| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva said quietly [quietly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.342 | | leniency | 0.684 | | rawRatio | 0.077 | | effectiveRatio | 0.053 | |
| 86.54% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2228 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 6 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "lazily" | | 2 | "slowly" | | 3 | "completely" | | 4 | "very" | | 5 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 50.63% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2228 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "measured" | | 1 | "etched" | | 2 | "fluttered" | | 3 | "velvet" | | 4 | "perfect" | | 5 | "synthetic" | | 6 | "trembled" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "footsteps" | | 9 | "flicked" | | 10 | "silence" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "pulse" | | 13 | "scanned" | | 14 | "standard" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "weight" | | 17 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 2 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 144 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 56 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 2212 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 13 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1494 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 1.27 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Harlow | 1 | | Quinn | 19 | | Tube | 1 | | Camden | 1 | | Northern | 1 | | Line | 1 | | Fletcher | 11 | | Morris | 3 | | Eva | 11 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Fletcher" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Eva" |
| | places | (empty) | | globalScore | 0.864 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 71.88% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 96 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "as though recognizing something in the detective’s careful silence" | | 1 | "looked like liquid starlight" | | 2 | "appeared solid yet the compass needle now pointed straight at the spot where the footprint disappeared" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 2 | | per1kWords | 0.904 | | wordCount | 2212 | | matches | | 0 | "not along the platform, but directly into it" | | 1 | "neither living nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 144 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 43.37 | | std | 22.56 | | cv | 0.52 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 109 | | 1 | 79 | | 2 | 25 | | 3 | 29 | | 4 | 53 | | 5 | 98 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 31 | | 8 | 68 | | 9 | 57 | | 10 | 47 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 38 | | 13 | 41 | | 14 | 71 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 47 | | 18 | 32 | | 19 | 50 | | 20 | 63 | | 21 | 34 | | 22 | 78 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 37 | | 25 | 30 | | 26 | 36 | | 27 | 82 | | 28 | 42 | | 29 | 26 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 55 | | 32 | 17 | | 33 | 50 | | 34 | 82 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 29 | | 39 | 47 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 49 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 50 | | 44 | 26 | | 45 | 60 | | 46 | 38 | | 47 | 44 | | 48 | 47 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 81.67% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "been closed" | | 1 | "been pushed" | | 2 | "been interrupted" | | 3 | "been sliced" | | 4 | "been placed" | | 5 | "been etched" | | 6 | "been caught" | | 7 | "been carved" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 246 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 144 | | ratio | 0.069 | | matches | | 0 | "The air tasted wrong—metallic, like ozone after a lightning strike, laced with something sweet and bitter that clung to the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Makeshift stalls lined the curved tunnel walls—wooden frames draped in heavy velvet that reeked of incense and old blood." | | 2 | "Jars of viscous liquid glinted on one table; another held bundles of dried herbs tied with silver thread." | | 3 | "Yet the blood—there should have been litres of it—barely stained the concrete." | | 4 | "Protective sigils—circles intersected by angular runes—had been etched around the face." | | 5 | "Not a power surge—there was no generator hum—but a deliberate dimming, as though something had passed between them and the bulbs." | | 6 | "More importantly, it led toward the tunnel wall—not along the platform, but directly into it." | | 7 | "She felt its pull like a hook behind her sternum—a memory of the warehouse three years ago, the way the air had split open and Morris had stepped through something that shouldn’t exist." | | 8 | "That something larger had noticed the clique she’d been investigating—the same clique this market clearly served." | | 9 | "Somewhere deeper in the tunnels, something shifted—a soft rustle of fabric that belonged to neither living nor dead." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1514 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 56 | | adverbRatio | 0.036988110964332896 | | lyAdverbCount | 23 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015191545574636724 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 144 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 144 | | mean | 15.36 | | std | 10.17 | | cv | 0.662 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 31 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 32 | | 4 | 6 | | 5 | 23 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 19 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 22 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 15 | | 26 | 18 | | 27 | 12 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 7 | | 30 | 50 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 3 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 11 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 2 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 5 | | 46 | 7 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 8 |
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| 61.34% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3888888888888889 | | totalSentences | 144 | | uniqueOpeners | 56 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead it trembled toward the" | | 1 | "More importantly, it led toward" | | 2 | "Only when they had faded" | | 3 | "Somewhere deeper in the tunnels," |
| | ratio | 0.035 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 30 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Her leather-soled boots rang against" | | 1 | "She gave him a flat" | | 2 | "She stepped past him onto" | | 3 | "She joined him, crouching beside" | | 4 | "His coat was expensive, cashmere," | | 5 | "It sat in perfect, undisturbed" | | 6 | "She studied the man’s hands." | | 7 | "She reached for it." | | 8 | "Its casing carried a patina" | | 9 | "She turned the compass in" | | 10 | "She clutched a worn leather" | | 11 | "She nodded toward the sigils" | | 12 | "They’d found him two days" | | 13 | "She gestured Eva closer, noting" | | 14 | "Her satchel shifted, revealing the" | | 15 | "she indicated the body" | | 16 | "She had spent three years" | | 17 | "She crouched again, studying the" | | 18 | "She scanned the platform again," | | 19 | "he waved at the stalls" |
| | ratio | 0.261 | |
| 55.65% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 93 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | | 0 | "Detective Harlow Quinn descended the" | | 1 | "The air tasted wrong—metallic, like" | | 2 | "Her leather-soled boots rang against" | | 3 | "None had felt quite like" | | 4 | "The call had come in" | | 5 | "The yellow police tape strung" | | 6 | "A uniformed sergeant straightened as" | | 7 | "She gave him a flat" | | 8 | "Quinn’s brown eyes narrowed." | | 9 | "She stepped past him onto" | | 10 | "The space stretched wider than" | | 11 | "Jars of viscous liquid glinted" | | 12 | "A bone token no larger" | | 13 | "This wasn’t a crime scene." | | 14 | "This was a market that" | | 15 | "Fletcher’s voice carried from farther" | | 16 | "She joined him, crouching beside" | | 17 | "The man’s eyes were open," | | 18 | "His coat was expensive, cashmere," | | 19 | "It sat in perfect, undisturbed" |
| | ratio | 0.809 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 115 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 14 | | matches | | 0 | "The yellow police tape strung across the old platform entrance fluttered in a draft that had no obvious source." | | 1 | "The space stretched wider than any abandoned station had a right to, as though the walls had been pushed back by unseen hands." | | 2 | "Makeshift stalls lined the curved tunnel walls—wooden frames draped in heavy velvet that reeked of incense and old blood." | | 3 | "She clutched a worn leather satchel to her side, the kind that bulged with books." | | 4 | "Freckles stood out against her pale skin, and she had the distinct look of someone who had been caught somewhere she shouldn’t be." | | 5 | "Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear, a nervous gesture that didn’t match the steady intelligence in her green eyes." | | 6 | "Eva’s gaze flicked to Quinn, as though recognizing something in the detective’s careful silence." | | 7 | "She gestured Eva closer, noting how the younger woman moved between the stalls with familiarity, as if she’d walked these makeshift aisles before." | | 8 | "Not a power surge—there was no generator hum—but a deliberate dimming, as though something had passed between them and the bulbs." | | 9 | "Yet here, in this impossible market beneath a city that prided itself on being rational, the evidence refused to add up unless she accepted the unacceptable." | | 10 | "The print was bare, narrow, and the dust around it shimmered faintly, as though disturbed by heat rather than weight." | | 11 | "She felt its pull like a hook behind her sternum—a memory of the warehouse three years ago, the way the air had split open and Morris had stepped through someth…" | | 12 | "Somewhere deeper in the tunnels, something shifted—a soft rustle of fabric that belonged to neither living nor dead." | | 13 | "And she suspected, with the cold certainty that had kept her alive for eighteen years, that it had been watching her in return." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Quinn murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Fletcher snapped (snap)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.158 | | leniency | 0.316 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |