Run: 2026-03-12-01KKHZD4J24TJR1KCXSVK4PGW4

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora wrenched the final deadbolt aside and yanked the door open. Lucien filled the narrow landing, his charcoal suit cut to perfection across broad shoulders. Those mismatched eyes pinned her in place, one amber slice of fire, the other endless black. His ivory cane rested against his thigh as if he had every right to appear on Eva's doorstep uninvited. "Rory." The single word rolled out low, laced with that Marseille edge he never quite lost. Her pulse slammed against her throat. She tightened her grip on the door until the wood bit her palm. "You don't get to call me that anymore." He tilted his head a fraction, slicked-back platinum hair catching the light from the bare bulb overhead. Ptolemy chose that moment to wind between her ankles and then trot straight to the intruder, purring like a traitor. Lucien reached down without breaking eye contact with her and ran two fingers along the tabby's spine. "Still keeping company with scholars and strays, I see." "Don't." She stepped back but left the door open. A mistake. He moved inside, the faint scent of smoke and spice threading through the curry steam that rose from the restaurant below. The flat swallowed him whole, its walls already lined floor to ceiling with Eva's books and half-unrolled scrolls that smelled of ink and old vellum. Aurora shut the door harder than necessary. The three deadbolts stared at her like accusations she refused to answer. "Eva's not here. Whatever information you came for, you'll have to crawl back to whatever hole in the underworld you crawled out of." "I did not come for Eva." He set the cane against the cluttered sideboard, the concealed blade inside clicking faintly. "I came for you." The words landed between them like a gauntlet. Aurora turned away, busying her hands by gathering a stack of research notes from the sagging sofa. Her shoulder-length black hair fell forward, hiding the way her cheeks burned. She hated that he could still do this to her, could walk in after six months of silence and make the air feel too small for both of them. "You had your chance to come for me." She slapped the papers onto a side table. "You made it very clear I was a distraction. Too human. Too breakable. Your exact words, if memory serves." Lucien did not flinch. He never did. Instead he tracked her movements with those unnatural eyes, the amber one glittering with something that might have been regret if demons were capable of it. "I said what was necessary." "Necessary." She laughed, sharp and short. The sound bounced off the crowded shelves. "Necessary to disappear the morning after you kissed me like the world was ending? Necessary to leave me with nothing but a note that said 'Stay out of the East End'?" He advanced a step. She refused to retreat. The scar on her left wrist itched under his gaze, that small crescent from a childhood fall suddenly feeling exposed. He had traced it once, in the dark, with a gentleness that still haunted her. "I left because my father sent collectors." His voice dropped, the cultured accent thickening. "Avaros does not forgive half-bloods who form attachments. They would have used you to drag me back. I would not allow it." Aurora searched his face for the lie. She found none, only the same tightly leashed hunger that had drawn her to him the night he first appeared at Silas's bar with information about her ex. Evan had been the start of everything, the reason she fled Cardiff. Lucien had removed that threat with clinical efficiency and then stayed for whisky and conversation that stretched until dawn. One thing led to another. Hands and mouths and whispered promises in a language she didn't fully understand. "And now?" She gestured at the chaos of the flat, at the cat now curled contentedly on Lucien's discarded coat. "Six months later you decide the collectors have lost interest? Or did you simply grow bored of your noble sacrifice?" He closed the remaining distance. Close enough that she could see the faint scar along his own jaw, the one he claimed came from a deal gone wrong in 1897. His hand rose, hesitated, then caught her wrist with careful fingers. The touch burned. Not painfully. Something worse. "I tried to stay away." His thumb brushed across her scar, once, twice. "Every night I told myself you were safer without me. Then word reached me about Evan. He did not stay gone." The floor seemed to tilt beneath her. "Evan is in prison." "Was." Lucien's grip tightened a fraction, not enough to hurt, just enough to anchor her. "A contact of mine in the prison service called it an impossible escape. The kind that smells of borrowed power. Someone lent him strength that does not belong to any human." Aurora pulled free but did not step away. The place where his fingers had been felt colder than the rest of her skin. Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the nearest bookshelf, dislodging a cascade of papers that fluttered around their feet like surrender flags. "So you came to warn me." She kept her voice steady, the cool-headed mask she had perfected since university sliding back into place. "Mission accomplished. You can leave now." "I came to keep you alive." He glanced at the scattered papers, scanning the top sheet with practiced speed. "These notes. You are looking into the same binding rituals I warned you about last year. Tell me you have not tried any of them." His concern should not have warmed her. It did anyway, a treacherous curl of heat low in her stomach. She remembered the weight of him above her, the way his mismatched eyes had glowed in the dark when pleasure overtook control. The way he had whispered her name like a prayer and a curse at once. "I am not helpless, Luc." The old nickname slipped out before she could stop it. His expression shifted, something raw flickering across his features. "I deliver pho and spring rolls by day and research by night. I have stayed out of the East End like your precious note demanded. But this is my life now. The supernatural bleeding into everything. You do not get to decide how much of it touches me." Lucien exhaled through his nose. The sound carried centuries of frustration. He reached into his jacket and produced a small obsidian disc etched with symbols that hurt to look at directly. "This binds a lesser demon long enough to ask questions. Take it. If Evan comes for you, use it. Do not hesitate." She stared at the artefact but made no move to accept it. Accepting it meant accepting his protection again. Accepting it meant opening the door to everything else that always followed. "And what happens after I use it? You disappear for another six months? Another year? I am not a project for you to fix and then abandon, Lucien." The use of his full name struck him harder than she expected. He set the disc on the arm of the sofa between them like a challenge. When he spoke again, the words came slower, each one dragged from somewhere deep. "I did not leave because I wanted to." He looked at her directly, letting her see the conflict that warred behind his eyes. "Every day without you felt like half of me had been carved away. The human half, perhaps. The part capable of caring for someone without destroying them." The flat felt smaller. The curry scent from downstairs thickened, heavy with cumin and coriander, while the dust from the books coated her tongue. Aurora's gaze dropped to his mouth, to the slight part of his lips as he breathed her air. She hated how much she wanted to close the gap. "You do not get to say those things now." Her voice cracked despite her best efforts. "Not after I spent months convincing myself you felt nothing." "I felt everything." He moved closer still. His hand rose again, this time cupping the side of her neck, thumb pressing against the frantic beat of her pulse. "That is the problem." The touch undid her careful control. She surged up and kissed him before either of them could think better of it. Lucien made a rough sound against her mouth, half surprise, half relief, and then he was kissing her back with the same desperate precision she remembered. His free hand found her waist, pulling her flush against the tailored lines of his suit. The obsidian disc clattered to the floor, forgotten. For several long moments there was only the slide of lips and the scrape of teeth, the way his fingers tightened in her hair exactly the way she needed. The flat disappeared. The books, the cat, the threat of Evan, all of it faded beneath the taste of him, smoke and spice and something darker that belonged only to Avaros. Then the sound of heavy footsteps on the stairs outside sliced through the moment. Lucien wrenched back first, heterochromatic eyes wide with alarm. His cane was in his hand before she could draw breath. The concealed blade whispered free with a metallic sigh. "Three men," he whispered. "Not human. Not fully." Aurora grabbed the obsidian disc from the floor, its edges biting into her palm. The footsteps reached the landing. A fist hammered against the door, shaking the three deadbolts in their sockets. "Rory Carter." The voice beyond the wood was wrong, layered with something that grated like claws on stone. "We know you're in there with the half-breed. Open up. We only want to talk." Lucien positioned himself between her and the door, blade gleaming, while Ptolemy puffed up to twice his normal size on the bookshelf. Aurora felt the old scar on her wrist burn hot for the first time in years. The first deadbolt clicked open by itself. The second followed.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.41
leniency0.821
rawRatio0.063
effectiveRatio0.051
91.01% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1669
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
61.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1669
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"traced"
count1
3
word"fluttered"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count1
5
word"treacherous"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"footsteps"
count2
10
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"silence"
2"traced"
3"fluttered"
4"scanning"
5"treacherous"
6"stomach"
7"weight"
8"etched"
9"footsteps"
10"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences97
matches(empty)
98.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences97
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"see"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences119
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1669
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1210
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.83
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Marseille1
Lucien10
Aurora8
Silas1
Cardiff1
Evan2
Avaros1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Silas"
4"Evan"
5"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Cardiff"
2"Avaros"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1669
matches(empty)
54.62% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount4
totalSentences119
matches
0"chose that moment"
1"hated that he"
2"removed that threat"
3"chose that moment"
95.62% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean38.81
std18.81
cv0.485
sampleLengths
011
149
216
327
454
59
657
742
824
966
1035
1138
1244
1343
1436
1584
1640
1748
1834
1911
2046
2146
2229
2344
2456
2572
2653
2759
2841
2950
3052
3126
3232
3371
3460
3514
3629
378
3832
3933
4038
417
423
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"been felt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was kissing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences119
ratio0
matches(empty)
99.68% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1214
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04036243822075782
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.009884678747940691
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences119
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences119
mean14.03
std8.23
cv0.587
sampleLengths
011
114
216
319
416
56
613
78
817
920
1017
119
129
132
1421
1525
167
1712
1823
1920
204
218
2217
2312
2429
2516
2619
274
283
2926
305
316
327
3331
344
354
3620
3715
3814
3922
407
4128
4212
4319
445
4513
4620
4720
485
4925
52.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3445378151260504
totalSentences119
uniqueOpeners41
71.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences93
matches
0"Instead he tracked her movements"
1"Then the sound of heavy"
ratio0.022
56.56% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences93
matches
0"His ivory cane rested against"
1"Her pulse slammed against her"
2"She tightened her grip on"
3"He tilted his head a"
4"She stepped back but left"
5"He moved inside, the faint"
6"He set the cane against"
7"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
8"She hated that he could"
9"She slapped the papers onto"
10"He never did."
11"She laughed, sharp and short"
12"He advanced a step."
13"She refused to retreat."
14"He had traced it once,"
15"His voice dropped, the cultured"
16"She found none, only the"
17"She gestured at the chaos"
18"He closed the remaining distance."
19"His hand rose, hesitated, then"
ratio0.409
3.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount85
totalSentences93
matches
0"Aurora wrenched the final deadbolt"
1"Lucien filled the narrow landing,"
2"Those mismatched eyes pinned her"
3"His ivory cane rested against"
4"The single word rolled out"
5"Her pulse slammed against her"
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"He tilted his head a"
8"Ptolemy chose that moment to"
9"Lucien reached down without breaking"
10"She stepped back but left"
11"He moved inside, the faint"
12"The flat swallowed him whole,"
13"Aurora shut the door harder"
14"The three deadbolts stared at"
15"He set the cane against"
16"The words landed between them"
17"Aurora turned away, busying her"
18"Her shoulder-length black hair fell"
19"She hated that he could"
ratio0.914
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.39% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences49
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"His ivory cane rested against his thigh as if he had every right to appear on Eva's doorstep uninvited."
1"The flat swallowed him whole, its walls already lined floor to ceiling with Eva's books and half-unrolled scrolls that smelled of ink and old vellum."
2"Instead he tracked her movements with those unnatural eyes, the amber one glittering with something that might have been regret if demons were capable of it."
3"Lucien had removed that threat with clinical efficiency and then stayed for whisky and conversation that stretched until dawn."
4"Ptolemy chose that moment to leap onto the nearest bookshelf, dislodging a cascade of papers that fluttered around their feet like surrender flags."
5"The books, the cat, the threat of Evan, all of it faded beneath the taste of him, smoke and spice and something darker that belonged only to Avaros."
93.75% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Lucien's grip tightened, not enough to hurt, just enough to anchor her"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
1"he whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.051
leniency0.103
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.103
84.4053%