| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.98% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1109 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "loomed" | | 1 | "sentinels" | | 2 | "footfall" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "charm" | | 7 | "silence" | | 8 | "echoed" | | 9 | "wavering" | | 10 | "pulse" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "stark" | | 13 | "etched" | | 14 | "weight" | | 15 | "pounding" | | 16 | "throb" | | 17 | "footsteps" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 3 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "clenched fists" | | 1 | "clenched her jaw" | | 2 | "clenched her fists" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 36.25% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 67 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 1103 | | ratio | 0.003 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 10 | | wordCount | 1099 | | uniqueNames | 3 | | maxNameDensity | 0.73 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | | persons | | | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | glossingSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a distant chord struck on a s" | | 1 | "susurrus that seemed to come from the stones themselves, as if the ancient oak were whispering in a language older than speech" | | 2 | "not quite a shape, more a suggestion of height and breadth that dissolved when she stared directly at it" | | 3 | "as if exhaling" | | 4 | "seam that seemed to pulse in time with the warmth against her skin" | | 5 | "as though warning her not to stray too far" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.626 | | wordCount | 1103 | | matches | | 0 | "not painful, but insistent, like the warning of a static charge before a stor" | | 1 | "not in any language she knew, but in a feeling" | | 2 | "not solid, but a coalescing of shadow" | | 3 | "neither advancing nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 25 | | mean | 44.12 | | std | 27.4 | | cv | 0.621 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 58 | | 3 | 40 | | 4 | 72 | | 5 | 43 | | 6 | 77 | | 7 | 52 | | 8 | 33 | | 9 | 21 | | 10 | 30 | | 11 | 151 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 29 | | 14 | 47 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 44 | | 17 | 62 | | 18 | 54 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 14 | | 21 | 44 | | 22 | 42 | | 23 | 37 | | 24 | 48 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 67 | | ratio | 0.104 | | matches | | 0 | "It was not the wind; it lacked the fickle quality of a breeze and instead felt like a distant chord struck on a string buried deep." | | 1 | "She remembered the old tales her mother used to tell—of gateways that appeared when the world thinned, of places where time stretched like taffy." | | 2 | "In that light, she saw it—a thin line of darkness that ran along the base of the nearest stone, a seam that seemed to pulse in time with the warmth against her skin." | | 3 | "For a heartbeat, the shadows recoiled, revealing the grove in stark detail—each leaf, each stone, each blade of grass etched with impossible clarity." | | 4 | "From the seam, a shape began to emerge—not solid, but a coalescing of shadow and mist, taller than a man, its edges fraying like smoke caught in a draft." | | 5 | "Instead, the air around it rippled, and the seam widened another fraction, revealing a glimpse of something beyond—an expanse of star‑streaked sky that did not belong to this world, a landscape of jagged black mountains under a violet moon." | | 6 | "The grove stood silent behind her, the stones standing as they had for centuries, but she knew, with a certainty that settled like ice in her gut, that something had watched her cross its threshold—and it was not done with her yet." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1105 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 30 | | adverbRatio | 0.027149321266968326 | | lyAdverbCount | 3 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0027149321266968325 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 67 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 67 | | mean | 16.46 | | std | 8.4 | | cv | 0.51 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 21 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 19 | | 7 | 21 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 26 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 29 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 39 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 5 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 10 | | 31 | 20 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 33 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 21 | | 41 | 22 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 23 | | 47 | 15 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 42.54% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.23880597014925373 | | totalSentences | 67 | | uniqueOpeners | 16 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, a low hum rose" | | 1 | "Then the light snapped back," | | 2 | "Instead, the air around it" |
| | ratio | 0.045 | |
| 88.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "She stepped onto the soft" | | 2 | "She froze, eyes scanning the" | | 3 | "She inhaled, the aroma sharp" | | 4 | "She lifted the charm, watching" | | 5 | "She pressed back against the" | | 6 | "It was not the wind;" | | 7 | "She lifted her chin, listening." | | 8 | "She remembered the old tales" | | 9 | "She swallowed, heart hammering against" | | 10 | "She lifted her foot, and" | | 11 | "She stopped, listening again." | | 12 | "It came from the direction" | | 13 | "She stepped closer, the moss" | | 14 | "She raised her free hand," | | 15 | "She wanted to pull back," | | 16 | "It hovered, neither advancing nor" | | 17 | "She whispered, voice hoarse, The" | | 18 | "She felt the pull intensify," | | 19 | "She clenched her fists, nails" |
| | ratio | 0.328 | |
| 49.55% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 55 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 1 | "Aurora had come to the" | | 2 | "The standing stones loomed like" | | 3 | "She stepped onto the soft" | | 4 | "A rustle came from the" | | 5 | "She froze, eyes scanning the" | | 6 | "A breath of air brushed" | | 7 | "She inhaled, the aroma sharp" | | 8 | "She lifted the charm, watching" | | 9 | "The glow was steady, not" | | 10 | "A twig snapped farther in," | | 11 | "Aurora turned her head, but" | | 12 | "She pressed back against the" | | 13 | "It was not the wind;" | | 14 | "She lifted her chin, listening." | | 15 | "The hum faded, replaced by" | | 16 | "Aurora’s fingers tightened around the" | | 17 | "Warmth spread from the gem," | | 18 | "She remembered the old tales" | | 19 | "A movement caught her eye" |
| | ratio | 0.821 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "She lifted the charm, watching the deep crimson stone catch the faint starlight that filtered through the canopy." | | 1 | "The hum faded, replaced by a soft susurrus that seemed to come from the stones themselves, as if the ancient oak were whispering in a language older than speech…" | | 2 | "She remembered the old tales her mother used to tell—of gateways that appeared when the world thinned, of places where time stretched like taffy." | | 3 | "The crimson glow intensified, casting a wavering light that painted the nearby trunks in shades of blood and rust." | | 4 | "In that light, she saw it—a thin line of darkness that ran along the base of the nearest stone, a seam that seemed to pulse in time with the warmth against her …" | | 5 | "Instead, the air around it rippled, and the seam widened another fraction, revealing a glimpse of something beyond—an expanse of star‑streaked sky that did not …" | | 6 | "She felt the pull intensify, a gentle insistence that tugged at the very marrow of her bones." | | 7 | "Heart pounding, Aurora took a step back, the moss sucking at her heel as if reluctant to let her go." | | 8 | "The pendant’s glow dimmed to a faint throb, as though warning her not to stray too far." | | 9 | "As she moved, the grove seemed to inhale, the trees leaning inward, their branches interlocking to form a living wall." | | 10 | "The path she had taken moments before vanished, replaced by a thicket of thorny vines that glistened with dew in the pendant’s feeble light." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "She whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |