| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 22 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Silas started then [then]" | | 1 | "he said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.407 | | leniency | 0.815 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.074 | |
| 88.20% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2119 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "deliberately" | | 3 | "slowly" | | 4 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.73% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2119 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | word | "carried the weight" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "reminder" | | 1 | "familiar" | | 2 | "weight" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "warmth" | | 5 | "stomach" | | 6 | "flickered" | | 7 | "traced" | | 8 | "carried the weight" | | 9 | "fractured" | | 10 | "unspoken" | | 11 | "potential" | | 12 | "silence" | | 13 | "comfortable" | | 14 | "tension" | | 15 | "flicked" | | 16 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 174 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "seemed to" | | 2 | "tended to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 206 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2119 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 22 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "When he returned, she spoke before he could." |
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| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 41 | | wordCount | 1631 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 0.92 | | worstName | "Silas" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Silas" | | discoveredNames | | Raven | 2 | | Nest | 2 | | Soho | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | London | 1 | | Blackwood | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Dad | 1 | | Irish | 1 | | Aurora | 7 | | Spymaster | 1 | | Chinese | 1 | | Guinness | 1 | | Survival | 1 | | Silas | 15 | | Silence | 1 | | Welsh | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Blackwood" | | 2 | "Aurora" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Silence" |
| | places | | 0 | "Soho" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 117 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like another lifetime ago, yet his" | | 1 | "felt like a cover for something larger" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 206 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 33.63 | | std | 19.77 | | cv | 0.588 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 92 | | 1 | 67 | | 2 | 78 | | 3 | 82 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 29 | | 7 | 13 | | 8 | 59 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 43 | | 11 | 39 | | 12 | 11 | | 13 | 44 | | 14 | 30 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 52 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 26 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 39 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 37 | | 23 | 47 | | 24 | 42 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 48 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 38 | | 29 | 30 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 51 | | 32 | 69 | | 33 | 30 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 43 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 31 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 37 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 26 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 25 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 37 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 174 | | matches | | 0 | "been allowed" | | 1 | "been fourteen" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 275 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 206 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.83% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1642 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 66 | | adverbRatio | 0.040194884287454324 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.012180267965895249 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 206 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 206 | | mean | 10.29 | | std | 6.88 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 30 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 17 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 10 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 2 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 13 | | 19 | 3 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 8 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 1 | | 28 | 2 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 1 | | 38 | 13 | | 39 | 9 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 11 | | 42 | 6 | | 43 | 20 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 6 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 4 |
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| 59.87% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.4029126213592233 | | totalSentences | 206 | | uniqueOpeners | 83 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Only a handful of patrons" | | 1 | "Then recognition hit him like" | | 2 | "More than ten." | | 3 | "Instead it hollowed something out." | | 4 | "Instead he sat in the" |
| | ratio | 0.031 | |
| 92.50% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoulder-length black hair hung" | | 1 | "She'd only come in for" | | 2 | "She approached the bar, eyes" | | 3 | "His auburn hair had gone" | | 4 | "He moved with that same" | | 5 | "Her bright blue eyes widened." | | 6 | "They'd played chess until midnight." | | 7 | "He'd let her win twice." | | 8 | "He gestured vaguely at her." | | 9 | "She slid onto a stool," | | 10 | "His laugh came short and" | | 11 | "He reached for a bottle" | | 12 | "Their fingers didn't touch." | | 13 | "She wrapped both hands around" | | 14 | "He said nothing about it." | | 15 | "She took a sip instead" | | 16 | "he said quietly" | | 17 | "His fingers traced the rim" | | 18 | "She repeated the word, connecting" | | 19 | "His shrug came stiff." |
| | ratio | 0.319 | |
| 41.25% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 134 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed open the heavy" | | 1 | "Her shoulder-length black hair hung" | | 2 | "The bar wrapped her in" | | 3 | "The place hadn't changed." | | 4 | "A jazz record crackled from" | | 5 | "She'd only come in for" | | 6 | "The weight of the day" | | 7 | "Pre-Law textbooks still gathered dust" | | 8 | "Evan felt like another lifetime" | | 9 | "She approached the bar, eyes" | | 10 | "An older man stood behind" | | 11 | "His auburn hair had gone" | | 12 | "He moved with that same" | | 13 | "The silver signet ring caught" | | 14 | "Aurora froze mid-step." | | 15 | "Her bright blue eyes widened." | | 16 | "Silas Blackwood looked up." | | 17 | "The cloth in his hand" | | 18 | "The name came out rough," | | 19 | "The jazz saxophone filled the" |
| | ratio | 0.838 | |
| 31.25% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 160 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 85.25% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 62 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Her shoulder-length black hair hung damp against her neck, and she brushed it aside with the hand that bore the small crescent scar, a pale reminder of the time…" | | 1 | "The bar that felt like a cover for something larger, with its hidden corners and watchful patrons." | | 2 | "The man who'd once snuck her sips of Guinness at family gatherings now carried ghosts in the set of his shoulders." | | 3 | "The slight limp carried him to the bookshelf that hid more than dusty volumes." | | 4 | "Instead he sat in the empty bar, hazel eyes distant, thinking of a girl with bright blue eyes who'd grown into a woman carrying her own quiet battles." |
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| 34.09% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 22 | | uselessAdditionCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The name came out, as if dragged from somewhere deep" | | 1 | "She slid, the wood creaking under her" | | 2 | "She turned, needing to shift the focus" | | 3 | "She laughed, the sound cracking" |
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| 75.93% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "He reached (reach)" | | 1 | "She repeated (repeat)" | | 2 | "she admitted (admit)" | | 3 | "She laughed (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 54 | | tagDensity | 0.148 | | leniency | 0.296 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.148 | |