| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 90.65% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1605 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "gently" | | 1 | "slowly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1605 | | totalAiIsms | 33 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | | | 24 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "tangible" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "fractured" | | 5 | "electric" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "whisper" | | 8 | "pulsed" | | 9 | "warmth" | | 10 | "loomed" | | 11 | "stomach" | | 12 | "treacherous" | | 13 | "lurch" | | 14 | "porcelain" | | 15 | "traced" | | 16 | "crystal" | | 17 | "cataloged" | | 18 | "echo" | | 19 | "perfect" | | 20 | "footfall" | | 21 | "roaring" | | 22 | "quickened" | | 23 | "structure" | | 24 | "trembled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 139 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 139 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1605 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 38 | | wordCount | 1605 | | uniqueNames | 16 | | maxNameDensity | 0.62 | | worstName | "Nyx" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Cardiff | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Christmas | 1 | | Isolde | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 1 | | Aurora | 9 | | Nyx | 10 | | One | 4 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Aurora" | | 7 | "Nyx" |
| | places | | 0 | "Cardiff" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "One" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 52.91% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 103 | | glossingSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "place, growing visibly, curling upward wit" | | 1 | "not quite human clapped from the stone tiers, their applause sounding like rain on a tin roof" | | 2 | "as if warning her" | | 3 | "seemed occupied tiny figures moving behind translucent skins" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.623 | | wordCount | 1605 | | matches | | 0 | "not random but seeking, curving toward the heat of her body" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 48 | | mean | 33.44 | | std | 22.49 | | cv | 0.673 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 63 | | 2 | 51 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 10 | | 5 | 47 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 42 | | 11 | 61 | | 12 | 18 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 9 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 53 | | 18 | 63 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 11 | | 22 | 51 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 16 | | 26 | 66 | | 27 | 69 | | 28 | 28 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 16 | | 31 | 60 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 59 | | 35 | 76 | | 36 | 58 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 44 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 64 | | 42 | 44 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 9 | | 45 | 51 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 50 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 139 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 303 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 139 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1609 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 50 | | adverbRatio | 0.031075201988812928 | | lyAdverbCount | 13 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008079552517091361 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 139 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 139 | | mean | 11.55 | | std | 6.99 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 23 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 17 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 2 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 11 | | 15 | 31 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 4 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 5 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 12 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 3 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 13 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 10 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 22 | | 45 | 20 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 7 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 23 |
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| 63.79% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 3 | | diversityRatio | 0.39568345323741005 | | totalSentences | 139 | | uniqueOpeners | 55 | |
| 25.06% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of water, dark chocolate" |
| | ratio | 0.008 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 36 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 1 | "She drew a slow breath" | | 2 | "Their whisper rode the breeze" | | 3 | "She had not thought of" | | 4 | "She shook her head hard." | | 5 | "I feel it already." | | 6 | "They moved between the vines." | | 7 | "She crouched, studying the way" | | 8 | "She straightened without picking it" | | 9 | "They pressed deeper." | | 10 | "Her stomach gave a treacherous" | | 11 | "She had not eaten since" | | 12 | "Its edge caught the amber" | | 13 | "She gripped it tighter." | | 14 | "She rolled her shoulders, trying" | | 15 | "Her vision blurred for a" | | 16 | "She staggered, catching herself on" | | 17 | "Her head cleared enough to" | | 18 | "She approached slowly, blade still" | | 19 | "She traced a crystal vein" |
| | ratio | 0.271 | |
| 35.19% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 113 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the shimmering" | | 1 | "The Heartstone Pendant flared hot" | | 2 | "Nyx slipped in after her," | | 3 | "Vines sprawled in every direction," | | 4 | "Each grape looked alive, skins" | | 5 | "Her boots sank into soil" | | 6 | "The ground itself seemed to" | | 7 | "She drew a slow breath" | | 8 | "Nyx reformed beside her, faint" | | 9 | "Their whisper rode the breeze" | | 10 | "This place remembers every hunger" | | 11 | "Aurora flexed her left wrist," | | 12 | "She had not thought of" | | 13 | "She shook her head hard." | | 14 | "I feel it already." | | 15 | "They moved between the vines." | | 16 | "Leaves brushed her arms with" | | 17 | "The orb pulsed with inner" | | 18 | "She crouched, studying the way" | | 19 | "Nyx loomed over her shoulder," |
| | ratio | 0.85 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 133 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 60.44% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 78 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "Aurora pushed through the shimmering tear in the air, the Veil parting with a resistance that clung to her skin like wet silk." | | 1 | "Vines sprawled in every direction, heavy with fruit that caught the light and threw it back in fractured sparks." | | 2 | "The ground itself seemed to breathe, small shifts underfoot that made her adjust her stance." | | 3 | "Fresh tendrils erupted in its place, growing visibly, curling upward with audible creaks." | | 4 | "Here the plants grew in deliberate patterns that formed tables and chairs grown from living wood." | | 5 | "They harvested glossy leaves and crimson roots with golden shears, placing each piece onto platters that floated without touch." | | 6 | "Instead of water, dark chocolate flowed in slow spirals, carrying candied orange peels that bobbed like tiny boats." | | 7 | "Flame-feathered birds dipped their beaks into the stream and emerged unscorched, trailing droplets that hissed into sweet vapor." | | 8 | "Spectators that were not quite human clapped from the stone tiers, their applause sounding like rain on a tin roof." |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |