading for the" | | 8 | "He disappeared down a service" | | 9 | "She slipped her weapon from" | | 10 | "She clicked on her flashlight," | | 11 | "She advanced, weapon steady, her" | | 12 | "He wasn’t hiding." | | 13 | "He was moving." | | 14 | "She caught glimpses of him—scrambling" | | 15 | "He hauled himself through a" | | 16 | "She emerged into another service" | | 17 | "He wasn’t running anymore." | | 18 | "He was leading her." | | 19 | "It stood slightly ajar, a" |
| | ratio | 0.312 | |
| 15.05% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | 0 | "Rain slicked the cobblestones of" | | 1 | "Harlow Quinn’s polished shoes slapped" | | 2 | "The fabric of her trench" | | 3 | "The man moved with a" | | 4 | "She didn’t shout." | | 5 | "Commands were for open ground," | | 6 | "This was a hunt through" | | 7 | "Her left hand brushed the" | | 8 | "The digital face read 23:47." | | 9 | "The hunt had started at" | | 10 | "A place of faded maps" | | 11 | "This suspect, Elias Thorne, had" | | 12 | "She’d cut across alleys, using" | | 13 | "He veered left, not right" | | 14 | "He was funneling himself into" | | 15 | "The chase wound through streets" | | 16 | "Her legs burned, a familiar" | | 17 | "She kept her breathing even," | | 18 | "A military precision she’d adopted" | | 19 | "Thorne scrambled over a low" |
| | ratio | 0.89 | |
| 45.87% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 57 | | technicalSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn cleared it without breaking stride, her coat flaring out behind her." | | 1 | "Figures in cloaks and hooded robes haggled over stalls laden with objects that defied description: jars of luminous, floating moss; blades that seemed to drink …" | | 2 | "The iron door swung shut behind her with a final, resonant clang that was absorbed by the larger noise of the market." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |