Run: 2026-03-11-01KKFMCPAKY2EGHHFRKHFPEB7X

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Duration:
19.0s
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Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks stood like sentinels, their bark etched with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked away. A chill, unrelated to the autumn air, seeped up from the damp earth through the soles of her boots. She paused at the threshold, her hand hovering over the cool weight of the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. “You feel it, don’t you?” Isolde’s voice was a soft rustle, her silver hair catching the fading afternoon light. She didn’t look back, her gaze fixed on the space between two particularly massive oaks. “The hum of what was. The whisper of what is.” Nyx was a deeper stain in the gathering twilight, their form less a solid shadow and more a tear in the fabric of the gloaming. “The Veil is thin here. Threads are frayed. We step through, and the needle may snag.” Rory swallowed, the memory of the Heartstone pendant’s insistent pulse against her sternum still vivid. It had led them here, to this unremarkable corner of Richmond Park, pulsing like a second heartbeat. Now, in this threshold, it had gone still, a cold, flat weight. “Isolde said this place would help us understand it. What it is. Where it came from.” The Seer finally turned, her pale lavender eyes sweeping over them both. A faint smile touched her lips, a thing both ancient and sad. “Understanding is a feast. But one must first sit at the table. The grove does not invite; it permits.” She took a single step forward, her feet making no sound on the moss-covered ground. “Follow. But leave your clocks and your certainties at the boundary.” Rory exchanged a glance with the shifting darkness that was Nyx. A silent accord. She drew a breath, the air tasting of damp soil and something else—ozone, and honey, and the metallic tang of cold iron. She stepped through. The world fractured. One moment she was in the familiar, managed wilderness of the park. The next, color bled into being with a silent, roaring intensity. The muted browns and fading greens of autumn vanished, replaced by a riot of impossible hues. Flowers Rory had no name for blazed in clumps—petals of deep indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto the grass, and delicate, bell-shaped blooms of crystalline white that chimed with a faint, crystalline tone when a breeze stirred them. The air was thick, sweet with their combined perfume. Rory blinked, her eyes watering. The two oaks that had marked the entrance now looked behind her, a hundred yards away, their trunks smooth and pale as bone. She spun around. The park was gone. In its place, a sprawling clearing cupped under a canopy of ancient, interlacing trees whose leaves were a gradient of gold and viridian, glowing softly as if lit from within. The sky above wasn’t the grey of a London evening, but a soft, perpetual dusk, streaked with hues of peach and lavender. “By all the hells,” Nyx whispered, their voice a breeze through dry grass. The shadows that composed their form seemed to recoil, tightening into a sharper, more defined silhouette. “This is… saturated.” Isolde walked deeper into the clearing, her bare feet leaving no impression on the lush, emerald carpet of moss. “The grove remembers its own. The Fae do not tidy their wild places.” Rory followed, her boots feeling clumsy and loud on the yielding ground. Each step released a fresh wave of scent—crushed mint, wet stone, blooming nightshade. She reached out, her fingers brushing the petals of a drooping, blood-red flower. It was cool, like velvet over marble. “Time,” she said, her voice hushed. “You said time is different here.” “It is not a river here,” Isolde replied, stopping at the edge of a small, crystal-clear pool. The water was perfectly still, reflecting the glowing canopy like a dark mirror. “It is a pool. You may stir it, but its depths remain.” She knelt, dipping a finger into the water. Ripples spread, and for a moment, the reflection showed not the glowing trees, but a star-filled night sky Rory had never seen. Then it settled back. “Hours may pass outside in the time it takes you to drink from this. Or years may collapse into a single breath.” A knot of unease tightened in Rory’s gut. She glanced at her watch. The second hand ticked on, ordinary and defiant. She wasn’t sure she believed it anymore. Nyx drifted closer to the pool’s edge, their form wavering at the boundary between light and shadow. “There are… echoes here. Old memories, woven into the roots. A song without singers.” Their violet eye-glow intensified as they seemed to listen. “Pain. Joy. A bargain struck under a moon that is no longer in the sky.” Isolde rose, a droplet of water clinging to her fingertip that shone like a diamond. “The Fae Courts left their fingerprints everywhere. This grove was a waypoint. A place of exchange. Now it is a sanctuary. And sometimes, a trap.” They moved on, Isolde leading them along a path that was more suggestion than trail. The flora grew more bizarre. A tree with bark like polished obsidian dripped a sap that hardened into ruby-like droplets. Ferns uncurled at their approach, their fronds tipped with silver that tingled when Rory’s sleeve brushed past. She heard things in the dense quiet—a skittering in the undergrowth that sounded too rhythmic to be animal, a melodic humming that seemed to come from the flowers themselves. Unease became a constant companion. The beauty was overwhelming, but it was a predatory kind of beauty. Everything was watching. The eyes of a carved stone face in the trunk of a willow blinked slowly as she passed. A cluster of mushroom caps glowed a soft blue, then pulsed in sequence, like a silent conversation. “Is it always like this?” Rory asked, her hand resting on the familiar, cold handle of Isolde’s blade. “It is what it is,” Isolde said simply. “Your eyes are young to this sight. They are dazzled. And frightened.” “Nervous seems appropriate,” Rory countered, stepping over a root that pulsed with a faint, green bioluminescence. Nyx materialized more solidly beside her, their shadowy form brushing her arm. It felt like cool mist. “The fear is a good compass. It means you are paying attention. This place is not hostile. It is… indifferent. Like a mountain.” The clearing widened, and they stopped. At its heart stood a circle of standing stones, each twice Rory’s height. They were not the rough, weathered grey of human monuments. These were smooth as glass, carved from a stone that swirled with nebulae of violet and deep blue. Faint runes pulsed along their surfaces with a slow, rhythmic light, like sleeping hearts. The air here thrummed, a physical vibration Rory felt in her teeth and bones. The Heartstone pendant against her skin gave a single, powerful pulse—a heat that was almost painful—before going cold and silent again. Isolde approached the circle reverently. “The Navel,” she said, her voice barely a whisper. “Where the threads of the world are knotted closest. A place of great power. And great danger.” Rory stepped up to the nearest stone. The carved runes seemed to writhe at the edge of her vision. She reached out, her fingers hovering an inch from the surface. “What is this place for?” “Was,” Nyx corrected, their shadowy form coiling near the base of a stone. “This was a threshold. A controlled tear. For those who knew the way to pass between realms without breaking the Veil. A door, not a wound.” “And now?” Rory pressed. Isolde placed her palm flat against the central stone. The runes flared, bathing her silver hair in a blue-violet glow. Her lavender eyes were wide, unseeing. “Now… it sleeps. But the dreamers stir. The Solstice approaches. The Veil thins. And old doors remember how to open.” Rory felt a draft that carried the scent of distant brimstone and frozen stars. The Heartstone was silent, but the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip grew colder, a palpable chill seeping through her jeans. The wonder of the grove was still there, but it had curdled at the edges, replaced by the stark, thrilling awareness that she stood in a place where the rules of her world were written in a different language. And she was just beginning to learn its alphabet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Isolde said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.069
89.36% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"perfectly"
2"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1410
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"sentinels"
count1
1
word"etched"
count1
2
word"chill"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count2
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"fractured"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count2
8
word"roaring"
count1
9
word"intensity"
count1
10
word"crystalline"
count2
11
word"velvet"
count1
12
word"marble"
count1
13
word"crystal"
count1
14
word"depths"
count1
15
word"wavering"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"sanctuary"
count1
18
word"rhythmic"
count2
19
word"pulsed"
count3
20
word"palpable"
count1
21
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"sentinels"
1"etched"
2"chill"
3"weight"
4"whisper"
5"pulse"
6"fractured"
7"familiar"
8"roaring"
9"intensity"
10"crystalline"
11"velvet"
12"marble"
13"crystal"
14"depths"
15"wavering"
16"echoes"
17"sanctuary"
18"rhythmic"
19"pulsed"
20"palpable"
21"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
23.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences84
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1404
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1085
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.47
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory16
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Heartstone3
Richmond1
Park1
Seer1
Nyx6
London1
Isolde9
Ripples1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Blade"
2"Seer"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.763
windowScore0.667
39.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked away"
1"indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto the grass, and delicate, bell-shaped blooms of crystalline white that chimed with a faint, crystalline tone when a breeze stirred them"
2"humming that seemed to come from the flowers themselves"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.712
wordCount1404
matches
0"not the glowing trees, but a star-filled night sky Rory had never seen"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean46.8
std26.73
cv0.571
sampleLengths
059
144
241
360
469
539
63
797
887
932
1032
1157
1298
1328
1455
1540
1681
1755
1818
1920
2016
2140
226
2390
2431
2535
2639
274
2846
2982
96.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences84
matches
0"was gone"
1"were written"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was watching"
1"was just beginning"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences100
ratio0.06
matches
0"“Understanding is a feast. But one must first sit at the table. The grove does not invite; it permits.” She took a single step forward, her feet making no sound on the moss-covered ground."
1"She drew a breath, the air tasting of damp soil and something else—ozone, and honey, and the metallic tang of cold iron."
2"Flowers Rory had no name for blazed in clumps—petals of deep indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto the grass, and delicate, bell-shaped blooms of crystalline white that chimed with a faint, crystalline tone when a breeze stirred them."
3"Each step released a fresh wave of scent—crushed mint, wet stone, blooming nightshade."
4"She heard things in the dense quiet—a skittering in the undergrowth that sounded too rhythmic to be animal, a melodic humming that seemed to come from the flowers themselves."
5"The Heartstone pendant against her skin gave a single, powerful pulse—a heat that was almost painful—before going cold and silent again."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1100
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"delicate, bell-shaped blooms"
1"small, crystal-clear pool."
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03090909090909091
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.008181818181818182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean14.04
std7.98
cv0.569
sampleLengths
020
119
220
319
415
510
625
716
815
917
1012
1116
1212
1312
1434
1511
1611
173
1822
193
203
2112
2211
2316
2449
259
265
2723
283
294
3030
3122
3213
3316
343
3519
3613
3712
3813
3913
407
416
426
4317
4413
4520
4622
474
4822
498
58.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.38
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners38
40.16% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Then it settled back."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences83
matches
0"She paused at the threshold,"
1"She didn’t look back, her"
2"It had led them here,"
3"She took a single step"
4"She drew a breath, the"
5"She stepped through."
6"She spun around."
7"She reached out, her fingers"
8"It was cool, like velvet"
9"she said, her voice hushed"
10"She knelt, dipping a finger"
11"She glanced at her watch."
12"She wasn’t sure she believed"
13"Their violet eye-glow intensified as"
14"They moved on, Isolde leading"
15"She heard things in the"
16"It felt like cool mist."
17"They were not the rough,"
18"she said, her voice barely"
19"She reached out, her fingers"
ratio0.253
2.17% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount76
totalSentences83
matches
0"The ancient oaks stood like"
1"A chill, unrelated to the"
2"She paused at the threshold,"
3"Isolde’s voice was a soft"
4"She didn’t look back, her"
5"Nyx was a deeper stain"
6"Rory swallowed, the memory of"
7"It had led them here,"
8"The Seer finally turned, her"
9"A faint smile touched her"
10"She took a single step"
11"Rory exchanged a glance with"
12"A silent accord."
13"She drew a breath, the"
14"She stepped through."
15"The world fractured."
16"The next, color bled into"
17"The muted browns and fading"
18"Flowers Rory had no name"
19"The air was thick, sweet"
ratio0.916
60.24% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"Now, in this threshold, it"
ratio0.012
8.93% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The ancient oaks stood like sentinels, their bark etched with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift when Rory looked away."
1"Flowers Rory had no name for blazed in clumps—petals of deep indigo that seemed to drink the light, trumpets of burning orange that dripped a luminous sap onto …"
2"In its place, a sprawling clearing cupped under a canopy of ancient, interlacing trees whose leaves were a gradient of gold and viridian, glowing softly as if l…"
3"The shadows that composed their form seemed to recoil, tightening into a sharper, more defined silhouette."
4"She reached out, her fingers brushing the petals of a drooping, blood-red flower."
5"Isolde rose, a droplet of water clinging to her fingertip that shone like a diamond."
6"Ferns uncurled at their approach, their fronds tipped with silver that tingled when Rory’s sleeve brushed past."
7"She heard things in the dense quiet—a skittering in the undergrowth that sounded too rhythmic to be animal, a melodic humming that seemed to come from the flowe…"
8"The Heartstone pendant against her skin gave a single, powerful pulse—a heat that was almost painful—before going cold and silent again."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"She took, her feet making no sound on the moss-covered ground"
1"Nyx whispered, their voice a breeze through dry grass"
2"she said, her voice hushed"
3"she said, her voice barely a whisper"
4"Nyx corrected, their shadowy form coiling near the base of a stone"
46.55% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
1"Nyx corrected (correct)"
2"Rory pressed (press)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.276
leniency0.552
rawRatio0.375
effectiveRatio0.207
70.6946%