Run: 2026-03-15-01KKS2N7TK8A9AY7647DVT8R6F

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You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The first deadbolt clicked. Then the second. The third stuck, as it always did, and the chain rattled before the door swung inward to reveal Ptolemy's tabby face pressing through the gap. Behind him, Eva's voice carried from somewhere deep in the flat, muffled by paper and distance. Rory's hand froze on the third bolt. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe like he owned the building, the landlord, and everyone inside it. His charcoal suit looked fresh-pressed despite the late hour. The ivory-handled cane rested against his shoulder, its silver tip catching the dim light from the curry house below. "Miss Carter." "You're blocking the door." "Am I?" He glanced down at himself as if the possibility had never occurred to him. "How inconsiderate." She didn't move. The crescent scar on her left wrist itched, a phantom sensation she'd learned to ignore months ago. Last time she'd seen that face, he'd been walking away from her in a Soho alley, leaving her with a name she didn't want and a debt she couldn't pay. "The cat's trying to escape." "Then perhaps you should close the door." Lucien tilted his head, one amber eye and one black studying her with the clinical detachment of a surgeon examining an interesting tumour. "Or invite me in. I'm flexible." "I'm not." "No." His mouth curved at one corner. "You never were." Ptolemy slipped between Rory's ankles and bolted down the stairwell. Traitor. She reached for the door, fully intending to slam it in his smug French face, and his cane came down, the silver tip wedging itself against the threshold. "Three deadbolts." He tapped the cane once against the floor. "And a chain. For a friend's flat." "Paranoia keeps you alive in London." "Paranoia keeps you alone in London. There's a difference." He leaned forward, close enough that she caught his scent, sandalwood and something darker underneath. "May I come in?" "No." "I have information about Evan." Her hand stopped. The door hung open, two inches of wood between them and whatever he'd brought to her doorstep. "Evan's in Cardiff. With my parents. That's not information, that's geography." "Evan contacted someone. Two days ago." Lucien withdrew the cane, tucking it beneath his arm. "Someone who owes me several favours and has a nasty habit of losing fingers when payments come due. He was asking questions about you. Specifically, about what you might have taken when you left." "I didn't take anything." "I believe you." He said it simply, without accusation or doubt, and somehow that made it worse. "The problem is that Evan doesn't believe you. And the person he contacted has a vested interest in finding whatever doesn't exist. They tend to get creative when their curiosity isn't satisfied." Rory's jaw tightened. The curry house below had started its evening service, and the smell of garam masala drifted up through the floorboards, mixing with the damp brick of East London and Lucien's impossible cologne. "Who?" "Someone you don't want to meet." He paused. "Someone I don't want you to meet, which should tell you something." "Why do you care?" "I don't." The words came too fast. A beat passed. "I care about the inconvenience of cleaning up messes that could have been prevented with basic communication." "Basic communication." She laughed, the sound scraping out of her throat. "That's rich, coming from you." Lucien's expression didn't change, but something shifted behind his mismatched eyes. A flicker. There and gone. "I deserved that." "You deserve worse." "Probably." He adjusted his grip on the cane. "Are you going to make me stand in the hallway all evening? Your neighbour on the third floor keeps opening her door, and I'd rather not explain my presence to the police again this month." Rory stared at him. The smart thing, the safe thing, would be to shut the door, call Eva, and pretend this conversation never happened. Lucien Moreau was a complication she couldn't afford. He dealt in secrets and favours, and every interaction with him cost something you didn't know you had until it was gone. But Evan was asking questions. Evan, who knew where her parents lived. Evan, who had never accepted that she'd left without taking anything because in his world, people always took something. She stepped back. Lucien entered the flat in a single fluid motion, his cane clicking against the worn floorboards. The space felt smaller with him in it, the towers of books and scrolls pressing inward like the walls of a cage. He took in the chaos with a raised eyebrow, scanning titles, pausing on a stack of newspapers dated three months back. "Your friend researches like a woman expecting the apocalypse." "Eva expects three apocalypses. She's hedging her bets." "Hmm." He set the cane against the arm of a sagging sofa and lowered himself onto the cushions with the careful grace of someone hiding an injury. "I remember you being more hospitable." "I remember you being less presumptuous." "Time changes people." "Time doesn't change you. That's the problem." Lucien watched her across the cluttered room. Eva's desk had overflowed onto every available surface, maps pinned to the walls with red thread connecting locations that made no sense to anyone but her. A half-empty mug of tea sat perched on a stack of grimoires, and somewhere in the mess, a clock ticked with metronomic insistence. "Sit down, Aurora." "My name's Rory." "Your name is Aurora Carter, born in Cardiff to Brendan and Jennifer Carter. You attended Howell's School for Girls before Cardiff University, where you studied Pre-Law for two years before dropping out and relocating to London." He folded his hands in his lap. "I know your name. I've always known your name." The way he said it made her skin prickle. Not threatening, but intimate, the way someone might speak a secret aloud in a dark room. "You ran a background check on me." "I run background checks on everyone. It's what I do." He tilted his head again, that analytical gaze stripping away layers. "Yours was just more thorough than most." "Why?" The question hung between them, heavy with months of silence and all the things neither of them had said in that Soho alley. Lucien's jaw tightened, almost imperceptibly. "Because you interested me." "Interested." Rory let the word sit there, flat and dead. "Is that what we're calling it?" "What would you call it?" She should have looked away. Should have deflected, changed the subject, done anything other than hold his gaze while the clock ticked and the curry smell thickened and the space between them felt like a held breath. "I'd call it convenient." Her voice came out steadier than she felt. "You needed someone to run deliveries into places your usual contacts couldn't go. I needed money. That's not interest, Lucien. That's a transaction." "And the night at the Tate?" Heat crept up her neck. She crushed it down. "Bad judgment." "You stayed until three in the morning." "I lost track of time." "You told me about Evan." His voice dropped, losing its polished edge. "You told me things you hadn't told anyone, including your friend Eva. I was a stranger, Aurora. A transaction. And you told me anyway." "Stop." "Why?" "Because it doesn't matter." She dug her fingernails into her palms, the crescent scar throbbing in time with her pulse. "Whatever happened between us, whatever you think happened, it's done. You made sure of that." Something flickered across his face. Hurt, maybe, though Lucien Moreau would rather swallow glass than admit to such a pedestrian emotion. "I made sure you stayed alive. There's a difference." "You used me as bait for a demon from Avaros without telling me what I was walking into. I found out when it tried to eat my face." Rory's voice cracked on the last word, and she hated herself for it. "So don't stand in my friend's flat and talk to me about staying alive like you did me a favour." Lucien rose from the sofa in one smooth motion, crossing the space between them in three strides. Too close. Close enough that she could see the faint lines at the corners of his eyes, the barely visible scar above his left eyebrow that she'd traced once, drunk on wine and something more dangerous. "I made a mistake." The words came out rough, scraped raw. "I have never said those words to anyone. I am saying them to you now." "Why?" "Because Evan is coming to London." His hand came up, hovering near her face without touching. "Because the person he contacted has already hired a tracker, and that tracker has been watching this flat for the past six hours. And because I am the only person in this city who can keep you safe, and you will not let me if you hate me." Rory's breath caught. The window behind her faced the street, and she'd looked out it an hour ago, seen nothing but the usual Brick Lane foot traffic. She'd thought she was safe here. She'd thought the deadbolts meant something. "Six hours." "Since noon." His hand dropped back to his side. "I would have come sooner, but I was confirming the information. I wanted to be certain before I alarmed you." "Too late." "Yes." He stepped back, putting distance between them again, and she hated the relief that rushed through her. "I suppose it is." The clock on Eva's desk chimed the hour. Eleven times. The curry house below had gone quiet, the dinner rush over, and in the absence of cooking smells, the flat just smelled like old paper and the ghosts of choices made in dark alleys. "What do we do?" Lucien's expression shifted, the vulnerability vanishing behind his usual mask of calculated indifference. He picked up his cane, the ivory handle catching the light. "We leave. Now. Before the tracker finishes his shift and reports back." He moved toward the door, then paused, looking back at her. "Can you be ready in five minutes?" Rory glanced around the flat, at Eva's life's work spread across every surface, at the cat still missing, at the door she'd locked three times because paranoia keeps you alive. "There's nothing here I need." "Good." He held out his hand. "Try to keep up." She took it.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags25
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"The words came too [too]"
1"He stepped back [back]"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.291
leniency0.581
rawRatio0.08
effectiveRatio0.047
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.81% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1718
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"eyebrow"
count2
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"eyebrow"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"pulse"
5"flickered"
6"traced"
7"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences146
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1718
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1045
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Ptolemy2
Eva5
Moreau3
Soho2
Rory8
French1
East1
London1
Lucien12
Evan3
Heat1
Brick1
Lane1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Eva"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
6"Heat"
places
0"Soho"
1"East"
2"London"
3"Brick"
4"Lane"
globalScore0.926
windowScore0.833
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a held breath"
1"smelled like old paper and the ghosts of c"
83.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.164
wordCount1718
matches
0"no sense to anyone but"
1"Not threatening, but intimate, the way someone might speak a secret aloud in a da"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences146
matches
0"seen that face"
1"accepted that she'd"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean20.21
std18.22
cv0.901
sampleLengths
048
17
245
32
44
518
650
75
836
92
1010
1139
1217
136
1428
151
165
1720
1811
1949
204
2149
2235
231
2420
254
2627
2716
2816
293
303
3143
3254
3331
343
3559
369
378
3833
396
403
417
4256
433
443
4552
4625
477
4828
491
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs175
matches
0"was asking"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences146
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1048
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.03244274809160305
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.003816793893129771
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences146
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences146
mean11.77
std10.13
cv0.861
sampleLengths
04
13
225
316
47
517
69
719
82
94
1016
112
123
1317
1430
155
1630
176
182
197
203
2110
221
2328
2410
257
266
2724
284
291
305
313
3217
3311
3415
3534
364
3717
3832
393
4032
411
428
4312
444
457
463
4717
4811
495
65.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.4383561643835616
totalSentences146
uniqueOpeners64
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then the second."
ratio0.013
65.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences80
matches
0"His charcoal suit looked fresh-pressed"
1"He glanced down at himself"
2"She didn't move."
3"His mouth curved at one"
4"She reached for the door,"
5"He tapped the cane once"
6"He leaned forward, close enough"
7"Her hand stopped."
8"He said it simply, without"
9"She laughed, the sound scraping"
10"He adjusted his grip on"
11"He dealt in secrets and"
12"She stepped back."
13"He took in the chaos"
14"He set the cane against"
15"He folded his hands in"
16"He tilted his head again,"
17"She should have looked away."
18"Her voice came out steadier"
19"She crushed it down."
ratio0.388
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount72
totalSentences80
matches
0"The first deadbolt clicked."
1"The third stuck, as it"
2"Rory's hand froze on the"
3"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
4"His charcoal suit looked fresh-pressed"
5"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
6"He glanced down at himself"
7"She didn't move."
8"The crescent scar on her"
9"Lucien tilted his head, one"
10"His mouth curved at one"
11"Ptolemy slipped between Rory's ankles"
12"She reached for the door,"
13"He tapped the cane once"
14"He leaned forward, close enough"
15"Her hand stopped."
16"The door hung open, two"
17"Lucien withdrew the cane, tucking"
18"He said it simply, without"
19"Rory's jaw tightened."
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.77% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Evan, who had never accepted that she'd left without taking anything because in his world, people always took something."
1"Eva's desk had overflowed onto every available surface, maps pinned to the walls with red thread connecting locations that made no sense to anyone but her."
65.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags25
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She laughed, the sound scraping out of her throat"
1"He tilted, that analytical gaze stripping away layers"
2"She dug, the crescent scar throbbing in time with her pulse"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She laughed (laugh)"
dialogueSentences86
tagDensity0.023
leniency0.047
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.023
85.0908%