Run: 2026-03-12-01KKHZ9X2A3W88MBACR89A3PD1

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22.8s
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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory yanked back the final deadbolt and wrenched the door open. Lucien Moreau filled the narrow landing, his ivory-handled cane planted like a challenge between them. The amber eye caught the light first, then the black one, both fixed on her with the same unnerving calm she remembered too well. "You." The word left her throat raw. "Indeed." He stepped forward before she could slam the door. She gave ground. The cramped hallway of Eva's flat swallowed him, and the scent of expensive wool and something sharper, like scorched cinnamon, followed close behind. Ptolemy launched from the sofa arm with a furious yowl and vanished behind a tower of scrolls. Rory folded her arms across her chest, the small crescent scar on her left wrist pulling tight. "Eva isn't here." "I know." Lucien closed the door with the heel of his shoe. The three deadbolts slid home one after another, each click deliberate. "She told me you would be." The betrayal landed like a slap. Eva, of all people. Rory turned on her heel and walked into the main room, forcing him to follow or stay abandoned in the doorway. Books and research notes covered every surface, the smell of old paper and cheap curry from the restaurant below clinging to everything. She stopped beside the tiny kitchen counter and gripped its edge. Lucien moved like he owned the space. The cane tapped once against the floorboards, then silence as he leaned it against a stack of leather-bound volumes. His platinum hair stayed perfectly slicked despite the damp London air outside. Charcoal suit tailored to his frame, not a wrinkle in sight. Thirty-two years old and he still looked like trouble poured into expensive fabric. "You have thirty seconds before I throw you out." Rory kept her voice even, cool. The same tone she used on difficult customers at the restaurant. He tilted his head, studying her. "You look tired, Rory." "Twenty-five." "Still counting? How charming." A faint smile ghosted across his mouth. "I counted every day for three months. Then I stopped. It became... unproductive." Her stomach twisted. Three months. The exact stretch of silence after that night in the alley behind Silas's bar, when his mouth had been on hers and his demon blood had flared hot under her hands. When she'd seen what lived beneath the tailored suits and charming accent and had pushed him away so hard he'd actually staggered. "You don't get to say my name like that." She grabbed the kettle, filled it with more force than necessary. Water sloshed. "Not anymore." Lucien drifted closer. The flat was too small for distance. Every step he took ate up the space between them until she could see the faint scar through his left eyebrow, a detail she'd traced with her fingertip once while he slept. "I didn't come to fight." His voice dropped, the Marseille edge softening the consonants. "Though watching you bristle does have its appeal." "Then why are you here?" The kettle hit the stove with a clang. She didn't bother with the illusion of making tea for him. He reached past her for a mug anyway, setting it on the counter between them like a white flag. "Your delivery route took you past the old warehouse on Pennington Street last Thursday. Three times." The numbers hit like accusation. Rory went still. "Someone noticed," he continued. "Someone who still has your photo in his wallet and a very specific set of grudges." Evan. The name didn't need saying. The way Lucien's jaw tightened told her he knew exactly how she felt about her ex. The bruises had faded months before she reached London, but the memory of them lingered in the way she checked every shadow. She snatched the mug away from him. "I can handle my own mess." "Can you?" He braced one hand on the counter, caging her without touching. The black eye seemed to swallow light. "Because the thing currently occupying that warehouse isn't entirely human anymore. And it still uses your surname when it speaks." Rory's pulse hammered against her throat. She could smell the faint char on him now, the demon mark that always grew stronger when he grew agitated. It should have repulsed her. Instead her body remembered the taste of that heat on his tongue. "Get out of my flat." "It's Eva's flat." He corrected mildly, but his gaze dropped to her mouth for half a second. "And she asked me to keep you breathing." "By lying to me again?" The words flew out sharper than intended. "Like you lied when you said the demon half didn't control you? When you let me believe you were just a man who liked pretty lawyers with broken pasts?" Lucien's expression didn't change, but the temperature in the room seemed to drop. He straightened, removing his hand from the counter. The absence of his closeness left her colder than it should have. "I never lied." Each word came precise, almost gentle. "I simply didn't vomit every ugly detail onto your lap the first time you let me kiss you. A mistake, clearly." The reminder of that night thickened the air. Rain against the windows of the bar upstairs. Her back against the brick wall. His cane discarded on wet cobbles while his hands mapped her waist like he was learning a new language. The moment his eyes had bled fully black and she'd frozen, the scar on her wrist suddenly burning like a warning. Ptolemy chose that moment to reappear, slinking between Lucien's legs with sudden affection, traitor that he was. The half-demon glanced down, one corner of his mouth lifting. "Even the cat has better taste than you." "Don't." Rory's voice cracked despite her best effort. She hated how small it sounded in the cluttered room. "Don't flirt. Don't charm. Don't stand there looking like you didn't disappear the second I pulled away." Lucien exhaled through his nose. For the first time since he'd crossed the threshold, something raw flickered behind the polished facade. He reached out slowly, giving her every chance to move, and brushed his thumb across the crescent scar on her wrist. The touch burned. "I left because you looked at me like I was the next Evan." The words came low, almost whispered. "Like I might hurt you the same way. And the worst part, chérie, is that I understood why." Her breath stalled. The kettle began to scream behind her, but neither of them moved to silence it. Lucien's fingers stayed on her wrist, light as a question. The black eye had bled further into the amber one, the demon rising to the surface with his honesty. Rory swallowed hard. "You still scare me." "Good." His grip tightened fractionally, not painful, just enough to remind her of his strength. "I should. But not because I'd ever lay a hand on you in anger. Never that." The space between them shrank without either taking a deliberate step. His suit jacket brushed her arm. She could see individual strands of platinum hair that had escaped their hold, the faint shadow of stubble he usually kept immaculate. The scream of the kettle filled the flat until it became part of the tension, a metallic witness to whatever was about to break between them. Lucien lowered his head until his mouth hovered near her ear. "Tell me to leave again and I will. But this time I'll tell you what I should have said three months ago." Her hands rose of their own accord, fisting in the front of his charcoal suit. The fabric felt too warm, too real. Ptolemy wound figure eights around their ankles, purring loud enough to compete with the kettle. The words left her in a rush. "Then say it." His free hand came up to cup the back of her neck, thumb pressing against the wild flutter of her pulse. For the first time since the door opened, Lucien Moreau looked uncertain. The half-demon and the man warred visibly across his mismatched eyes. "I left because staying would have meant showing you everything I am." His breath ghosted across her lips. "The hunger. The violence. The way I wanted to keep you so completely it terrified even me. But running didn't kill it. Nothing has." The admission hung between them, heavy as smoke. Rory's grip on his lapels tightened until her knuckles ached. Part of her wanted to shove him away. The larger part, the one that had spent three months dreaming of mismatched eyes and the particular taste of his mouth, wanted to drag him closer and damn the consequences. A sharp knock rattled the front door behind them. Three measured strikes, too precise to be casual. Lucien's entire body stiffened against hers. The demon surged fully to the surface, both eyes bleeding black. "Interesting." His voice dropped to a dangerous murmur, lips still brushing her ear. "They're early." Rory's blood turned to ice. She didn't need to ask who they were. The history between them, the attraction and the hurt and the things left unsaid, suddenly felt very small compared to the new danger now standing on the other side of three deadbolts. Lucien didn't release her. If anything his grip on her neck grew more possessive as he reached for the concealed blade in his cane. "Stay behind me, Rory." The command came soft but absolute. "This time I won't disappear when it gets ugly." The knocking came again, patient and relentless, like something that already knew it would eventually be let inside.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He corrected mildly [mildly]"
1"His grip tightened fractionally [fractionally]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.432
leniency0.864
rawRatio0.105
effectiveRatio0.091
78.04% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"very"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"very"
2"suddenly"
3"slowly"
4"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.95% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1594
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"silence"
count3
1
word"stomach"
count1
2
word"eyebrow"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"reminder"
count1
6
word"affection"
count1
7
word"charm"
count1
8
word"flickered"
count1
9
word"facade"
count1
10
word"tension"
count1
11
word"measured"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"stomach"
2"eyebrow"
3"traced"
4"pulse"
5"reminder"
6"affection"
7"charm"
8"flickered"
9"facade"
10"tension"
11"measured"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences132
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1594
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.15% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount1230
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.06
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau2
Eva2
London2
Silas1
Water1
Marseille1
Evan1
Lucien13
Rory10
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Silas"
3"Water"
4"Evan"
5"Lucien"
6"Rory"
7"Ptolemy"
places
0"London"
1"Marseille"
globalScore0.972
windowScore1
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like trouble poured into expensive"
1"the man warred visibly across his mismatch"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1594
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences132
matches
0"chose that moment"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean31.88
std16.83
cv0.528
sampleLengths
050
17
253
320
429
564
662
726
810
91
1024
1158
1224
1342
1422
1524
1635
178
1820
1944
2013
2140
2243
235
2425
2541
2633
2730
2862
2927
308
3135
3245
3337
3447
357
3631
3765
3833
3937
4010
4144
4242
4356
4434
4515
4645
4724
4819
4918
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs204
matches
0"was learning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences132
ratio0
matches(empty)
93.57% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1235
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"same unnerving calm she"
adverbCount50
adverbRatio0.04048582995951417
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.010526315789473684
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences132
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences132
mean12.08
std7.2
cv0.596
sampleLengths
011
115
224
37
410
53
623
717
817
93
1012
1111
126
136
144
1521
1622
1711
187
1919
2012
2111
2213
2315
2411
256
264
271
2811
2913
303
312
3231
3322
3420
352
362
373
387
3932
4014
418
4213
4311
4419
4516
465
473
484
4916
56.82% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.36363636363636365
totalSentences132
uniqueOpeners48
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"Instead her body remembered the"
ratio0.01
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences103
matches
0"He stepped forward before she"
1"She gave ground."
2"She stopped beside the tiny"
3"His platinum hair stayed perfectly"
4"He tilted his head, studying"
5"Her stomach twisted."
6"She grabbed the kettle, filled"
7"His voice dropped, the Marseille"
8"She didn't bother with the"
9"He reached past her for"
10"She snatched the mug away"
11"He braced one hand on"
12"She could smell the faint"
13"It should have repulsed her."
14"He corrected mildly, but his"
15"He straightened, removing his hand"
16"Her back against the brick"
17"His cane discarded on wet"
18"She hated how small it"
19"He reached out slowly, giving"
ratio0.282
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences103
matches
0"Rory yanked back the final"
1"Lucien Moreau filled the narrow"
2"The amber eye caught the"
3"The word left her throat"
4"He stepped forward before she"
5"She gave ground."
6"The cramped hallway of Eva's"
7"Ptolemy launched from the sofa"
8"Rory folded her arms across"
9"Lucien closed the door with"
10"The three deadbolts slid home"
11"The betrayal landed like a"
12"Eva, of all people."
13"Rory turned on her heel"
14"Books and research notes covered"
15"She stopped beside the tiny"
16"Lucien moved like he owned"
17"The cane tapped once against"
18"His platinum hair stayed perfectly"
19"Charcoal suit tailored to his"
ratio0.922
48.54% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"If anything his grip on"
ratio0.01
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She could see individual strands of platinum hair that had escaped their hold, the faint shadow of stubble he usually kept immaculate."
19.74% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory kept, cool"
1"His voice dropped, the Marseille edge softening the consonants"
2"He corrected mildly, but his gaze dropped to her mouth for half a second"
3"His grip tightened fractionally, not painful, just enough to remind her of his strength"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he continued (continue)"
1"He corrected mildly (correct)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.045
leniency0.091
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.091
85.7667%