Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFKW118QY2XF9ZCRXN6658M

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Duration:
20.4s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air changed before the light did. Rory felt it first—a shift against her skin, like walking through a curtain of cool mist, though nothing hung in the path between the two ancient oaks. She slowed her stride. Beside her, Nyx's shadow-form rippled, edges fraying for a half-second before resettling into something solid. "You feel it," Rory said. Not a question. "The barrier thins here." Nyx's voice arrived like breath through cracked windowpanes. "It has been this way for weeks. Growing weaker." Rory pressed her palm against the bark of the nearest oak. Deep grooves ran through the wood in spirals—not carved, not natural growth patterns she'd ever seen. The bark was warm. Not the warmth of sun-soaked timber, but something alive, something with a pulse beneath the surface. She pulled her hand back and examined her fingers. No residue. No mark. Just a faint tingling that crept up her forearm toward the crescent scar on her left wrist. She stepped forward anyway. The grove swallowed them whole. Colors first. Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—crimson and violet and a shade of blue that didn't belong to any pigment Rory had seen in the waking world. They swayed though no wind touched them, their petals catching light from a source she couldn't locate. The sky above the clearing was a pale, luminous grey, neither day nor night, and it seemed to hover lower than it should, as though the atmosphere had compressed into something breathable but heavy. "This isn't Richmond Park," Rory murmured. She turned back. The oaks still stood behind her, their trunks leaning inward like guards. Beyond them, she could see the brown-grey blur of London's November—bare branches, wet pavement, the distant hush of traffic. But the boundary between the two felt thin as tissue paper. "It's not not Richmond Park," Nyx said. "It's both. Neither. That's the nature of these pocket spaces." Rory pushed deeper into the clearing. The wildflowers parted around her boots, stems bending without breaking, and she noticed they left no footprints in the soft ground. She looked back. Nyx's shadow-form glided over the surface without pressing into it, leaving nothing behind. "You're not leaving tracks either," she said. "I never do." Rory crouched and pressed her fingers into the soil. Cool, damp, real. She pinched a handful and let it fall. It scattered in a slow, almost reluctant cascade, each grain taking its time reaching the ground. "Time," she said, standing. "What's happening with time here?" "Unstable." Nyx moved ahead, their silhouette dark against the pale flowers. "Minutes outside could be—" A sound interrupted. Low, resonant, like a cello string struck in a cathedral. It came from somewhere ahead and to the right, threading through the air before fading into the silence. Rory's hand went to the Fae-Forged Blade strapped at her hip. The moonsilver was cold against her palm, colder than it had been moments ago. "What was that?" "Residual magic," Nyx said. "This place has been saturated for centuries. Some of it echoes." They walked on. The grove opened as they moved deeper, the wildflowers thinning to reveal patches of dark, rich earth where mushrooms grew in spiraling clusters. These were not ordinary fungi—some glowed faintly amber, others shifted color as Rory passed, cycling through hues like stained glass catching different angles of light. She reached toward one. The cap pulsed beneath her touch, warm and firm, and the glow intensified briefly before settling back. "Don't consume anything here," Nyx said. "I know better than that." "Do you?" Rory shot them a look. The faint violet glow of Nyx's eyes—the only features visible within their shadow-form—pulsed once, the closest thing to a smirk she'd ever seen from them. She pressed on. The clearing narrowed into a corridor of standing stones, their surfaces slick with a moss that shimmered silver-green. The stones were massive, each one taller than her by several feet, and they leaned at angles that should have sent them toppling. Between them, the air felt thick, saturated with something she couldn't name. Her ears popped. The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed—a single, deliberate throb of warmth against her sternum. She touched it through the fabric. "It's reacting," she said. "The pendant." "Hel proximity," Nyx said. "There's a rift point somewhere in this grove. Or near one." Rory's jaw tightened. She'd carried the pendant for weeks now, had felt its warmth near the Golden Empress after Yu-Fei's warning, but this was different. This was intentional, a signal rather than an accident. She moved between the stones, one hand on the blade, the other hovering near the pendant's chain. The corridor opened into a second clearing. Smaller than the first. Denser with growth. Vines crawled up every surface—the stones, the oaks that ringed this inner sanctum, the ground itself. They were thick as her wrist, dark purple, and they moved. Not swaying, not reaching—just shifting, rearranging themselves in slow, deliberate patterns like a sleeping creature adjusting its limbs. In the center of the clearing stood a figure. Rory stopped. Her hand found the blade's handle and drew it free. Moonsilver caught the sourceless light and held it, casting a faint luminescence across the ground that the wildflowers didn't produce. The figure was tall, silver-haired, motionless. She wore robes the color of fog, and her feet hovered a breath above the ground. No footprints. No shadow. Pale lavender eyes opened as Rory entered the clearing, and those eyes held nothing—not surprise, not alarm. Recognition. "You've found it, then," Isolde Varga said. Her voice carried the cadence of someone speaking to a room even when addressing two. "The place between." "Isolde." Rory didn't lower the blade. "You knew we were coming." "Knew is such a narrow word. I saw it, yes. Three paths converging on this grove. Yours was the brightest, if that comforts you." Isolde tilted her head, silver hair cascading over one shoulder. "It won't." "Comfort's not really my thing." Rory scanned the clearing. The moving vines. The sourceless light. The way the air hummed against her eardrums. "This is where you've been living?" "Among other places. A grove such as this does not confine itself to one location. It follows the ley lines. Follows the thinning of the Veil. Right now it's anchored here, in Richmond, because—" She paused, lavender eyes drifting past Rory to Nyx. "Because the Shadow walks these paths." Nyx's form rippled. "You've been expecting me." "I've been expecting everyone. That is the burden of sight." Isolde descended from whatever invisible platform held her airborne. Her bare feet touched the ground without sound, without impression. The moss beneath her didn't compress. "The question isn't whether you've arrived. It's what you'll do now that you have." Rory sheathed the blade. Slowly, deliberately, keeping her posture open. She'd learned that much from watching the Wardens move through crowds—never telegraph a threat unless you meant to deliver one. "The pendant," she said, touching the chain at her throat. "It's pulling me here. Or toward something near here. A rift point." Isolde's lips curved—not quite a smile. "The Heartstone knows its origins. It was forged in Dymas, among the orchards where Prince Belphegor's chefs press fruit into wines that mortals would kill for. It remembers the heat of those kitchens. The weight of indulgence. And now it calls you back toward what made it." "Back to Hel?" "Back toward a door." Isolde knelt among the wildflowers. Her fingers brushed a bloom that shifted from violet to white at her touch. "The Veil weakens with each passing day. You've felt it—why else would you carry a blade that cuts through wards? You've sensed the fractures. The rifts opening in places they shouldn't." Rory's gaze dropped to the pendant's warmth against her chest. She'd felt it for weeks. Small thrums, irregular, growing more frequent. Yu-Fei had noticed the tension in her shoulders. Silas had asked why she kept jumping at shadows—actual irony, given the Shade standing three feet behind her. "Tell me what you saw," Rory said. "The three paths." Isolde rose. She didn't answer immediately. Instead she looked past Rory, past the clearing, past the trees, toward something visible only to her lavender eyes. The wildflowers around her feet leaned inward, drawn by gravity that didn't exist. "One path leads to hunger that consumes itself," she said. "One leads to silence that swallows sound. And yours—" Her gaze locked onto Rory's. "Yours leads to a choice you haven't yet imagined you'd need to make." "That's not helpful." "Is it ever?" Rory opened her mouth. Closed it. Behind her, Nyx's violet eyes flickered once—a pulse of light in the dark—and the sound of something vast and distant rumbled through the grove like a heartbeat buried beneath the earth. The wildflowers trembled. Isolde turned away and walked toward the vine-covered stones. She didn't look back. She didn't need to. The path she'd left in her wake was visible now—a faint trail where the moss glowed brighter, where the flowers bowed lower, where the air itself seemed to lean in the direction she'd gone. "Come," her voice floated back, thin as silk thread. "There's something you need to see before the light changes." Rory looked at Nyx. The Shade's form contracted, solidifying into something denser, more present. "After you," Nyx said. Rory followed the glow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx's voice arrived like [like]"
1"her voice floated back [back]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.471
leniency0.941
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.078
90.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1569
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.08% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1569
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"warmth"
count4
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"echoes"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count3
5
word"shimmered"
count1
6
word"throb"
count1
7
word"cascading"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"trembled"
count1
13
word"silk"
count1
highlights
0"warmth"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"echoes"
4"pulsed"
5"shimmered"
6"throb"
7"cascading"
8"scanned"
9"weight"
10"tension"
11"flickered"
12"trembled"
13"silk"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences153
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1552
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
48.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1180
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Nyx14
Rory24
London1
November1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Heartstone1
Golden1
Empress1
Yu-Fei2
Varga1
Isolde7
Wardens1
Shade2
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Rory"
2"Blade"
3"Yu-Fei"
4"Varga"
5"Isolde"
6"Shade"
places
0"London"
1"Fae-Forged"
2"Golden"
globalScore0.483
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences71
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile"
71.13% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.289
wordCount1552
matches
0"Not the warmth of sun-soaked timber, but something alive, something with a pulse beneath the surface"
1"neither day nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences153
matches
0"learned that much"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean27.71
std22.73
cv0.82
sampleLengths
053
18
221
377
44
55
680
751
817
943
107
113
1236
139
1415
1556
163
1715
1872
196
205
212
2230
2380
246
2515
2651
2759
289
2932
3044
3125
3211
3336
3429
3549
367
3749
3830
3922
4053
413
4254
4347
4410
4538
4637
473
483
4937
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs213
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences153
ratio0.098
matches
0"Rory felt it first—a shift against her skin, like walking through a curtain of cool mist, though nothing hung in the path between the two ancient oaks."
1"Deep grooves ran through the wood in spirals—not carved, not natural growth patterns she'd ever seen."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in impossible abundance—crimson and violet and a shade of blue that didn't belong to any pigment Rory had seen in the waking world."
3"Beyond them, she could see the brown-grey blur of London's November—bare branches, wet pavement, the distant hush of traffic."
4"These were not ordinary fungi—some glowed faintly amber, others shifted color as Rory passed, cycling through hues like stained glass catching different angles of light."
5"The faint violet glow of Nyx's eyes—the only features visible within their shadow-form—pulsed once, the closest thing to a smirk she'd ever seen from them."
6"The Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt pulsed—a single, deliberate throb of warmth against her sternum."
7"Vines crawled up every surface—the stones, the oaks that ringed this inner sanctum, the ground itself."
8"Not swaying, not reaching—just shifting, rearranging themselves in slow, deliberate patterns like a sleeping creature adjusting its limbs."
9"Pale lavender eyes opened as Rory entered the clearing, and those eyes held nothing—not surprise, not alarm."
10"She'd learned that much from watching the Wardens move through crowds—never telegraph a threat unless you meant to deliver one."
11"Isolde's lips curved—not quite a smile."
12"Silas had asked why she kept jumping at shadows—actual irony, given the Shade standing three feet behind her."
13"Behind her, Nyx's violet eyes flickered once—a pulse of light in the dark—and the sound of something vast and distant rumbled through the grove like a heartbeat buried beneath the earth."
14"The path she'd left in her wake was visible now—a faint trail where the moss glowed brighter, where the flowers bowed lower, where the air itself seemed to lean in the direction she'd gone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1209
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.026468155500413565
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.005789909015715467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences153
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences153
mean10.14
std8.46
cv0.834
sampleLengths
07
127
24
315
45
53
612
79
811
916
104
1116
129
132
142
1517
164
175
182
1927
2017
2134
226
233
2412
2519
2611
277
2810
296
3021
313
3213
337
343
359
363
378
3816
394
405
4111
424
433
4410
4518
4611
4714
483
494
58.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.39215686274509803
totalSentences153
uniqueOpeners60
94.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences106
matches
0"Just a faint tingling that"
1"Slowly, deliberately, keeping her posture"
2"Instead she looked past Rory,"
ratio0.028
99.25% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences106
matches
0"She slowed her stride."
1"She pulled her hand back"
2"She stepped forward anyway."
3"They swayed though no wind"
4"She turned back."
5"She looked back."
6"She pinched a handful and"
7"It scattered in a slow,"
8"she said, standing"
9"It came from somewhere ahead"
10"They walked on."
11"She reached toward one."
12"She pressed on."
13"Her ears popped."
14"She touched it through the"
15"She'd carried the pendant for"
16"She moved between the stones,"
17"They were thick as her"
18"Her hand found the blade's"
19"She wore robes the color"
ratio0.302
49.62% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences106
matches
0"The air changed before the"
1"Rory felt it first—a shift"
2"She slowed her stride."
3"Nyx's voice arrived like breath"
4"Rory pressed her palm against"
5"The bark was warm."
6"She pulled her hand back"
7"She stepped forward anyway."
8"The grove swallowed them whole."
9"Wildflowers carpeted the ground in"
10"They swayed though no wind"
11"The sky above the clearing"
12"She turned back."
13"The oaks still stood behind"
14"Rory pushed deeper into the"
15"The wildflowers parted around her"
16"She looked back."
17"Nyx's shadow-form glided over the"
18"Rory crouched and pressed her"
19"She pinched a handful and"
ratio0.821
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The sky above the clearing was a pale, luminous grey, neither day nor night, and it seemed to hover lower than it should, as though the atmosphere had compresse…"
1"It scattered in a slow, almost reluctant cascade, each grain taking its time reaching the ground."
2"The clearing narrowed into a corridor of standing stones, their surfaces slick with a moss that shimmered silver-green."
3"Her fingers brushed a bloom that shifted from violet to white at her touch."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx moved, their silhouette dark against the pale flowers"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.275
leniency0.549
rawRatio0.071
effectiveRatio0.039
84.2774%