| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 34 | | adverbTagCount | 5 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She jerked away [away]" | | 1 | "black eye darkened further [further]" | | 2 | "The name tasted like [like]" | | 3 | "He pulled back [back]" | | 4 | "She laughed softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 102 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0.147 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |
| 87.46% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2392 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "carefully" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 47.74% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2392 | | totalAiIsms | 25 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "weight" | | 2 | "stomach" | | 3 | "etched" | | 4 | "racing" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "treacherous" | | 7 | "measured" | | 8 | "lilt" | | 9 | "unsettled" | | 10 | "restrained" | | 11 | "traced" | | 12 | "familiar" | | 13 | "vibrated" | | 14 | "intensity" | | 15 | "crystal" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "loomed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 162 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 230 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2392 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 30 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.07% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 56 | | wordCount | 1576 | | uniqueNames | 18 | | maxNameDensity | 1.08 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Silas | 2 | | Brick | 2 | | Lane | 2 | | Rory | 16 | | Marseille | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Carter | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Eva | 1 | | Lucien | 17 | | French | 1 | | Like | 2 | | Spain | 1 | | Avaros | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Three | 3 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Silas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Empress" | | 3 | "Carter" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Lucien" | | 6 | "Like" | | 7 | "Avaros" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Brick" | | 2 | "Lane" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "Golden" | | 5 | "Cardiff" | | 6 | "Spain" |
| | globalScore | 0.961 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 59.09% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "not quite a smile" | | 1 | "something like pain flickering in his mismat" | | 2 | "looked like demon sigils" | | 3 | "smelled like sulphur and broken promises" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.418 | | wordCount | 2392 | | matches | | 0 | "not hard enough to hurt but enough to make her point" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 230 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 107 | | mean | 22.36 | | std | 16.39 | | cv | 0.733 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 20 | | 3 | 42 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 48 | | 8 | 32 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 11 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 39 | | 18 | 7 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 18 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 34 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 6 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 54 | | 34 | 2 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 42 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 30 | | 39 | 38 | | 40 | 29 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 34 | | 43 | 16 | | 44 | 49 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 32 | | 47 | 18 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 53 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 274 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 230 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1585 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 58 | | adverbRatio | 0.03659305993690852 | | lyAdverbCount | 7 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004416403785488959 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 230 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 230 | | mean | 10.4 | | std | 7.29 | | cv | 0.701 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 3 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 2 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 7 | | 7 | 22 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 22 | | 13 | 10 | | 14 | 25 | | 15 | 23 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 21 | | 24 | 15 | | 25 | 18 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 7 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 17 | | 31 | 13 | | 32 | 25 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 18 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 10 | | 39 | 2 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 9 | | 49 | 1 |
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| 52.17% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 20 | | diversityRatio | 0.3652173913043478 | | totalSentences | 230 | | uniqueOpeners | 84 | |
| 45.35% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "More like the collapse of" | | 1 | "Instead exhaustion crashed over her" |
| | ratio | 0.014 | |
| 83.95% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 50 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "He tilted his head, amber" | | 1 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 2 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 3 | "He shifted his weight, tailored" | | 4 | "She stepped back." | | 5 | "He surveyed the cramped flat," | | 6 | "His gaze lingered on the" | | 7 | "His mouth curved, not quite" | | 8 | "She went still." | | 9 | "He moved closer, heterochromatic eyes" | | 10 | "She hadn't let anyone say" | | 11 | "He reached out but didn't" | | 12 | "She jerked away, knocking a" | | 13 | "They unrolled across the threadbare" | | 14 | "His voice hardened" | | 15 | "he said, changing direction like" | | 16 | "he continued, voice measured but" | | 17 | "His presence filled the cramped" | | 18 | "His hand rose again, this" | | 19 | "His thumb traced the scar" |
| | ratio | 0.34 | |
| 38.23% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 124 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory yanked the deadbolt back" | | 1 | "Lucien stood on the narrow" | | 2 | "He tilted his head, amber" | | 3 | "She gripped the edge of" | | 4 | "Her voice came out steadier" | | 5 | "He shifted his weight, tailored" | | 6 | "Rory tried to close the" | | 7 | "The cane shot out, thin" | | 8 | "Lucien leaned closer, voice dropping" | | 9 | "The air between them thickened." | | 10 | "Rory smelled the faint brimstone" | | 11 | "She stepped back." | | 12 | "Lucien moved inside without waiting," | | 13 | "He surveyed the cramped flat," | | 14 | "His gaze lingered on the" | | 15 | "His mouth curved, not quite" | | 16 | "Rory folded her arms, trying" | | 17 | "Lucien set his cane against" | | 18 | "She went still." | | 19 | "The small metal box she'd" |
| | ratio | 0.844 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 147 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien moved inside without waiting, closing the door behind him with a soft click that sounded louder than the three deadbolts." | | 1 | "The barrister who'd never mentioned knowing anything about London's supernatural underbelly." | | 2 | "The reason she'd ended up living above a bar run by a man who owed favours to half-demons like Lucien." | | 3 | "That damned brimstone and bergamot combination that had haunted her dreams for months." | | 4 | "The way he'd pushed her behind him and told her to run before vanishing through a tear in reality that smelled like sulphur and broken promises." | | 5 | "Attraction, betrayal, the kind of want that survived even demon deals and broken hearts." | | 6 | "From opening her door to find the man who'd shattered her heart standing there with more truth than she knew how to hold." | | 7 | "Rory clutched his shoulders, rising onto her toes to meet him, years of complicated history exploding between them in the cramped bedroom." |
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| 80.88% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 34 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "He reached out, fingers hovering near the crescent scar on her wrist" | | 1 | "His forehead rested, breath mingling" | | 2 | "Confidence edged, the fixer reasserting control" |
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| 91.18% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he continued (continue)" | | 1 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "she repeated (repeat)" | | 4 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 5 | "She laughed softly (laugh)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 102 | | tagDensity | 0.108 | | leniency | 0.216 | | rawRatio | 0.545 | | effectiveRatio | 0.118 | |