Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
84
glossingSentenceCount
7
matches
0
"form that seemed to drink the light around it"
1
"patterns that seemed to shift when she looked at them from the corner of her eye"
2
"luminescence that seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves"
3
"felt like a connection, like the stone"
4
"symbols that seemed to writhe—Rory recognized some from the spirals on the standing stones, but others were new, angular and sharp, like runes carved by a hand that had never known curves"
"The air smelled of wet stone and something sweeter—honey, maybe, or wild clover."
1
"The distortion rippled like heat haze off summer asphalt, but it held a faint iridescence—oil on water, captured and suspended."
2
"The air was thicker here, carrying a weight she could feel in her lungs, and it smelled of crushed lavender and rain-soaked earth and something else—something old and wild that made her teeth ache."
3
"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—foxglove and bluebell and others she had no names for, their petals in shades of violet and crimson and a blue so deep it was nearly black."
4
"Rory held still, her delivery route instincts kicking in—assess the space, find the exits, note the details."
5
"The silence was profound—no birdsong, no rustle of leaves, no distant hum of London traffic."
6
"A stone basin filled with water that showed not their reflections but scenes—a field of wheat burning under an amber sky, a woman with silver hair dancing in moonlight, a man with shadows for skin reaching toward a door that was never there."
7
"Rory checked her watch when they entered—the digital display read 4:17 PM—but now it showed 4:21."
8
"Not words exactly, but the ghost of conversations—the echoes of everyone who had ever stood in this place."
9
"She remembered Isolde's description—she left no footprints when she walked."
10
"Up close, its bark was etched with symbols that seemed to writhe—Rory recognized some from the spirals on the standing stones, but others were new, angular and sharp, like runes carved by a hand that had never known curves."
11
"Nyx stepped forward, their form solidifying slightly—a sign of respect, Rory had learned, or perhaps concentration."
12
"Her feet touched the flowers but didn't crush them; they bent aside, bowing."
13
"\"Answers are seeds. Plant them carelessly, and they grow into thorns.\" She reached into the folds of her gown and withdrew something—a slender, leaf-shaped blade that glinted with inner light."
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
67
technicalSentenceCount
13
matches
0
"Beside her, Nyx moved without sound, a solid silhouette of living shadow that didn't disturb a single twig or blade of grass."
1
"She stepped forward, leading with her left foot, the scar on her wrist tingling as it crossed the threshold."
2
"The edges curved inward, the trees that ringed it pressing closer, their roots intertwining into a living wall."
3
"Light came from somewhere, though there was no sun, just a soft luminescence that seemed to emanate from the flowers themselves."
4
"It was warm, almost feverish, and she could feel the pulse traveling up her arm, settling into her bones."
5
"It felt like a connection, like the stone recognized something here that resonated with its own nature."
6
"A stream that flowed upward along the trunk of the great oak, its water clear as glass and carrying tiny lights like captured stars."
7
"Mushrooms that grew in spiraling towers, their caps shifting colors as they watched."
8
"A stone basin filled with water that showed not their reflections but scenes—a field of wheat burning under an amber sky, a woman with silver hair dancing in mo…"
9
"Not words exactly, but the ghost of conversations—the echoes of everyone who had ever stood in this place."
10
"She caught fragments: a woman's laugh, a child's cry, a man speaking in a language that made her eyes water."
11
"Up close, its bark was etched with symbols that seemed to writhe—Rory recognized some from the spirals on the standing stones, but others were new, angular and …"
12
"Her silver hair fell past her waist in a straight, shimmering cascade, and her pale lavender eyes held a depth that seemed to contain centuries."