Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFKFRP7X4PDJB3SS7M9VFXY

Run Details

Duration:
48.8s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oaks of Richmond Park stood like sentinels against the bruised twilight sky. Aurora Carter pushed through a thicket of holly that scratched at her jacket, the damp soil sucking at her boots. She checked her phone again. No signal. Hadn’t been for the last ten minutes of walking. The map she’d memorized was a useless scrap in her memory now, replaced by a raw, animal instinct. This was it. The old oak with the split trunk, exactly as the note described. She stepped into the clearing. It wasn't a clearing so much as a void in the forest. The grass, impossibly green even in the fading light, was studded with wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—a riot of color that should have been months dead. In the center, a ring of ancient standing stones, each one rough-hewn and taller than she was, formed a broken circle. The air here tasted different. Clean, like after a storm, but with a mineral tang, like licking a battery. The silence was a physical weight, pressing against her eardrums. *This is the place.* The thought didn't comfort. She’d come because of the pendant. The small, crimson stone, cool against her sternum, had been a mystery since it arrived in a plain brown envelope three weeks ago. No return address. Just a single, typewritten line: *It will guide you when the grove calls.* She’d dismissed it as a prank, until last night. She’d been dreaming of this exact place—the stones, the wildflowers, the oppressive quiet. She’d woken with the pendant pulsing a faint, steady warmth against her skin, a heat that hadn’t faded until she’d made the decision to come. Now, standing at the edge of the ring, it felt like a mistake. The wrongness wasn’t in any single thing. It was in the total, absolute lack of wrongness. No birdsong. No rustle of small animals. No distant hum of the city that should have been a constant, subliminal presence this close to London. Even the wind died the moment she crossed the threshold of oaks, as if snuffed out. She took a step toward the nearest stone. Her boot crunched on something. She looked down. Acorns, hundreds of them, carpeted the ground around the stone’s base. They were dark, almost black, and when she nudged one with her toe, it didn’t roll. It *clicked*. Hollow. She bent, picked one up. It was light as a feather, the shell brittle. She squeezed. It crumbled to dust in her fingers, a fine, grey powder that smelled faintly of decay. Not the rot of leaf mold, but something sweeter, cloying. She brushed her hands on her jeans, her heart starting a low, hard drum against her ribs. *Just leave. Turn around. Walk back to the car.* But the pendant grew warmer, a gentle pressure, like a hand resting on her chest. A guide. Or a chain. She moved into the circle. The air grew thicker, syrupy. Sound warped. The crunch of her own footsteps seemed to come a half-second late, an echo that didn’t match her pace. She stopped. The delayed crunch stopped a moment after. A cold sweat pricked the back of her neck. From the corner of her eye, something moved. A flicker, low to the ground, near the base of the farthest stone. She whipped her head around. Nothing. Just the riot of impossible flowers, their petals trembling in a wind she couldn’t feel. "Hello?" Her voice was a swallowed thing, dead in the still air. No echo answered. She forced herself forward, her gaze darting between the stones. They weren't uniform. Up close, she saw carvings. Not Celtic knots or runes she recognized. These were spirals that twisted into shapes that hurt to follow—angles that seemed to fold back on themselves, creating illusions of depth in the flat rock. Her eyes watered. She looked away, at her feet. The acorns weren't just around the stones. They were everywhere, a brittle carpet. And among them, other things. A child's marble, clouded and milky. A single, brass key, green with verdigris. A plastic soldier, melted and warped into a scream. Lost things. Discarded things. A sound. Not a crunch. A whisper. The dry skitter of something light being dragged. It came from behind her. She spun. The circle of stones was empty. The wildflowers swayed, though no wind touched her face. The pendant flared, a sudden spike of warmth that made her gasp. It wasn't just warm now. It was hot, pulsing in a quick, urgent rhythm. *Thump-thump. Thump-thump.* Like a second heart. She clutched it through her shirt, the metal chain biting into her neck. The heat was centered on the stone, but it spread, a tingling sensation racing down her arms, making the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch. The skittering came again, closer. From her left. She looked. A shadow, long and impossibly thin, stretched from the base of one stone toward another. It wasn't cast by anything. The light was flat, shadowless. Yet this one moved, sliding over the acorns, making them rustle. The shadow stopped. It pooled. Then, it began to *rise*. Not as a person. As a shape, a suggestion of limbs too long, a head too narrow. It formed from the darkness between the stones, not solid, but a hole in the world. The acorns beneath it didn't crumble. They sank, silently, into the ground as if the earth had turned to water. A breath of air touched her cheek, cold and smelling of that sweet decay. It carried a voice, or the memory of one. A dry, sibilant whisper that didn't come to her ears, but formed directly in the base of her skull. *Lost… thing…* Rory’s training—her cool head, her out-of-the-box thinking—deserted her. There was no box here. There was only the primal, screaming imperative to run. She bolted. She made it two steps before her boot caught on a root—or what felt like a root. She pitched forward, hands out to break her fall. They hit the ground not on soft earth, but on something slick, cold, and yielding. She looked. Her palms were pressed against the flat surface of one of the standing stones. It was lying on its side. But she’d just been standing in the center of the ring. All the stones had been upright. She scrambled back, crab-walking through the acorns. They crunched and popped under her, releasing puffs of that sweet, rotten dust. The grove had changed. The stones weren’t in a circle anymore. They were scattered, leaning at drunken angles, creating a maze of narrow, shadowed corridors between them. The wildflowers grew in tangled, thorny mats now, their colors muted to greys and deep purples. The pendant’s heat was a branding iron against her skin. The pulse was frantic, matching the terrified hammer of her own heart. The shadow was gone. But the skittering was everywhere, a constant, dry rustle, like dead leaves blown over pavement. It came from all directions at once. She was turned around. Which way was out? Every gap between the stones looked the same, a maw of deeper darkness. She picked a direction, any direction, and ran. The corridor of stones seemed to stretch, the far end no closer no matter how fast she moved. The skittering kept pace, a chorus now, coming from the stones themselves, from the ground, from the air. *Not alone. Not alone. Not alone.* The thought was a scream in her mind. She risked a glance over her shoulder. Nothing followed in the corridor. But in the next lane over, parallel to hers, a shape loped alongside her on all fours, matching her speed. It was a thing of jointed angles and stretched skin, a mockery of a deer or a dog, its form flickering like a bad film reel. It turned its head—a smooth, featureless ovoid—and though it had no eyes, she felt its regard. She put on a burst of speed, lungs burning. The end of the corridor appeared. She burst out of the stone maze and skidded to a halt. She was back in the center. The stones were upright again, in their perfect, broken circle. The wildflowers were vibrant, alive. The acorns were a dark carpet at her feet. It was as if she’d run in a circle, a frantic rat in a celestial maze. But something was different. In the very center of the ring, where she had first stood, the air shimmered. It looked like heat haze, but it was cold. Through the distortion, she didn’t see the other side of the grove. She saw a landscape of grey ash under a crimson sky. Jagged shapes, like broken teeth, rose in the distance. And from that wavering view came a sound, a low, resonant hum that vibrated in her bones. It was the sound the pendant’s pulse was trying to mimic. A Hel portal. The note hadn’t mentioned a portal. Only a grove that called. The pendant was no longer just warm. It was blazing, a tiny star against her chest, its inner glow visible through the fabric of her shirt. It wasn’t guiding her to safety. It was guiding her *here*. To this. The skittering stopped. The sudden silence was worse. From the space between two stones directly across from her, a figure stepped. It looked, at first, like a woman. Tall, slender, draped in something that might have been a dress woven from spider silk and shadow. But the proportions were wrong. The arms were too long, the fingers ending in points that brushed the grass. The head tilted, a slow, bird-like motion. The face was a smooth, pale oval, and where eyes should have been, there were two dark smudges, like thumbprints in clay. The mouth was a thin, lipless line. It did not walk. It glided over the acorns, making no sound. It stopped at the edge of the shimmering portal, its featureless face turned toward Rory. The voice was in her head again, clearer now, layered with whispers. *The lost thing… brought the key. Good.* Rory’s hand went to the pendant, to tear it off, to throw it. Her fingers closed around the hot stone. She pulled. The chain didn’t break. It tightened, the links biting into the back of her neck. The heat seared her palm. She cried out, but the sound died, swallowed by the grove. The figure raised one long, pointed hand. It gestured, not at Rory, but at the portal. The shimmering widened, the view of the grey, ashen world growing clearer. The humming grew louder, a tuneless, grinding song. The grove wasn't a place. It was a lock. And she, with her pendant, had just turned the key.
created_at"2026-03-11T23:25:07.668Z" 3/11/2026, 11:25:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
97.21% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1794
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"oppressive"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count2
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"echo"
count2
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"marble"
count1
9
word"whisper"
count2
10
word"racing"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"maw"
count1
13
word"perfect"
count1
14
word"shimmered"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
16
word"vibrated"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"silence"
2"weight"
3"oppressive"
4"warmth"
5"footsteps"
6"echo"
7"flicker"
8"marble"
9"whisper"
10"racing"
11"pulse"
12"maw"
13"perfect"
14"shimmered"
15"wavering"
16"vibrated"
17"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences205
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences205
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans10
markdownWords41
totalWords1785
ratio0.023
matches
0"This is the place."
1"It will guide you when the grove calls."
2"clicked"
3"Just leave. Turn around. Walk back to the car."
4"Thump-thump. Thump-thump."
5"rise"
6"Lost… thing…"
7"Not alone. Not alone. Not alone."
8"here"
9"The lost thing… brought the key. Good."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions11
wordCount1784
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.22
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Carter1
London1
Celtic1
Like1
Rory4
Hel1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Like"
2"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences125
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a mistake"
1"angles that seemed to fold back on themselves, creating illusions of depth in the flat rock"
2"felt like a root"
3"It was as if she’d run in a circle, a frantic rat in a celestial maze"
4"looked like heat haze, but it was cold"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.241
wordCount1785
matches
0"Not the rot of leaf mold, but something sweeter, cloying"
1"not solid, but a hole in the world"
2"not on soft earth, but on something slick, cold"
3"not at Rory, but at the portal"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences205
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean38.8
std27.44
cv0.707
sampleLengths
082
15
286
38
492
570
662
743
89
920
1049
1142
1215
1360
1444
1515
165
1717
1872
1946
2010
2153
2242
232
2424
2580
2663
2722
2847
2944
306
3182
3227
336
3444
3584
3614
3739
388
3992
4027
4112
427
4353
4436
4519
96.71% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences205
matches
0"was studded"
1"was, formed"
2"being dragged"
3"was centered"
4"was gone"
77.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs271
matches
0"was lying"
1"was trying"
2"was blazing"
3"wasn’t guiding"
4"was guiding"
59.23% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences205
ratio0.029
matches
0"The grass, impossibly green even in the fading light, was studded with wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—a riot of color that should have been months dead."
1"She’d been dreaming of this exact place—the stones, the wildflowers, the oppressive quiet."
2"These were spirals that twisted into shapes that hurt to follow—angles that seemed to fold back on themselves, creating illusions of depth in the flat rock."
3"Rory’s training—her cool head, her out-of-the-box thinking—deserted her."
4"She made it two steps before her boot caught on a root—or what felt like a root."
5"It turned its head—a smooth, featureless ovoid—and though it had no eyes, she felt its regard."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1797
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.025041736227045076
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005564830272676683
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences205
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences205
mean8.71
std5.87
cv0.675
sampleLengths
013
120
25
32
49
518
63
712
85
912
1024
1121
125
1314
1410
158
166
1723
183
1922
2013
2125
2213
237
249
252
265
2718
2816
298
305
313
3211
3316
342
351
365
379
382
3916
4010
4117
422
432
445
4515
462
473
485
495
32.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats35
diversityRatio0.23414634146341465
totalSentences205
uniqueOpeners48
94.70% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount5
totalSentences176
matches
0"Just a single, typewritten line:"
1"Even the wind died the"
2"Just the riot of impossible"
3"Then, it began to *rise*."
4"Only a grove that called."
ratio0.028
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount64
totalSentences176
matches
0"She checked her phone again."
1"She stepped into the clearing."
2"It wasn't a clearing so"
3"She’d come because of the"
4"She’d been dreaming of this"
5"She’d woken with the pendant"
6"It was in the total,"
7"She took a step toward"
8"Her boot crunched on something."
9"She looked down."
10"They were dark, almost black,"
11"She bent, picked one up."
12"It was light as a"
13"It crumbled to dust in"
14"She brushed her hands on"
15"She moved into the circle."
16"She whipped her head around."
17"Her voice was a swallowed"
18"She forced herself forward, her"
19"They weren't uniform."
ratio0.364
76.48% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount135
totalSentences176
matches
0"The oaks of Richmond Park"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through a"
2"She checked her phone again."
3"The map she’d memorized was"
4"This was it."
5"The old oak with the"
6"She stepped into the clearing."
7"It wasn't a clearing so"
8"The grass, impossibly green even"
9"The air here tasted different."
10"The silence was a physical"
11"*This is the place.* The"
12"She’d come because of the"
13"The small, crimson stone, cool"
14"She’d been dreaming of this"
15"She’d woken with the pendant"
16"The wrongness wasn’t in any"
17"It was in the total,"
18"She took a step toward"
19"Her boot crunched on something."
ratio0.767
28.41% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences176
matches
0"Now, standing at the edge"
ratio0.006
75.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through a thicket of holly that scratched at her jacket, the damp soil sucking at her boots."
1"The grass, impossibly green even in the fading light, was studded with wildflowers—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—a riot of color that should have been months de…"
2"She’d woken with the pendant pulsing a faint, steady warmth against her skin, a heat that hadn’t faded until she’d made the decision to come."
3"No distant hum of the city that should have been a constant, subliminal presence this close to London."
4"The crunch of her own footsteps seemed to come a half-second late, an echo that didn’t match her pace."
5"These were spirals that twisted into shapes that hurt to follow—angles that seemed to fold back on themselves, creating illusions of depth in the flat rock."
6"The heat was centered on the stone, but it spread, a tingling sensation racing down her arms, making the small crescent scar on her left wrist itch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.2798%