| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 18 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.818 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 93.01% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 26.62% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "throbbed" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "whisper" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "throb" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "marble" | | 9 | "vibrated" | | 10 | "desire" | | 11 | "yearning" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "flicker" | | 14 | "resolve" | | 15 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | matches | | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 88 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 92 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 32 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1427 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 16 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 33 | | wordCount | 1287 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.85 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 11 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Blade | 3 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Isolde | 7 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "vibration that seemed to push back the cloying perfume" | | 1 | "whisper that seemed to come from all directions at once" | | 2 | "sounded like the crackle of fire and the s" | | 3 | "as if listening" | | 4 | "as if retreating into slumber" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.504 | | wordCount | 1427 | | matches | | 0 | "not to touch but to sense" | | 1 | "not from the pendant but from somewhere deeper" | | 2 | "not from the flesh but from the space around it, a chorus of sighs" | | 3 | "not to strike, but to point toward the opening in the arch" | | 4 | "neither pure hunger nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 92 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.06% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 24 | | mean | 59.46 | | std | 13.93 | | cv | 0.234 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 78 | | 1 | 50 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 71 | | 4 | 56 | | 5 | 71 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 69 | | 8 | 54 | | 9 | 46 | | 10 | 70 | | 11 | 67 | | 12 | 63 | | 13 | 92 | | 14 | 62 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 74 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 49 | | 20 | 44 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 50 | | 23 | 73 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 88 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 234 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 5 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 92 | | ratio | 0.054 | | matches | | 0 | "The scent intensified—ripe peaches, burnt sugar, a hint of spice that made Aurora’s throat tighten." | | 1 | "A small figure darted out—half‑human, half‑vine, eyes wide and luminous." | | 2 | "Heat rose, not from the pendant but from somewhere deeper—a yearning she had not felt since leaving Cardiff." | | 3 | "Their faces, previously seruine, now showed a flicker of alarm—eyes wide, mouths open in silent surprise." | | 4 | "The heart gave a soft throb, and a voice emerged—not from the flesh but from the space around it, a chorus of sighs and laughter intertwined." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1292 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.01934984520123839 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007739938080495356 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 92 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 92 | | mean | 15.51 | | std | 6.76 | | cv | 0.436 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 23 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 14 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 32 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 11 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 20 | | 39 | 25 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 13 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 27 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 14 | | 49 | 31 |
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| 54.35% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.358695652173913 | | totalSentences | 92 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere far off, a feast" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 85.12% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Their eyes, faint violets, scanned" | | 1 | "It throbbed faintly, a warm" | | 2 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 3 | "she said, voice low" | | 4 | "she murmured, words winding like" | | 5 | "They moved forward, boots sinking" | | 6 | "He lifted a ladle, a" | | 7 | "His words rang, bright and" | | 8 | "She gripped the Fae‑Forged Blade" | | 9 | "she said, stepping forward" | | 10 | "she said, voice a soft" | | 11 | "She turned her gaze to" | | 12 | "It held a bunch of" | | 13 | "it chirped, voice like wind" | | 14 | "they said, their voice a" | | 15 | "They reached out, a tendril" | | 16 | "she asked, her tone curious," | | 17 | "She pressed it to her" | | 18 | "They stopped before the platter," | | 19 | "She closed her eyes, and" |
| | ratio | 0.337 | |
| 6.51% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The veil gave way with" | | 1 | "The sky above hung warm" | | 2 | "Vines coiled around stone pillars" | | 3 | "Nyx slipped from shadow to" | | 4 | "Their eyes, faint violets, scanned" | | 5 | "Isolde followed, her silver hair" | | 6 | "Aurora lifted the Heartstone Pendant" | | 7 | "It throbbed faintly, a warm" | | 8 | "She glanced at Nyx." | | 9 | "she said, voice low" | | 10 | "Nyx inclined their head, a" | | 11 | "Isolde’s lips twitched, a smile" | | 12 | "she murmured, words winding like" | | 13 | "They moved forward, boots sinking" | | 14 | "The scent intensified—ripe peaches, burnt" | | 15 | "Platters bowed under the weight" | | 16 | "A group of figures in" | | 17 | "He lifted a ladle, a" | | 18 | "His words rang, bright and" | | 19 | "Aurora felt a prickle at" |
| | ratio | 0.907 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky above hung warm amber, a low glow that made the air feel thick and sweet." | | 1 | "They moved forward, boots sinking into loam that gave underfoot like fresh dough." | | 2 | "The scent intensified—ripe peaches, burnt sugar, a hint of spice that made Aurora’s throat tighten." | | 3 | "Platters bowed under the weight of roasted fowl glazed in gold, bowls of steaming broth that sent spirals of fragrance skyward, platters of pastries dripping wi…" | | 4 | "A group of figures in chef’s whites laughed, their voices booming as they tossed ingredients into cauldrons that hissed and sang." | | 5 | "Nyx drifted to her left, their form shifting between solid and wisp, eyes never leaving the laughing cook." | | 6 | "They reached out, a tendril of shadow brushing the hovering grape, and the fruit dissolved into a mist that curled around Nyx’s wrist before vanishing." | | 7 | "Beyond the tables, the orchard opened into a cavernous hall where arches of sugar‑spun glass supported a ceiling that resembled a midnight sky studded with cand…" | | 8 | "Nyx moved ahead, their form slipping between the legs of the chanting figures, shadow pooling at their feet before springing back into shape." | | 9 | "Nyx lunged, a blur of shadow, and swept a shard away from Aurora’s head with a tendril of darkness that coiled like smoke." | | 10 | "The heart on the platter shuddered, its beat accelerating, then slowing as if listening." | | 11 | "The child‑vine bowed, its vines retracting into the earth as if retreating into slumber." | | 12 | "Nyx slipped forward, their shadow elongating, merging with the shaft of light until they became a silhouette of darkness framed by gold." | | 13 | "Somewhere far off, a feast continued, but the group walked on, hearts attuned to a rhythm that was neither pure hunger nor pure hope, but something newly forged…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 18 | | uselessAdditionCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "she said, voice low" | | 1 | "she murmured, words winding like a vine" | | 2 | "she asked, her tone curious, not demanding" | | 3 | "she said, voice steady" | | 4 | "She swallowed, the taste of iron on her tongue, and said," | | 5 | "it said, eyes glittering" | | 6 | "she asked, voice firm, no hint of pleading" |
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| 25.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "it chirped (chirp)" | | 2 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.545 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |