Run: 2026-03-12-01KKFPXV6TZG5BXSNMZZNM9TP4

Run Details

Duration:
1m 39s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks swallowed her torchlight. Aurora Carter pushed through the last line of bracken and stopped, one boot sunk into soft moss that had no business being this damp in October. The standing stones ringed the clearing like broken teeth — massive, grey, older than anything with a name. She'd walked this path three times before in daylight, each visit folding the map in her head a little sharper. But night transformed the grove into something she hadn't prepared for. The wildflowers should have been invisible in the dark. Instead, pale shapes clustered at her ankles, petals turned upward like mouths waiting for rain. She pulled her phone from her jacket pocket. The screen read 22:47. She'd told Silas she'd be back before last call. That gave her — she did the maths and didn't like the answer. Time moved strange here. Eva had warned her, the way Eva warned about everything: casual, offhand, delivered between bites of toast as if she were describing the weather. "One hour in, ten minutes out. Or the reverse. Don't look at your watch too much. It'll only wind you up." Useful advice. Eva had plenty of it, most of it aimed at keeping Rory alive since she'd arrived in London with two suitcases and the crescent scar on her wrist still pink from the last argument with Evan. Eva had also been the one to mention the grove — a whisper over pints at Silas' bar, something about a place that existed between things, a seam in the world where the Fae had left their fingerprints. Rory had filed it away the way she filed most of Eva's wilder stories. Then the pendant had arrived. No return address. No note. Just a small cardboard box with her name printed in neat block letters and, nestled in cotton wool, the Heartstone. Deep crimson gemstone, silver chain, warm to the touch in a way that had nothing to do with physics. She'd worn it for a week straight, sleeping in it, showering with it, the weight of it a constant pressure against her collarbone. On the fourth night, it had pulsed. A single, slow throb of heat, like a second heartbeat laid over her own. She'd felt it again tonight, three streets from the park entrance. Pulsing. Drawing her here. Now the pendant hung against her skin beneath her jacket, dormant again, its warmth faded to the ambient temperature of her body. She cupped it through the fabric. Nothing. Just stone and silver and the faint clamminess of her own palm. "Right," she said aloud. Her voice came out thin, swallowed by the size of the clearing. She'd read somewhere that talking to yourself in the dark kept the panic down. She wasn't panicked. She was — the word she reached for was *observant*. Cool-headed. That's what people called her. Rory the unflappable. Rory who could think her way out of anything. She stepped forward into the grove. The standing stones rose on either side, close enough to touch if she spread her arms. Their surfaces were rough, pocked with lichen that smelled faintly of copper when she leaned close. Not oak, she corrected herself. Not wood at all. Something that had been oak once and mineralised, or something that had been stone and dreamed of being oak. The boundary between the two states blurred in the dark. The clearing opened beyond them. Maybe thirty feet across, roughly circular, carpeted in grass that held the impression of her footsteps behind her. She'd left prints. That grounded her. Physical evidence of her body passing through space. Normal things happening in a normal way. A sound reached her from the far side of the grove. Not a sound exactly. The absence of a sound, like someone had pressed a hand over the world's mouth for half a second. The ambient hum of insects cut out, resumed, cut out again. She froze, hand still on the pendant. Silence — true, total silence — had a texture. She could feel it against her eardrums, a pressure like descending in a lift. Then the insects resumed their noise and the relief that flooded her chest embarrassed her. "Wind," she said. The word tasted wrong. There was no wind. The wildflowers stood motionless at her feet, their pale heads locked in place. She'd checked the forecast before leaving. Clear skies, still air, temperature holding steady around nine degrees. Perfect conditions for an October night in London. Perfect conditions for walking into a Fae-touched clearing with no witnesses and a gemstone that behaved like a living thing. She crossed the grove to the centre, where a flat stone lay half-buried in the turf. Her previous visits had taught her this was the focal point — the place where the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm grew thinnest. She crouched beside it, pressing her palm to its surface. Cool. Smooth. She slid her fingers along the edge until she found the shallow groove she'd noticed before, a channel carved with a precision that spoke of tools, or claws, or something with a long memory and a steady hand. The pendant pulsed. She gasped, snatching her hand back. But the heat spread, not just against her skin but through her sternum, into the space behind her ribs where her actual heart sat beating fast. The crimson gemstone caught light that didn't exist — there was no moon through the canopy, no ambient glow from the city, nothing but the faint grey of her eyes adjusting to darkness — and held it, transformed it, threw it back in a colour she had no name for. Something between red and black. The colour of a bruise on the inside of a closed eyelid. She stood. The clearing looked different. Not darker, not lighter. Just — *more detailed*. The standing stones had edges she hadn't noticed before, sharp and deliberate, their arrangement not random but geometric, a pattern she could almost grasp if she turned her head slightly to the left. The wildflowers had shifted. She was certain of it. They faced her now, every pale head angled in her direction, and the sound they made — she hadn't realised flowers made sound — was a thin, high frequency at the edge of human hearing, like a glass rim circled by a wet finger. Something moved at the tree line. Her body reacted before her mind caught up. She dropped into a crouch, one hand on the flat stone, the other pressed against the pendant. The shape at the edge of the grove resolved and dissolved in the same instant — tall, thin, gone. Not an animal. Animals didn't move like that, didn't fold themselves along angles that didn't exist, didn't make the air behind them shimmer like exhaust heat off tarmac. "Who's there?" She pitched her voice low and steady. Barrister's daughter. She knew how to fill a room with sound without raising her volume. The insects stopped again. That terrible pressed-hand silence, heavier this time, and in the gap between one heartbeat and the next, she heard breathing. Not hers. Too slow, too deep, coming from everywhere and nowhere, the exhalation of something with lungs the size of rooms. The pendant blazed. Heat seared through her jacket, her shirt, and she yanked it free, holding it out in front of her like a talisman. The crimson glow spilled across the grass, painting the wildflowers in shades of arterial red, and in that light she saw — Footprints. Not hers. They circled the flat stone in a path she hadn't walked, pressed deep into the turf as if something heavy had paced here, round and round, waiting. The prints were too long, too narrow, the toes — if they were toes — splayed in a configuration that human feet didn't make. They were fresh. The grass hadn't sprung back. Moisture still gleamed in the depressions. She counted them. One set. One creature. Circling the stone. Her heart slammed against her ribs. She turned, slow, scanning the clearing with the pendant held high. The glow reached fifteen feet, maybe twenty, before the dark ate it. Beyond that radius, the grove became a suggestion of shapes — the standing stones like dark fingers, the trees beyond them like walls, the sky above like a lid. Something breathed again. Closer. She felt the exhale on the back of her neck, warm and damp and carrying a smell she had no reference for. Not rot. Not sweetness. Something mineral and electric, like the air before lightning, like the inside of a geode. She spun. Nothing. Empty air and wildflowers and the flat stone with its groove and the footprint she was now standing in. Her heel had landed in the depression. She stepped out of it and her boot met resistance — the grass had grown over something, a ridge of earth that ran from the stone to the nearest standing stone in a straight line. She followed it with her eyes. Another ridge, perpendicular, running to the next stone. And another. A grid. Lines connecting the stones through the earth, buried just below the surface, and she understood with a clarity that felt like ice water poured down her spine that the grove wasn't a clearing. It was a cage. The pendant pulsed in rhythm now. Not her heartbeat. Something slower, more deliberate. A summons. A key turning in a lock she hadn't known existed. She closed her fist around the gemstone and the heat spiked, not painful but urgent, and from the far side of the grove — from beyond the standing stones, from the space between the world she knew and the one that pressed against it like a face against frosted glass — something answered. Not a sound. A feeling. A vast, patient attention focusing on her the way a magnifying glass focuses sunlight. She was the paper. She was the kindling. Rory ran. She didn't decide to run. Her legs simply moved, carrying her toward the gap between the nearest standing stones, the exit she'd used before, the path back to Richmond Park and London and the ordinary world where delivery orders came in through Yu-Fei's tablet and Silas poured whiskey and the most dangerous thing in her life was the memory of Evan's hands. She crashed through the bracken, branches whipping her face, the pendant bouncing against her chest with each stride. Behind her — behind her, not chasing, not pursuing, just *there* — the grove exhaled. She felt it in her sternum, in the soles of her feet, in the roots of her teeth. A release. A door opening. A something that had been caged for a very long time stretching toward the gap in its walls. She didn't look back. The pendant went cold against her skin, its crimson glow dying all at once, and the ordinary darkness of Richmond Park closed around her like a hand. Trees she recognised. Paths she'd walked. The distant sodium orange of a lamp post on Sawyer's Hill. She stopped at the tree line, bent double, hands on her knees, lungs burning. The park spread before her in its mundane October stillness. A fox trotted across the grass sixty feet away, unbothered. The city hummed beyond the perimeter, car engines and distant sirens and the white noise of seven million people living their lives. She checked her phone. 23:02. Fifteen minutes. She'd been in the grove for fifteen minutes. It had felt like an hour. Or had it? She couldn't trust the maths. She couldn't trust her sense of time. She couldn't trust — The pendant lay against her collarbone, stone-cold and dark. No glow. No pulse. Just a crimson gemstone the size of a thumbnail on a silver chain, as inert as a marble. She closed her jacket over it and started walking. Her legs shook. Her hands shook. She shoved them in her pockets and kept moving, one foot in front of the other, back toward the park gate, toward the flat above Silas' bar, toward the life she'd built from the wreckage Evan had left her in. Behind her, hidden in the black mouth of the grove, something settled back into its cage. She didn't hear it. She didn't feel it. Not yet.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Eva had also [also]"
1"she said aloud [aloud]"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.4
95.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2029
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.25% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2029
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"whisper"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count3
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"warmth"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count2
9
word"resolved"
count1
10
word"scanning"
count1
11
word"electric"
count1
12
word"down her spine"
count1
13
word"sense of"
count1
14
word"pulse"
count1
15
word"marble"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"weight"
2"pulsed"
3"throb"
4"warmth"
5"footsteps"
6"silence"
7"could feel"
8"perfect"
9"resolved"
10"scanning"
11"electric"
12"down her spine"
13"sense of"
14"pulse"
15"marble"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences188
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences188
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences189
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen58
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords4
totalWords2052
ratio0.002
matches
0"observant"
1"more detailed"
2"there"
93.75% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Not oak, she corrected herself."
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions35
wordCount1990
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Eva"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Carter1
October3
Silas2
Eva5
Rory5
London3
Evan2
Heartstone1
Fae-touched1
Earth1
Fae2
Barrister1
Footprints1
Richmond2
Park2
Yu-Fei1
Sawyer1
Hill1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Silas"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
5"Barrister"
6"Sawyer"
places
0"October"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Yu-Fei"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences106
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like ice water poured down her spi"
1"felt like an hour"
53.80% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.462
wordCount2052
matches
0"not just against her skin but through her sternum, into the space behind her ribs"
1"not random but geometric, a pattern she could almost grasp if she turned he"
2"not painful but urgent"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences189
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean46.64
std30.77
cv0.66
sampleLengths
06
199
262
321
495
588
615
741
861
96
1070
1144
1252
1338
1468
1591
163
1799
18100
196
2072
2124
2245
2347
241
2567
2610
2758
2845
2922
3093
314
3278
3327
342
3580
3656
3748
3856
3940
4031
4155
4224
432
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences188
matches
0"been caged"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs289
matches
0"were describing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount23
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences17
totalSentences189
ratio0.09
matches
0"The standing stones ringed the clearing like broken teeth — massive, grey, older than anything with a name."
1"That gave her — she did the maths and didn't like the answer."
2"Eva had also been the one to mention the grove — a whisper over pints at Silas' bar, something about a place that existed between things, a seam in the world where the Fae had left their fingerprints."
3"She was — the word she reached for was *observant*."
4"Silence — true, total silence — had a texture."
5"Her previous visits had taught her this was the focal point — the place where the boundary between Earth and the Fae realm grew thinnest."
6"The crimson gemstone caught light that didn't exist — there was no moon through the canopy, no ambient glow from the city, nothing but the faint grey of her eyes adjusting to darkness — and held it, transformed it, threw it back in a colour she had no name for."
7"Just — *more detailed*."
8"They faced her now, every pale head angled in her direction, and the sound they made — she hadn't realised flowers made sound — was a thin, high frequency at the edge of human hearing, like a glass rim circled by a wet finger."
9"The shape at the edge of the grove resolved and dissolved in the same instant — tall, thin, gone."
10"The crimson glow spilled across the grass, painting the wildflowers in shades of arterial red, and in that light she saw —"
11"The prints were too long, too narrow, the toes — if they were toes — splayed in a configuration that human feet didn't make."
12"Beyond that radius, the grove became a suggestion of shapes — the standing stones like dark fingers, the trees beyond them like walls, the sky above like a lid."
13"She stepped out of it and her boot met resistance — the grass had grown over something, a ridge of earth that ran from the stone to the nearest standing stone in a straight line."
14"She closed her fist around the gemstone and the heat spiked, not painful but urgent, and from the far side of the grove — from beyond the standing stones, from the space between the world she knew and the one that pressed against it like a face against frosted glass — something answered."
15"Behind her — behind her, not chasing, not pursuing, just *there* — the grove exhaled."
16"She couldn't trust —"
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount218
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount6
adverbRatio0.027522935779816515
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences189
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences189
mean10.86
std10.52
cv0.968
sampleLengths
06
126
218
320
411
59
615
78
84
99
1013
114
1224
1321
142
1536
1638
1714
185
193
202
2120
2219
2323
247
2514
2611
271
283
2922
306
311
3212
334
3412
3514
363
3710
381
395
403
419
426
4316
4416
455
464
4719
4810
495
38.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.30319148936170215
totalSentences188
uniqueOpeners57
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences157
matches
0"Instead, pale shapes clustered at"
1"Then the pendant had arrived."
2"Just a small cardboard box"
3"Just stone and silver and"
4"Maybe thirty feet across, roughly"
5"Then the insects resumed their"
6"Just — *more detailed*."
7"Too slow, too deep, coming"
8"Just a crimson gemstone the"
ratio0.057
69.68% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount59
totalSentences157
matches
0"She'd walked this path three"
1"She pulled her phone from"
2"She'd told Silas she'd be"
3"She'd worn it for a"
4"She'd felt it again tonight,"
5"She cupped it through the"
6"she said aloud"
7"Her voice came out thin,"
8"She'd read somewhere that talking"
9"She wasn't panicked."
10"She was — the word"
11"She stepped forward into the"
12"Their surfaces were rough, pocked"
13"She'd left prints."
14"She froze, hand still on"
15"She could feel it against"
16"She'd checked the forecast before"
17"She crossed the grove to"
18"Her previous visits had taught"
19"She crouched beside it, pressing"
ratio0.376
74.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount121
totalSentences157
matches
0"The ancient oaks swallowed her"
1"Aurora Carter pushed through the"
2"The standing stones ringed the"
3"She'd walked this path three"
4"The wildflowers should have been"
5"She pulled her phone from"
6"The screen read 22:47."
7"She'd told Silas she'd be"
8"That gave her — she"
9"Time moved strange here."
10"Eva had warned her, the"
11"Eva had plenty of it,"
12"Eva had also been the"
13"Rory had filed it away"
14"She'd worn it for a"
15"A single, slow throb of"
16"She'd felt it again tonight,"
17"She cupped it through the"
18"she said aloud"
19"Her voice came out thin,"
ratio0.771
31.85% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences157
matches
0"Now the pendant hung against"
ratio0.006
38.10% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences75
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Aurora Carter pushed through the last line of bracken and stopped, one boot sunk into soft moss that had no business being this damp in October."
1"Eva had warned her, the way Eva warned about everything: casual, offhand, delivered between bites of toast as if she were describing the weather."
2"Something that had been oak once and mineralised, or something that had been stone and dreamed of being oak."
3"Maybe thirty feet across, roughly circular, carpeted in grass that held the impression of her footsteps behind her."
4"Then the insects resumed their noise and the relief that flooded her chest embarrassed her."
5"Perfect conditions for walking into a Fae-touched clearing with no witnesses and a gemstone that behaved like a living thing."
6"She slid her fingers along the edge until she found the shallow groove she'd noticed before, a channel carved with a precision that spoke of tools, or claws, or…"
7"The crimson gemstone caught light that didn't exist — there was no moon through the canopy, no ambient glow from the city, nothing but the faint grey of her eye…"
8"They circled the flat stone in a path she hadn't walked, pressed deep into the turf as if something heavy had paced here, round and round, waiting."
9"She stepped out of it and her boot met resistance — the grass had grown over something, a ridge of earth that ran from the stone to the nearest standing stone i…"
10"Lines connecting the stones through the earth, buried just below the surface, and she understood with a clarity that felt like ice water poured down her spine t…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
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