| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 96.06% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2538 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 54.69% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2538 | | totalAiIsms | 23 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "traced" | | 6 | "desire" | | 7 | "comfortable" | | 8 | "fluttered" | | 9 | "footfall" | | 10 | "warmth" | | 11 | "tracing" | | 12 | "dancing" | | 13 | "pulse" | | 14 | "raced" | | 15 | "whisper" | | 16 | "perfect" | | 17 | "flickered" | | 18 | "could feel" | | 19 | "complex" | | 20 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 168 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 168 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "appeared to" | | 1 | "begins to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 168 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2538 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 57 | | wordCount | 2538 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.87 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Cardiff | 1 | | Rory | 22 | | Welsh | 1 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | London | 2 | | Earth | 2 | | Nyx | 11 | | Isolde | 10 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | One | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Belphegor" | | 2 | "Silas" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Earth" | | 3 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 34.11% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 151 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like leaves scraping across stone" | | 1 | "looked like bone" | | 2 | "appeared stuffed with clouds" | | 3 | "seemed brighter sounds sharper, the pull to indulge almost irresistible" | | 4 | "looked like a miniature scene inside" | | 5 | "looked like their own former human hand f" | | 6 | "looked like they had been there for decad" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2538 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | 0 | "on that riddle" | | 1 | "touching that stuff" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 56 | | mean | 45.32 | | std | 26.76 | | cv | 0.59 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 38 | | 2 | 6 | | 3 | 65 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 60 | | 6 | 76 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 51 | | 11 | 20 | | 12 | 78 | | 13 | 63 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 27 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 66 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 109 | | 20 | 74 | | 21 | 23 | | 22 | 53 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 70 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 61 | | 27 | 29 | | 28 | 83 | | 29 | 12 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 47 | | 32 | 30 | | 33 | 79 | | 34 | 37 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 102 | | 37 | 19 | | 38 | 48 | | 39 | 23 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 74 | | 42 | 75 | | 43 | 71 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 48 | | 48 | 25 | | 49 | 92 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 168 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 432 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 168 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 2541 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 76 | | adverbRatio | 0.029909484454939 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0059031877213695395 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 168 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 168 | | mean | 15.11 | | std | 7.43 | | cv | 0.492 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 20 | | 1 | 20 | | 2 | 23 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 6 | | 8 | 9 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 27 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 15 | | 14 | 23 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 20 | | 18 | 14 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 36 | | 21 | 4 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 16 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 7 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 11 | | 31 | 9 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 10 | | 34 | 24 | | 35 | 20 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 19 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 12 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 15 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 51.39% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3333333333333333 | | totalSentences | 168 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 60.61% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "Just to see what happens." | | 1 | "Just passing through to find" | | 2 | "Instead they displayed artifacts and" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 37 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "She rubbed her thumb across" | | 1 | "It throbbed hot against her" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 3 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 4 | "She lifted one delicate hand" | | 5 | "She took another step and" | | 6 | "Her stomach twisted despite the" | | 7 | "She crouched beside a low" | | 8 | "It continued blooming in her" | | 9 | "She held it out and" | | 10 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "I could cut a piece." | | 12 | "She stopped at the head" | | 13 | "It wants us comfortable." | | 14 | "It wants us to stay." | | 15 | "She shook her head hard" | | 16 | "She led them toward a" | | 17 | "Their forms became decoration for" | | 18 | "It parted for her with" | | 19 | "She ran her fingers along" |
| | ratio | 0.224 | |
| 41.82% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 138 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the final" | | 1 | "The warm amber sky stretched" | | 2 | "Vines thick as her arm" | | 3 | "She rubbed her thumb across" | | 4 | "It throbbed hot against her" | | 5 | "Nyx coalesced at her side," | | 6 | "Their violet eyes swept the" | | 7 | "The excess here clings to" | | 8 | "Isolde followed without disturbing a" | | 9 | "Her silver hair trailed behind" | | 10 | "She lifted one delicate hand" | | 11 | "Words spoken in hunger carry" | | 12 | "Rory adjusted the fae-forged blade" | | 13 | "The moonsilver felt cold even" | | 14 | "She took another step and" | | 15 | "Her stomach twisted despite the" | | 16 | "The place wanted her to" | | 17 | "She crouched beside a low" | | 18 | "Juice welled instantly at her" | | 19 | "The small crescent scar there" |
| | ratio | 0.836 | |
| 30.30% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "Now the gluttonous realm tests" |
| | ratio | 0.006 | |
| 35.71% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 120 | | technicalSentenceCount | 18 | | matches | | 0 | "The warm amber sky stretched overhead without clouds or sun, just an endless glow that pressed down on her shoulders." | | 1 | "They moved deeper into the valley together, the path widening into a lane bordered by orchards that stretched farther than her eyes could track." | | 2 | "Trees bore fruit in impossible combinations, apples fused with figs, pears dripping honey that formed tiny rivers on the bark." | | 3 | "The blade sang when she passed her hand above it, a single clear note that made her teeth ache." | | 4 | "The faces on the stone now appeared to watch them, eyes following their progress with carved pupils that held faint traces of violet light similar to Nyx's own." | | 5 | "Low tables held bowls of candies that rearranged themselves into patterns as she watched." | | 6 | "The texture made her skin crawl yet she couldn't stop touching it, tracing the faint lines that resembled veins beneath the surface." | | 7 | "Their whisper voice cut through the growing hum that filled the air, a sound like thousands of mouths chewing in unison." | | 8 | "Inside the translucent skin she saw tiny versions of herself and her friends moving through this same landscape, repeating their actions in an endless loop." | | 9 | "They continued past the massive tree, the amber sky beginning to deepen toward a richer gold as if the realm itself tracked their progress." | | 10 | "Nyx examined a shadow box that contained what looked like their own former human hand from centuries ago." | | 11 | "The realm's true excess begins there, where indulgence turns to the sins that bind souls forever." | | 12 | "Flowers along the path bloomed in response to her movement, releasing pollen that sparkled like edible gold dust." | | 13 | "Behind her Nyx and Isolde followed, the three of them carving a temporary trail through a place that clearly wanted to consume every visitor who entered its anc…" | | 14 | "The top of the hill revealed a vast basin below filled with what appeared to be a lake of liquid chocolate that swirled in complex patterns." | | 15 | "Small boats made of hardened sugar floated across it, carrying passengers who looked like they had been there for decades, their bodies plump and content yet th…" | | 16 | "The half-fae's fingers traced the grooves without disturbing the dust that covered them." | | 17 | "They began to descend together toward the chocolate lake, the air growing thicker with sweetness that coated their tongues even without eating anything." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |