Run: 2026-03-12-01KKHZKMDZE1123W192K0S5RBE

Run Details

Duration:
42.1s
Cost:
$0.049292
Provider:
xAI

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora pushed through the last tangle of ordinary brambles at the edge of Richmond Park. The air thickened around her the moment she crossed between the ancient oak standing stones. Her boots sank into grass that gave way like living moss, cool and pulsing faintly against her soles. She straightened and took in the expanse that opened ahead. Nyx slid from the shadow of the nearest stone, their form sharpening from smoke into a tall silhouette. Violet light flickered in their eyes. This ground does not welcome light the same way. Isolde stepped out beside them, her silver hair trailing behind her like a slow river. No footprints marked her passage across the blooms. The grove opens its throat for those who carry questions. Deeper questions earn deeper paths. Aurora rubbed the small crescent scar on her left wrist. The skin there always tightened in the presence of strong magic. She glanced back once. The park, the traffic hum, the December frost, all of it had vanished. These flowers should be dead this time of year. Instead they breathe. She crouched beside a cluster of sapphire petals that tilted toward her as if listening. When she exhaled, the blooms released a scent that tasted of her mother's kitchen in Cardiff, warm bread and rain on slate roofs. The memory sharpened so quickly her eyes stung. Nyx drifted closer, their voice arriving on a current that stirred the grass. Breathe too long and the grove will feed on what you remember. I learned that in the spaces between. Aurora rose and kept moving. The path appeared beneath her steps, narrow and winding, as though the ground itself decided where she belonged. Wildflowers brushed her hips, their leaves leaving trails of faint glitter on her jeans. Each blossom carried a different hum, low notes that vibrated in her sternum. Ahead the trees thickened. Their trunks spiraled upward in impossible twists, bark engraved with lines that shifted when she looked away. She touched one. The carving under her fingers rearranged itself into the shape of a small dagger. That marking changed. It showed a blade a second ago. Isolde paused beneath the canopy, her lavender eyes unblinking. Memory and future argue on these trunks. Only the present loses the fight. Nyx solidified enough for their feet to crunch fallen petals. The sound cracked sharp through the constant low music of the grove. I hear my old name here. Aldric. The trees remember the sorcerer before the shade. Aurora kept walking. The air grew sweeter, almost sticky. It coated her tongue with the taste of overripe fruit and distant smoke. Her heart beat steady, but unease pooled at the base of her neck. Every new color felt like a question she had not asked yet. They reached a clearing where the grass grew so thick it looked like emerald velvet. In the center stood a tree whose leaves shone with inner light. Fruits hung from its branches, each one containing what looked like slow swirls of stars. One had fallen and split open. Crystalline pulp glittered inside, releasing a scent that made her stomach growl despite the danger she sensed. Do not eat that. Nyx knelt by the fallen fruit, their shadowy fingers hovering above it. One bite opens doors. Another bite closes them forever. Isolde circled the tree once. Her voice wove through the branches. Hunger here wears a beautiful face. Gluttony waits in other realms, but its echo lingers even in Fae soil. Aurora glanced at the Heartstone Pendant resting against her collarbone. The deep crimson gem gave a single faint pulse, warm against her skin. She frowned. It reacts here too. I thought the pendant only woke near Hel portals. The ground trembled lightly under them, a soft rolling that could have been distant thunder or the grove itself stretching. She steadied her stance. The wildflowers around her ankles tightened briefly then released, like small hands deciding whether to hold her. They continued along the path as it sloped downward. The canopy parted in places, revealing a sky the color of bruised lilac streaked with gold. Time felt wrong. Her muscles carried the memory of hours spent walking, yet the light had not shifted. No sun crossed overhead. How long have we been inside? My legs say half a day. My watch still shows the minute we crossed the stones. Nyx's form thinned until only their eyes remained clearly visible, two violet points beside her shoulder. Clocks die in pockets like this. I spent four centuries learning that lesson. Isolde lifted a hand. Silver light gathered at her fingertips and drifted ahead like fireflies. The sparks illuminated a narrow stream cutting across their route. Water moved over smooth stones without sound. Fish with mirror scales darted beneath the surface, their bodies flashing reflections of places Aurora had never seen, vineyards heavy with black grapes, tables laden with roasted meats, an amber sky pressing down. Aurora stopped at the water's edge. She saw her own face in the current, then the image rippled into Evan shouting in their old flat, his hand raised. She jerked back. The stream shows what hurts. I don't need reminders. Isolde stood on the opposite bank, having crossed without disturbing the water. Pain is a door, Rory. Some doors the grove insists you open. Nyx reformed fully on Aurora's side, their height casting a faint darkness across the flowers. The shade remembers every mistake shown in such waters. They fuel what we become. Aurora wiped her hands on her jeans and stepped across a line of flat stones. The cold from the stream clung to her boots. She pressed forward, the Fae blade now visible at Isolde's hip, moonsilver catching stray glimmers. The half-fae unfastened the weapon and held it out hilt first. This grove recognizes you. The blade cuts wards and severs lies. Aurora closed her fingers around the grip. Cold traveled up her arm, sharp and clarifying. She tested the leaf-shaped edge against a nearby vine. The plant parted without resistance, sap glowing briefly before fading. It feels hungry for something to slice. They moved deeper still. The trees pressed closer, their branches forming living arches overhead. Bioluminescent moths drifted between the gaps, wings patterned like stained glass. One landed on Aurora's scarred wrist. Its touch sent a cool spark along the old injury, easing an ache she had carried since childhood. She allowed herself a small smile. Even the insects here try to heal you. Or maybe they just want to taste what magic already marked me. Nyx whispered from the shadows of a trunk. They taste potential. You carry pieces of multiple realms now. Isolde gestured toward a rise where the flowers grew waist-high and shimmered in waves of color. Beyond them a structure of living vines wove itself into walls and a domed roof. Light pulsed inside, slow as a heartbeat. The grove keeps its oldest secrets there. What you learn may change what you are willing to leave behind. Aurora gripped the new blade tighter. The air tasted thicker, the music of the flowers louder. She pushed through the tall blooms, petals brushing her arms with deliberate softness. Each step revealed new details: tiny carved runes on the tree roots that rearranged when she stared, clusters of berries that chimed like bells when the wind that was not wind touched them, a distant laugh that might have been water or might have been something alive and watching. Nyx kept pace, their form flickering between solid and smoke. The shadows here speak in my old language. They warn of balance. Too much wonder and the grove claims a memory in payment. Aurora's fingers found the pendant again. It warmed steadily now, a steady heartbeat against her chest. The path curved toward the vine structure. She could see an opening framed by glowing flowers that turned their faces toward the three of them in unison. She glanced at her companions, unease and curiosity twisting together in her gut. Whatever waits inside that shelter, we face it together. I didn't cross the stones to turn back at the first real mystery. Isolde inclined her head, silver strands catching the strange light. Mysteries choose their speakers. This one has been waiting for your voice. The flowers parted as they advanced, releasing fresh waves of scent and sound. Aurora stepped over a root that curled like a finger pointing the way. The ground vibrated stronger here, a deep note that traveled through her bones and made the scar on her wrist glow faintly. She kept moving, blade ready, eyes scanning every shifting detail as the grove unfolded more of itself around them.
created_at"2026-03-12T21:35:26.153Z" 3/12/2026, 9:35:26 PM
model"x-ai/grok-4.20-beta-20260309"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency31685
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time41953
tokens_prompt1816
tokens_completion2243
native_tokens_prompt1763
native_tokens_completion8146
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning6410
native_tokens_cached1728
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"completed"
usage0.0492916
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"33f49f24-a0de-4dcf-872d-ca514e83fbae"
id"cc852993-df91-b355-0107-10e86737aa1f"
is_byokfalse
latency426
model_permaslug"x-ai/grok-4.20-beta-20260309"
provider_name"xAI"
status200
user_agent"langchainjs-openai/1.0.0 ((node/v24.14.0; linux; x64))"
http_referer(null)
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1773351326-E5mFWP27DRutsMYuqwef"
upstream_id"cc852993-df91-b355-0107-10e86737aa1f"
total_cost0.0492916
cache_discount0.0031104
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"xAI"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
93.08% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1446
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"flickered"
count1
1
word"vibrated"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"crystalline"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"trembled"
count1
8
word"potential"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"structure"
count2
11
word"pulsed"
count1
12
word"scanning"
count1
highlights
0"flickered"
1"vibrated"
2"velvet"
3"crystalline"
4"stomach"
5"echo"
6"pulse"
7"trembled"
8"potential"
9"shimmered"
10"structure"
11"pulsed"
12"scanning"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences143
filterMatches
0"hear"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences143
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen49
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1446
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount1446
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.97
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
December1
Cardiff1
Fae2
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Hel1
Aurora14
Evan1
Rory1
Isolde8
Nyx8
One3
persons
0"December"
1"Pendant"
2"Aurora"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
5"Isolde"
6"Nyx"
7"One"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Heartstone"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore0.833
40.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences114
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"as if listening"
1"appeared beneath her steps, narrow and winding, as though the ground itself decided where she belonged"
2"felt like a question she had not asked"
3"looked like emerald velvet"
4"looked like slow swirls of stars"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1446
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences143
matches
0"learning that lesson"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs58
mean24.93
std18.23
cv0.731
sampleLengths
058
124
29
323
415
538
612
746
813
919
1050
1138
1210
139
1413
1522
1615
1747
1865
194
2012
219
2211
2319
2425
2513
2641
2747
2822
2916
3013
3165
3231
339
3412
3512
3615
3714
3850
3911
4034
417
4249
436
4420
458
4610
4738
4819
4978
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences143
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs262
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences143
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1449
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.033126293995859216
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.008281573498964804
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences143
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences143
mean10.11
std6.08
cv0.601
sampleLengths
015
115
218
310
418
56
69
715
88
910
105
1110
1211
134
1413
159
163
1715
1823
198
2013
2112
227
235
2418
2514
2613
274
2817
293
3014
313
327
339
347
356
3610
3712
386
391
408
413
426
4313
4413
4512
4615
4712
4815
496
62.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.38461538461538464
totalSentences143
uniqueOpeners55
94.56% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences141
matches
0"Instead they breathe."
1"Only the present loses the"
2"Even the insects here try"
3"Too much wonder and the"
ratio0.028
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences141
matches
0"Her boots sank into grass"
1"She straightened and took in"
2"She glanced back once."
3"She crouched beside a cluster"
4"I learned that in the"
5"Their trunks spiraled upward in"
6"She touched one."
7"It showed a blade a"
8"I hear my old name"
9"It coated her tongue with"
10"Her heart beat steady, but"
11"They reached a clearing where"
12"Her voice wove through the"
13"It reacts here too."
14"I thought the pendant only"
15"She steadied her stance."
16"They continued along the path"
17"Her muscles carried the memory"
18"My legs say half a"
19"My watch still shows the"
ratio0.284
45.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences141
matches
0"Aurora pushed through the last"
1"The air thickened around her"
2"Her boots sank into grass"
3"She straightened and took in"
4"Nyx slid from the shadow"
5"Violet light flickered in their"
6"This ground does not welcome"
7"Isolde stepped out beside them,"
8"The grove opens its throat"
9"Aurora rubbed the small crescent"
10"The skin there always tightened"
11"She glanced back once."
12"The park, the traffic hum,"
13"These flowers should be dead"
14"She crouched beside a cluster"
15"The memory sharpened so quickly"
16"Nyx drifted closer, their voice"
17"I learned that in the"
18"Aurora rose and kept moving."
19"The path appeared beneath her"
ratio0.83
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Crystalline pulp glittered inside, releasing a scent that made her stomach growl despite the danger she sensed."
1"The ground trembled lightly under them, a soft rolling that could have been distant thunder or the grove itself stretching."
2"Fish with mirror scales darted beneath the surface, their bodies flashing reflections of places Aurora had never seen, vineyards heavy with black grapes, tables…"
3"Each step revealed new details: tiny carved runes on the tree roots that rearranged when she stared, clusters of berries that chimed like bells when the wind th…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
88.8858%