Run: 2026-03-12-01KKFR7YWKJSTX9EQDN6XY0HM2

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Duration:
44.9s
Cost:
$0.000000
Provider:
Stealth

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last delivery box scraped against Rory’s ribs as she shouldered through The Raven’s Nest’s back door. The scent of stale beer and lemon polish hit her, a familiar, weary perfume. She slid the box onto the scarred wooden counter of the tiny office nook, exhaling a cloud of winter air. Tuesday nights were dead. A low, bluesy guitar riff bled through the wall from the bar proper, mixing with the murmur of three or four regulars. Silas was polishing a glass behind the main bar, his movements methodical, economical. The green neon from the sign outside painted one side of his face in an emerald wash, catching the silver of his signet ring. He didn’t look up, just tipped his chin toward the box. “Yu-Fei’s getting ambitious with the wonton shipments.” “Supplier mix-up.” Rory unzipped her delivery jacket, the worn fabric sighing. “She’s turning it into a special. ‘Chef’s Surprise Potstickers.’” She hooked the jacket on a peg, rolling her shoulder. A dull ache lived there, a souvenir from the bicycle courier days she hadn’t fully shed. The bell above the front door chimed, a bright, lonely sound. Rory glanced through the service window. A man stood there, shaking rain from a very expensive-looking overcoat. He was tall, his dark hair styled with a product that caught the low light. He scanned the room with the quick, assessing gaze of someone used to looking for exits or better options. His eyes, a familiar, startling green, landed on her. He froze. The polished, confident posture faltered for a second, a crack in the veneer. “Rory?” The name, spoken in that specific, polished-up accent, scraped against a decade of silence. She didn’t move, her hand still on the zipper of her jacket. Liam Doherty. Not the lanky, nervous boy who’d shared spliffs with her behind the university library, smelling of cheap aftershave and big dreams. This man’s shoulders filled out the coat, his jaw was sharper, a faint shadow of stubble artfully maintained. He walked toward the bar, his gaze drinking her in—the faded band t-shirt, the black work trousers, the smudge of grease on her wrist near the crescent scar. His smile was a well-rehearsed thing, charming and tilted. “My God. Rory Carter. In the flesh.” He stopped a careful few feet away. “I’d heard you’d… left Cardiff.” “People hear things.” Her voice came out flat, a stone skipping across still water. She watched his face, the way his smile tightened at the edges. He’d always hated when she didn’t play along. Silas placed the polished glass down with a soft click. He said nothing, just began drying another one, his hazel eyes moving between them like a spectator at a particularly slow tennis match. “Buy you a drink?” Liam gestured to the empty stool beside him. “For old time’s sake. You look… well. Different, but well.” She could have said no. The thought was a clean, sharp blade. Instead, she walked around the end of the bar, snagging the stool. She didn’t take the one he indicated, choosing the one two spaces down, creating a buffer. “I’ll have what he’s having,” she told Silas, nodding at Liam’s untouched tumbler of amber liquid. “Macallan 18,” Liam said, a hint of pride in his voice. “Only the best, now.” He waited until Silas poured a measure for Rory, the whisky glowing like a trapped sunset. “So, you work here?” “Sometimes. I work for a restaurant. Deliver things.” She took a sip. The whisky was smooth, burning a clean path down her throat. A waste on a palate like hers, which was more accustomed to tea and cheap lager. “You’re in London for business?” “The firm has an office in the City. Mergers and acquisitions. I’m based here now.” He swirled his glass. “I’m a partner, actually.” “Congratulations.” The word was neutral, a pebble dropped into a well. She remembered him crying over a failed mock exam, convinced his life was over. “It’s… a lot of work. Long hours.” He leaned forward, conspiratorial. “But rewarding. You know how it is.” He didn’t, of course. He had no idea how it was. His eyes flickered to her hands, wrapped around the glass. “What happened to law? Your dad must have been thrilled. Following in his footsteps.” The mention of her father was a carefully aimed dart. “I decided courtrooms weren’t for me.” “A waste. You were the sharpest one in our year.” He said it like a compliment, but it was an accusation. *You had this potential. Look at you.* “I found other uses for it.” She looked at Silas, who was now methodically slicing a lemon, the knife a silver blur. “Some places don’t care about your degree. They care if you can think on your feet. If you’re reliable.” Liam’s smile finally slipped, replaced by a flicker of discomfort. He was here for a different kind of reunion—one where he could display his success to a ghost from his past, not debate life philosophy with a delivery woman in a Soho dive. “Look, Rory… about Evan. I heard what happened. After. I should have called. I was… going through my own stuff, with the training contract, and…” “And it was easier not to.” She finished his sentence, her voice still quiet. No heat, just the plain fact of it. She took another drink. The whisky was warming her now, softening the edges of a very old, very cold anger. He flinched. “It wasn’t like that. It was complicated.” “It wasn’t complicated. It was simple. You chose what was easy.” She set the glass down. The green light caught the condensation on its side. “It’s fine, Liam. People choose easy every day.” He looked down at his hands, at the signet ring she hadn’t noticed before. A family crest, probably. “You’re right. I’m sorry. Truly.” This apology sounded different, scraped raw. “I was a coward. I saw how he was, the way he looked at you. And I did nothing.” The admission hung in the air, heavier than the smoke that wasn’t there anymore. Silas stopped slicing lemons. He placed the knife down, perfectly aligned with the cutting board’s edge. His gaze on Rory was steady, a silent anchor. “He’s in prison, you know,” Liam added, as if offering another shiny coin for her collection of facts. “Assault charge. Not related to you, but…” “I know.” Rory had made it her business to know. The knowledge was a locked box in a dark room in her mind. She never visited, but she knew its dimensions. A silence stretched, filled only by the blues guitar. It wasn’t uncomfortable, just vast. The ghosts of their younger selves crowded the space between them—the Rory who argued law theory with fierce, sparkling eyes, the Liam who dreamed of changing the world, not just owning a piece of it. “You’re different,” he finally said, and this time it wasn’t an observation on her clothes. It was a confession. “So are you.” She looked at him, really looked. The fine lines of stress around his eyes, the tight set of his shoulders, the way his expensive coat seemed to wear him, not the other way around. “You got everything you wanted.” “I did.” He didn’t sound sure. He sounded like a man stating a fact from a prospectus. He finished his whisky in one go, the gesture suddenly rough. “I should… I have an early meeting.” He stood, pulling a wallet from his inner pocket. He dropped two crisp twenties on the bar, far too much for two drinks. “Keep the change.” He looked at Rory, a universe of unreadable things in his green eyes. “It was… something. Seeing you.” “You too, Liam.” He walked to the door, pausing with his hand on the brass handle. He didn’t look back. The bell chimed his exit, a final, bright punctuation mark. Rory stared at the two twenty-pound notes. She picked one up, feeling its crisp, alien texture. She looked at Silas, who had resumed his polishing. “Partners don’t usually drink alone in places like this on a Tuesday,” she said. “They do when they’re hiding from their own lives,” Silas replied, his voice a low rumble. He nodded toward the bills. “You going to keep his guilt money?” Rory held the note up to the green light. It looked strange, unreal. Then she folded it neatly, not in half, but in quarters, and slid it into the pocket of her work trousers. “No,” she said, picking up her glass again. The whisky tasted sharper now, cleaner. “I’m going to keep it. A reminder that the price of admission to a life like that is everything you leave behind.” She took a drink, the burn familiar and good. “And that some things aren’t for sale.”
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags28
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.036
effectiveRatio0.036
72.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"perfectly"
count1
4
adverb"really"
count1
5
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"carefully"
2"truly"
3"perfectly"
4"really"
5"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1468
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"methodical"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"silence"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"footsteps"
count1
6
word"potential"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"aligned"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"methodical"
2"scanned"
3"silence"
4"flickered"
5"footsteps"
6"potential"
7"flicker"
8"aligned"
9"unreadable"
10"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences103
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords7
totalWords1465
ratio0.005
matches
0"You had this potential. Look at you."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1117
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory10
Raven1
Nest1
Doherty1
Silas8
Liam7
Soho1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Nest"
2"Doherty"
3"Silas"
4"Liam"
places
0"Raven"
1"Soho"
globalScore1
windowScore1
88.27% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences81
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"as if offering another shiny coin for her collection of facts"
1"sounded like a man stating a fact from a p"
63.48% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.365
wordCount1465
matches
0"Not related to you, but…”"
1"not in half, but in quarters"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences124
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean34.07
std17.77
cv0.522
sampleLengths
077
148
27
346
471
515
61
767
837
919
1034
1133
1222
1356
1435
1544
1623
1725
1853
1916
2028
2141
2268
2342
249
2533
2648
2739
2825
2931
3049
3119
3242
3335
3423
3521
363
3727
3825
3914
4028
4134
4252
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs174
matches
0"was polishing"
1"was warming"
73.73% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences124
ratio0.024
matches
0"He walked toward the bar, his gaze drinking her in—the faded band t-shirt, the black work trousers, the smudge of grease on her wrist near the crescent scar."
1"He was here for a different kind of reunion—one where he could display his success to a ghost from his past, not debate life philosophy with a delivery woman in a Soho dive."
2"The ghosts of their younger selves crowded the space between them—the Rory who argued law theory with fierce, sparkling eyes, the Liam who dreamed of changing the world, not just owning a piece of it."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1124
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03558718861209965
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.013345195729537367
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean11.81
std6.67
cv0.565
sampleLengths
017
114
220
34
422
513
624
711
87
911
1019
1116
1211
136
1411
1515
1619
179
182
1913
201
2114
2212
232
2421
2518
2628
279
2814
295
3014
3112
328
3310
3423
3512
3610
375
387
3912
4016
4116
4211
4320
444
4512
4611
4716
485
4919
44.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29838709677419356
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners37
67.34% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences99
matches
0"Instead, she walked around the"
1"Then she folded it neatly,"
ratio0.02
1.82% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount54
totalSentences99
matches
0"She slid the box onto"
1"He didn’t look up, just"
2"She hooked the jacket on"
3"He was tall, his dark"
4"He scanned the room with"
5"His eyes, a familiar, startling"
6"She didn’t move, her hand"
7"He walked toward the bar,"
8"His smile was a well-rehearsed"
9"He stopped a careful few"
10"Her voice came out flat,"
11"She watched his face, the"
12"He’d always hated when she"
13"He said nothing, just began"
14"She could have said no."
15"She didn’t take the one"
16"she told Silas, nodding at"
17"He waited until Silas poured"
18"She took a sip"
19"He swirled his glass"
ratio0.545
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences99
matches
0"The last delivery box scraped"
1"The scent of stale beer"
2"She slid the box onto"
3"Tuesday nights were dead."
4"A low, bluesy guitar riff"
5"Silas was polishing a glass"
6"The green neon from the"
7"He didn’t look up, just"
8"Rory unzipped her delivery jacket,"
9"She hooked the jacket on"
10"A dull ache lived there,"
11"The bell above the front"
12"Rory glanced through the service"
13"A man stood there, shaking"
14"He was tall, his dark"
15"He scanned the room with"
16"His eyes, a familiar, startling"
17"The polished, confident posture faltered"
18"The name, spoken in that"
19"She didn’t move, her hand"
ratio0.949
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Not the lanky, nervous boy who’d shared spliffs with her behind the university library, smelling of cheap aftershave and big dreams."
1"The ghosts of their younger selves crowded the space between them—the Rory who argued law theory with fierce, sparkling eyes, the Liam who dreamed of changing t…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags28
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Rory unzipped, the worn fabric sighing"
1"Her voice came out, a stone skipping across still water"
2"Liam said, a hint of pride in his voice"
3"He waited, the whisky glowing like a trapped sunset"
4"He leaned, conspiratorial"
5"She finished, her voice still quiet"
6"Liam added, as if offering another shiny coin for her collection of facts"
7"He looked, a universe of unreadable things in his green eyes"
8"Silas replied, his voice a low rumble"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Liam added (add)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.163
leniency0.327
rawRatio0.125
effectiveRatio0.041
78.8022%