| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said simply [simply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |
| 89.36% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "softly" | | 1 | "perfectly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1410 | | totalAiIsms | 31 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "sentinels" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "chill" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "pulse" | | 6 | "fractured" | | 7 | "familiar" | | 8 | "roaring" | | 9 | "intensity" | | 10 | "crystalline" | | 11 | "velvet" | | 12 | "marble" | | 13 | "crystal" | | 14 | "depths" | | 15 | "wavering" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "sanctuary" | | 18 | "rhythmic" | | 19 | "pulsed" | | 20 | "palpable" | | 21 | "stark" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 23.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 84 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 100 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 51 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1404 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 5 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1085 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 1.47 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 16 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Seer | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 9 | | Ripples | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Blade" | | 2 | "Seer" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.763 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 39.71% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked away" | | 1 | "indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto the grass, and delicate, bell-shaped blooms of crystalline white that chimed with a faint, crystalline tone when a breeze stirred them" | | 2 | "humming that seemed to come from the flowers themselves" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.712 | | wordCount | 1404 | | matches | | 0 | "not the glowing trees, but a star-filled night sky Rory had never seen" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 100 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 30 | | mean | 46.8 | | std | 26.73 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 44 | | 2 | 41 | | 3 | 60 | | 4 | 69 | | 5 | 39 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 97 | | 8 | 87 | | 9 | 32 | | 10 | 32 | | 11 | 57 | | 12 | 98 | | 13 | 28 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 40 | | 16 | 81 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 40 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 90 | | 24 | 31 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 39 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 46 | | 29 | 82 |
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| 96.91% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 84 | | matches | | 0 | "was gone" | | 1 | "were written" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 175 | | matches | | 0 | "was watching" | | 1 | "was just beginning" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 100 | | ratio | 0.06 | | matches | | 0 | "“Understanding is a feast. But one must first sit at the table. The grove does not invite; it permits.” She took a single step forward, her feet making no sound on the moss-covered ground." | | 1 | "She drew a breath, the air tasting of damp soil and something else—ozone, and honey, and the metallic tang of cold iron." | | 2 | "Flowers Rory had no name for blazed in clumps—petals of deep indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto the grass, and delicate, bell-shaped blooms of crystalline white that chimed with a faint, crystalline tone when a breeze stirred them." | | 3 | "Each step released a fresh wave of scent—crushed mint, wet stone, blooming nightshade." | | 4 | "She heard things in the dense quiet—a skittering in the undergrowth that sounded too rhythmic to be animal, a melodic humming that seemed to come from the flowers themselves." | | 5 | "The Heartstone pendant against her skin gave a single, powerful pulse—a heat that was almost painful—before going cold and silent again." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1100 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "delicate, bell-shaped blooms" | | 1 | "small, crystal-clear pool." |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.03090909090909091 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008181818181818182 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 100 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 100 | | mean | 14.04 | | std | 7.98 | | cv | 0.569 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 16 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 12 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 12 | | 14 | 34 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 12 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 49 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 23 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 22 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 3 | | 35 | 19 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 17 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 22 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 22 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 58.33% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.38 | | totalSentences | 100 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 40.16% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 21 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 1 | "She didn’t look back, her" | | 2 | "It had led them here," | | 3 | "She took a single step" | | 4 | "She drew a breath, the" | | 5 | "She stepped through." | | 6 | "She spun around." | | 7 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 8 | "It was cool, like velvet" | | 9 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 10 | "She knelt, dipping a finger" | | 11 | "She glanced at her watch." | | 12 | "She wasn’t sure she believed" | | 13 | "Their violet eye-glow intensified as" | | 14 | "They moved on, Isolde leading" | | 15 | "She heard things in the" | | 16 | "It felt like cool mist." | | 17 | "They were not the rough," | | 18 | "she said, her voice barely" | | 19 | "She reached out, her fingers" |
| | ratio | 0.253 | |
| 2.17% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 76 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks stood like" | | 1 | "A chill, unrelated to the" | | 2 | "She paused at the threshold," | | 3 | "Isolde’s voice was a soft" | | 4 | "She didn’t look back, her" | | 5 | "Nyx was a deeper stain" | | 6 | "Rory swallowed, the memory of" | | 7 | "It had led them here," | | 8 | "The Seer finally turned, her" | | 9 | "A faint smile touched her" | | 10 | "She took a single step" | | 11 | "Rory exchanged a glance with" | | 12 | "A silent accord." | | 13 | "She drew a breath, the" | | 14 | "She stepped through." | | 15 | "The world fractured." | | 16 | "The next, color bled into" | | 17 | "The muted browns and fading" | | 18 | "Flowers Rory had no name" | | 19 | "The air was thick, sweet" |
| | ratio | 0.916 | |
| 60.24% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 83 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, in this threshold, it" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 8.93% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 48 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The ancient oaks stood like sentinels, their bark etched with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked away." | | 1 | "Flowers Rory had no name for blazed in clumps—petals of deep indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto …" | | 2 | "In its place, a sprawling clearing cupped under a canopy of ancient, interlacing trees whose leaves were a gradient of gold and viridian, glowing softly as if l…" | | 3 | "The shadows that composed their form seemed to recoil, tightening into a sharper, more defined silhouette." | | 4 | "She reached out, her fingers brushing the petals of a drooping, blood-red flower." | | 5 | "Isolde rose, a droplet of water clinging to her fingertip that shone like a diamond." | | 6 | "Ferns uncurled at their approach, their fronds tipped with silver that tingled when Rory’s sleeve brushed past." | | 7 | "She heard things in the dense quiet—a skittering in the undergrowth that sounded too rhythmic to be animal, a melodic humming that seemed to come from the flowe…" | | 8 | "The Heartstone pendant against her skin gave a single, powerful pulse—a heat that was almost painful—before going cold and silent again." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She took, her feet making no sound on the moss-covered ground" | | 1 | "Nyx whispered, their voice a breeze through dry grass" | | 2 | "she said, her voice hushed" | | 3 | "she said, her voice barely a whisper" | | 4 | "Nyx corrected, their shadowy form coiling near the base of a stone" |
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| 46.55% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx corrected (correct)" | | 2 | "Rory pressed (press)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.276 | | leniency | 0.552 | | rawRatio | 0.375 | | effectiveRatio | 0.207 | |