| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 16 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She laughed once [once]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0.063 | | effectiveRatio | 0.059 | |
| 96.69% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1511 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1511 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "intensity" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "echo" | | 3 | "carried the weight" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "familiar" | | 7 | "flicked" | | 8 | "measured" | | 9 | "silence" | | 10 | "unreadable" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 80.06% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 108 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 44 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1508 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 15 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.78% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 29 | | wordCount | 996 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.1 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Aurora | 6 | | Lucien | 11 | | East | 1 | | London | 1 | | Ptolemy | 5 | | Eva | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Earl | 1 | | Grey | 1 | | Fingertips | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Ptolemy" | | 3 | "Eva" | | 4 | "Earl" | | 5 | "Grey" | | 6 | "Fingertips" |
| | places | | 0 | "East" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Marseille" |
| | globalScore | 0.948 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 70 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite inside but enough to stop the door from closing" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.663 | | wordCount | 1508 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite inside but enough to stop the door from closing" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 108 | | matches | | |
| 64.23% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 41.89 | | std | 15.7 | | cv | 0.375 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 71 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 52 | | 4 | 55 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 60 | | 7 | 46 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 35 | | 10 | 55 | | 11 | 29 | | 12 | 27 | | 13 | 40 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 41 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 61 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 49 | | 21 | 55 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 66 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 37 | | 27 | 43 | | 28 | 40 | | 29 | 55 | | 30 | 51 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 48 | | 33 | 38 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 7 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 177 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 108 | | ratio | 0.028 | | matches | | 0 | "Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with the same intensity that had once stripped every defense she owned." | | 1 | "Every surface carried the weight of Eva's research—yellowed pages, leather-bound volumes, loose sheets covered in frantic handwriting." | | 2 | "The flat's clutter forced them close; his sleeve brushed her arm when he reached for the tea tin above her head." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1001 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.026973026973026972 | | lyAdverbCount | 5 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004995004995004995 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 108 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 108 | | mean | 13.96 | | std | 8.49 | | cv | 0.608 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 18 | | 3 | 20 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 29 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 15 | | 18 | 21 | | 19 | 24 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 28 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 11 | | 34 | 12 | | 35 | 13 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 10 | | 42 | 25 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 21 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 31 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 55.56% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3611111111111111 | | totalSentences | 108 | | uniqueOpeners | 39 | |
| 38.76% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead she turned her cheek" |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 47.91% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "His charcoal suit hugged his" | | 1 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 2 | "She shifted her weight, blocking" | | 3 | "He glanced past her shoulder" | | 4 | "He placed the cane against" | | 5 | "He folded the jacket once" | | 6 | "She moved to the kitchenette," | | 7 | "She filled the kettle, the" | | 8 | "He wandered instead, stopping at" | | 9 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 10 | "He turned a page with" | | 11 | "She set the kettle on" | | 12 | "She stroked the tabby's ears" | | 13 | "She lifted the cat and" | | 14 | "He set it on the" | | 15 | "He leaned one hip against" | | 16 | "She yanked it off the" | | 17 | "She handed him a mug" | | 18 | "Their fingers touched." | | 19 | "Her voice dropped" |
| | ratio | 0.43 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 84 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "The door opened on protesting" | | 1 | "His charcoal suit hugged his" | | 2 | "Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one" | | 3 | "Her fingers tightened on the" | | 4 | "The small crescent scar on" | | 5 | "She shifted her weight, blocking" | | 6 | "Lucien slid the cane forward" | | 7 | "He glanced past her shoulder" | | 8 | "Ptolemy chose that moment to" | | 9 | "Aurora exhaled through her nose" | | 10 | "Lucien crossed the threshold without" | | 11 | "The three deadbolts clunked behind" | | 12 | "The flat swallowed sound." | | 13 | "Every surface carried the weight" | | 14 | "The smell of spiced curry" | | 15 | "He placed the cane against" | | 16 | "The motion revealed the precise" | | 17 | "He folded the jacket once" | | 18 | "Aurora watched the simple action" | | 19 | "She moved to the kitchenette," |
| | ratio | 0.977 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 82.07% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Those mismatched eyes—one amber, one black—fixed on her with the same intensity that had once stripped every defense she owned." | | 1 | "Lucien crossed the threshold without waiting for a formal invitation, his height making the low ceiling feel lower." | | 2 | "Aurora watched the simple action and felt the old pull low in her stomach, the same traitorous warmth that had started everything between them months ago." | | 3 | "Something shifted in his expression, the fixer mask cracking to show the man who had once held her like she was the only steady thing in his shifting world." |
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| 93.75% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 16 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "His voice roughened, the accent thickening" |
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| 61.76% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "She laughed once (laugh)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 34 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.176 | |