Run: 2026-03-12-01KKHZ3HY6TJBC7H17RR4VS3C6

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.016820
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora Carter slipped through the gap in the ancient oaks that ringed the clearing, her boots sinking into moss that should have been brittle with December frost. Richmond Park lay behind her, its winter-bare trees clawing at a starless sky, but here the air carried the thick sweetness of spring. Wildflowers bobbed their heads in a breeze she couldn’t feel. The Heartstone pendant rested cold against her sternum, no pulse, no warmth. That alone should have warned her. She had come for answers. The dreams had grown worse, dragging her here night after night until she stopped pretending she could ignore them. The grove, Isolde’s grove, the place Eva had whispered about before disappearing three weeks ago. Aurora’s flashlight beam sliced through the dark, catching petals that gleamed too white, too perfect. She clicked it off. Better to let her eyes adjust. The silence pressed against her eardrums. No traffic hum from the distant road. No rustle of small creatures in the undergrowth. Only the soft thud of her own heart and the faint crunch of her footsteps on ground that felt too springy, like walking on flesh. She moved toward the center where five ancient oaks stood in a rough circle. Their trunks bore carvings too precise to be natural, spirals that seemed to twist when she wasn’t looking directly at them. The pendant gave a single, feeble throb. She touched it, fingers brushing the silver chain. “Eva?” Her voice sounded small, swallowed by the clearing. “You said you’d meet me here.” Nothing answered. Not even an echo. Aurora crouched, examining the standing stones. Moss grew in perfect rings around their bases. She traced one spiral with her fingertip. The stone felt warm. Too warm for a December night. She pulled her hand back quickly. A twig snapped behind her. She spun, heart slamming against her ribs. The beam of her flashlight swept across the tree line. Nothing. Only flowers nodding in that unfelt wind. She held her breath, listening. The silence returned, deeper now, as if the grove itself had inhaled along with her. “Stop it,” she muttered. “You’re tired. That’s all.” But she hadn’t slept properly in days. The dreams always ended the same way—with Eva reaching for her from between the oaks, mouth open in a scream that made no sound. And something behind her. Something with too many joints. Aurora stood, wiping her palms on her jeans. The scar on her left wrist itched, the small crescent moon from the accident when she was eight. She’d fallen from the apple tree in her grandparents’ garden. The memory felt important somehow, though she couldn’t say why. She walked the perimeter of the clearing, keeping the five central oaks in sight. The flowers grew thicker here, their stems brushing her ankles like curious fingers. One bloom, larger than the rest, had petals the color of fresh blood. She avoided it. Another sound. A wet, dragging noise from her left. She froze. The flashlight trembled in her grip. She swept it slowly across the ground. The beam caught movement—something pale slipping behind an oak trunk. Too low to the ground to be a person. Too deliberate to be an animal. Her mouth went dry. “Who’s there?” The dragging noise stopped. Then came a soft exhalation, like someone releasing a breath they’d held for hours. The flowers nearest her shivered though the air remained still. Aurora backed toward the center stones. The pendant grew warmer. Not the welcoming heat she’d felt near the portals before. This was feverish, angry. She closed her fist around it, feeling the metal edges bite into her palm. The dreams had shown her this place, but they’d never shown her what waited between the trees. Eva had called it a threshold. A place where the Fae could reach through if you knew the right words. Aurora had come with questions, with the pendant as both key and shield. Now both seemed useless. A shape detached itself from the darkness between two oaks. Tall. Too tall. It unfolded itself in stages, joints popping softly. Aurora’s flashlight beam caught only fragments—long fingers ending in too many knuckles, fabric that might have been a coat or might have been skin, a suggestion of a face that wasn’t facing the right direction. She stumbled backward, boot catching on a root. The thing didn’t pursue. It simply watched from the tree line, head tilted at an angle that made her stomach clench. “Eva sent me,” Aurora said. Her voice cracked. She hated how small it sounded. “She said—” The thing made a noise like wet paper tearing. The flowers around its feet blackened and curled. Aurora’s pulse thundered in her ears. The pendant burned now, a steady pulse that matched her racing heart. She forced herself to stand still. Running would be worse. The dreams had taught her that much. The figure took one step. Then another. Each movement looked painful, as if its bones weren’t quite connected properly. It stayed at the edge of the clearing, circling slowly to her left. Keeping the ancient oaks between them. She turned with it, never letting it leave her sight. The flashlight beam shook so badly she nearly dropped it. Better to keep it off. The moonlight filtering through the impossible spring foliage gave enough illumination. Too much, perhaps. Some things were better left unseen. The dragging sound returned, but now it came from her right. From behind. She whirled. Another shape. Shorter. Wrong in different ways. This one scuttled rather than walked, using limbs that bent backward. They were herding her. Toward the center stones. Aurora’s mind raced through options. The pendant had opened doors before, but this place already existed halfway through one. She could feel the wrongness of it now, the way reality stretched thin here like skin over a wound. “Show yourself,” she called out, aiming for the cool authority that usually served her well in difficult situations. “I’m not here to cause trouble.” The taller figure let out a sound that might have been laughter if laughter had been left in a damp cellar for decades. The shorter one answered with a clicking noise that set her teeth on edge. The wildflowers bent away from both figures, creating clear paths through the meadow. Paths that led directly to where she stood. Aurora backed up until her shoulders touched one of the ancient oaks. The bark felt wrong—too smooth, almost wet. She jerked away. The tree had left a residue on her jacket that smelled like copper. The figures stopped their circling. They stood opposite each other now, the five central oaks forming points between them. The pendant flared hot enough that she gasped, dropping it against her chest. The chain left a burn on her neck. Something was coming. Not the two figures. Something larger. Something that made the air itself retract. The flowers began to die in a perfect circle around her, petals dropping like drops of blood. The ground trembled faintly. Aurora’s scar burned. She clutched her wrist, feeling the raised tissue pulse in time with the pendant. The taller figure raised what might have been an arm. The gesture looked almost ceremonial. The shorter one lowered itself to the ground, joints folding in ways that should have broken bones. Aurora’s breath came in short bursts. She could smell it now—the copper scent growing stronger, mixed with something sweet and rotten. The dreams had never prepared her for the smell. “I just want to find my friend,” she whispered. The words felt pathetic in the vast silence. The trees answered. Not with words. With a low vibration that traveled up through her boots and into her bones. The standing stones glowed with an inner light, faint but growing. The spirals carved into them began to move, slowly rotating against the stone. The two figures bowed. Not to her. To whatever approached from the place where the five oaks met. Aurora’s mind supplied images she didn’t want—Eva’s face, smiling the way she had in Cardiff all those years ago. Eva’s face changing. Eva’s face becoming something else entirely. She slid down the oak’s trunk until she sat with her back against it. The bark left damp marks on her shirt but she no longer cared. The pendant felt like a coal against her skin. She welcomed the pain. It was real. It was hers. The vibration intensified. The flowers within ten feet of her had all withered now, leaving bare earth that looked freshly turned. Like a grave. From the center of the five oaks, something unfolded. Aurora closed her eyes. Not yet. She wasn’t ready to see it yet. The dragging sound returned, closer now. Accompanied by the soft click of too many joints. And underneath it all, a new sound. A voice. Or many voices speaking as one. They called a name she almost recognized. Not Aurora. Not Rory. Something older. The ground beneath her shifted. Not dramatically. Just enough to let her know it was paying attention. The scar on her wrist split open, just a little. A single drop of blood welled up, perfect and round. She opened her eyes. The thing from between the oaks had no face she could understand. It wore too many of them, shifting across its surface like reflections in disturbed water. Some of the faces looked like Eva. Some looked like her mother. One looked like her own reflection, but wrong. The eyes were too blue. Too bright. Too knowing. It reached for her with hands that had too many fingers, each one ending in a small crescent moon. Aurora’s scream caught in her throat. The pendant flared white-hot, burning through her shirt. The pain anchored her. She grabbed the chain and yanked it over her head, holding the Heartstone out like a weapon. The thing paused. The shifting faces settled for a moment into something almost recognizable. Something that might have been pity if pity had learned how to wear human skin. The two smaller figures moved closer, flanking her now. Their movements had grown smoother, more confident. They knew she had nowhere to run. Aurora pushed herself to her feet, legs shaking. The bare earth clung to her boots like wet clay. She backed away from the central oaks, toward the ring of standing stones that marked the boundary. The thing followed. Not walking. Flowing. The flowers it passed didn’t die. They transformed, growing black thorns that reached toward her like accusing fingers. She reached the first standing stone. The carvings had stopped moving. They simply stared at her now, spirals that looked like eyes if she let them. The pendant cooled suddenly. Ice cold. The burn on her chest throbbed in protest. Aurora looked down at it. The deep crimson gem had gone black. Completely black. The voices spoke again, clearer this time. They knew her real name. The one her grandmother had whispered to her once, in the hospital after the accident with the apple tree. The name that wasn’t meant for human tongues. She turned and ran. The grove stretched longer than it should have. The tree line that had been thirty yards away now seemed miles distant. Her boots pounded against ground that tried to hold her, sucking at her soles with wet sounds. Behind her, the dragging had become a wet chorus. Multiple things moving now. Multiple things wearing faces she knew. The scar on her wrist bled freely, the blood leaving a trail that the flowers drank greedily. Each drop that fell caused new blooms to erupt—black ones with white centers that looked like eyes. Aurora didn’t look back. Looking back would be the end. The dreams had been very clear about that. She focused on the gap in the ancient oaks where she’d entered. It seemed smaller now. Narrower. As if the grove itself was closing behind her. Her breath burned in her lungs. The pendant bounced against her chest with each stride, no longer warm or cold. Simply present. Heavy. Full of whatever it had absorbed from this place. The tree line grew closer. She could see the normal winter trees of Richmond Park beyond the boundary now. Bare branches. Real frost on the ground. The promise of escape. Something brushed the back of her neck. Not quite a touch. More like breath. Cold and intimate. She stumbled but kept running. The gap between the oaks was ten feet away. Five. Three. A hand—definitely a hand this time—closed around her ankle. Aurora fell hard, face planting into the moss. It smelled like grave soil. She kicked backward, connecting with something that felt both soft and brittle. A sound like breaking glass came from behind her. She scrambled forward on hands and knees, the gap so close now. The normal world waited just beyond. Traffic noise. Streetlights. Things that made sense. The pendant slipped from her fingers. It rolled ahead of her, spinning across the moss until it came to rest exactly on the boundary line between the grove and the park. Aurora lunged for it. The hand caught her ankle again. This time it held fast. She stretched, fingers reaching, grazing the silver chain. The gem had begun to glow again. Deep crimson. The color of fresh blood and older things. Behind her, the voices spoke her secret name once more. Closer now. Intimate. Almost tender. Her fingers closed around the chain. The grove exhaled. Aurora Carter pulled the Heartstone across the boundary and everything changed.
created_at"2026-03-12T21:26:39.308Z" 3/12/2026, 9:26:39 PM
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native_tokens_reasoning0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2260
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count3
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
2"softly"
3"suddenly"
4"completely"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
42.48% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2260
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"pulse"
count4
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count4
3
word"silence"
count3
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"traced"
count1
8
word"trembled"
count2
9
word"stomach"
count1
10
word"thundered"
count1
11
word"racing"
count1
12
word"raced"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"grave"
count2
15
word"throbbed"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"warmth"
2"perfect"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"throb"
6"echo"
7"traced"
8"trembled"
9"stomach"
10"thundered"
11"racing"
12"raced"
13"could feel"
14"grave"
15"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences279
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences279
filterMatches
0"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences284
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2251
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.06% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions45
wordCount2214
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter2
December2
Park2
Heartstone3
Isolde1
Eva7
Fae1
Cardiff1
Aurora23
Rory1
Richmond2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Isolde"
3"Eva"
4"Fae"
5"Aurora"
6"Rory"
places
0"Park"
1"Cardiff"
2"Richmond"
globalScore0.981
windowScore1
33.04% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences171
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"spirals that seemed to twist when she wasn’t looking directly at them"
1"quite connected properly"
2"smelled like copper"
3"felt like a coal against her skin"
4"looked like Eva"
5"looked like her own reflection, but wrong"
6"looked like eyes if she let them"
7"looked like eyes"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2251
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences284
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean26.48
std16.04
cv0.606
sampleLengths
078
164
246
350
415
56
637
75
845
98
1040
1146
1243
139
1440
156
1628
1738
1854
1956
2029
2116
2217
2335
2438
2545
2633
278
2838
2924
3037
3121
3235
3340
343
3513
3638
3732
3830
3917
4044
4118
4228
4346
4424
459
4613
4737
482
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences279
matches
0"been left"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs379
matches
0"wasn’t looking"
1"wasn’t facing"
2"were herding"
3"was coming"
62.37% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences284
ratio0.028
matches
0"The dreams always ended the same way—with Eva reaching for her from between the oaks, mouth open in a scream that made no sound."
1"The beam caught movement—something pale slipping behind an oak trunk."
2"Aurora’s flashlight beam caught only fragments—long fingers ending in too many knuckles, fabric that might have been a coat or might have been skin, a suggestion of a face that wasn’t facing the right direction."
3"The bark felt wrong—too smooth, almost wet."
4"She could smell it now—the copper scent growing stronger, mixed with something sweet and rotten."
5"Aurora’s mind supplied images she didn’t want—Eva’s face, smiling the way she had in Cardiff all those years ago."
6"Each drop that fell caused new blooms to erupt—black ones with white centers that looked like eyes."
7"A hand—definitely a hand this time—closed around her ankle."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount427
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.03278688524590164
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.0117096018735363
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences284
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences284
mean7.93
std5.42
cv0.684
sampleLengths
027
123
210
312
46
55
619
715
815
94
106
116
127
138
1425
1514
1621
177
188
199
206
212
224
236
248
257
264
276
286
295
307
3110
321
337
345
3515
364
374
387
3924
404
415
428
4318
4410
4510
4614
4713
4813
493
39.79% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats29
diversityRatio0.2535211267605634
totalSentences284
uniqueOpeners72
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount9
totalSentences240
matches
0"Only the soft thud of"
1"Too warm for a December"
2"Only flowers nodding in that"
3"Too low to the ground"
4"Too deliberate to be an"
5"Then came a soft exhalation,"
6"Too much, perhaps."
7"Just enough to let her"
8"More like breath."
ratio0.038
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount61
totalSentences240
matches
0"She had come for answers."
1"She clicked it off."
2"She moved toward the center"
3"Their trunks bore carvings too"
4"She touched it, fingers brushing"
5"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
6"She traced one spiral with"
7"She pulled her hand back"
8"She spun, heart slamming against"
9"She held her breath, listening."
10"She’d fallen from the apple"
11"She walked the perimeter of"
12"She avoided it."
13"She swept it slowly across"
14"Her mouth went dry."
15"She closed her fist around"
16"It unfolded itself in stages,"
17"She stumbled backward, boot catching"
18"It simply watched from the"
19"Her voice cracked."
ratio0.254
49.58% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount197
totalSentences240
matches
0"Aurora Carter slipped through the"
1"Richmond Park lay behind her,"
2"Wildflowers bobbed their heads in"
3"The Heartstone pendant rested cold"
4"That alone should have warned"
5"She had come for answers."
6"The dreams had grown worse,"
7"The grove, Isolde’s grove, the"
8"Aurora’s flashlight beam sliced through"
9"She clicked it off."
10"The silence pressed against her"
11"She moved toward the center"
12"Their trunks bore carvings too"
13"The pendant gave a single,"
14"She touched it, fingers brushing"
15"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
16"Aurora crouched, examining the standing"
17"Moss grew in perfect rings"
18"She traced one spiral with"
19"The stone felt warm."
ratio0.821
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences240
matches
0"Now both seemed useless."
1"To whatever approached from the"
2"As if the grove itself"
ratio0.013
93.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences86
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Aurora’s flashlight beam sliced through the dark, catching petals that gleamed too white, too perfect."
1"Only the soft thud of her own heart and the faint crunch of her footsteps on ground that felt too springy, like walking on flesh."
2"Aurora’s flashlight beam caught only fragments—long fingers ending in too many knuckles, fabric that might have been a coat or might have been skin, a suggestio…"
3"It simply watched from the tree line, head tilted at an angle that made her stomach clench."
4"They transformed, growing black thorns that reached toward her like accusing fingers."
5"She kicked backward, connecting with something that felt both soft and brittle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
1"she called out (call out)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.6
85.4382%