| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 24 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Rory looked around [around]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.48 | | leniency | 0.96 | | rawRatio | 0.042 | | effectiveRatio | 0.04 | |
| 85.57% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1732 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "truly" | | 1 | "hesitantly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "carefully" | | 4 | "perfectly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 39.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1732 | | totalAiIsms | 21 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gloom" | | 1 | "shimmered" | | 2 | "profound" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "etched" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "comforting" | | 8 | "rhythmic" | | 9 | "silk" | | 10 | "whisper" | | 11 | "input" | | 12 | "shattered" | | 13 | "stark" | | 14 | "echoing" | | 15 | "wavered" | | 16 | "beacon" |
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| 33.33% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 3 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 2 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes widened" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 121 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 9 | | totalWords | 1721 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "“For the one who walks between. For the key.”" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 18 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 65 | | wordCount | 1285 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 3 | | Shade | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 14 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Hel | 1 | | Isolde | 12 | | Varga | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Fae | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Shade" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Varga" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.644 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 26.54% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "patterns that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye" | | 1 | "colossal oak, seemingly having grown from i" | | 2 | "seemed woven from spider silk and moonlight" | | 3 | "looked like forgotten alphabets" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 10 | | per1kWords | 5.811 | | wordCount | 1721 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just old, but ancient in a way" | | 1 | "not like heat haze but like a film of oil on water, rainbow-riddled" | | 2 | "not words, but impressions: the chime of distant bells, the sigh of a sleep" | | 3 | "not the cause, but the cure" | | 4 | "Not to a door, but to a hunger" | | 5 | "Not pain, but overwhelming input" | | 6 | "no longer pulsing but" | | 7 | "Not a tear, but a… seep" | | 8 | "not of Earth, but of the Fae realm bleeding through" | | 9 | "not Nyx, but something similar, yet wrong, with too many joints" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 50 | | mean | 34.42 | | std | 26.68 | | cv | 0.775 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 46 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 44 | | 4 | 47 | | 5 | 3 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 96 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 45 | | 11 | 49 | | 12 | 44 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 26 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 33 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 81 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 23 | | 29 | 15 | | 30 | 31 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 39 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 40 | | 35 | 48 | | 36 | 55 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 43 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 25 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 143 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 60 |
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| 96.56% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 121 | | matches | | 0 | "were carved" | | 1 | "was gone" | | 2 | "was meant" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 217 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 11 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The air here tasted different—sweeter, with an ozone tang that prickled the back of her throat." | | 1 | "The transition wasn’t physical—no brush of fabric against stone, no change in footing." | | 2 | "The distant hum of London traffic, the rustle of nocturnal animals—all gone, replaced by a profound silence that pressed against Rory’s eardrums." | | 3 | "They stood in a clearing carpeted with wildflowers that glowed with their own soft bioluminescence—pale blues, soft pinks, virulent greens." | | 4 | "The air felt thick, velvety, carrying whispers on its current—not words, but impressions: the chime of distant bells, the sigh of a sleeping mountain, the crackle of a fire in a hearth miles away." | | 5 | "Her silver hair wasn’t just hair; it moved with a current of its own, floating as if submerged in water." | | 6 | "“I know the song it sings.” Isolde drifted closer—she didn’t walk so much as flow." | | 7 | "She saw—truly saw—the Veil." | | 8 | "She saw the grove in different seasons—not of Earth, but of the Fae realm bleeding through." | | 9 | "She saw shadowy figures—not Nyx, but something similar, yet wrong, with too many joints—slipping through, tasting the air of the grove before retreating." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1306 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 41 | | adverbRatio | 0.03139356814701378 | | lyAdverbCount | 8 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006125574272588055 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 11.87 | | std | 7.49 | | cv | 0.631 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 10 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 11 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 8 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 9 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 30 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 24 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 11 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 22 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 20 | | 26 | 21 | | 27 | 26 | | 28 | 4 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 9 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 34 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 11 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 10 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 46.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 12 | | diversityRatio | 0.3310344827586207 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Then the air between the" | | 1 | "Then sight returned, reshaped." | | 2 | "Only the scent of night-blooming" | | 3 | "Hesitantly, she placed her palm" |
| | ratio | 0.038 | |
| 80.38% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d learned to pay attention" | | 1 | "They stepped through together." | | 2 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 3 | "It had never done that" | | 4 | "She pressed her palm to" | | 5 | "They moved forward, their steps" | | 6 | "They followed a path that" | | 7 | "Their undersides pulsed with gentle," | | 8 | "It curled around her touch," | | 9 | "She jerked her hand back." | | 10 | "Her silver hair wasn’t just" | | 11 | "Her lavender eyes held the" | | 12 | "She wore a gown that" | | 13 | "It wasn’t a question." | | 14 | "Her gaze settled on Rory," | | 15 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 16 | "She turned, her silver hair" | | 17 | "She led them deeper, past" | | 18 | "They crossed a stream that" | | 19 | "They reached a clearing where" |
| | ratio | 0.349 | |
| 21.32% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "The standing stones of Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory trailed her fingers over" | | 2 | "The air here tasted different—sweeter," | | 3 | "Nyx’s voice was a rustle" | | 4 | "The Shade had solidified enough" | | 5 | "Rory pulled her hand back," | | 6 | "The crescent scar on her" | | 7 | "She’d learned to pay attention" | | 8 | "Nyx’s form shifted, shadows rippling" | | 9 | "The last sliver of amber" | | 10 | "The sweet-ozone scent intensified, flooding" | | 11 | "They stepped through together." | | 12 | "The transition wasn’t physical—no brush" | | 13 | "The world inverted." | | 14 | "Sound died first." | | 15 | "The distant hum of London" | | 16 | "They stood in a clearing" | | 17 | "The sky wasn’t a sky" | | 18 | "Nyx murmured, their form more" | | 19 | "Rory swallowed, tasting starlight on" |
| | ratio | 0.877 | |
| 47.17% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 106 | | matches | | 0 | "Before Rory could respond, Isolde" |
| | ratio | 0.009 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just old, but ancient in a way that made the surrounding oaks seem like saplings." | | 1 | "They stood in a clearing carpeted with wildflowers that glowed with their own soft bioluminescence—pale blues, soft pinks, virulent greens." | | 2 | "Ancient oaks formed a cathedral around the clearing, their bark etched with spiraling patterns that seemed to shift when viewed from the corner of the eye." | | 3 | "The Heartstone pendant against her sternum pulsed, a warm, steady rhythm that matched her heartbeat." | | 4 | "They followed a path that wasn’t a path, more a suggestion of less-dense growth between towering mushroom caps the size of dining tables." | | 5 | "Her silver hair wasn’t just hair; it moved with a current of its own, floating as if submerged in water." | | 6 | "She reached out, her fingers stopping a breath from touching the crimson gem." | | 7 | "She led them deeper, past groves of trees whose leaves were sheets of hammered copper, chiming with a music that made Rory’s teeth ache." | | 8 | "A fine, golden dust rose where they touched, swirling in patterns that looked like forgotten alphabets." | | 9 | "She couldn’t see the hand’s owner, only a sleeve of dark, expensive wool, and a voice, whispering in a language that tasted of ash and honey." | | 10 | "She was breathing hard again, the scar on her wrist burning." |
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| 41.67% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 24 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx’s form shifted, shadows rippling like disturbed water" | | 1 | "Nyx glided, a smudge of living night against the glowing flora" | | 2 | "Nyx stated, their whisper-voice carrying clearly in the silent grove" | | 3 | "She turned, her silver hair swirling" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 14 | | fancyCount | 8 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Rory breathed (breathe)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Nyx stated (state)" | | 4 | "Rory panted (pant)" | | 5 | "Isolde confirmed (confirm)" | | 6 | "Rory demanded (demand)" | | 7 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 50 | | tagDensity | 0.28 | | leniency | 0.56 | | rawRatio | 0.571 | | effectiveRatio | 0.32 | |