| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 81.56% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1898 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 7 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "slowly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "very" | | 3 | "softly" | | 4 | "perfectly" | | 5 | "deliberately" | | 6 | "completely" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 28.87% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1898 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "perfect" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "silence" | | 4 | "throb" | | 5 | "footfall" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "echo" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "footsteps" | | 10 | "fractured" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "warmth" | | 14 | "familiar" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "synchronized" | | 17 | "treacherous" | | 18 | "the last thing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "clenched jaw/fists" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 203 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 203 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 207 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 30 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 11 | | totalWords | 1891 | | ratio | 0.006 | | matches | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "You brought us the key," | | 2 | "The grove has been waiting." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.35% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 39 | | wordCount | 1864 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 7 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 2 | | London | 1 | | November | 1 | | Rory | 3 | | Aurora | 20 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Rory" | | 4 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.964 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 75.93% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 135 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "quite focus on" | | 1 | "seemed farther apart, the clearing larger with every glance" | | 2 | "tunnel that seemed to slope downward though the ground remained level" | | 3 | "felt like bark and flesh at the same ti" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1891 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 207 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 57 | | mean | 33.18 | | std | 18.51 | | cv | 0.558 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 86 | | 1 | 47 | | 2 | 56 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 50 | | 5 | 9 | | 6 | 35 | | 7 | 5 | | 8 | 51 | | 9 | 39 | | 10 | 44 | | 11 | 27 | | 12 | 40 | | 13 | 55 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 30 | | 16 | 38 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 42 | | 19 | 34 | | 20 | 42 | | 21 | 35 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 53 | | 25 | 51 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 41 | | 30 | 53 | | 31 | 57 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 44 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 37 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 46 | | 40 | 25 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 47 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 27 | | 48 | 28 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 203 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 344 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.24% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 9 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 7 | | totalSentences | 207 | | ratio | 0.034 | | matches | | 0 | "The flowers at her feet—foxglove, harebell, things that had no business blooming in November—swayed without wind." | | 1 | "A shape—tall, too tall—flickered between two trunks before the shadows swallowed it again." | | 2 | "A child’s laugh, but wrong—layered, as if two voices occupied the same throat." | | 3 | "The grove wanted her to keep moving; she felt the certainty in her bones." | | 4 | "Instead of words, flowers spilled out—blue petals tumbling down its chin and piling at its feet." | | 5 | "They wore faces from her past—her mother’s gentle smile twisted into something hungry, her father’s stern expression melted into melted wax." | | 6 | "The last thing she heard before the silence became absolute was her own voice—except it wasn’t hers anymore—whispering from somewhere far away." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1876 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "impossible blue under starlight." | | 1 | "revealing wet red wood" |
| | adverbCount | 75 | | adverbRatio | 0.03997867803837953 | | lyAdverbCount | 25 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.013326226012793176 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 207 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 207 | | mean | 9.14 | | std | 5.78 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 26 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 6 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 18 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 18 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 15 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 9 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 10 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 4 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 4 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 45.65% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.27053140096618356 | | totalSentences | 207 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, very softly, something giggled." | | 1 | "Too quick to identify." | | 2 | "Only the wet sound of" | | 3 | "No longer trying to match" | | 4 | "Only endless oaks surrounded her" | | 5 | "Instead of words, flowers spilled" | | 6 | "Then the light died." |
| | ratio | 0.037 | |
| 89.52% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 61 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "She had come for the" | | 1 | "She told herself it was" | | 2 | "She stepped past the first" | | 3 | "She paused, one hand resting" | | 4 | "Her voice sounded small, immediately" | | 5 | "She took another step." | | 6 | "She moved deeper, following the" | | 7 | "Her hoodie suddenly felt too" | | 8 | "She jerked her head toward" | | 9 | "She stared until her eyes" | | 10 | "she muttered, trying to summon" | | 11 | "She kept walking." | | 12 | "She checked her phone." | | 13 | "Her mouth had gone dry." | | 14 | "She backed up until her" | | 15 | "She slid her fingers along" | | 16 | "Its crimson center glowed brighter," | | 17 | "She lifted it, studying the" | | 18 | "She whipped her head toward" | | 19 | "Her breathing sounded loud now." |
| | ratio | 0.326 | |
| 26.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 162 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora Carter pushed through the" | | 1 | "The moon hung low and" | | 2 | "She had come for the" | | 3 | "The Heartstone, warm against her" | | 4 | "An hour earlier the artifact" | | 5 | "She told herself it was" | | 6 | "A curiosity worth chasing after" | | 7 | "The pendant had appeared on" | | 8 | "The trees thinned." | | 9 | "A perfect circle of standing" | | 10 | "Aurora’s breath fogged in front" | | 11 | "The air tasted metallic." | | 12 | "She stepped past the first" | | 13 | "Silence swallowed everything." | | 14 | "She paused, one hand resting" | | 15 | "The grove stretched wider than" | | 16 | "Moonlight dripped through in thin" | | 17 | "The flowers at her feet—foxglove," | | 18 | "Aurora exhaled slowly." | | 19 | "Her voice sounded small, immediately" |
| | ratio | 0.866 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "Now it burned with purpose." | | 1 | "Now water seeped over her" | | 2 | "Now only her ragged breathing" | | 3 | "Now it wore Evan’s cruel" |
| | ratio | 0.021 | |
| 81.13% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 81 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "A curiosity worth chasing after the strange dreams that had plagued her since Evan’s last outburst in Cardiff." | | 1 | "The flowers at her feet—foxglove, harebell, things that had no business blooming in November—swayed without wind." | | 2 | "Tiny lines like capillaries shifted inside the stone, mapping routes that made her dizzy if she stared too long." | | 3 | "The wildflowers grew taller here, brushing her thighs, their petals leaving sticky residue on her jeans." | | 4 | "Its glow lit the way in stuttering pulses, revealing glimpses of things that made no sense." | | 5 | "The pendant’s glow dimmed, as though something drank its power." | | 6 | "Petals exploded into clouds of glittering pollen that burned her eyes." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she muttered, trying to summon the memory of her friend’s easy grin" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Aurora whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.667 | |