| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 2 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.18% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1718 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 59.25% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1718 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "warmth" | | 1 | "echo" | | 2 | "etched" | | 3 | "flickered" | | 4 | "vibrated" | | 5 | "pulsed" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "resolve" | | 8 | "unsettled" | | 9 | "echoed" | | 10 | "silence" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 170 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "tried to" | | 1 | "began to" | | 2 | "seemed to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 173 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1718 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 15 | | wordCount | 1687 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 0.47 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Pre-Law | 1 | | Evan | 1 | | Aurora | 8 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "seemed deeper than they had a moment earlier" | | 1 | "seemed closer together than when she first arrived" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.582 | | wordCount | 1718 | | matches | | 0 | "not enough to hold her but enough to remind her they could" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 173 | | matches | | |
| 31.58% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 53.69 | | std | 13.99 | | cv | 0.261 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 91 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 80 | | 3 | 55 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 57 | | 6 | 33 | | 7 | 62 | | 8 | 73 | | 9 | 78 | | 10 | 48 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 60 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 40 | | 15 | 57 | | 16 | 48 | | 17 | 56 | | 18 | 44 | | 19 | 54 | | 20 | 66 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 36 | | 23 | 57 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 46 | | 28 | 51 | | 29 | 57 | | 30 | 61 | | 31 | 56 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 170 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 296 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 173 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 95.67% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1691 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.0449438202247191 | | lyAdverbCount | 14 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00827912477823773 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 173 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 173 | | mean | 9.93 | | std | 5.71 | | cv | 0.575 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 13 | | 2 | 30 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 27 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 14 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 15 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 31 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 10 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 4 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 4 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 18 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 15 | | 45 | 3 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 39.02% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 19 | | diversityRatio | 0.2774566473988439 | | totalSentences | 173 | | uniqueOpeners | 48 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Then behind her." | | 1 | "Then something longer." | | 2 | "Then it folded itself behind" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 91.70% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 51 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Its warmth turned sharp, a" | | 1 | "She needed to know what" | | 2 | "Their colors looked too rich," | | 3 | "She clicked on her torch." | | 4 | "She had come for answers." | | 5 | "It pressed against her skin" | | 6 | "She swept the torch in" | | 7 | "She took another step." | | 8 | "It faded before she could" | | 9 | "She scratched at it without" | | 10 | "She spoke to break the" | | 11 | "Her words dropped flat." | | 12 | "She moved toward the center" | | 13 | "Their leaves brushed her jeans" | | 14 | "She jerked the torch that" | | 15 | "She rotated in place, keeping" | | 16 | "She breathed through her mouth" | | 17 | "Her ears strained until they" | | 18 | "She checked her phone." | | 19 | "Her legs told a different" |
| | ratio | 0.321 | |
| 10.31% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 143 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the final" | | 1 | "The pendant flared against her" | | 2 | "Its warmth turned sharp, a" | | 3 | "She needed to know what" | | 4 | "The unknown benefactor had left" | | 5 | "Night wrapped the grove tight." | | 6 | "Wildflowers stretched across the ground" | | 7 | "Their colors looked too rich," | | 8 | "She clicked on her torch." | | 9 | "The beam sliced across blooms" | | 10 | "The standing stones rose ahead," | | 11 | "She had come for answers." | | 12 | "The pendant had burned a" | | 13 | "It pressed against her skin" | | 14 | "She swept the torch in" | | 15 | "The flowers rustled though no" | | 16 | "The sound reminded her of" | | 17 | "She took another step." | | 18 | "The ground gave softly under" | | 19 | "A low note sounded from" |
| | ratio | 0.899 | |
| 31.45% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 159 | | matches | | 0 | "Now even that seemed muffled." |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 75 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Its warmth turned sharp, a steady pull that had drawn her from the flat above the bar through darkened streets and into Richmond Park long after the city lights…" | | 1 | "The low note returned, layered this time with others that overlapped like a choir warming up in a distant room." | | 2 | "The flattened areas formed shapes too regular to be random, like footprints that did not match her own." | | 3 | "The flowers parted in front of the beam, revealing dark earth that looked freshly turned." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 2 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 2 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 5 | | tagDensity | 0.4 | | leniency | 0.8 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |