| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.82% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1932 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| 80.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 35.30% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1932 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "quickened" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "resolve" | | 6 | "charged" | | 7 | "chill" | | 8 | "echo" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "rhythmic" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "pulsed" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "flicked" | | 15 | "trembled" | | 16 | "traced" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 196 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 3 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 196 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 201 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 6 | | markdownWords | 20 | | totalWords | 1949 | | ratio | 0.01 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde needs you. The Grove. Tonight." | | 1 | "The grove cannot shift around you." | | 2 | "pat-pat-pat" | | 3 | "Pat-pat-pat." | | 4 | "You good??" | | 5 | "On my way home." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 43 | | wordCount | 1924 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 0.52 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Grove | 3 | | Isolde | 7 | | London | 1 | | Good | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Eva | 3 | | Dr | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Rory | 10 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Heartstone" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Dr" | | 6 | "Evan" | | 7 | "Silas" | | 8 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 119 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the wrong thing to do" | | 1 | "sounded like a crowd, and underneath it al" |
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| 46.07% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 1.539 | | wordCount | 1949 | | matches | | 0 | "not the absence of light but something more deliberate" | | 1 | "not painfully but urgently, a sustained pressure like a hand pressed flat over" | | 2 | "not flowers anymore but something older, something" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 201 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 30.94 | | std | 22.82 | | cv | 0.738 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 62 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 26 | | 7 | 93 | | 8 | 46 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 57 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 50 | | 14 | 56 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 49 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 7 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 62 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 65 | | 26 | 24 | | 27 | 56 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 54 | | 33 | 36 | | 34 | 54 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 47 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 31 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 29 | | 43 | 39 | | 44 | 6 | | 45 | 34 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 72 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 196 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 300 | | matches | | 0 | "was pretending" | | 1 | "were resorting" | | 2 | "was shrinking" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 16 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 15 | | totalSentences | 201 | | ratio | 0.075 | | matches | | 0 | "That was the thing about the Fae Grove — you couldn't walk to it deliberately." | | 1 | "The warm air from inside washed over her — wrong again." | | 2 | "Wildflowers carpeted the clearing in colours that belonged to midsummer — oxeye daisies, red campion, cornflowers so blue they seemed to produce their own light." | | 3 | "Between their trunks, the darkness had a thickness to it — not the absence of light but something more deliberate." | | 4 | "Not the battery — the screen was black and unresponsive, the device cool and inert in her hand." | | 5 | "She shivered once, violently, and the sound of it — her teeth clicking together — seemed too loud for the space." | | 6 | "The far side of the clearing looked the same — flowers, trees, dark." | | 7 | "The time distortion — that was real, at least." | | 8 | "She held still and tracked them by ear — north side, moving east, each step placed with care." | | 9 | "She carried a folding knife — Silas had insisted after her second week working the late delivery shift." | | 10 | "The air smelled different — not flowers anymore but something older, something that reminded her of cellars and forgotten rooms and the particular mustiness of a place that had been sealed for a long time." | | 11 | "She yanked her hand back and the thing she'd touched moved — a slow, deliberate withdrawal, like something shifting away from her touch." | | 12 | "Sounds layered on top of each other — that wet breathing from all sides now, the footsteps multiplying until it sounded like a crowd, and underneath it all a voice that might have been words in a language she didn't know." | | 13 | "Her phone buzzed in her pocket — she pulled it out, hands shaking so badly she nearly dropped it." | | 14 | "The grove looked ordinary behind her — a circle of old trees, nothing more." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1912 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "inside washed over her —" |
| | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.030334728033472803 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005230125523012552 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 201 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 201 | | mean | 9.7 | | std | 7.67 | | cv | 0.791 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 8 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 27 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 4 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 6 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 6 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 10 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 20 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 9 | | 29 | 11 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 11 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 25 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 3 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 25 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 44.44% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.32338308457711445 | | totalSentences | 201 | | uniqueOpeners | 65 | |
| 38.54% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "Soft, deliberate, circling the outer" | | 1 | "Maybe less than that." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 76.65% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 62 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "She'd walked it four times" | | 1 | "She checked her phone." | | 2 | "She should've turned back then." | | 3 | "It hadn't done this before." | | 4 | "Her fingers found the chain" | | 5 | "It thrummed like a second" | | 6 | "she muttered to the darkening" | | 7 | "She'd come because of the" | | 8 | "You had to stumble into" | | 9 | "It should've been cold." | | 10 | "She stepped between the stones." | | 11 | "They grew to her waist," | | 12 | "She could feel it against" | | 13 | "Her voice came out steady" | | 14 | "She needed steady." | | 15 | "She pushed forward through the" | | 16 | "Her boots found the old" | | 17 | "It was empty." | | 18 | "She watched it for a" | | 19 | "She took out her phone" |
| | ratio | 0.358 | |
| 72.72% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 134 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "The path through Richmond Park" | | 1 | "Rory knew the route." | | 2 | "She'd walked it four times" | | 3 | "She checked her phone." | | 4 | "She should've turned back then." | | 5 | "The Heartstone Pendant hung warm" | | 6 | "It hadn't done this before." | | 7 | "Her fingers found the chain" | | 8 | "It thrummed like a second" | | 9 | "she muttered to the darkening" | | 10 | "She'd come because of the" | | 11 | "Tonight.* Isolde, the Fae who'd" | | 12 | "Isolde, who had never once" | | 13 | "Neither option sat well." | | 14 | "The standing stones appeared between" | | 15 | "That was the thing about" | | 16 | "You had to stumble into" | | 17 | "The ancient oaks rose from" | | 18 | "Dusk had bled into night" | | 19 | "Rory stopped at the threshold." |
| | ratio | 0.775 | |
| 28.90% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 71 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "It was warm beneath her boots, warmer than it should've been, and the moss that coated its surface had a texture like skin." | | 1 | "The air smelled different — not flowers anymore but something older, something that reminded her of cellars and forgotten rooms and the particular mustiness of …" | | 2 | "The pendant blazed against her chest, a point of warmth in a world that had gone cold, and she followed its heat like a compass needle." | | 3 | "Sounds layered on top of each other — that wet breathing from all sides now, the footsteps multiplying until it sounded like a crowd, and underneath it all a vo…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 10 | | tagDensity | 0.2 | | leniency | 0.4 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |