| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 20 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She looked away [away]" | | 1 | "Lucien’s cane tapped once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.351 | | leniency | 0.702 | | rawRatio | 0.1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.07 | |
| 80.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2013 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 8 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "lightly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" | | 3 | "very" | | 4 | "softly" | | 5 | "perfectly" | | 6 | "utterly" | | 7 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.84% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2013 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "weight" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "velvet" | | 3 | "flicked" | | 4 | "implication" | | 5 | "raced" | | 6 | "silk" | | 7 | "beacon" | | 8 | "potential" | | 9 | "predator" | | 10 | "ensure" | | 11 | "profound" | | 12 | "unreadable" | | 13 | "silence" | | 14 | "marble" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "charged" | | 17 | "could feel" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | matches | | |
| 77.92% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 110 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 142 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 75 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 4 | | markdownWords | 19 | | totalWords | 2003 | | ratio | 0.009 | | matches | | 0 | "Like the rule about not dating demons. Or the rule about not trusting fixers." | | 1 | "The Malleus Maleficarum" | | 2 | "you" | | 3 | "you" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 17 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 28 | | wordCount | 1150 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 0.35 | | worstName | "Ptolemy" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Lane | 3 | | Ptolemy | 4 | | French | 1 | | English | 1 | | German | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Mr | 1 | | Lucien | 4 | | Celtic | 1 | | Malleus | 1 | | Maleficarum | 1 | | Rory | 4 | | Croft | 2 | | Brick | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Mr" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Maleficarum" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Croft" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 67.58% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "grace that seemed to defy the cane, settling into the chair as if it were a throne" | | 1 | "seemed heavier on the return trip" | | 2 | "as if approaching a skittish animal" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.499 | | wordCount | 2003 | | matches | | 0 | "Not to reminisce about the past, but to ensure you have a future" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 142 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 53 | | mean | 37.79 | | std | 23.19 | | cv | 0.614 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 68 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 62 | | 3 | 10 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 32 | | 6 | 64 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 53 | | 10 | 36 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 36 | | 15 | 36 | | 16 | 29 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 76 | | 21 | 51 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 41 | | 25 | 70 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 18 | | 28 | 29 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 34 | | 33 | 40 | | 34 | 55 | | 35 | 45 | | 36 | 10 | | 37 | 46 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 55 | | 40 | 24 | | 41 | 128 | | 42 | 43 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 74 | | 45 | 23 | | 46 | 74 | | 47 | 68 | | 48 | 35 | | 49 | 22 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 182 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 10 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 142 | | ratio | 0.077 | | matches | | 0 | "Brick Lane hummed with its evening chorus—shouts from the curry house vents, the distant wail of a siren, the bass thump of a passing car stereo." | | 1 | "It was the one that slid under her skin in four languages—lyrical French, crisp English, a German she’d only half-understood, and that other thing, the guttural murmur that wasn’t for human ears." | | 2 | "Her mind raced—packing the order, the heavy, silk-wrapped box, Mr." | | 3 | "“He paid in cash. The restaurant needed the delivery.” She looked away from him, toward the spines of the books crammed onto her shelves—treatises on tort law, Celtic mythology, a cracked-spined copy of *The Malleus Maleficarum*." | | 4 | "It was the old instinct—to ask him." | | 5 | "“You stop delivering packages for Yu-Fei. Immediately. You stay inside. This flat is… adequate. The wards on the street are old but strong, especially here. The curry house kitchens vent steam and smoke all night; it confuses ethereal signatures. You stay here, and you let me handle this.”" | | 6 | "She could smell his scent—cool night air, old paper, something faintly metallic like ozone." | | 7 | "The anger, the hurt, the months of agonizing silence—it all warred with this new, terrible information." | | 8 | "His heterochromatic eyes held hers, and for the first time since he’d entered her flat, she saw the strain in them—the exhaustion of a long war, the fierce, desperate protectiveness." | | 9 | "The sounds of the city filtered back in—a car horn, a burst of laughter." | | 10 | "The choice hung before her, as vast and terrifying as the worlds he described—the world of her lonely, hard-won safety, and the world of him, of danger, of secrets that lived in the shadows of her own streets." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1166 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy, silk-wrapped box," | | 1 | "lonely, hard-won safety," |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03344768439108062 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016295025728987993 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 142 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 142 | | mean | 14.11 | | std | 12.6 | | cv | 0.893 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 6 | | 2 | 26 | | 3 | 23 | | 4 | 13 | | 5 | 14 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 23 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 22 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 41.55% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.29577464788732394 | | totalSentences | 142 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 31.15% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Then his hand emerged holding" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "She knew that voice." | | 1 | "It was the one that" | | 2 | "She didn’t turn." | | 3 | "She finally turned from the" | | 4 | "His tailored suit looked absurd" | | 5 | "His ivory-handled cane rested lightly" | | 6 | "It didn’t reach his eyes." | | 7 | "He gestured toward the worn" | | 8 | "It was the only other" | | 9 | "She gave a short, sharp" | | 10 | "She needed to see him" | | 11 | "It put the world back" | | 12 | "He moved with a liquid" | | 13 | "He crossed his legs, the" | | 14 | "he began, his heterochromatic gaze" | | 15 | "She remained by the window," | | 16 | "He reached into his inner" | | 17 | "He flicked it open, revealing" | | 18 | "She pushed off from the" | | 19 | "He was suddenly much too" |
| | ratio | 0.607 | |
| 11.40% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 96 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "The three deadbolts clicked back" | | 1 | "Rory didn’t turn from the" | | 2 | "Brick Lane hummed with its" | | 3 | "The voice came from the" | | 4 | "Rory’s spine stiffened." | | 5 | "She knew that voice." | | 6 | "It was the one that" | | 7 | "A voice like expensive whiskey" | | 8 | "She didn’t turn." | | 9 | "A single, precise step onto" | | 10 | "She finally turned from the" | | 11 | "Lucien Moreau stood just inside" | | 12 | "His tailored suit looked absurd" | | 13 | "His ivory-handled cane rested lightly" | | 14 | "It didn’t reach his eyes." | | 15 | "He gestured toward the worn" | | 16 | "It was the only other" | | 17 | "She gave a short, sharp" | | 18 | "She needed to see him" | | 19 | "It put the world back" |
| | ratio | 0.897 | |
| 46.73% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "Even Ptolemy, who had been" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 69.60% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was the one that slid under her skin in four languages—lyrical French, crisp English, a German she’d only half-understood, and that other thing, the guttural…" | | 1 | "There was a specific weight to his footstep, a controlled cadence that came from years of moving through places he wasn’t supposed to be." | | 2 | "He raised a hand, slowly, as if approaching a skittish animal." | | 3 | "The choice hung before her, as vast and terrifying as the worlds he described—the world of her lonely, hard-won safety, and the world of him, of danger, of secr…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 20 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "he began, his heterochromatic gaze sweeping the chaos" | | 1 | "she said, her voice quiet" | | 2 | "He glanced, his expression unreadable" | | 3 | "he said, his voice low and stripped of all its usual melody" | | 4 | "he said, his whisper rough" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 5 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 57 | | tagDensity | 0.088 | | leniency | 0.175 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |