Run: 2026-03-12-01KKFR6GEA8XC07CSMKJ4Y41B3

Run Details

Duration:
55.5s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The path through Richmond Park didn't feel right. Rory knew the route. She'd walked it four times now, always at dusk when the light went amber and the deer grew bold enough to cross the footpaths in velvet streams. But tonight the shadows under the oaks stretched wrong, pooling in places where she remembered flat grass, and the air tasted metallic on the back of her tongue. Like licking a battery. She checked her phone. No signal. Hadn't had signal for twenty minutes, actually. She should've turned back then. The Heartstone Pendant hung warm against her sternum, beating with that faint pulse she'd learned to associate with proximity to the Fae Grove. It hadn't done this before. Not with this frequency, not with this heat. Her fingers found the chain through the fabric of her jacket and she pressed the stone flat against her chest. It thrummed like a second heartbeat. "Great," she muttered to the darkening treeline. "That's new." She'd come because of the text. Simple words, no sender ID: *Isolde needs you. The Grove. Tonight.* Isolde, the Fae who'd helped her before, who existed in that strange pocket between Richmond Park and somewhere else entirely. Isolde, who had never once used a mobile phone to communicate. So either someone was pretending to be Isolde, or the situation had gotten bad enough that Fae were resorting to modern technology. Neither option sat well. The standing stones appeared between one step and the next. That was the thing about the Fae Grove — you couldn't walk to it deliberately. You had to stumble into it, or be called. The ancient oaks rose from the earth like fingers, their bark black and smooth as obsidian in the failing light. Seven of them, arranged in a rough circle, their canopy woven so tight that the sky beyond was invisible. Not that there was much sky left to see. Dusk had bled into night faster than the weather app predicted. Rory stopped at the threshold. The warm air from inside washed over her — wrong again. It should've been cold. November in London was cold. But the grove breathed out heat, thick and humid, carrying the scent of flowers that had no business blooming in winter. She stepped between the stones. Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that belonged to midsummer — oxeye daisies, red campion, cornflowers so blue they seemed to produce their own light. They grew to her waist, their stems brushing her jeans as she waded through. The Heartstone's pulse quickened. She could feel it against her ribs, skipping like a bird in a cage. "Isolde?" Her voice came out steady. Good. She needed steady. Nothing answered. The grove held its breath. She pushed forward through the flowers. Her boots found the old path, a bare-earth track that wound toward the centre of the clearing where a flat stone lay half-buried in moss. The stone served as a meeting place, a threshold between Earth and wherever Isolde called home. It was empty. Rory scanned the edges of the grove. The oaks stood motionless, their lower branches reaching like arms frozen mid-grab. Between their trunks, the darkness had a thickness to it — not the absence of light but something more deliberate. She watched it for a long moment, waiting for shapes to resolve themselves out of the black. Nothing moved. She took out her phone again. Dead. Not the battery — the screen was black and unresponsive, the device cool and inert in her hand. She'd charged it to eighty-three percent before leaving the flat. She slipped it back into her pocket and wrapped both hands around the pendant. "Right. So." Her breath fogged. The heat from moments ago had vanished, replaced by a chill that crept through her jacket and settled into her bones. She shivered once, violently, and the sound of it — her teeth clicking together — seemed too loud for the space. It bounced between the standing stones and came back wrong, like an echo from a room larger than the grove could contain. Something shifted at the edge of her vision. She turned. The far side of the clearing looked the same — flowers, trees, dark. But the flowers there had changed colour. Where moments ago they'd been whites and blues, now the petals closest to the stone's shadow were deep red. Not the red of campion. The red of wet meat. Rory blinked. The flowers were white again. "Just the light," she told the grove. The grove didn't care. She stepped onto the flat stone. It was warm beneath her boots, warmer than it should've been, and the moss that coated its surface had a texture like skin. She resisted the urge to step off it. Isolde had told her once that the stone was a landmark, a fixed point. If she stayed on it, the grove couldn't shift around her. *The grove cannot shift around you.* She'd imagined that, hadn't she? Isolde had said nothing about shifting. Rory pressed her palms against her temples. Her thoughts felt syrupy, moving too slow through her skull. The time distortion — that was real, at least. An hour inside could be minutes or days outside. She'd known that coming in. She'd planned for it. Set an alarm on Eva's phone for three hours, told her to send someone if she didn't check in by midnight. How long had she been here? Twenty minutes? An hour? There was no way to know. No moon visible through the canopy. No stars. A sound reached her from beyond the oaks. Footsteps. Soft, deliberate, circling the outer edge of the grove. She held still and tracked them by ear — north side, moving east, each step placed with care. Not the crunch of boots on fallen leaves. Something wet. A soft, rhythmic *pat-pat-pat*, like bare feet on damp ground. "Isolde?" The footsteps stopped. Silence poured into the gap they'd left. Rory's ears rang with it, a high thin whine that climbed and climbed until she pressed her palms flat over them. The pendant pulsed against her chest, rapid and panicked, and she realized her own heart had matched its rhythm without her permission. The footsteps resumed. Closer now. Inside the ring of standing stones. She turned slowly. The clearing looked the same, flowers and moss and the flat stone beneath her feet. But the darkness between the oaks had drawn inward. She could see the boundary, the place where the last wildflower gave way to shadow, and it was closer than it should've been. The grove was shrinking. "That's — okay." She forced her breathing to even out. In through the nose, out through the mouth. The way Dr. Patel had taught her after the Evan stuff. "That's fine. I just need to think." The pendant's warmth spiked. She looked down. A faint red glow emanated from the gemstone, seeping through the weave of her jumper. She'd seen it glow before, but never like this. Never this bright. The light it cast painted the moss in shades of crimson and made the flowers around the stone look bruised. Another sound. Closer than the footsteps, right at the edge of the stone. Breathing. Slow and wet, the kind of breath that comes through teeth too long for a mouth. She didn't look down. Looking down felt like the wrong thing to do. *Pat-pat-pat.* Behind her now. The footsteps circled the stone with patient precision. Rory's hand moved to the pocket of her jeans. She carried a folding knife — Silas had insisted after her second week working the late delivery shift. She flicked it open and the blade caught the Heartstone's glow, throwing a sliver of red light across the flowers. The breathing stopped. She held the knife at her side and stared straight ahead. Her pulse hammered in her ears. The pendant burned against her skin, not painfully but urgently, a sustained pressure like a hand pressed flat over her heart. Something scraped across the stone behind her. A fingernail. Or something shaped like a fingernail, dragged slow across the moss, leaving a trail she could hear but refused to look at. "What do you want?" Her voice didn't waver. She gave herself points for that, even as her legs trembled and her free hand clenched so tight her nails bit crescents into her palm. The scraping continued. Circled her once. Twice. Each revolution tighter, the sound drawing closer to her boots until whatever made it traced the outline of her left foot and she felt a pressure through the leather, light and exploratory. She jumped sideways off the stone. The wildflowers swallowed her up to the waist. She stumbled, caught herself, turned with the knife raised. The flat stone sat in the clearing, empty. The moss was undisturbed. No scratches, no trail, nothing. But the grove had changed. The standing stones were closer together, their canopies interlocking overhead to form a dome. The flowers around her had turned entirely red, every petal, every stem, a uniform crimson that made the clearing look like a mouth. The air smelled different — not flowers anymore but something older, something that reminded her of cellars and forgotten rooms and the particular mustiness of a place that had been sealed for a long time. She checked her watch. The hands weren't moving. "Okay." She backed toward where the entrance should be, between two oaks on the western edge. The darkness there had substance, a quality like fabric, and she reached toward it with her free hand. Her fingers touched something cold and smooth. Not bark. Not stone. She yanked her hand back and the thing she'd touched moved — a slow, deliberate withdrawal, like something shifting away from her touch. Rory ran. She ran without direction, through flowers that grabbed at her ankles with stems that felt too much like fingers, toward the nearest gap between the oaks. The pendant blazed against her chest, a point of warmth in a world that had gone cold, and she followed its heat like a compass needle. The grove fought her. The flowers thickened. The ground tilted. Sounds layered on top of each other — that wet breathing from all sides now, the footsteps multiplying until it sounded like a crowd, and underneath it all a voice that might have been words in a language she didn't know. She burst through the treeline and hit grass. Real grass, cold and wet with dew, the kind that grew in Richmond Park and nowhere else. The oaks stood behind her, normal and still, their canopy open to a sky full of stars. Rory collapsed onto her knees and vomited into the grass. The pendant had gone dark against her chest. Her phone buzzed in her pocket — she pulled it out, hands shaking so badly she nearly dropped it. Three percent battery. Six notifications from Eva. 11:47 PM. She'd been inside for less than an hour. Maybe less than that. She sat back on her heels and wiped her mouth with the back of her hand. The grove looked ordinary behind her — a circle of old trees, nothing more. The wildflowers, if there were any, were invisible from this distance. Her phone buzzed again. Eva: *You good??* Rory looked at the grove. Looked at her phone. Looked at the red scratches on her left hand, four parallel lines that wept thin blood in the moonlight. She didn't remember getting scratched. She typed back with her thumb: *On my way home.* She stood. She didn't look back at the grove as she walked toward the park exit. She didn't need to. She could hear something following her.
created_at"2026-03-12T00:47:27.19Z" 3/12/2026, 12:47:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.82% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1932
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"deliberately"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"deliberately"
1"slowly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Patel"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
35.30% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1932
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count3
2
word"quickened"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"resolve"
count1
6
word"charged"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"echo"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count6
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"silence"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count1
13
word"warmth"
count2
14
word"flicked"
count1
15
word"trembled"
count1
16
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"pulse"
2"quickened"
3"could feel"
4"scanned"
5"resolve"
6"charged"
7"chill"
8"echo"
9"footsteps"
10"rhythmic"
11"silence"
12"pulsed"
13"warmth"
14"flicked"
15"trembled"
16"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences196
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences196
filterMatches
0"look"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences201
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords20
totalWords1949
ratio0.01
matches
0"Isolde needs you. The Grove. Tonight."
1"The grove cannot shift around you."
2"pat-pat-pat"
3"Pat-pat-pat."
4"You good??"
5"On my way home."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1924
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.52
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park3
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Fae4
Grove3
Isolde7
London1
Good1
Earth1
Eva3
Dr1
Evan1
Silas1
Rory10
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Pendant"
2"Grove"
3"Isolde"
4"Eva"
5"Dr"
6"Evan"
7"Silas"
8"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"London"
4"Earth"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences119
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like the wrong thing to do"
1"sounded like a crowd, and underneath it al"
46.07% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.539
wordCount1949
matches
0"not the absence of light but something more deliberate"
1"not painfully but urgently, a sustained pressure like a hand pressed flat over"
2"not flowers anymore but something older, something"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences201
matches
0"known that coming"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs63
mean30.94
std22.82
cv0.738
sampleLengths
08
163
218
362
49
548
626
793
846
95
1057
1110
127
1350
1456
152
1649
172
1867
198
2051
217
2211
2362
2417
2565
2624
2756
281
293
3050
3111
3254
3336
3454
3543
3612
3747
383
3938
4031
414
4229
4339
446
4534
465
4772
488
4934
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences196
matches
0"been sealed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs300
matches
0"was pretending"
1"were resorting"
2"was shrinking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount16
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences201
ratio0.075
matches
0"That was the thing about the Fae Grove — you couldn't walk to it deliberately."
1"The warm air from inside washed over her — wrong again."
2"Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that belonged to midsummer — oxeye daisies, red campion, cornflowers so blue they seemed to produce their own light."
3"Between their trunks, the darkness had a thickness to it — not the absence of light but something more deliberate."
4"Not the battery — the screen was black and unresponsive, the device cool and inert in her hand."
5"She shivered once, violently, and the sound of it — her teeth clicking together — seemed too loud for the space."
6"The far side of the clearing looked the same — flowers, trees, dark."
7"The time distortion — that was real, at least."
8"She held still and tracked them by ear — north side, moving east, each step placed with care."
9"She carried a folding knife — Silas had insisted after her second week working the late delivery shift."
10"The air smelled different — not flowers anymore but something older, something that reminded her of cellars and forgotten rooms and the particular mustiness of a place that had been sealed for a long time."
11"She yanked her hand back and the thing she'd touched moved — a slow, deliberate withdrawal, like something shifting away from her touch."
12"Sounds layered on top of each other — that wet breathing from all sides now, the footsteps multiplying until it sounded like a crowd, and underneath it all a voice that might have been words in a language she didn't know."
13"Her phone buzzed in her pocket — she pulled it out, hands shaking so badly she nearly dropped it."
14"The grove looked ordinary behind her — a circle of old trees, nothing more."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1912
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"inside washed over her —"
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.030334728033472803
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.005230125523012552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences201
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences201
mean9.7
std7.67
cv0.791
sampleLengths
08
14
227
328
44
54
62
77
85
923
105
118
1220
136
147
152
166
178
182
1921
2011
2122
224
2310
2415
259
2620
2719
289
2911
305
3111
324
335
3421
355
3625
3714
384
3914
406
411
423
432
445
456
4625
4716
483
497
44.44% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.32338308457711445
totalSentences201
uniqueOpeners65
38.54% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences173
matches
0"Soft, deliberate, circling the outer"
1"Maybe less than that."
ratio0.012
76.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount62
totalSentences173
matches
0"She'd walked it four times"
1"She checked her phone."
2"She should've turned back then."
3"It hadn't done this before."
4"Her fingers found the chain"
5"It thrummed like a second"
6"she muttered to the darkening"
7"She'd come because of the"
8"You had to stumble into"
9"It should've been cold."
10"She stepped between the stones."
11"They grew to her waist,"
12"She could feel it against"
13"Her voice came out steady"
14"She needed steady."
15"She pushed forward through the"
16"Her boots found the old"
17"It was empty."
18"She watched it for a"
19"She took out her phone"
ratio0.358
72.72% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount134
totalSentences173
matches
0"The path through Richmond Park"
1"Rory knew the route."
2"She'd walked it four times"
3"She checked her phone."
4"She should've turned back then."
5"The Heartstone Pendant hung warm"
6"It hadn't done this before."
7"Her fingers found the chain"
8"It thrummed like a second"
9"she muttered to the darkening"
10"She'd come because of the"
11"Tonight.* Isolde, the Fae who'd"
12"Isolde, who had never once"
13"Neither option sat well."
14"The standing stones appeared between"
15"That was the thing about"
16"You had to stumble into"
17"The ancient oaks rose from"
18"Dusk had bled into night"
19"Rory stopped at the threshold."
ratio0.775
28.90% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences173
matches
0"If she stayed on it,"
ratio0.006
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences71
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"It was warm beneath her boots, warmer than it should've been, and the moss that coated its surface had a texture like skin."
1"The air smelled different — not flowers anymore but something older, something that reminded her of cellars and forgotten rooms and the particular mustiness of …"
2"The pendant blazed against her chest, a point of warmth in a world that had gone cold, and she followed its heat like a compass needle."
3"Sounds layered on top of each other — that wet breathing from all sides now, the footsteps multiplying until it sounded like a crowd, and underneath it all a vo…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
50.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.2
82.0482%